Posted by Rajah
So last week I finished my background notes without answering the question where the idea for this story came from. This will be my purpose for this week.
I was reading through the various stories trying to get some ideas for my story and suddenly I discovered that Jeevan and Mandara had never swapped partners with Sarvesh and Amita. This surprised me because they are supposed to be close friends. Since just a bit later in this volume Hansini and Mootie swap with Mega and Brian I thought a story such as this would fit nicely in here.
I pointed out this oversight to Anne and suggested this would be a suitable location for such a story. She thought it was a good idea but she did warn me that what I intended was actually a big effort for a first story. I soon discovered that for myself as I had explained last week. So you can see that I not only decided on the subject of my story I even got to decide on the location as well. Here is it the opening story for Vol 6.
What I neglected to see was that during this time Amita was expected to be pregnant. My wife Shandra pointed it out to me after I had finished that intense sex scene. We took the matter to Anne and she said it would be Ok as we could say Amita was early in her pregnancy. This was written into the story.
Last week we saw the opening scenes. I wanted to do something different for my opening so I jumped you straight into that conversation between Mandara and Amita. I then explained what was going on after that. The next part was Hansini and Mega finding out about what was going on too. Again I did this using conversation between the four girls.
This, of course, led to the sexy shower the climax of that first section. I knew both girls had an interest in being with a woman so they would have no problems doing it again. I also knew that many of us guys find a woman in a sari under the shower to be very sexy. It made sense to combine both these ideas into that sexy shower session. Two sexy women in their colourful saris, soaking wet, enjoying each other. What could be better than that?
Later Susan added in that little standoff between Amita and Sarvesh. Susan, why do you have to pick on us Indian guys? It seems you think we are all too bossy with our women, treating them badly. While this might be the case with some men, not just Indian men either I might add, but it certainly does not need to be for all Indian men. Well, you did a good job of this as it added a new view of this couple. I added that frown Amita gave her husband warning him not to over-ride her plans to further develop Susan’s idea. And I do like that line of Susan's where Sarvesh says, 'Sorry my friend, as much as I like you, I would rather have you wife in bed with me tonight.' Good one, girl!
In the section published this week, we get to read what Amita and Jeevan did. At first, I was only going to get Amita to tell the story and then let Mandara take over for the last section but my wife Shandra suggested I use the guy's view as well. That is why Jeevan takes over part of this story. She is right, this had worked well in the Domino Stories too back in Letter 57.
One of the important themes I had almost from the beginning was to show Sarvesh and his wife Amita as being more sexually aggressive, in a rush to get into full intercourse while Jeevan and is his wife Mandara would be more laid back, as we would say in New Zealand, slowly building towards full sex in a very relaxed manner. This is what you did Anne back in Letter 57 – Story Four so I wanted to continue with this, to capture this meeting of different ways of taking sex as well and see where it took us.
Yes, I am happy my story has done this well both in this section which you can read today and in the one next week as well.
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