Story Four – Jeevan and Shanti.
Posted by Anne.Hi from Anne again.
This is the second story of the dominoes series which I got to write; I think the girls gave me this one because of the difference in personalities between Shanti and Jeevan. They are almost complete opposites. Jeevan was shy and nervous, while Shanti was so bold and outgoing so I knew it was going to be an interesting challenge.
At first, I was unsure how to do this story. Finally, I called in the other three for a brain-storming session. In the end, I didn’t exactly follow their advice but it did kind of kick start my brain. In the end, the story sort of went well and I was happy with it too.
Now to the story.
Things weren’t getting off to a good start and finally, Jeevan admitted how nervous he was. With some quick thinking, Shanti came up with a way of breaking the ice. She suggested that they have a shower together first. At least that would get them both naked. I think at this point Shanti might have been wondering what she had got herself into.
Then I switched the story to Jeevan and I let him give us a detailed account of how he begins washing Shanti, his hands rubbing soap all over her naked body. This, of course, turns very sexy when he reaches her pussy. It ended with what she called a ‘mind blowing orgasm.’ Thanks Susan for suggesting I take this first scene as far as that. ‘Mind blowing orgasm,’ I like that. I must remember to use it again.
This then got me thinking. After what had just happened in the shower it was obvious that Jeevan knew a thing or two about how to turn a girl on. What if it turned out that he was a great lover in bed too? That would be a total surprise for Shanti as well as a surprise for you readers. So that was how I completed the story. He controls the sex, reading her body as he builds them both towards their climax. She is experiencing excitement and frustration both at the same time. She has never had a lover like this before. She has never had a lover who takes so much control. It is a hot scene and works well for both of them too.
Just for a bit of fun at the end, I added that scene next morning by the pool where Shanti goes over to try and find out what Mike and Mandara are writing about. Shanti always wants to know what is going on and this time Mike wasn’t telling her. When she returns in frustration we can see Jeevan is kind of amused by this too.
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