Monday, 29 August 2016

Story 186 Part Two - Background.


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                                                                                  Posted by Reshma
        The second part of this story is a lot sexier so Ayaka called me in to help. Both Susan and Anne were involved too.
        While Hansini, Amita and Jeevan were supposed to have been on that farm for a few days we only really covered the events from their first night. Notice we end by inviting Tom and Betty to join on the trip to India. Watch out for them in the next volume. I’m sure that horny farmer will get into some action in India and it seems his wife isn’t shy either.

         Now the first time having sex always makes for a good story so what about the first time a woman has sex with another woman? That is sure to be good. Well Ayaka though so as she laid out this part of her story. The outline was completed and much of the sex scene written but she just wasn’t happy with it. That is where I got involved by adding that extra detail. At the same time I made sure to stick closely to Ayaka’s story-line.
        It was finished as far as we were concerned but when Susan saw it she still thought more could be done so one evening her and Anne sat down together. Again many minor changes were made but they also tried hard to keep Ayaka’s original story. It worked and now Part Two is ready for publishing.

         So where did this idea come from Ayaka? It seems that when Ayaka came to New Zealand she was unable to have sex in case she got sent back to Japan. She became close to Kim and sometimes they shared the same bed when guests were using Ayaka’s room. Well things developed until they began a sexual relationship. Ayaka was experienced with a woman long before she had her first man so when it came to this story she knew exactly what she wanted. We just helped her to deliver it. 

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1 comment:

  1. No comment on the writing of this story. I am surprised.
    I can see how others are helping Ayaka with her story. It looks like this happens with almost very story.
    Rosemary.

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