Posted by Shandra.
This is the second half of an old story, written a long time ago. The storyline was Mega’s first adventures when she moved to New Zealand to live with Peter. But then the younger writers pushed us to keep Jenny and Brian in the stories. An intensive period of re-writing and re-building began and my story was involved in this too when it was cut into two pieces.
It survived but was changed in the process with both Mega and Brian now in New Zealand. The original story had been about Mega with 2 guys while Peter was away but now she gets to be with all three of the European guys while Brian is away. Again it’s sexy but not as good as many of our stories. I’ll leave you to judge.
Now we have often talked about the different writing styles we have and how during the uploading/publishing process these styles get blended together. These three stories supposedly written by Mega is a good example where this didn’t happen. Look at my two stories; Story 147 Joseph – A Very Big Man and the story here Story 149 My Big Foursome. Now compare it with Kim’s Story 148 Work-Out and I think you will see what I mean. Very different styles! I know it a bit strange how Mega suddenly changes her writing style like that but it can’t be helped unless we do some extensive re-writing.
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