Friday, 21 June 2013

Letter 57 Extra Story Four


Story Four - Jeevan and Shanti
            This is the fourth of the six stories following the dominoes game. Since these stories do not actually fit in with any of our letters we have left them as separate stories in the book without letter headings but since Joseph wrote about playing the game we could consider them to be under the general heading of his letter and called the Letter 57 extras.  

Shanti:- There was general agreement all around about the selections which had been made. The only thing was I felt a bit sorry for Mike, as after putting all the work into arranging this evening he was not going to take part. I almost decided to ask Jeevan if he could join in with us but then I knew Jeevan was happy to be spending the night with me alone and I didn’t want to spoil it in any way for him.
         Mike followed me into our room to pick up his gear.
         “Sorry about tonight,” I told him.
         “It’s Ok. With six girls the odds were that at least one of you would be unavailable.”
         “Don’t worry I’ll make it up to you later. You are a good man, Mike,” I said giving him a hug.
         “Thanks, Shanti,” he replied.
         “That is one reason I love you so much.”
         I gave him kiss on the lips and quickly he responded to me.
         Then I had to pull away. “Sorry Mike. You better go. Jeevan will be here soon.”
         "Yes," he said. "I suppose I better."
         After saying good night to me and wishing me a fun night he left. A little while there came a knock at the door and Jeevan entered.
            Jeevan is a bit shorter than the other men and a bit heavier in build too; ‘tubby’ is the word he told me to use. I was wondering what having sex with him would be like since I was taller than him but I knew that soon I would be finding out. To be honest I really didn’t know what to expect.
            He came over to the bed where I was sitting and sat beside me.
            “Well Shanti,” he said. “Here is a night for us to spend together and what shall we be doing first?”
            When he appeared to hesitate I began to wonder what was happening. I suddenly realised that he was unsure how to start. Maybe he was shy or nervous about spending the night with another woman.
            “Are you Ok about to night?” I asked.
            He looked at me for a moment before saying, “Yes Shanti I am very OK, but you are seeing I have never had another love-partner except Mandara.”
            “Are you sure you are Ok with tonight. You know spending the night with me?”
            “Yes Shanti, I am OK. I want to do this thing. I am just not sure how to start it,” he admitted.
            “Well let’s start with something easy first and I’m sure things will go on from there. Let’s take a shower together first.”
            “That is a good plan you are having. I will be very happy to take my shower with you.”
            I just felt like telling him ‘come on guy loosen up a bit and relax.’ He sounded so formal but I thought if I said anything more it could make things worse. So I decided the best idea would be for me to take the lead until he got over the idea of spending the night with another woman.
Jeevan:- As Shanti has just written I was unsure of what to do with her that night. This was the first woman I had been with in the bed other than with my wife Mandara and I was not sure what to expect. Shanti always comes across so confident and self-assured. It was making me a bit nervous.  
            When she saw straight away when I was nervous I had to admit I was not as experienced as she was. She didn’t seem too concerned when I told her this. She suggested we should take the shower together to enjoy things slowly first. I was thinking this was a jolly good plan for us to be having.
            When we went into the shower room; she stood facing me and began by undoing my shirt. I responded by doing the same with her blouse. Very soon we had each other naked with all the clothes removed.
            I reached into the shower and set the water to nice and gentle with just being a bit warm in temperature. I then stood aside and she stepped in under the water for me to follow her in.
            She still had her back to me so I took some soap and began to rub over the back and then lower down on to her bottom and upper legs. Then standing again I took her by her shoulders and turned her towards me. I began again now on the front of her body.
            I looked at her for a moment before continuing with my washing work. Shanti is a fine woman with strong broad shoulders which came to a slimmer waist before the broad of her hips again. This is the body shape we Indians are saying is good for child bearing. She has the lovely breasts, not too large but not small either and the crowning of her large dark nipples. Lower down she has the pussy forest, full between her thighs but trimmed for her bikini line. Yes she is a sexy woman to be spending the night with.
            First I started with her neck and shoulders while she stood there with her eyes closed. Now I moved lower on to her breasts. It was not the first time I had touched Shanti on her bare breasts because I had done so before when we played the games at Amita’s house. But this time it was different. This time a lot more sensual, a lot more sexy.
            As I touched the nipples at their peaks she moaned and closed her eyes. As I worked at her nipples with my fingers they became erect like hard little nuts under my touch.
            Now I am moving lower down. I rub the soap across the smoothness of her stomach, stopping for a minute to explore her belly button. Now I am on the moving again, down across her lower belly, down deeper until the tops of her thighs are on either side of my fingers. Now I discover the first hairs of her pussy. They get more and more as I move lower.
            Between her thighs I come to the secret parts of a woman hidden deep in the jungles of her pussy. Almost at first touch she gives a reaction to me. She lets out a gasp and grips my head with her hands.
            It was almost the automatic response to this that I move my head forward and touch her pussy with my tongue. At first there is a taste of soap, not very nice for me but with the water pouring and her own natural wetness too she is soon tasting nicer as I begin probing deeply into her. Her pussy lips are open inviting to me.
            She is reacting strongly now. She is grinding her hips, pressing her pussy mound at me. Her hands are gripping my head, pulling at my hair as she holds my face tightly against herself. She is gasping and moaning at the pleasure she is receiving into her pussy from me.
            Then her movements become faster and faster. She is becoming more and more excited as she is now almost moaning continually now. Then her entire body gives a massive jerk towards me, almost pushing me backwards. She is cumming with an orgasm which is so intense it is even surprising me. I am now working directly on her clitty with the tip of my tongue. I want to keep this going as long as I can.
            Finally I experience that she is over her peak now. I leave her pussy and stand up to hold her. It is a bit strange holding a girl who is taller than me but we are not worried about that. I hold her while she recovers herself and then she opens her eyes to me again.
            With a big smile she says, “Wow! That was some orgasm. It was so intense! It almost blew my mind!”
            I did not answer her because I thought there was no reply she needed. But inside I was happy that I had achieved that for her.

