Monday, 30 January 2017

Story 193 Katrina’s Leaving Presentation.


           (Katrina with the senior directors.)
Hi from Hansini.
        The third night our visitors were with us in India, we had arranged a special evening at the club. It had been an interesting day with us all on the two big buses doing a tour of the town. Not all from India could make that tour as some of the men had to work. I notice that Donald and Steve were with Jeevan and Sarvesh in the office. Katrina and David were with them too.
        For the rest of us, it was a fun day. We took them into the town and had a walk through the wet market. It’s fun seeing the shocked looks when people from overseas see how food is being processed and sold here. Once they see the place and smell it too, they just can’t believe how people can eat that food. Of course, it was also fun to see the surprised looks on the local stall-holders when foreigners appeared at their stalls and start discussing their produce. 
       It is really quite clean because all the food is kept clean and washed with lots of water. It is only where food has fallen into the drains that the smell is because in the heat. Each night the entire building is hosed out and cleaned for the new morning.
       We then took them out to a cave temple and up to a scenic location overseeing much of the area. From here it was near to Jeevan and Mandara’s new house so we stopped to view the progress there. I must admit it will be a spectacular house once it's finished. Not as big as Amita’s but still the location is amazing. From here we moved on to Amita’s house nearby and there was a lunch prepared for us beside the pool. The house manager, Amita and Katrina took some of our visitors on tours of the house. At lunch, we were joined by Brian and those from the office as Sarvesh had some things to discuss with us. This meeting was the arrangements for the wedding and assigning tasks. There was then a chance for a swim for those like Shanti.

        After lunch, it was back onto buses for a trip to the Game Reserve. Once we had crossed the Penna River we were met at the main gates by Mootie who got on to the front bus and Joseph, who took the task of tour guide for the second bus. We visited all the main attractions at the visitor centre then went into the admin areas where people usually aren’t allowed. I notice my husband is more strict with this than Joseph used to be. From here it was up to another viewpoint I had never seen before, apparently, a new attraction they are just opening, we were among the first to go there. Finally, we came to Shanti’s Hideaway.
        I like this place as my husband has made it to a major attraction without damaging the location for the park animals. It was all from the idea by Joseph he is always happy to say. Shanti sat on the crocodile again while we took some photos. Of course, with other park visitors there, she had to keep her clothes on this time. Although, the naughty girl did offer to get naked as an extra attraction for the tourists until Mike told to behave herself. 

        (That woman again! Why can’t she leave me alone? They treat her like some kind of hero when all she did was shoot me from behind while I was asleep. Nothing brave about that!
                                                                    Signed – Grumpy Ghost of the Crocodile)

        Yes, it had been a great day. The buses dropped us home so we could freshen and change for the evening. An hour later they began picking people up again but for us, since the club was nearby, we just used a couple of taxis and our car.
        They had a special show for us which I thought one of the best I’d seen. Often the shows here were aimed at the tourist market and I thought not so good but they did it well this time. When it came time for our meal our group overtook much of the restaurant with only a small part being put aside for other guests of the hotel. It was a set meal of four different dishes and again I was pleased with what they served. From here we almost overtook the bar and since no one was driving, the drinks flowed freely too. By the end Mootie didn’t want to drive our car, probably couldn’t anyway, so since Lizamoa and I weren’t drinking, she drove the short distance to our house before being picked up by the bus again. 
         That night, not much happened in our house although I heard Jeevan and Mandara and Betty and Tom had plans to stay at the big house that night. I have no idea where they put four extra adults, plus Mandara’s kids.

         Now day four was spent either at home or in the town. We took them to some places where they could do some shopping. At three shops Amita had gone and told them she would direct our guests there for a good price on their goods. This was agreed so we were all told which shops to use.  We could be confident the prices would be good for our guests as the owners would not want to cross Sarvesh’s wife. Usually, if they see a tourist's face the price goes up sometimes as much as double.
         Of course, Amita was well known as Sarvesh's wife. He is the most honest man to do business with, drives a hard bargain but fair. I have heard it told, you should never try to cheat him. I've heard there are stories he had harsh dealings with people who had crossed him or Amita.
        In the afternoon we went to the warehouse and had a tour of that as well. There were two containers being loaded to New Zealand and North India. Mike did suggest putting Shanti in there to save him some money on her airfare home. Ha! Ha! She had some words to make about that idea too. 
       There was also a railway car on the other side being unloaded. I noticed the second warehouse was now almost empty as they were preparing for the wedding. They were pushing to get all the work done in time. It is a busy place with workers and forklifts moving everywhere. It has improved much since last time I was there.
        Hamza now works for Jeevan here. It was a surprise to his work friends when they saw him in our group telling some of the visitors what was going on. At this point, he was standing beside Donald and Steve, two of the most senior in the company. I wondered how his work friends would treat him after that but never heard of any problems.
        We also met Katrina’s father and he gave us a tour of where work was starting on the new warehouse complex on the other side of the railway. I am surprised at the progress being made here. You can already see the shape where the walls were going. This place is getting to be the largest employer within our town now. I've even heard there will be an underpass under the railway for staff and forklifts to move freely. 

