Story 193 Katrina’s Leaving Presentation.

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           (Katrina with the senior directors.)

Hi from Hansini.

        The third night our visitors were with us in India, we had arranged a special evening at the club. It had been an interesting day with us all on the two big buses doing a tour of the town. Not all from India could make that tour as some of the men had to work. I notice that Donald and Steve were with Jeevan and Sarvesh in the office. Katrina and David were with them too.

        For the rest of us, it was a fun day. We took them into the town and had a walk through the wet market. It’s fun seeing the shocked looks when people from overseas see how food is being processed and sold here. Once they see the place and smell it too, they just can’t believe how people can eat that food. Of course, it was also fun to see the surprised looks on the local stall-holders when foreigners appeared at their stalls and start discussing their produce. 
       It is really quite clean because all the food is kept clean and washed with lots of water. It is only where food has fallen into the drains that the smell is because in the heat. Each night the entire building is hosed out and cleaned for the new morning.

       We then took them out to a cave temple and up to a scenic location overseeing much of the area. From here it was near to Jeevan and Mandara’s new house so we stopped to view the progress there. I must admit it will be a spectacular house once it's finished. Not as big as Amita’s but still the location is amazing. From here we moved on to Amita’s house nearby and there was a lunch prepared for us beside the pool. The house manager, Amita and Katrina took some of our visitors on tours of the house. At lunch, we were joined by Brian and those from the office as Sarvesh had some things to discuss with us. This meeting was the arrangements for the wedding and assigning tasks. There was then a chance for a swim for those like Shanti.

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                                                                                        Posted by Anne.

         We were together on the deck discussing these stories before Katrina’s Wedding. There had a been a series of what was happening at various houses but we were looking for something a bit different. The idea of Sarvesh and the Maid came up which my partner Allan, picked up and ran with. Now we were looking for a second small story. A few ideas were suggested, discussed and rejected but nothing seemed to work.

         Then Shandra came up with the break-through idea. “What about Jeevan and Sarvesh giving Katrina a leaving presentation?” she said. I challenged her and Kim added, “Maybe, a leaving presentation over her office desk.” (We all know where that idea came from Letter/Story 72  Background Extra.)

        Well, the desk became the boardroom table and four directors instead of two became involved. As ideas were batted backwards and forwards a storyline began to develop. Finally, most of the story had been drafted out. The cum shower was first just Jeevan and then all four directors were joining in.

       There remained just a few questions. How do they get Katrina into the boardroom? What happens since her clothes would be ruined? Should David be involved? The first two I took care of while I wrote the story. The last one, Susan suggested that David fucks Elizabeth on the other end of the table. That was a surprise as I considered Elizabeth to be a lesbian but then I thought, why not let her try a guy for once.

        So there it is, you can see how this story was mainly completed in a brainstorming session. All I needed to do was write it. Nothing outstanding as much has been covered in other stories but it all came together as a fun little story that finished off Katrina’s time before she leaves to prepare for her wedding.   

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Story 192 Europeans in Our House.

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         (Hamza & Kalki with Peter & Jenny.)

Hi from Kalki.

         My husband and I were also at the special event put on by Sarvesh and Amita when it was suggested we should have these overseas visitors stay within our own private houses. This was a big thing, not normally done in India I think, but we told we were willing to help.

         We got a European couple from New Zealand. A man called Peter and his wife Jenny. They also had two children with them, two girls, lovely twins. It is funny how my friend Sairu also had a European couple staying with them. Now thinking of this, I’m sure Amita arranged it like that.

        Of course, at the time we agreed to this but later I became concerned as to whom these people were and how we would look after them as we do not have much wealth and a very simple house. Hamza informed me to talk with Amita about it. He also said to read the Letters because this couple featured in many stories. Amita told me they were easy-going and would fit in with us well. I was confused what she meant by ‘easy-going’ until she explained it was a New Zealand term that meant they were very relaxed and adaptable type of people.

        Amita also suggested we might want to video chat with them too. Just so we could be knowing them better. I learnt that Sairu had done the same too. I also learnt she had got very naughty in her chat with Steve. Even taking all her clothes off in front of him. LOL, Very naughty girl! I am too shy to do such as that!

       When we made contact, I sat beside my husband and watched these people on the screen. In my mind were the ideas they would be staying into our house. They were older than us and had their little girls with them at first. I noticed the girls were falling asleep and Jenny soon took them away. After that, it was a good chat and I knew we would be happy with them in our house.

        There was a little bit of sexy in our talk too which made my husband and me sure they would be open to more too. I was surprised that Hamza told Jenny she was hot. I was worried how she would take this but she replied she can be even hotter when she knows him better. Oh wow! Both Hamza took this as meaning she was interested for him, interested in doing more sexy to him. You know of this, interested in the making the love-games with him.

         Now I looked to Peter in a different way. I was wondering about what a man like him would be like to me, into my bed. I was not very experienced with the sex, only for my husband so how would an older white man be to me?

         Then Peter said, “You look hot too Kalki.”

         I know what Hamza had just said but I was even surprised. I think, not knowing how to reply to this so I hesitated longer than I should.

         His face changed for a worried expression. 
         “Sorry,” he said. “I shouldn’t have said that.”

         “No! No, Peter….. It is fine.”

         “It’s only the truth...... You do look hot, Kalki. I love that sari you are wearing.”

         “Thank you, Peter. You look hot too,” I replied. A bit silly to say but I had to say something.

         He gave a laugh. “Well, perhaps we should get together and explore all our hotness.”

         I saw his joke and laughed. I also saw the meaning of extra behind his words too. I was sure he was suggesting me to join his love-games. Later, Hamza told he thought so too.

         The chat finished not long after that. When they went away, we went off to bed. 

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                                                                                        Posted by Reshma.

         At a writers meeting a few months back, it was suggested that the European couples from New Zealand would stay with the two younger Indian couples when they visited India for the wedding. Anne’s strategy here was to bring out these two girls by putting them with older, more experienced men. There was also the potential of them being different races and cultures that could be explored as well.

        My sister took the first one where Steve & Sharon stayed with Sairu and Payam. This would eventually expand into three posts and become the great story we all have just enjoyed during December. I took the second story where Peter & Jenny stayed with Kalki and Hamza.

        Now, my brief described them being not as wealthy as others in our stories, also that while Hamza is about 27, Kalki is younger, about 22. It has been suggested that she might be shy and not as confident sexually. Anne also wanted me to include that Hamza now worked for Sarvesh which could be the base for a possible future story. Finally, way out in the future, there will be some stories concerning Jenny’s twins and Amita’s boy Steven when they grow up. That scene at the end was included in continuing developing this theme.

        I remember when I first got involved in the Letters Writers Team that I had only ever had one partner and I was much as Kalki might have been, shy and lacking confidence in my sexual ability. So in writing here, I was able to draw from my own experiences with new sexual partners.

        I also wanted Peter to overcome her shyness with some joking and teasing too. Later, I wrote that Hamza noticed a big change in their lovemaking too with Kalki becoming a lot more assertive and confident in their lovemaking. Also, something that happened with my husband and I, too. He says I'm more bossy now. Ha! Ha! Of course, I know all of you won't believe that.

        So once again, as has happened so often in this blog, we have a story, built around and based on reality. In this case, it is my reality being woven into the words of a fantasy, fictional story. 

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