Shanti:- Later, after that mind blowing orgasm in the bathroom we returned to the bedroom. I lay on the bed with Jeevan beside me. We didn’t actually kiss; rather you could say it was more like necking and a bit of casual foreplay.
            Soon things began to get a bit more heated as I was becoming aroused again and Jeevan also still had a full on erection.
            We began by using the most common position with him on top. And as soon as he entered me I knew I was on the way to my second climax. I don’t know what made me so hot for sex that night. I have always been ready for a bit of action if it came my way but not normally so on heat like this.
            We started slowly, or should I say Jeevan started slowly. Jeevan was very particular and methodical about everything he did and it seems this came to sex as well. He was slowly and steadily building me towards my orgasm. It was not the fact that he was slow about doing anything, far from it; this was more like he was controlling our intercourse together.
            I was feeling excitement and frustration all at once. I wanted to cum, I wanted to release the tensions building inside me but they just slowly and steadily kept building. I knew he was building himself as well. This control was something I was not expecting with Jeevan.
            Then it happened. I felt him suddenly increase his speed and this was what it took to send me into my climax. It was not until I recovered that I realised that he had cum too. He had managed to time things perfectly. That was impressive he could build me and hold me just before my peak to release me when he was ready too.

            We lay together for a while and talked. It was nice to just relax after what we had just been doing. The conversation was nothing much just some small talk for a while.
            Then I felt his hand touching me. First onto my stomach and then up to my breasts again. My nipples were soon as hard again, as they had been before. Then his hands were straying down lower to my pussy. Not going straight there but gently stroking the inside of my thigh first. Again I felt he was teasing me. I wanted to take his hand and thrust it into my pussy. Or better still I wanted to shove his hand away and pump it myself.
            This was really getting to me. Suddenly I wanted him again. I wanted him in me as soon as I could. My hand ran over his body and quickly I discovered he was hard again too. This time I was determined to take things over and do it my way. I rolled over towards him so I could position myself on top of him.
            With one leg either side of him I reached down between them to guide him into my pussy. But before I could he had slid into me but instead of driving hard at me, he held back guiding himself gently. I lowered my body taking as much as I could of him but still I felt this holding back so it felt as if he was still in control not me, even though I was the one on top.
            Soon we were thrusting at each other with him matching me every time I moved my hips. This time I was pushing things a bit faster than the first time. With this my orgasm began building again. I felt though that he was matching my every move, almost I felt as if he was still playing with me, although this probably was not the right word. Maybe controlling my build up would be more correct.
            Then I came. As I did he began humping up, driving himself into me but at the same time making deeper contact with my clit. This caused me to immediately have a second orgasm, not as strong as the first but still fairly powerful. This then quickly it became a third.
           When we slowed down and I recovered, I realised that he had given me three powerful orgasms one after another. I had never had that ever before. But I then noticed that he was still deep inside me as hard as when he started.
            “What about you Jeevan?” I asked. “Did you cum too?”
            “No Shanti, not this time,” he replied. “I wanted to hold until you have finished. If I had let myself go with you it will not be so good for you either.”
            Wow! I then realised what he had done for me. He made me feel guilty. He had held himself back for my pleasure. By doing so he had given me three powerful orgasms, one after the other. I suddenly wanted to give him something special in return. To give him whatever he wanted.
            “What do you want to do to finish you off?” I asked.
            “Really Shanti, I like it with the girl from behind the best but this is not always good for the girl too.”
            “That’s OK. I have had more than enough tonight.”
            “Then if you want to lean over the edge of the bed for me,” he asked.
            “Have you ever tried laying side by side on the bed with the girls back to you? In New Zealand we sometimes do it that way.
            “No I am not ever been trying it that way. Can you show me?”
            “Ok then, it is easy to do. I just lie down and push back towards you. You will find you can easily enter me that way.”
            We got into that position and he quickly found his way into my pussy from behind. He began thrusting into me.
            “Like this you can speed up or slow down as you feel. You have complete control but it is also a very relaxing way to have sex if you want too,” I explained.
