Posted by Kim.
Now, this is closely based on a true story. One that happened to Allan and I. I had heard about putting a plastic sheet over a waterbed and you know how I like messy sex. I wanted to try it. And yes it worked well although, in the end, we got so much oil over us and the bed that sex was a bit hard with us sliding around so much. We also had a problem with getting off the bed afterwards and made a couple of marks on the carpet that took some getting out.
Writing the story went well too, my only problem was finding the time to work on it. Both Susan & Ayaka did some work on it. Asami was like, helping me like too. We have lots of quests from overseas now. Online friends, Ayaka’s family and others, all here for her wedding. I don’t think there will be a story next week as we’ll all be so busy.
Now with this story, I’m not sure I have done enough with the oil yet. I’m going to call the team in to publish it but I think we might work some more changes to it. Maybe even change it again after publishing.
Update:- After publishing some of our friends commented that this story seemed to end suddenly. We went back and gave the ending a work-over. In the end that last sex scene was added too.
Update:- After publishing some of our friends commented that this story seemed to end suddenly. We went back and gave the ending a work-over. In the end that last sex scene was added too.
Just completed proof reading this story. See my email. Not much wrong.
ReplyDeleteIt is a good story. I like the way you wrote about the sexual building between them. I also like how you presented them as a couple and family. No I didn't have a problem with the twins involved.
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