        But enough from me, the main purpose of this story is to tell you what happened in the office while we were out touring. So here is Katrina.

Hi from Katrina,
        My work in India was finished now. I was in my office, well Elizabeth’s actually now and sending out emails to business partners I had worked with at places around India. I just wanted to thank them and wish them success in their work. Many had already contacted me wishing me the same.
        The door opened and Sarvesh walked in.
        “What, Katrina? Are you still working.”
        “No Sarvesh. Just saying thanks to some business partners I know.”
        He nodded. I’d told him before I would do that.
        “Katrina, you know how I’ve always pushed you. Making you attempt new things?”
        “Yes. At first, I thought it was unfair until I realised what you were doing.”
        “Unfair? How could I be unfair to you Katrina?”
        “Yes, always Sarvesh. Such a bully boss to me.”
        He smiled but had other things on his mind so didn’t pick up the game.
        “I have one last task for you, Katrina.”
        “Yes, Sarvesh.”
        “There is a meeting tomorrow. A senior board meeting…… I want you to chair it.”
        “Why me? I’m not even a director.”
        “This is discussions between three countries and we need someone independent.”
        I was confused by this but I agreed to help him.
        As he was about to leave he handed me the small box he had brought in. “Here are some clothes I want you to wear tomorrow. I know they will be your size.”
        He was gone, leaving me wondering about all this. I couldn’t help from opening the box, curious to see what he had brought me. It appeared to be just a business suit and blouse which made me even more confused. Then I found the underwear. Oh, sexy! They were tiny, in pale blue. Yes blue, that was Sarvesh alright. But there was also suspenders and stockings too. A bit old fashioned but older guys find those sexy. I quickly shut the box before anyone would walk in on me.

        Soon after that, I left for the day as we had a big meeting at the big house regarding arrangements for the wedding. Sarvesh gave me a lift there and as we sat together in the back seat he told me that after the meeting we might have a short private meeting ourselves in the boardroom.
       “Is that what this box is about?” I asked.
       “Yes,” he smiled.
       With the driver in front, he couldn’t say more but I got the message. I would wear those sexy things under my clothes for him and fully expected I would get a good fucking after the meeting. Maybe it would be on the boardroom table. Must remember to shut and lock the door, I thought.
       I giggled at that and he looked over at me.
       “Just thinking about our meeting,” I said.
       “I am too,” he replied, as his hand briefly touched mine on the seat between us.
       By that point, we were driving up the last part before his house, The Big House, where I used to work. We came in through the front gate and it was a bit busy. There was a big truck dropping rocks that partly blocked the driveway and cars and other vehicles around. On the island garden, there was a lot of activity with earthworks and digging. I looked over at Sarvesh, wondering what he would think of the mess and confusion on this day of our meeting but he was smiling. Obviously approving of what was happening.
       After the meeting over lunch, there was a tour to the Game Reserve and dinner at the club so I didn't have much time to think about the 'important' meeting the following day.

       That night I told David about Sarvesh’s invitation.
       “I know this is going to be more than a board meeting, David.”
       “Yes, I’ve heard about it too. Elizabeth told me.”
       “What did she say?” I asked, surprised.
       “Let’s say it will be more a meeting with you, Katrina. On the boardroom table.”
       “On it?”
       “Well, where else will they give you a good fucking in that room?”
       “They?”
       “Yes, Elizabeth thinks the four of them.”
       “Oh! I thought it was only Sarvesh,” I said.
       “I don’t know, Katrina. Maybe it is. I know.... Anyway, Elizabeth has been told to keep everyone out of that area of the office.”
       “So that is how she knows?”
       “Yes, I think so, to cover what they are up to,” David said. “Sounds like you are in for some fun. I’d like to watch.”
       “You can, David,” I replied. “There is another door to the boardroom via Elizabeth’s office. If you leave that just cracked open you’ll be able to see and hear everything.”
        “Oh, wow!” he said with a big grin.
        So now, not only was I going to get a good fucking from one or more of those guys but I also had an audience, David and maybe even Elizabeth too.

