Showing posts with label 005 Volume Five. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 005 Volume Five. Show all posts

Friday, 22 November 2013

Story/Letter 73 Mud, Rain and Sex.




Update and Makeover - 2021.
          When Anne, Susan and I joined the website Literotica, we began publishing some of our stories there. During this process, the stories were improved from what they are here. As long as they didn't change things too much, we've decided to include these better-upgraded stories, replacing the original ones with their newer versions.
                    Kim.

Hi, Joseph here.
          Oh, Amita! Who is a naughty girl? And doing that to shock poor Katrina too. I hope you cleaned the table before breakfast. I must admit having your friends standing around watching was interesting too. Like some of the things, we did in India.
          Please tell Katrina I personally enjoyed her story. Forward to Letter 70 Part A. I hear that it might continue. Well, I am looking forward to that too. Nice work Katrina. Sure I know you got some help from others but it was your heart in it. I could see that.
          Now I must get on as I have a very big story for you this week.

Letter/Story 73 Background.


                                                                               Posted by Kim
Hi, Kim here.
         Ayaka began writing a complete story by herself, (see Letter/Story 65) and so I decided to try one as well. I played with a few ideas and then in early April 2013 something happened that gave me what I needed to begin writing.
        Let me explain. Since Christmas 2013 there had been almost no rain and by the end of March things on the farm were beginning to get very bad. As milk production plunged it was looking like the farm was going to make a loss for the year which was the last thing Anne wanted for her first season.  Anne and Allan were even considering pulling the plug on milking and drying the herd off to protect the stock for next season. At that time we also had visitors, Anne’s parents and Ayaka’s parents were both staying with us on the farm.
        One day we were sitting around the table when it started to rain. Not that heavy, more a steady drizzle than heavy rain but that was just what the dry, parched pasture needed. Anne was so thrilled she jumped up from the table and ran outside with Allan close behind her. By the time I got out there they were standing out in the rain on the lawn hugging each other.
       Suddenly Shandra who was standing beside me gave a yell and ran out to join them. She jumped up at them, catching them both by surprise and knocking them over. The lawn, which by now had almost no grass, had quickly turned to mud, so there were the three of them rolling in the rain and mud. It was funny to watch them, we were laughing until they looked up and saw us.
      “Come and join us,” Anne called.
       Susan went straight away, running out to join them, slipping in the mud and landing on top of Allan. That was not the most graceful way of doing it, I must say.
       I looked at Ayaka, she looked at me and we both laughed again. I dropped my watch onto the deck chair and we both ran out to join them in the rain. We pushed each other over, threw mud at each other and were having great fun until soon we were as wet and muddy as they were. Then we looked up and saw our visitors standing under shelter on the deck watching us. 
        We realised how shocked they must have been as we got up out of the mud and went back to the house. Of course, we were too muddy to go inside so Anne’s mum went and got us some towels. Ayaka’s dad took the hose and sprayed us taking off as much mud as he could, then we each went around the side of the house where we could strip off our clothes and wrap ourselves in a towel before we went inside for a shower. That might have been a bit sexy for him hosing us, seeing us girls in soaking wet clothes. My blouse had become a bit see-through and I wasn't wearing a bra. He must have noticed my hard nipples.

        Later, sitting around the table having a hot drink, Anne asked her father, “Did we shock you, Dad?”
        “No honey,” he laughed. “Not with you Anne. We’ve come to expect anything could happen when we come here.”
        She wasn’t sure how to take that at first until Allan started to laugh. Soon we were all laughing.
        Little does he know just how true those words actually are. LOL. With Anne, Susan and Shandra anything could happen when they get going. And often it does too!     

         So that inspired me to write this week’s story. Since it could fit almost any time after Joseph and Lizamoa had moved to New Zealand we decided to place it here, even though the stories around it had been written late in 2008.
       I did get some help with the landscaping part. Anne and Allan suggested much of those details. I went to get Susan to check the sex scene. She made a few suggestions to help. Shandra wanted Joseph to see his wife with her beautiful hair in a puddle of mud so I added that. Ayaka suggested that key moment where Shanti throws mud at Joseph to start the fight. Reshma cleaned up some of the grammar for me as well. Finally, Anne asked me to include that little conversation between Lizamoa and her mother-in-law. This is to start preparing for a future story which was finally published in Sept 2015, Vol 11. Thank you all guys.
       So finally one of my stories gets published as well. I’m very pleased with it and I hope you enjoy it too.
              Kim. 

