Posted by Anne.
Hi from Anne.
Now, this was where things became confusing. In the printed version of our story, Shanti tells the story of the Warkworth Trip with others adding in their parts as the story unfolded. While this worked great in the printed version it does not work well in this blog format. So a major rebuild was called for.
The story had to be divided as much as we could into post sized parts with some commentary added from Shanti to hold it all together. This is the opening, an introduction you could say, so we have left it as a small story. Sorry, that once again it is not so sexy, but that can’t be helped here.
Notice how Shanti mentions in her story that this was the beginning of Volume 8. When this was written, actually that was the case too, then as more stories were added to the adventures at the resort, in Volume 7, it was decided to move Ayaka’s story into this volume. As far as you online readers are concerned, Volumes make no difference as all the stories blend together into one big one.
When the story was completed it looked a bit small. It was obvious something more was needed. I came up with that fun conversation where Katrina asks the girls about how to please a man in bed. I hope I did a good job of this and that it sounds convincing as it was written in a hurry, a few days ago. Maybe I should have got one of the other girls involved too.
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