       The following day I wore the clothes Sarvesh had given me. The outside clothes look good, a bit more sexy with the skirt a bit shorter than I’d usually wear to the office but still perfectly appropriate. Underneath it was a lot sexier and I felt sexy wearing it too. The bra was not much more than a half cup and the panties almost a G-string with a clip on each hip for fast getting them off.
       That morning we met in the office. There were the four senior members of the company, probably the first time all four had met in person like this since the idea to form the company had been made at the nude island resort. (Story 97 The Nude Cruise.
       Jeevan indicated I was to sit in his seat at the head of the table. Sarvesh sat in his usual seat just to my right and Jeevan was next to him. On my left was Donald from Australia and then Steve from New Zealand. None of the other company officers had been invited to attend. 
         I did notice the door at the far end of the room was just slightly open, you’d never notice it unless you knew.
         Jeevan had given me notes and instructions on how to open the meeting. There were five items on the agenda, the first concerning me moving to Australia but the other four I felt were not necessary for a board meeting of this level. Anyway, this is what Sarvesh wanted, so I made my mind to get through this meeting then we could get to my ‘private’ meeting afterwards.
        I opened the meeting with a short prepared statement, written by Jeevan concerning me. My career and service with the company and how I was moving to work with the Australian Operation. It felt a bit funny, me reading out all this about myself.
       I came to the last part of this opening address. It was also about me, it said I would be taking the new position of National Operations Manager (Australia). This was news to me. I knew I would be working somehow for Donald but it had never been discussed as to my role there.
       Suddenly Steve spoke up, “Why does Australia get Katrina? What about New Zealand.”
       “Australia needs her, to continue our development,” Donald replied, jumping up.
       Steve was on his feet now. “New Zealand needs her too!"
       "Who cares about New Zealand." 
       "Damn! It is not fair!” Steve said thumping the table.
       I was shocked, here were these two men standing up arguing, about me too. It looked serious, they were so angry to each other.
       “She should stay in India. Sarvesh why did you let her go?” Jeevan added.
       "Katrina goes where I tell her," Sarvesh replied.
       "But she should stay here. David can move here."
       "I'm not giving India my best dispatch manager," Donald said.
       "Why not? India is bigger than Australia," Jeevan replied.
        I tried to stop them but they wouldn’t listen. Now four were arguing amongst each other. It was looking like there might even be to fighting. What could I do? They were not listening for me! Finally, I brought my fist down on the table with a bang!
       It hurt my hand but it worked. They were stopped, sitting down and looking to me. For I moment it was silent, them looking to me and I was not knowing what to say.
       “What’s wrong with you, Katrina?” Sarvesh said.
       "What?"
       “Can’t you even run a simple meeting?” Jeevan added.
       “But I……”
       “Yes we know Katrina,” Steve said. “You made a total mess again.
       “I only wanted…..”
       “Well, you didn’t. You messed it up!” Donald said.
       “Katrina, now look. I wanted a simple meeting. Now you have everyone fighting,” came in Sarvesh.
       I was shocking. Now they had turned on me and blaming to me. I just sat there, looking to them. They were all talking loudly at once, blaming to me, telling for all the trouble of this meeting like it was all my fault. I was unknowing what to say to these four angry men. I felt the tears coming into my eyes. I blinked my eyes back at them trying to stop from the crying.