        Anne has asked me to add that this brings us to the end of Vol 5. Next week we will move into Vol 6 which will open with Rajah’s very first story for the Letter’s Project.   

Friday, 15 November 2013

Letter/Story 72 A Good Point / Table Antics.


Index of Letters                  Letter/Story 72 Background Notes.                  Back to Letter/Story 71.


Forward to Letter/Story 73                  Letter 72 Background Extra.



Hi from India.
          Thanks for your letter and quick reply. And also thanks for another good story about those cheeky young guys in the tree house. Yes, it is a pity you couldn’t use them because they took such good photos too. We all enjoyed their photos as well. All so those ones of you on the table Liz. Very sexy doing it there!

          Now before we get into anything else let us talk about those comments you made in your last letter Shanti. They were good points, Sarvesh and I, for that matter all of us over here are in full agreement with you. Yes, we did take things a bit far and we took a big risk too. We realised that now and that is part of the reason why we quickly decided not to replace Elizabeth. We have also been in contact with her again and Sarvesh has been able to offer her a job at the bank. This was partly because of what happened but also she has the right skills for the job as well.

Letter/Story 72 Background.

                                                                               Posted by Anne
Hi from Anne.
         In the last letter, Shanti wrote about her feelings regarding what happened with Katrina and Elizabeth. She said that those in New Zealand were concerned that the girls had been pushed into doing things they were a bit uncomfortable with. She also mentioned what a terrible risk they took and what might happen if Elizabeth was to tell anyone else what happened. 
       This letter is basically Amita’s response to that. It was at first going to be part of a larger letter and then we decided to include it as to create the impression Amita had rushed to get her reply back to Shanti without bothering to wait for a sexy story.
          When we wrote this back in 2008, the purpose of this little exchange last week and this week was to set down some solid ground rules for the Letters Series. At the same time, we have had the chance to build the bonds between those in New Zealand and those in India. Yes as you can see, by now we were considering The Letters Project to become much more than just a collection of sexy stories. 
          That was how things sat for a number of years until we were getting it ready for publishing in this blog. 

         About a month ago, early October 2013, we were having a meeting, all sitting around in the lounge. Reshma, Shandra’s sister was there too. She had been working on uploading the Katrina stories and now we were looking at the next three stories.
         Kim was reading the Tree House Story which Susan had written. She was showing us the changes her and Ayaka had made. When we came to the sex on the table scene we stopped to discuss it and Allan made a couple of suggestions for changes to the conversation. I grabbed a laptop and we re-wrote most of that scene as we went.
        Then Kim took my laptop and read us that part again. We all liked it better so that became the version you now see in Letter 71.
        Then Ayaka said, “I would like to try sex like that one.”
        “You mean sex on the table?” Susan asked.
        “Yes,” Ayaka replied. “I would be willing to try.”
        “Well go on then, do it,” Reshma said, with a grin.
        Ayaka looked at her in surprise. “What?”
        “You heard me. You want to try, well go on then, try it.”
        “You mean now?”
        “Yes, why not. I’m sure one of the guys will be keen.”
        Then I saw that smile come on Ayaka’s face. You know the one when she is feeling a little bit cheeky, a bit horny, a bit happy with herself. I suddenly know she was actually considering doing it.
         She turned to Rajah, “Do you want to try with me, Rajah?”
        He just nodded and stood up. She stepped over to him and taking his hand she led him to our dining table. Before long they were both naked and her on her back on the table. Laying there her thighs were open and she was totally exposed to him. Shandra found some massage oil and handed it to him.
        He took some oil in his hands and began to rub some over her, over her stomach and breasts but particularly around her pussy. While he did he was asking her what she wanted him to do. When she replied to have sex he asked her again telling her to ask him dirty. Most of this little exchange also made it into this weeks story.
        The sex they had was good. Some of us took the oil and rubbed it over her body, also over him too while they were doing it. I noticed Reshma was putting oil on his chest while her husband was rubbing one of Ayaka breasts. I also noticed Reshma's breasts were touching his back too. That was a little bit bold for them I thought.
        I was becoming obvious that Ayaka was almost there. She always gets very vocal when she’s about to cum. Soon she was hit by a massive orgasm. He finished by pulling out and shooting his cum all over her lower body and pussy, making a real mess. That was a good way to finish so that’s how it ended up in the story too. 

