Posted by Allan & Asami.
So the New Zealanders are now in India, this story will get those from
Perth, Australia there too. This was supposed to be the second half of Shanti’s
story but when that sex scene and the bit about Tom and Betty got added, we
decided to cut it into two sections for publishing.
Joyce tells us about their trip from Perth to Singapore. I like that
romantic sunrise as they leave Perth. Thanks Asami for that. It seems this is
the first time Joyce or Jeremy have ever travelled outside of Australia so they
were keen to see all they could of Singapore, going out with Mike and Peter all
the time.
We then move on to the more sexy part of this story where Joyce goes on
to add a different view of the sex session she had with Mike. We
find out that there was a lot more happened that night than Mike mentioned.
But notice how we end up hearing about Joyce and Mike again. That was very
poorly planned! Now we just have to guess how Shanti and Jeremy went. My guess
is they did pretty good too.
Finally Joyce tells us more about when they arrive in India. Of course
it is not so easy getting to where their Indian friends live. First there is
another short flight to a smaller city then a long trip by road to the town
beside the Game Reserve. I think this story tells us a lot more about the
layout and locations of attractions in this town. Keep in mind that this
town is fictitious, not set on any real town but has been made-up and added to over the years. Asami went back to read all she could about this town then
wrote that last bit. I notice she placed the club/hotel on the other side of
the river with a few tourist trap shops nearby. I’d never imagined it being
like that, but sort of makes sense, doesn’t it?
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