       All at once, the four men jumped up again and came around the table to attack at me. Donald pulled my chair back so it fell to the floor as Sarvesh pulled me and turning me so my back was to the table. The other two men, Donald and Steve came in at me from each side and before I knew it I was sitting on the table.
       Jeevan was in front of me and he reached for the collar of my blouse. There was no undoing it, he just pulled it open, tearing and ripping the buttons and blouse material. Meanwhile, Donald and Steve were holding a leg each, pull them open so my short skirt pulled up showing all under my skirt. The men, each side of me, now reached for my skirt, I felt the catch and zipper at the back, ripping give way and the skirt was torn from me to be thrown to the floor. Jeevan had now pulled at my panties which had broken at the clips on each hip. They were removed and thrown to my skirt on the floor.
        Here I was so quickly left in just stockings, suspenders and bra with the tattered remains of my blouse over my shoulders.
       Jeevan stepped out of the way and Sarvesh was approaching me, his pants now removed and his cock out and hard, sticking towards me. Steve had some oil which he roughly splashed over my pussy, then his and Donald’s hands were rubbing it over me there. I even felt some fingers even enter me too. Where they splashed it over my underwear they would be ruined too. At this time Sarvesh had coated his cock with the oil too. 
       Now he approached me and I was looking to him, to the hard of his cock.
       So this was all the foreplay I was going to get.

       Sarvesh gave me a small rub for my pussy then he was lining up to enter me. With so much oil I had no need of pussy juice and with his first approach, he thrust right in. I was shocked by it and made a gasp. The men laughed at that.
       Now Sarvesh was fucking to me. He was roughly fucking as he wasn’t holding back. He was moving fast and the power of him was making me take him almost completely in.
       Jeevan and Donald had pulled down my bra, leaving it useless around my waist with my breasts bare. First, their hands had rubbed over me and my nipples, then they lowered their heads to suck and lick on to them.
       Now, between my legs, Sarvesh was reaching for his climax. He gave a deep groan as his cock delivered man-juice deep within me. I was surprised, he was so fast. Usually, Sarvesh had more self-control than this. He must have been very excited.
       Sarvesh moved aside to be replaced by Steve who was now completely naked. He reached to grab me by my hips and pulled me to him, my bum sliding on the smooth slippery tabletop. Quickly, I felt another cock filling my pussy, another cock beginning to fuck me, driving into me roughly again. Steve has a good strong body and I found myself looking up at him, seeing the muscles of his chest tighten as he fucked me.
      Don’t worry for me; while this might seem like a rough gang rape, these men were looking after me. With the sucking to my nipples and a cock pumping into my wet pussy, this girl was now thinking to her orgasm. It came at me fast and I was into my climax almost before I knew it. It was a good one too as I cried out and bucked around until the men had to hold me to the table. They were laughing to me for this.
       Still, Steve continued to pump into me with fast, powerful thrusting. I knew it was good for him too because not long after me he made his cum too as he delivered his man-juice deep inside me.
       Next in line was Jeevan. While he came around between my legs, Sarvesh took his place playing and sucking that nipple and breast. Soon I felt the third cock to be in me. I was expecting Jeevan to be slow as he usually does sex but this time he was like the other two men, coming in fast and quickly getting into some good hard fucking of me.
       Jeevan continued for longer than the first two men but eventually, I came to know he was building for his climax. I could hear his breathing and see his face. Yes, he was getting close now, very close.
       To my surprise he pulled out moments before cumming, allowing his man-juice to fly from him to splatter all over my lower body. For a few moments, he reached forward to smear and rub the mess all over me, as far as he could reach and then he was gone, making way for the final man.
       Like the others had been, Donald was hard and ready for hot pussy, my hot pussy. There was no foreplay from him either, just his hard cock driving, thrusting straight into me. The first thrust was a shock, his dry cock gripping against my soft flesh, but I was wet, I was ready for more cock, coating and soaking him with my pussy juice. Quickly he settled into a rhythm, maybe not as fast as the other men had been, in fact, noticeably slower, but like them, he was hitting hard, giving me a strong roughly fucking.
       I was loving it! Soon I came to know that my next orgasm was building. It was going to be another big one, a very intense one. 
       But there was another development, I think inspired by what Jeevan had done. Sarvesh and Steve were standing each side of the table, now each with their cock in their hand. They were pumping it, wanking off and I knew of their intention to cum over me as Jeevan had done. Of course, at that moment I had no problems with it, perhaps even welcoming my cum shower.
       Now my pussy was responding to the treatment being delivered by Donald. He saw my building passion and responded by increasing his speed. Donald reached down, with his finger pushing under the hood of my clitty. The suddenly exposure, the sudden contact, it was enough for me and I made my second orgasm. This one was the big one, very intense and driven by his working finger to be longer lasting.
       I recovered to Sarvesh talking.
       “You are not supposed to be enjoying this girl!”
       “Why?”
       My brain, in the afterglow of orgasm, reacted slowly. I couldn’t understand what he was saying. This was sex, surely I was supposed to enjoy.
       “This is punishment, Katrina.”
       “Punishment?”
       “Yes, for going off and leaving us.”
       By now I was alert again. So if they were punishing me, what about Donald?
       “Then why is Donald doing it?” I asked. "He should be saving me."
       They laughed at that. They knew I had got them.
       Before they could think of an answer, Donald pulled out of me. He moved to one side and began pumping his cock with his hand. On the other side, Jeevan had joined in too. He must have been very horny, he got hard again so quickly again.
       Yes, now all four men were going to pour their cum to me. This was sexy for them to pour their cum to my naked body but also sexy for me. I lay flat to my back with my legs hanging from the table as I moved my own hands to my pussy and my fingers began working into the pussy that is my own.
       Can you see the picture? I was rubbing and working my pussy towards her third orgasm while four men were wanking over me, ready to pour their cum to me. Steve was first to go, his cum hitting me over my left side and my left breast. Not far behind him, Donald landed his cum over my right hip and pussy. Sarvesh was next over my right breast and Jeevan finished with his cum over my left hip and pussy.
       Oh, that had been good. So totally sexy for me. My fingers into my pussy dug deeply into me, pulling upward as they did. My body shuddered as my third cum hit me. While their hands rubbed all over my body, my mind exploded with the thrilling passion of orgasm. It was another good one. Perhaps not as intense as the second had been but still up among the more powerful ones.
       Now I dropped into the after-glow phase as my body recovered to normal. They were rubbing their cum over my body parts with their hands. I had now risen myself and was resting on my hands behind me. It was a sexy and messy way to finish some good sex.