         Well, they both had to clean up in what turned into a shower together. By the time they returned Susan and I were already working on what would become the second part of this story where Amita gets fucked on the table after being inspired reading Shanti’s story.
        So this is a great example of how our reality and our stories have often inspired each other.

              First - Susan has sex with Brian on a table a long time ago. (Story 71  Background.)

              Second - Susan remembers and uses this idea in her (Letter/Story 71.)

              Third - After reading this story, Ayaka asks Rajah to try it with her on our dining table here on the farm. This is the story in this background above.

              Fourth - Afterwards while they are away cleaning up in the shower together, Anne and Susan are inspired by Ayaka's example to write this extra sex scene for Letter/Story 72.

              Fifth - This second story later inspired an event in the office involving Rajah and Allan with Kim on her desk with a couple of bottles of wine. This story was added by Kim as Letter/Story 72 Background Extra.

              Sixth - One of our readers, Kirsten, mentions a little sex scene she had with her husband in the comments of Kim's extra. Others ask for more details so she sent me the story which was added to the bottom of Kim's story. Letter/Story 72 Background Extra.
              Next week Kim will publish her first story. Do you like working in the rain and mud?
        
Index of Letters                      Return to Letter/Story 72

Letter/Story 72 Background Extra.


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Late Night Office Work.


Hi everyone, Kim here.
        After Anne mentioned it in Letter/Story 72 Background, I have had many requests for this story which occurred recently over my desk. Yes, I promised I would post it so here goes. When I confirmed this with Anne she suggested I create an extra post for Letter 72. I hope everyone can find it.

Since this post is about real sex, my sex, I'm not going into feelings and orgasm details.
They are more private than I want to share. I will just tell you the basic story.

        Rajah was going to spend the night with me and he was waiting for me to proofread a report and get it sent away. Sure it was late to be working but I tend to do that, start late and finish late. Allan was on the other computer chatting to someone.
        While we were busy Rajah made a raid on Anne's Special Reserve Pinot Noir. She can't drink in her condition so we feel we must take care of it for her. Yes all three of us had a drink. Another glass and I was feeling a bit cheeky. By now Rajah was reading out Letter 71 to us. He got to the scene where Joseph has sex with Lizamoa laid back on a dining table. I have tried to reconstruct the conversation which followed as best I can.
        "I think Kim would look good doing that," Allan said.
        "No, she'd never do anything like that. Not Kim," Rajah replied teasing me.
        "Yes," agreed Allan. "You are probably right."
        "Kim would be too shy for that."
        There they were talking about me as if I wasn't even there.
        "Hey, you guys."
        "Well, Kim?" Rajah asked.
        "Well, what?"
        "Would you do that on the dining table?"
        "Maybe I would," I replied.
        "No, you wouldn't. Not you Kim."
        "Sure I would. Anytime you want."
        Some people might consider that a dumb thing to say because now I had left myself wide open. You just know one of them is going to pick that up and dare me.
        "Ok then prove it," Rajah said.
        "What now?"
        "Yes now... With me... Over your desk."
        Now the wine was talking with both of us.
        "Ok," I said. "Ok I will"

        We quickly had my desk cleared. I was trying to neatly place things on the floor but he just pushed things off like a bull-dozer. When I turned, he was right there behind me, and so I stood to face him. He pushed me back so my arse was against the desk.
        He quickly had my shirt undone while I was working on him. Both of us were in a hurry now. It was amazing how quickly the passion built. As I ripped at his shirt a button came off in my fingers. (That inspired me to add that to my Story 73.) In his case, he had my shirt off my shoulders and thrown across the room. I wasn't wearing a bra as I often do at home so now I was left topless.
        Then his hands went for my jeans. They were soon unzipped and down came my jeans and panties together. I tried to reach his shorts but didn't have a chance before he picked me up and sat me on the desk.
        There was no kissing or anything like that. He went straight for my tits and began sucking and licking my nipples. I was so turned on by this sudden sex, with what he was doing, soon I had my eyes closed and was moaning with pleasure. Or so they both tell me anyway.
        He stepped back and slipped his own shorts off, he wasn't wearing anything underneath. Norty boy! His shorts ended up somewhere over with my jeans. My panties had hit the desk where Allan sat which had captured his interest too. I tried to play with Rajah's raging hard-on but after a few moments, he pushed my hands away.
        His hand went for my pussy while the other pushed me flat on the desk. He didn't spend too long there either before he was lining himself up. I thought I would have got some tongue treatment but no I didn't. He grabbed my hips and pull me across the desk towards him, so he was able to fuck me as I wrapped my legs around him.

