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Part C – The Second Special Weekend.
Hi, Shandra here again.
This week, the first section of Katrina’s Story comes to its climax with a very surprising ending. More about that soon.
The second special weekend took place about six weeks after the first. This time, they were a bit more organised with the arrangements for Katrina. Now she took a taxi and brought Elizabeth back with her.
The second special weekend took place about six weeks after the first. This time, they were a bit more organised with the arrangements for Katrina. Now she took a taxi and brought Elizabeth back with her.
Points in this Story.
In this story, we read how Katrina receives the new bikinis that they will be wearing for the weekend. As I mentioned in the notes for Part B, here it almost feels like they are being pushed when they are told to get changed. It even seemed to Katrina like it was an order to put the bikini on rather than a suggestion. It appears as if Sarvesh and Amita were pushing the girls in a direction they might not have been so comfortable with.
The second interesting point is the development in the relationship between Katrina and Elizabeth. When Elizabeth discovers Katrina watching her in the spa pool, rather than lowering into the water to hide her nipples, she comes over and begins touching Katrina’s breasts. This looks as if it could have developed into a very close and sexy relationship, except there was something bigger about to happen, which will get in the way.
The second interesting point is the development in the relationship between Katrina and Elizabeth. When Elizabeth discovers Katrina watching her in the spa pool, rather than lowering into the water to hide her nipples, she comes over and begins touching Katrina’s breasts. This looks as if it could have developed into a very close and sexy relationship, except there was something bigger about to happen, which will get in the way.
The Climax.
The climax of this story begins when Katrina finds herself in a game of strip chess. The outcome is that she ends up having to strip everything off. Once she got over the shock of being naked, she seemed to have taken it OK, but Elizabeth didn’t. The girls argue and fall out as it appears Elizabeth thought she might be required to get naked, as well. She leaves the house and drops out of the Letters Stories, while Katrina stays on to continue with the weekends.
Why did we play it that way? Well, we had intended for Elizabeth to become involved in some sexy adventures; in fact, one was partly written for her and Katrina to have a relationship, but then we decided that another married couple would be better. So Elizabeth was dropped from the story, and Brian and Mega were added.
This is not the last we will see of Elizabeth. There was always that question as to where this relationship between these two girls might have gone, so it is possible we might bring her back into the series again to explore it.
Why did we play it that way? Well, we had intended for Elizabeth to become involved in some sexy adventures; in fact, one was partly written for her and Katrina to have a relationship, but then we decided that another married couple would be better. So Elizabeth was dropped from the story, and Brian and Mega were added.
This is not the last we will see of Elizabeth. There was always that question as to where this relationship between these two girls might have gone, so it is possible we might bring her back into the series again to explore it.
Next week, we find out what happens when Joseph discovers a treehouse in the forest behind their new house. Also, watch for Kim's first story coming up soon, too.
Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
Be safe - Be strong.
Shandra, Reshma and Allan Jur.
Be safe - Be strong.
Shandra, Reshma and Allan Jur.
Extra Added September 2015.
Hi from Susan,
The theme between Katrina and Elizabeth was picked up again by me. Shandra had begun writing about a relationship between these two girls, but it was never used. Recently, Kim found her notes in our junk folder of discarded stories, etc. Kim brought the idea up at a writers meeting, but when Shandra wasn't interested, I decided to explore the idea. The outcome was in Sept 2015, I published this story, Story 160 Elizabeth in Mumbai.
(Go read it now if you can't wait until you come across it later.)
The theme between Katrina and Elizabeth was picked up again by me. Shandra had begun writing about a relationship between these two girls, but it was never used. Recently, Kim found her notes in our junk folder of discarded stories, etc. Kim brought the idea up at a writers meeting, but when Shandra wasn't interested, I decided to explore the idea. The outcome was in Sept 2015, I published this story, Story 160 Elizabeth in Mumbai.
(Go read it now if you can't wait until you come across it later.)
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