Story 195 Katrina gets Married - Part Three.

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A word from writer Anne.
       Sorry for this story. It has got overlapped by the nude weekend stories. In the end, we got bored with it. We would have pulled the whole section but already Section One had been published. Since we had to carry on, Susan and I have rushed to complete it so we can move on to better things. 

Sub-Story E - Breakfast in the Game Reserve.

Hi from Shanti

       It was just getting light as we arrived at the smaller lake. They had set up tables for breakfast out on the viewing decks. It was perfect. A clear, still morning where we could watch the sun rise over the lake.
       The only real formal part of this event came after the meal. Mootie was giving a good speech until he managed to stuff it up at the end.
       “Well, David,” he said. “Your last breakfast as a free man. Now is the time to run.......”
       He didn’t get to finish, the outcry from us women, put an end to any more talking.
       Hansini did manage to add, “You run now David and I’m coming after you with Shanti’s crocodile gun.” That got a laugh from everyone.
       After breakfast, the park landrovers took us back to the main park centre where our bus was waiting. It was only a short trip to the station where Katrina would arrive. Some stayed to wait while the rest of us went on to the club. From what I hear, maybe I should have waited to see the train arrive too.

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Anne Here.
        We struggled with this one. I think partly because the big plans we had just didn't work out and partly because the developing stories surrounding the nude weekend caused us to lose interest. I was about to let it go and publish it as it was when Susan stopped me. She asked if I'd let her add a sex scene to spice it up a bit. I really didn't know how she would do this but she seemed confident enough so I let her have a go.
        The outcome was that sexy part where Sairu and Jeremy slip away from the party together. Her first draft was good but once we had worked over it together it was even better since we added that bit where they got found out afterwards. It's good Susan. You did well.
        Now that became the driving force behind us having another go at the rest of the story. Really it just took a bit more detail to turn it into a half decent story. Just to finish it off I added that fun bit during Katrina's speech which made a few of them laugh when I read it at the meeting.

       So that is it. The wedding is behind us now. Let's move on to the nude weekend. I'm writing this on Sunday evening the 9th of April and already one story is complete and five others are underway. There is a list of another six possible stories after that. (For you Janet it's another sex possible stories. LOL) So it's going to be fun writing and publishing them. I think our story characters are going to have lots of fun too. Well, they better or else the stories won't be much fun.

      That is all from me.
                      Anne.

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