        That was it. He was into me with some hot, hard sex. I will not go into personal details here in public. It's enough for me just telling this story. But I will just say that the sex was over quickly, we were both well-satisfied.
        Then Rajah turned to Allan. "You want a go mate."
        He didn't even ask me!
        "Sure," says Allan. Understatement of the year that was, because he had his gear off so fast. More clothes slung around the room.
        Then Allan replaced him between my thighs and continued where Rajah left off. Again it was hot exciting sex. We were both satisfied too.

        We stopped for a few minutes and I just sat up. I was still sitting on the desk with my legs hanging over the edge. A bit more wine and Rajah noticed me sitting there. She still wants some more he said to both of us. The outcome was I was taken by both guys all over again.
        With drinks along the way, we were now well through the second bottle. After a part glass each to polish it off, we headed for my bedroom. By then it was too late for Allan's plans so he followed us. I believe a couple of ladies were not too happy with this next morning. Probably lucky I was going away. LOL So as I was saying they both followed me to my bedroom where I did it with them both again. Finally, sometime during the morning hours, we got to sleep.

        I awoke to find it was very very late. Yes, I mean two verys. Let's throw a third in to be sure. It was very very very late. LOL.
        Our clothes had been thrown over us by someone while we were sleeping. I didn't find out who. I looked at the clock and suddenly remembered I had a plane to catch to Palmerston North. Allan was supposed to leave early on a north trip too and Rajah was late for his work.
        I remember we didn't get much sympathy from the others as we rushed around the house, trying to get ready and out the door.
        Yes, I did get there on time, and I made my flight thanks to the help of the guy from the car park company dropping me off first. By the time I got to P North, I was hungry as, having missed breakfast and lunch.
        Allan was late for his first appointment too but I hear Rajah cheated. He called in sick!

        So does that answer all the questions?
                Written by Kim with some help from Rajah and Allan.
                        Sexy Princess Kimberley.


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Kirsten and Paul.



Added by Anne 1st December 2013.
        In the comments below, Kirsten mentioned something which happened on their farm one day. She was challenged to tell us more. I received this email from her a few days ago. We have been working on this little story for you.
                                Anne.

From Kirsten to Anne.
        For inclusion in the Letters Blog.

        Over winter, the weeds in our back paddocks have been getting away on us. Since the weather was so good we decided to spend a few days cutting them. It is not hard work, but slow and time-consuming so I offered to help. The first day, by midday it had come out hot and I was wishing I'd worn lighter clothes.
        The following day, with hot weather predicted again, I decided to wear a bikini instead of underwear. By mid-morning, it had come out hot again and Paul had his shirt off. I went back to the truck. Took my shirt off, then my jeans leaving myself in a hot little bikini. I went back to work like that.
        "New uniform?" Paul asked as I joined him.
        I smiled. "Working on my tan," I said.
        As I have larger breasts, a lot of cleavage was showing when I leaned over to cut weeds. I noticed Paul sneaking glances when he thought I wasn't looking. Males are amazing, aren't they? He sees me naked pretty well every day but still, he will check me out when I'm wearing a bikini.
        Well at lunchtime we sat down under some shade to eat the lunch we had brought. Notice I said shade. Doesn't that kind of change that whole conversation on bums below? LOL.
        Paul started on me.
        "That bikini doesn't cover much."
        "No, daring isn't it?"
        "I think you could make it look better too."
        I should have seen that coming but I didn't. "How?" I asked.
        "Leave it in the truck."
        "Nude farming?"
        "Sure, why not. You'd get an all-over tan too."
        "You'd like it too?"
        "Well, it's only for you."
        "Sure it is," I laughed.
        Then I noticed the bulge in his shorts. He had a hard-on.
        "Look at you! Always horny aren't you?"
        "Always," Paul laughed.
        I pushed him back onto the grass. He was just wearing some stretch shorts and I soon had them pulled down around his ankles. Straight away I reached for his cock. After a bit of playing with him soon, we were both ready for more. Then I pressed myself down onto him. My kiss became more sexual as I felt him pull my bikini bottom down.
        (Yes I know I said shorts in the comment. I didn't want to get all you guys going over the thought of me doing farm work in a sexy bikini.)
        Then he quickly found my wet pussy and we did it like that. It was good, made better by being outside on the farm. Always makes it more interesting doing it in an unusual location. There was no chance anyone would see us but it's always nice having sex outside.
        Afterwards, I pulled my bikini up again and we continued working. As it was very hot now I had to put my shorts and shirt back on. A few hours later we headed back to the house.
        So that is how we came to do it in the paddock at the back of our farm. I think it shocked the dogs that these two humans started fucking like that. I suppose they knew what we were doing.