            It didn’t take too long this way until I could feel him building. Soon he had reached the climax and with a deep gasp he came. I pressed my back against him as he put my arm across me.
            This is how we fell asleep and sometime during the night he must have became soft enough to fall out of me. When I awoke we were still in that same position. It was warm enough in the room that we hadn’t even bothered with a sheet over us, or for that matter even turned off the light.

Jeevan:- My evening with Shanti was good. She was a very good lover and I was feeling we were very good together. She responded to me too very quickly and I needed to slow her down to make it more intense and better for both of us.
        The second time she was on top and I noticed that strong will coming out as she tried to take the lead but I was still able to keep her from cumming too soon and spoiling the effect. When she came I was able to keep her in her high so she peaked three times before I would release her. I was pleased I could do that for her.
        She then taught me a new way of doing where we were on to our sides and I was able to enter from behind. It is a good way and I will be showing to Mandara too.
            In the end we had a very good night. I had come very strongly twice and I know she came at least five times during the evening which made me feel very satisfied too.  

            I awoke before Shanti. In the morning it is very nice just to lie beside a sleeping woman. To feel her body against your body. To hear the softness of her breathing as she finished her night sleeping and is in the last stage just before she wakes up. It is a nice feeling, a peaceful time for me.
            I was thinking about this woman beside me, the one I had just spent the night with. She was so different to my wife Mandara. You can say so different to me too. She was a very bold and very outgoing and very strong willed woman. She always appeared to me to be a woman who knew exactly what she wanted and what she was doing. Such a strong willed and confident woman, she could be a bit scary for some men I was thinking too.
            Before Shanti and Mike arrived in India, Joseph and Lizamoa had told us about them. Particularly Joseph had told us about Shanti. He was very impressed with her and now I could see why. But he said she was very stubborn and they had some very heated debates in their letters. I can also see why this would be when I came to know her better.
            I reached over her and touched the nipple of her breast. She murmured something in her sleep and her nipple began to harden. I continued and soon I noticed her breathing had changed and I realised she was waking up. Then her hand moved, coming up to gently hold my hand. Not taking it away from her breast, instead holding it against her breast.
            “Good morning Jeevan,” she said.
            “Good morning Shanti,” I replied. “How are you this morning?”
            “Oh I feel so good. I feel like I’ve had such a good sleep.”
            “You must have been tired after last night.”
            “Maybe more like totally relaxed after last night,” she corrected me. Then she continued, “How about you? How are you this morning Jeevan?”
            “Oh I am feeling very good too,” I replied.
            She squeezed my hand. “That was so good last night. I don’t know what you were so nervous for. You are a great lover. Mandara is a very lucky lady.”
            “Thank you,” I said feeling a little bit embarrassed.
            She leaned over me to look at the clock. It was just getting light outside so I knew it was still early.
            “We still have plenty of time before we have to get up. Do you want to do anything this morning? She asked.
            “Yes if you are happy to.”
            “Any idea which way we should try?”
            “Maybe back the way we did the first time would be good for both of us,” I suggested.
            So that was what we did. With me on top we made-love games again and although this time it was again good it did not have the same passion as we had the night before. But as it was good for both of us I think we were both happy when we got up and went to the shower together.
            I then got dressed and was ready to leave her to go to my room. She was still naked having not got dressed yet. She came over to me and put her arms around me. Finding my lips she kissed me on them. It was a good kiss, a kiss on the lips and I was responding to her.
            Leaning back so she could see my face she looked into my eyes as she said, “Thank you, Jeevan. I have enjoyed spending the night with you. It was a wonderful night.”
            Thank you Shanti,” I replied. “You were a beautiful woman to spend this night with.”
            Then I turned and left. Part way back to my room I met Mike.
            “Hi Jeevan,” he said cheerfully. “Did my wife behave herself?” he asked.
            “Yes Mike she did. She is a lovely woman and you both are very special people.”
            I went on to our room thinking for a man who had arranged sexy evenings for everybody else but had to miss out himself, he seemed very happy. It was only later that I came to learn that in fact Mike did not miss out after all. He and Mandara did have some love-games together as well.       