       Suddenly I heard a noise. It sounded like the gasp of a woman. I looked around, in fact, all five of us looked.
       At the far end of the room, the door to Elizabeth’s room was open. She was now sitting on the boardroom table, completely naked. There was David too, wearing just an open shirt. He was standing between her open thighs, his hands holding her waist as he pumped his cock into her. Oh, that was sexy to see them, but also very amazing too. I thought Elizabeth only liked girls. Here she was being fucked by a man, my man David!

       It was then I realised I was in trouble. Here I was naked and covered in man-cum. I was in the office, in the boardroom. I was messy with my clothes torn and ruined.
       “My clothes! What am I going to do?”
       “Don’t worry Katrina,” Sarvesh laughed. “I’ll call a taxi."
       "You can just walk through the warehouse like that,” Jeevan added with a grin.
       “What? Like this?” I could not believe he suggested it.
       “Yes,” Steve added. “Give everyone a show. You like showing off Katrina.”
       “No, I don't!" I protested. "No! No! Not here.”
       How could he be suggesting such a thing! Here was this girl shocking and these men laughing. 
       “Then you better put on some clean clothes then,” David said.
       He and Elizabeth were standing beside us now.
       “I don’t……..”
       “Yes, you do honey. Sarvesh asked me to get these.”
       “Sarvesh……?”
       “Yes, he told us yesterday before he spoke to you.” David laughed.
       He had been in on it too, right from the start. I looked over at Sarvesh and he was grinning too. They were all in on it.
       David handed me a large paper bag. I opened it to discover a complete change of clothes. With the men keeping watch no one came up the stairs, I made a run from the boardroom to Jeevan’s office, to the small bathroom he had there. I couldn’t shower but was able to wipe myself off and clean up. Then in a completely new change of clothes, I joined them all and we went out to a nearby restaurant for lunch. 
       Isn’t that typical male, ‘the sex is over, now what’s for lunch?’

       At one point over lunch, I managed to speak to Elizabeth. “I thought you didn’t like boys?”
       “I don’t normally but watching you was so sexy. I wanted some too.”
       “Did you enjoy David?”
       “Very much,” she replied. "He gave me so much man-juice."
       "Did he........"
       “Katrina, you are lucky having him.”
       We both laughed at that which attracted the attention of the men but neither of us shared the joke. What she had said about David pleased me too. Yes, I was lucky to find a man like David.

        Soon after lunch, we returned to the warehouse as all our friends were finished shopping and arriving to have a tour. Of course, I met them to be with them too and we took them to see all the warehouse operations.