                I hope that was good enough for everyone.
                        Kirsten - with a bit of help from Anne.


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Friday, 8 November 2013

Letter/Story 71 Tree-House Voyeurs.




Hi from New Zealand.
        Here we are all doing fine and we hope this letter finds all of our friends in India doing so as well.
        Now first off, good work Katrina. Thank you for a great story, which we all enjoyed reading. I know you had some help but it was still well-written and easy to read. The true test of a good story is how easy it can be read out loud and yours worked well. We are all looking forward to more of your writing.
        Katrina, like we talked about on the phone, I have done some editing for you. Mainly I’ve polished it up and added to the conversations. I have sent you a copy of this with all my changes in red. Please have a look and let me know if you are happy with it. If so, then Amata can format it and include your story in The Letters Books.

Letter/Story 71 Background.


                                                                               Posted by Susan
Hi from Susan & Anne
        There are two parts to this story. First I wrote the story of a hidden treehouse where those boys could watch what was going on around the pool. Then later Anne added the beginning of this letter, the part written by Shanti.

Hi, Anne here.
         First off, the part written by Shanti. By the time this story had been written late in 2008 we were starting to have regular get-togethers which would eventually evolve into the Writers Meetings we have today. One feature always included in these meetings was the reading out of stories recently written. One day Shandra read Katrina’s Story out to us and we suddenly realised what a risk it would have been for Sarvesh and Amita when Elizabeth had left still upset like that.
          We decided that we want to do more with this idea and the idea came up of getting Shanti to mention it to Sarvesh and Amita. At first, it was a separate letter but then we decided to add it to this letter, in this way not taking up another week with a non-sexy story. She does sort of, tell them off but then adds that she thought it very important that something had to be said.  Next week we will see how Amita responds to this.  

Now from Susan
        The Treehouse story is about two guys who set themselves up nicely so they can spy on the swimming pool area behind Joseph and Lizamoa’s house. It is a story about voyeurism and exhibitionism as while the guys are watching from their tree-hut and the girls down around the pool are showing off, all the time knowing they are being watched. Maybe the tree-house is a bit unbelievable but let's just say these were very resourceful guys.    
        At first, I thought this was a good story with the girls each putting on their little shows beside the pool but then Anne had a better idea. She reminded me of something we had actually done ourselves a few years before which would be a great idea for this story.  

Here let me explain:-
        We were out together when I told the girls how I had caught my neighbour watching me sunbathing topless in the back garden. He was only about 14 and I was 17. By then we were writing stories about exhibitionism. I thought him checking me out was a bit sexy, so I didn’t bother letting on I knew. If he got off perving my tits, that was fine with me too. Then I discovered he was watching my bedroom window at night. I became a lot more careful with my curtains after that but still, I noticed a few times his light would go off the instant my light came on so knew he was still watching me.
        One night I was feeling a bit naughty when I was getting ready to shower. I went to pull the curtains, when I noticed he was there, something made me ‘accidently’ leave the curtains partly open. I made sure I was positioned so he could see me, then I proceeded to strip completely for him. Quickly putting on my robe I headed off for my shower. When I returned I again gave him another good show, this time a complete full-frontal, as I got ready for bed. Suddenly turning off my light, I went to the window and spotted him still there. I knew he had seen everything which kind of turned me on too. I made myself cum a few times before finally I could settle down and get to sleep.

