Story 104 From the Resort to New Zealand.

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Hi, it is Katrina here.

            I am sitting on a deck under a sun shade looking out over a beautiful valley towards the distant harbour. It is a lovely sunny day, the sunlight turning the trees into many shades of green, the blue sky reflected making the harbour blue as well, and there is a bird singing in the branches above me. A big white cat sitting in my lap.

            Where am I? I am now in New Zealand. I am at Mike and Shanti’s house on their deck looking out towards the harbour, the Manukau Harbour, I think Mike called it. I am sitting on their deck, a wooden platform built at the back of their house overlooking the swimming pool below. The kids are down there with Greeshma, Lizamoa’s mother-law and Mary, Shanti’s mother. They are having fun in the pool with the kids. I can hear the splashing of them and their laughing.

            The cat is Mike and Shanti’s. They call him Princess which is a girl’s name, even if he is a boy. I don’t usually like cats, but for some reason, this one likes me and he will not leave me alone. Whenever I sit down he is there wanting to sit on my lap. Last night he sneaked into my room and when I woke up this morning he was laying on my bed beside me sleeping to my shoulder. Mike said he is just a boy and boys like sexy girls to sleep with. 

            So Joseph and Mike told me this morning. This letter is my job to tell.  It seems that my writing is almost as quick as Shanti is. The other girls are busy on their stories but Mike didn’t put it like that, he said Shanti is busy but Amita and Hansini are still in disgrace. So that only left me.

            But my question back to you Mike is – What about all you guys? Why do we girls have to do the writing while you guys just sat there talking and drinking of the beer?

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                                                                                                         Posted by Ayaka

          As Shandra said in her notes last week this story is to take our group from the Resort to New Zealand. Allan started this story but got bored with it. Later I (Ayaka) picked it up and completed it. Most of Allan’s work was replaced now so you must say it will be all Ayaka’s story, not Allan’s story.   

         Sure it is Ayaka. You can think that if you like.
                                      Allan

         When I asked Anne how I should find the details she said research them online. So I began finding ideas and adding them together until I had enough for the story. Then came the writing part when I told how they flew to Cairns then on to the Gold Coast. From there they went down to Sydney where the group split some going to New Zealand and some going to India.

         I made a mistake with that split. An earlier story says that the group will split in Brisbane while I told it happened in Sydney. Their first story was published so could not really be changed while my story was good too so we have just left it. 

        Once I was completed, I was reading it out at one of our Blog Writers Meetings. They all liked it and said it was good but they had some additions for me to put too. Let me explain  - This story is the beginning of a new set of adventures. Each of the writers had ideas to support stories they are writing so I was given a list of many things to add to my story. Some made it in while some did not.

        There is a story later where Katrina and Mootie are together. We wanted her to become interested in him so I added the part where he saved her in the surf, holding her body against his own. She has a little fantasy about that later in her bed.

         We wanted to continue the stories between the couples Peter & Jenny with Mega and Brian so I added the information that they did swapping on the Gold Coast.

         The last story in this new volume (Story 119) will be about Katrina at the hot pools in a very sexy bikini. They wanted me to write about buying it in Sydney. So I wrote about Mike buying it for her in the Wicked Weasel shop. This buying a swimsuit is a theme that has been used before and will be in at least a couple of future stories too. 

          A final reading of this story followed at the next meeting, a few last minute changes and then it was ready to be published.

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Story 103 Part B The Trial of Amita and Hansini.

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Part B   The Punishment.

            As we left the restaurant I noticed there were now a few more people. There were a few over by the bar and a few more sitting at tables at the other end of the room. Almost all of them were watching us. The room is not that big and so I was sure they must have heard some of, if not all of what we were saying.

            “I wonder what they thought was going on?” I asked Lizamoa.

            “I don’t know but see the looks on their faces,” she laughed back at me.    

            Mike then joined us.

          “What are you two laughing about?” he asked.

            “Did you know we had an audience?” I asked him.

            “Yeah, I was watching them. Many were very interested in what we were up to.”

            “When is the other punishment to take place?” I asked him.

            “Tonight I believe,” he replied. 

            After dinner, we went back to our building and the girls were soon busy settling the kids down in their own room. We then all met in the big apartment at one end of our building and as we all sat around the room on the floor while Hansini and Amita were made to stand in the middle of the room.

            “Amita and Hansini,” Mike began. “You were both found guilty this afternoon. Are you ready for you first punishment?”

            “Yes Mike, we are,” said Amita.

            “Hansini, who do you choose to deliver your punishment?”

            “I choose Peter,” she replied.

            That was a bit of a surprise for us. Even Peter looked surprised too.

            “Amita, who do you choose for your punishment?”

            “I choose Joseph,” Amita replied.

            “OK, if you men are both willing that is how it will be. Hansini first and then Amita. Now, remember guys the punishment is four slaps delivered to her bare behind – two on each cheek. And then if you both agree, you can continue with some fun of your own after that.” 

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                                                                Posted by Allan, Anne & Susan.

Allan:-

         The trial finished with Mike declaring the punishment Amita and Hansini were to receive. It was agreed it would be delivered that evening.

         We struggled coming up with a suitable punishment. What would be a ‘punishment’ but actually fun too? Finally, we settled on the smacking of their bare arse in front of everyone. This quickly developed into each girl choosing who would deliver the punishment and them playing around a bit too, before they both go off for the night together.

         It was then that Shandra asked what about poor Steve. “He should have had some fun too.” Well, the idea came up that the girls had to spend another night with him and behave themselves. We quickly added that to the trial scene but since we already had the smacking part written it was decided to run with that and give Steve his night later. This was actually finally put into the next volume. Even then the girls didn’t behave themselves but were still bent on revenge. (Vol 8 Story 113.)  That is asking for trouble isn’t? 

