Posted by Susan.
Part One – Peter & Jenny.
Hi, Sexy Sue here.
This story was quickly added a few weeks before publishing. At first, it was supposed to be a short fill-in story, just getting Mega and Brian to New Zealand. Anne gave me two side goals that needed achieving. First, we wanted Brian and Mega to talk about her going topless in public, preparing for the fishing story that will follow this one. Then we wanted the twins to start deceiving people by swapping names. Apparently, this is a feature of some stories further out in Letter’s the Next Generation.
I began writing and as I worked, it sort of began to grow on me. Once I introduced the sex scenes it became a major story. It grew so much, first, we divided it into two sections and then it became three.
Now in the original version of Letters Jenny died and Mega moved to New Zealand to be Peter’s partner. In that story, which has now been deleted, it’s colder, being winter and she discovers the soft warmth of a water-bed. I liked the water-bed idea so decided to use it here too. I’ve tried it on a water-bed a few times myself since Shandra had one, so I knew it would be a different experience for Mega too. So Peter got to keep his water-bed. LOL.
The sex scene must be the climax of this story. It had to be detailed, drawn out and slowly building to their orgasms together. I got Ayaka to work over the completed version to rough it up a bit with some bad grammar such as might be made by someone who struggles with English but has got the use of the editing features of a computer. Finally, it was ready to publish.
I like reading your stories Susan. You know about writing well. You girls mix sex and humour together and they work.
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