       Of course, I told the girls about this when I saw them and they both thought it was a bit sexy too.
       “I would have loved to have seen that,” Anne said.
       “Then why don’t you come over next week?”
       “Will you do it again?” asked Shandra.
       “No, we can all do it and give him a really great show,” I laughed.
       They both thought that was funny and agreed to take to come over too.
       So that was what we did. The following weekend the girls arranged to sleep-over at my house after a concert we went too. Of course, mum was out with her boyfriend so we had the place to ourselves. We set things up with a desk light set in the centre of the room and then after confirming he was watching I did my strip, making sure he got a full view, before putting on casual clothes. Of course, Anne, who had been standing out of sight, was quick to jump in and do her little show of a naked Japanese body, following what I had done. At first, Shandra was too shy to follow us but with a bit of encouragement from us, she did it too, giving him some Indian tits and pussy to look at too.
        That must have been a show for him, seeing the three of us stripping, then full frontal nudity, before we got dressed again. We all got into bed and cuddled up together; giggling about it for a long time before finally, we got to sleep. 

          Of course, this fitted nicely into the tree-house story so I quickly adapted the idea to have all four girls strip and then put on their bikinis for a midnight swim. I think this added an extra sexy climax to finish my story.
        Later we added a bit where the guys return and Joseph catches Lizamoa giving them another show. He quickly got rid of them so they wouldn’t return again. 

Sex on the Table.
        The sex on the dining room table was also inspired by a real life experience. I was at home with one of my boyfriends, Brian. As usual, Mum was out. Even if she had been home she would have been off in her bedroom with some guy so I usually had the freedom to do whatever I liked.
       As I said Brian was there and we were fooling around a bit. I was tempting him, getting him horny. Suddenly he grabbed me and lifted me onto the table. My short skirt rode up exposing my panties which he soon had off. We then had sex like that, me lying back on the table while he was standing there fucking me. As he entered me I brought my thighs up and wrapped them around him. Then it was into some hot sexy sex together. (Do you remember that night Brian?)
        In my story, I was originally going to have Lizamoa and Joseph having sex on the floor but then I remembered that Jenny had done this in her story “I’m so Horny” Letter 67, a story we published a few weeks ago, so I began looking for something different. I remembered having sex on the table with Brian.
        Now recently the editing team of Ayaka and Kim came through and re-worked this scene so where I had Lizamoa telling him what she felt like showing the guys before they had sex, the girls combined these into Lizamoa telling him while he was fucking her. Works much better like this.

Friday, 1 November 2013

Letter/Story 70 Part C - Katrina’s Story One.



Part C – The Second Special Weekend.

           Soon the six weeks had gone and they were organising another weekend. I had told Elizabeth and she agreed to help again too.
            This time I took the van into town with the staff. After saying goodbye to my friends, I took a taxi to Elizabeth’s house and after picking her up we went back to the big house. Amita thought this would work better than last time with less risk of anyone suspecting what I was up to.  We planned later for us to catch a taxi into town and then I come home in the van with the other staffs too. My story would be I spent the weekend with a friend of my family.
            By the time we got back the guests were arriving. Amita greeted us and said, “You will be in the same room as before if that is alright. Everything is ready, take your things up and then start on dinner.”
             This time they had a cross-dressing party. When they arrived for dinner the girls were dressed as men and the men as women. I have to say a man in a sari does looks a bit funny too. As they moved it kept falling off too. None of them could fit a sari blouse and so had to go with nothing under. Yes, it was funny. Hansini came in Mootie's Ranger uniform. His shorts were so large and they had to be folded and pinned. There were these big baggy pants with her skinny little legs coming out the bottom. It was too funny to see and we were laughing.
            Of course, Elizabeth and I had remained in our jeans for the evening. We joined them for dinner and after cleaning up we were free for the evening.

Letter/Story 70 Part C Background.


                Part C   -   The Second Special Weekend.
                                                                               Posted by Shandra
Hi Shandra again,
         This week the first section of Katrina’s Story comes to its climax with its very surprising ending. More about that soon.
         The second special weekend took place about six weeks after the first. This time they were a bit more organised with the arrangements for Katrina. Now she took a taxi and brought Elizabeth back with her. 

Points in this Story.
          In this story, we read how Katrina receives the new bikinis which they will be wearing for the weekend. Here it almost feels like they are being pushed when they are told to get changed. It seemed to Katrina like it was an order to put the bikini on rather than a suggestion. It appears as if Sarvesh and Amita were pushing the girls in a direction they might have not been so comfortable with.
          The second interesting point is the development in the relationship between Katrina and Elizabeth. When Elizabeth discovers Katrina watching her in the spa pool, rather than lowering into the water to hide her nipples, she comes over and begins touching Katrina’s breasts. This looks as if it could have developed into a very close and sexy relationship except there was something bigger about to happen which will get in the way. 