            After breakfast Shanti and I sat together to write our story out. I was happy to let her do it all but she insisted that I must do some too, although she did help a lot with it. When she came to do her parts it was a surprise to see how fast she could write even hand-writing on paper too.
            Shanti was looking over at Mandara and Mike. She was getting more and more interested in what they were doing.
            “What are those two doing?” she asked.
            “I’m not sure but they look like they have a story to be telling as well.”
            “But they weren’t supposed to be doing anything.”
            We continued to write our story but I noticed that Shanti was still a bit distracted. She continued to watch them and I noticed too that they were doing a lot of writing. Finally it got to the better of Shanti.
            “What are those two up to?” she asked again.
            “I don’t know. They would not have been doing anything because for Mandara it was her woman’s time.”
            “But they are writing something,” she said.
            “They must have some story to write, but what would it be?” I said.
            “I’m going to find out what’s going on,” she said getting up and heading in their direction.
            Her movement had attracted the attention of some others as well. I noticed Joseph watching too. He then looked across at me and grinned. I think he was amused by her too.
            Then Shanti returned to where we were sitting. I asked what was happening.
            “I don’t know. They wouldn’t tell me,” she said crossly. “I know they are writing some sort of story but they would not show me. They are up to something.”
         I could see Shanti wanted to know what was going on. I could see she was frustrated by not knowing. But I was also thinking it was a bit funny too.
            We continued with our work while, from time to time Shanti was looking up at Mike and Mandara. Finally Mike called us all to stop for we were having to get ready for our afternoon touring around the city.

            So later we did get our story completed and here it is finished.
                        We hope you like it as much as we like making it.
                                            Ha Ha.


4 comments:

  1. Hi Anne.
    It was interesting how you handled this story Anne. Yes it was a challenge but I really liked how you worked with these two opposites particularly the work you did on building Jeevan’s character like you did. At first you portrayed him as being shy and unsure of himself which was no surprise to me because this was how I expected the story would go. But then in the shower Jeevan suddenly seemed to change, gaining confidence to become that wonderful lover able to deliver ‘mind blowing orgasms.’ I like that term. I also like the interesting twist you did with this.

    The other highlight for me was Jeevan’s impression of Shanti. ‘strong willed and confident woman, she could be a bit scary for some men.’ Isn’t he saying ‘she could be strong willed and is scary to me?’ Does that explain his apparent lack of confidence at first? The thought of being with Shanti was probably getting to him a bit.

    Yes I thought you got the balance about right with this one. Character building of both, good sex scenes, and smooth running conversations. Good work Anne.

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    1. Hi Reshma
      Thank you for your comments. It makes me feel like I have achieved my goal when someone tells me they get what I was trying to do with this story. It makes all the work we put in worthwhile. I don't think I need to add anything more, your summary says it all.
      Once again thanks,
      Anne

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    2. Hi Anne,
      Yes we agree with Reshma's comments. This is one of the better stories. I like the way you are trying to do more with your characters than just have sex scenes. Yes the sex is important, the main theme of this blog, but also its good you develop them to appear as real people too.

      I like the black bikini Anne. Sexy!!!!
      Janet

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    3. Hi Janet
      I'm glad you like this story. I am pleased with the way it turned out. Sometimes it is hard to know how to write a story like this. The feed back from you readers help us.

      Oh and thanks for you comment on my bikini. Yes it feels sexy to wear too! Made by Wicked Weasel. Now I am wondering what Janet looks like in a sexy bikini. LOL
      Anne.

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