Shandra now.

          This second part of the story was very short. It would have been better to divide the story more evenly but Allan didn’t want to break the trial scene. I had completed my Katrina story and she finally had her big night with Mike. I took the chance to add in another night with Mike here. At the same time, it was a chance to introduce her to girl/girl sex with Shanti.

          Shanti tells us that this will be covered in more detail, we did intend to write this story, but it never happened. Anyway, she tells us enough to give us the idea. 

          This brings us to the end of Volume Seven. Next week we move into the New Zealand stories but first, we had to get them there. Story 104 - Allan started this story but got bored with it. Later Ayaka has picked it up and completed it.

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Story 103 Part A The Trial of Amita and Hansini.

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Part A   The Trial.

Hi, it is Shanti here.

            This story was always going to be one of the more challenging stories that we have ever written for the Letters Book, it was decided that I should attempt writing it. Since most of the story is a conversation, I have tried to take extra care in getting it reading correctly. Mike and Joseph had a lot of input too and I sent the completed story to India where Amita and Hansini have worked on it too. Here is the final result.

            Thank you, everyone, for your help both in making this story in the first place and also in helping write it.

            So enough of all this admin stuff, let’s get on with the story. 

            Later in the morning after what happened to Steve, involving Amita and Hansini, (I strongly suggest that you go back and read Story 100 Setting Steve Up and Story 101 The Worlds Greatest Lover, then the ending of Story 102 Katrina's Story Part Five) I was sitting under the shade beside the pool. I noticed Mike, Joseph and Sarvesh were sitting at a table not far from me. They were joined by Mootie and Jeevan for a while. Lizamoa and Mandara were also there for a while too.

            There was a lot of laughing and I noticed Mike was writing something from time to time. It was obvious those three were up to something and I was tempted to go over and find out but then it was such a beautiful morning. I was content to sit back in my deck chair looking out over the beach and the ocean, while a gentle breeze refreshed me.

            Many of you make comments about Shanti minding everybody’s business, this time Shanti decided she would just mind her own business.

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                                                                Posted by Allan, Anne & Susan.

         The trial scene is the next part of this larger story about the two girls, Amita and Hansini, deciding to get back at Steve.

         As we saw two weeks ago, things went wrong and got totally out of control. In the end, the men, led by Mike had to mount a rescue to save Steve. This gets the men thinking, Mike and Sarvesh decide that the two girls needed to be ‘punished’ for going too far. They decide upon a mock trial, which is the major theme of this week’s story. 

         This was always going to be a hard story to write. It is almost completely conversation from the trial. I strongly suggest that you go back and read Story 100 Setting Steve Up and Story 101 The Worlds Greatest Lover, then the ending of Story 102 Katrina's Story Part Five. Events from those stories will be mentioned throughout this story so by reading the original versions you will be able to tell who is telling the truth and who is a false witness, ‘lying’ in court.

          We worked over these conversations many times but I still feel there could be more done if we had the time. Anyway, publishing is on top us this week so I have to let it go as it is now.

         The main ideas that we wanted to capture here are that this was hopeless for the girls. No matter what they say or do, there is no way they were going to be allowed to win their case. They realised this from the beginning but we wanted to capture how Hansini changed from a fun mood to frustration, until finally she was resigned to her fate. I also wanted to catch the way different witnesses were for or against the girls and modified their testimonies accordingly.

          Considering the way they were being set-up Hansini put up a brave fight. Shandra says in her letter that at one point she thought the girls might actually win their case. We all know Mike and Sarvesh would never have allowed that to happen, they had the outcome determined before they started.

          So enjoy this story. It is something a bit different. Hope you like it.

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Story 102 Katrina’s Story (Part Five)

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Hi, it is Katrina here again.

        Here we are beginning the last part of my story but before I do, I must reply to some comments made about my story. 

First to Peter.

            Peter, I am very sorry but I did say the right person name when I called Mike. But, I do not think you should be complaining because you were able to be having your turn in New Zealand later I am remembering.

Now to Steve

            Yes, our story is taking the time to make and to write but don’t you think the best part of a good story is waiting for the exciting ending?  

            Well said, Katrina.

                        (Mike.) 

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                                                                Posted by Shandra & Allan.

Hi from Shandra,

           Here it is! The big moment when Katrina finally loses her virginity. It is a big moment, a big event for her. That is why we have taken so long getting there. I hope you find this sex scene was worth the wait. I won’t go into details here as you will read them in the story but this scene was partly based on my first time with Allan. That is why he got pulled into writing this story.

           Once Katrina has lost her virginity, it will be wide open for her to take partners with others in the group that move on to New Zealand. A glance down the second index page will reveal that she appears in many of the New Zealand stories. Actually, she quickly becomes quite skilled with sex, probably having so many sex partners helped too. 

           Over the next two volumes, you will find she plays a major role in the stories. Once I had finished this story, other writers started to use her in their stories too. I think she replaced Lizamoa as the darling of the writer's team for a while.

           The sex scene in this story was not the best we have written but then with Katrina still a virgin there was not a lot more we could do with it anyway. What I like are the conversations that went with it. I tried to capture those special moments surrounding a girl’s first time.

           When we began writing the stories between Katrina and David I also wanted to add a bit here too where she talks to Mike about him. I think it was rather interesting how she was lying with a man she just had sex with while she was telling him about her feelings for another man. 

           Finally, Allan and I took the chance to build on that scene where Steve is found tired to the bed with almost every girl there, taking turns to have him. It helped in taking Mike from lying in bed with Katrina to getting involved in saving his friend.

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