The Climax.
         The climax of this story begins when Katrina finds herself in a game of strip chess. The outcome is she ends up having to strip everything off. She seems have taken it OK once she got over the shock but Elizabeth didn’t. The girls fall out and Elizabeth leaves the house while Katrina stays on to continue with the weekends.
         Why did we play it that way? Well, we had intended in Elizabeth becoming involved in some sexy adventures, in fact, one was partly written for her and Katrina to have a relationship, but then we decided that another married couple would be better. So Elizabeth was dropped from the story and Brian and Mega were added.
        This is not the last we will see of Elizabeth. There was always that question as to where this relationship between these two girls might have gone so much later we decided to bring her back into the series again to explore it.

         Next week we find out what happens when Joseph discovers a treehouse in the forest behind their new house. Also, watch for Kim's first story coming up soon too.

Extra Added September 2015.
Hi from Susan,
        This theme between Katrina and Elizabeth was picked up again by me. Shandra was writing about a relationship between these two girls but it was never used. Recently Kim found her notes in our junk folder of discarded stories etc. Kim brought the idea up at a writers meeting and I decided to explore the idea. The outcome was in Sept 2015 a story was published Story 160   Elizabeth in Mumbai.
        (Go read it now or you can wait until you come across it later.)

Friday, 25 October 2013

Letter/Story 70 Part B - Katrina’s Story One.




Part B – The First Special Weekend.
            On the Friday evening, Elizabeth arrived and was dropped off at the gate after 5 pm. She walked through the lower garden gate left open for her and locking it behind her. She came in through the back door of the guest house to wait there for me. Nobody was seen by her because everybody was getting ready to leave in the van.
            I made a show of packing a small bag as per usual but just before the van arrived to take the staffs into the town I was slipped away to join Elizabeth into the guest house. I was surprised how easy I slipped away unnoticed just like Sarvesh said it would be. But I did notice Amita greeting all the staffs and wishing them a happy day off. She does not usually do this and so I knew she was helping take the attention from me.

Letter/Story 70 Part B Background.


                Part B   -   The First Special Weekend.
                                                                               Posted by Shandra
Hi, Shandra here now.
        Last week we followed Katrina through a series of events which finally led her to become involved in the special weekends. Now, this part opens with that first weekend about to begin. In an earlier letter, Sarvesh told us a bit about these weekends but we will learn a lot more as we follow Katrina through her first one.
        I will not go over the whole story since you will obviously read it yourself. I want to show you three interesting points which link to themes running through past and future letters. 

The Red Swimsuit.
       First, let's look at Lizamoa's red swimsuit. Back in Letter 27, Mike brought Lizamoa a red one-piece swimsuit. She was visiting New Zealand with Joseph since she didn’t own a swimsuit they had to buy one. The suit was actually quite sexy as being unlined, it clung tightly to the breasts of the wearer, particularly if it became wet. After Lizamoa wore it to the beach in Letter 29 when she went swimming, it sort of drops out of the story for a long time because after that Lizamoa tended to wear a bikini or less than that when she was swimming.
        It is not entirely clear why it was left in India and how Amita came to own it, considering it didn’t really fit her. Amita herself even wonders why it was left but of course, it was a logical step for Katrina since for her first swimsuit it was sexy but not too over the top.
       For some reason, it really made a difference to Katrina that the red one-piece had been purchased by Mike. There appears to be a special attraction developing between these two, well at least on Katrina’s side there is. 

Elizabeth and Katrina.
         There seems to be a relationship between these two girls which is hinting at being closer than just two friends. Both seem to be attracted to the other with Katrina caught looking at Elizabeth’s nipples in the spa pool, and Katrina waking up to discover her friend holding her breast.  We can sort of wonder where this might be going. 
         This was intended as a side-line to Katrina's adventures on the Nude Days. Where this was going was undecided when this story was written as Anne's diary tells us of some spirited debates going on among the writers over Elizabeth.

The Bikini.
          During this story, Amita offers to buy bikinis for the two girls. These bikinis come with matching cover-ups and skirts so they could be used at other times besides swimming. Both girls were surprised at this but the story for this weekends with the girls agreeing to wear them.
         As a hint, I’m going to tell you this bikini will play a more important part in future sections of Katrina’s Story. Now I'm going to end before I give too much away.