18 comments:

  1. Hello Anne
    Looks like I am the first to this story's party, better luck next time Janet LOL
    To the story, I was not sure where this was going in the first section but looking back it was a great way to open. Then to a board meeting the likes of which many fantasies are made of. The story may have come from a brainstorm involving many people but the writing is typical Anne - funny, serious and flows so very well.
    Ian

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    1. Thanks Ian
      Yes everyone is slow off the mark this time.
      Glad you like the board meeting but I am working on that opening conversation. I think more could be done there.
      Anne

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    2. Oh Ian got here first. HaHa
      I'll need to try harder next time.

      Yes Anne, I enjoyed this story too. It was different. Like that one Sarvesh with the Maid. It was unexpected and not what I was expecting. Even when we knew there would be sex on the boardroom table the way it happened was a surprise.
      Janet

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    3. Oh shame on you Ian. Taking delight in beating Janet like that.
      So much for those "It doesn't matter," "I'm not interested" remarks. That "I'm the first to the party" says it all. LOL
      Shandra.

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    4. Yes Ian.
      Doesn't the gentleman step back and let the lady go first?
      Sexy Sue.

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    5. Hey Susan. That is brilliant!
      It means if there is a bucket of water on the door, you get it and not me.
      Paul LOL

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    6. It doesn't work like that Paul.
      If you step back and I get wet then you'll be the one getting it. Obviously you were the one who put it there.
      Susan.

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    7. Obviously no sense of humour.
      Susan? Where is Sexy Sue? I like her better.
      LOL Paul

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  2. Well done Anne.
    I loved the way those guys set Katrina up. They have fun and I get the impression you writers are like that too.
    Andrew

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    1. Thanks Andrew
      Yes I wanted Katrina to walk into that meeting expecting things to go well then suddenly it all goes wrong. Yes we do have fun. This is a house where we laugh a lot.
      Anne.

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  3. Kia Ora Naughty Friends.
    Yes in 'naughty' I'm including myself.
    To believe the story point in this story was the beginning of the board meeting when things went wrong and they began arguing. As Andrew says above it was a clever set-up for Katrina. Janet mentions the unexpected twist in the story which is true but its also true that with these tricky writers was should expect the unexpected.

    Anne, out of all the writers of this blog I would consider you the most undisciplined and incorrect. You have that drive to get the story written and sort out the mess later. Not bad as it produces these great stories and there are others to correct (read kick you in the arse) your work after you finish. LOL
    Moa

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    1. Kia Ora Moa.
      I hope your whanau are well and preparing to celebrate Waitangi Day.

      Undisciplined - incorrect - needing a kick in the arse. LOL I should take a fence at that but we need the fence to keep the sheep in. LOL
      Yes I laughed and agree with you. I don't worry about the details when I write. I just want to get the ideas and thoughts into my story. Can worry about the other stuff later, can't we. But I must admit the thought of you 'kicking my arse' does help me to do better.
      For those of you reading this, yes, Moa's email this time was a bit longer than its been for the other letter writers recently. All corrections have been done.
      Anne.

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  4. Hello everyone.
    James here.
    Oh this is good Anne. I love the way the guys set-up that trick on Katrina. It works well. Then I like the way you appear to rush through the sex scene as if it wasn't as important as setting Katrina up.
    Oh, not forgetting the smart ass crack about guys saying, "the sex is over, what's for lunch?" Is this another one of those little digs at us guys that you girls love putting into your stories?

    I've been looking at that conversation where the four men start arguing with each other. I think there is a way you can add more punch to it, Anne. See where they argue and then at the end we go to Katrina for her thoughts and feelings. Well, what if we take half of what she says, maybe until the words "they would not listen" and put it straight after where Steve thumps the table.
    This means we visit Katrina's thoughts twice. I think it would make the scene my dramatic for her. Just an idea Anne.
    James

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  5. Thanks James.
    I was thinking about that myself but couldn't see how it would work. I may need to make a few changes to some lines too. I'll have a look later this evening.
    Anne

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    1. Yes Anne, I agree with James here. It might make that scene better.
      Wayne

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    2. Ok, that change has just been made.
      Anne says, 'No more changes. This story stands how it is now."

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  6. Kia ora
    I see the change James suggested. I am not sure it gives you the gain he expected. But it's better so leave it now.
    Like you Anne, I am against doing to many major changes after publishing.
    Moa

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  7. Strong sexy story Anne!
    Redduck

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