        Next week the first section of Katrina’s Story - Part C, is going to come to a surprising ending.

Friday, 18 October 2013

Letter/Story 70 Part A - Katrina’s Story One.


Part A – Learning About  Letters                                                                 

        My name is Katrina; I work for Sarvesh and Amita as the servant in their house. Some of you will, of course, be surprised to be getting this letter sent from me. Since I am the centre of this adventure Amita thought it was very good for me to be writing it. But I must be the honest person and admitting that she and Hansini have helped me a lot with it too. I am very unknowing to doing a lot of writing, especially the English.
            Do you remember me? Unknown to me I have already been appearing in The Letters Book in two different letters. First, it was in Letter - 52 and then again in Letter - 56. But we will get to these soon.

Letter/Story 70 Part A Background.


                Part A   -   Learning About Letters.
                                                                               Posted by Shandra
Hi, Shandra and Reshma here.
        This week we begin a story which eventually turned into the largest story in the entire letters series. We have divided it into a number of sections so we could fit them closer the rest of the letters. Of course, some of these sections, such as this first one, had to be sub-divided into parts again for posting on-line.  

Purpose and Theme.
         The idea behind this story is to take a younger single woman through the various stages from first hearing about the special weekends to becoming involved herself, then finally losing her virginity and fully participating in the sexy adventures. It is a long drawn-out story but I believe it will be worth it in the end.
        The second purpose of this story is to provide a strong link between the stories of Vol 4 where the New Zealanders are still in India to the stories of Vol 7 where they all meet again at the resort in Australia on the Great Barrier Reef. Through Vols 5 & 6 the letters became more of a loose collection of stories without much of a theme or direction. We needed something to keep the series on track and drive it forward to the holiday resort. Katrina’s Story is one way we did this. 

 Katrina.
        As the title suggests, the story is written by a girl called Katrina. She works for Sarvesh and Amita in their house as some kind of a maid/servant. As she explains in her story she accidentally comes across the sexy side through a series of events which will eventually lead to the point where Sarvesh asks her if she can help them on their special weekends.
       Since Sarvesh didn’t want to involve any other staff, Katrina asked her friend Elizabeth to help. Both girls knew it would involve adult activities such as nudity but they were both interested in making the extra money, so they agreed to help.
       This is where we leave the story this week just before Katrina’s first special weekend.  

Katrina and I.
       When I began writing this story the intention was it would be a replacement for the story by Hansini Letter/Story 66 so you will notice that they are similar in some ways. Of course, later, we decided to keep both stories and develop both characters in different ways.
       In some ways, Katrina's route into Letters is similar to mine. Although I was there at the beginning, I wrote that first letter, I was not involved in the sexual side until a lot later. That is what happened with Katrina as well. Her personality is similar to mine too, a bit shy, a gentle nature, but able to be cheeky and sexy when she wants too.
       You will notice that in the early letters Lizamoa has the role of being the 'darling' of the series, the girl everyone loves, but this attention moves to Katrina with Lizamoa slipping into the background a bit more. This is why we did some stories about Lizamoa over the last few weeks because we knew she was going to fade a bit once we get to the Nude Resort in Vol 7.   

Special Page.
        We have created a page entitled “Katrina’s Story” and as we publish each section of Katrina's Story, we will add it to this page as well. That way you will eventually be able to read the entire story in one place. This page is going to be Reshma's project. She will, of course, make some minor changes as she moulds the separate posts back into a single story. 
        There could be some differences where one version gets an update while the other doesn't but we will try to keep them the same as much as we can.

The Office Conversation.
Hi, Reshma here.
        I was getting this story ready to upload but I wasn't happy with the office scene. This conversation is an important turning point in the Katrina Story. Before this she is just a maid/servant, after this, she begins moving towards becoming an active member of the Indian Team. For such an important part the conversation appeared stiff and unrealistic. I mentioned this to Anne and she said to talk with Allan. Allan and I sat down together and had a go at improving it. I hope you like the result. Anne and Shandra both did.
       We wanted to get Katrina thinking she was about to be fired by Sarvesh, to first show her worry, then how she resigned herself to the fact she was losing her job. We then wanted to show her confusion when it became obvious this wasn't happening as she expected. We also worked on some of what he said as well, so you could say it became complete rebuild of this conversation. 
        We then went on to change little bits throughout the story until finally, we decided it was good enough for publishing.