Allan Jr here.
Hello from Ayaka and Allan Jr.
Hello from Ayaka and Allan Jr.
Finally, we get to the nude beach. I know it has been a bit of a journey but Anne wanted us to explore this Japanese family in a lot more details. She has more plans for them I think. Maybe even a story/stories hidden away deep in her notes on Vol 17. Who knows what goes on in Anne's head.
We decided, since Tukiko was the most nervous about this nude thing, we would get her to tell the story of how she got naked. It was also my intention of developing her relationship with Mike. For now, I'm going to leave you to figure out where this is going.
The location is O'Neils Beach, over a short walk over sand dunes from Te Henga Beach. Yes, locations in this series of stories are very real. We often go there ourselves over a mid-day high tide, as its a great place to get naked and enjoy the beach like that in a group. There is always the sand dunes behind where a couple can slip away for some fun out of sight of the kids.
We decided, since Tukiko was the most nervous about this nude thing, we would get her to tell the story of how she got naked. It was also my intention of developing her relationship with Mike. For now, I'm going to leave you to figure out where this is going.
The location is O'Neils Beach, over a short walk over sand dunes from Te Henga Beach. Yes, locations in this series of stories are very real. We often go there ourselves over a mid-day high tide, as its a great place to get naked and enjoy the beach like that in a group. There is always the sand dunes behind where a couple can slip away for some fun out of sight of the kids.
Hope you enjoy our story.
Allan Jr.
Allan Jr.
It is Ayaka now.
As Allan writes these stories, Anne has assigned different writers to help him. This time it was me. One evening, Allan and I were working in our workshop, fixing a quad bike engine. While we worked we were talking about how this story would go. Some notes were made on paper with greasy fingerprints all over it. When Anne saw our notes she said it looked like a dog's breakfast. But it worked for us, got us started on this section.
Allan was particularly interested in my thoughts on getting nude on an open beach for the first time. In this way, I could relate closely to Tukiko. Being a woman and actually having my first nude beach experience at this very beach, he asked me to get into Tukiko's head and write how she might have been feeling.
While I started on that, Allan wrote much of the background details about them getting to the beach and then what happened on the main Te Hanga beach.
I continued on to write about nude swimming. I wanted to capture Tukiko's views and thoughts on this. I had already seen how she was nervous getting naked but once she was naked, she was confident she would enjoy it. I also knew the second half of this story would also cover much of this from Mike's point of view so there was some working on details that had to be confirmed in both halves. I other places we wanted the stories to disagree as might happen with two people remembering the same events.
Finally, we went back over each other's work, blending our sections together and overwriting each other work in many places too. Here is our result. Hope you enjoy it.
Ayaka.
As Allan writes these stories, Anne has assigned different writers to help him. This time it was me. One evening, Allan and I were working in our workshop, fixing a quad bike engine. While we worked we were talking about how this story would go. Some notes were made on paper with greasy fingerprints all over it. When Anne saw our notes she said it looked like a dog's breakfast. But it worked for us, got us started on this section.
Allan was particularly interested in my thoughts on getting nude on an open beach for the first time. In this way, I could relate closely to Tukiko. Being a woman and actually having my first nude beach experience at this very beach, he asked me to get into Tukiko's head and write how she might have been feeling.
While I started on that, Allan wrote much of the background details about them getting to the beach and then what happened on the main Te Hanga beach.
I continued on to write about nude swimming. I wanted to capture Tukiko's views and thoughts on this. I had already seen how she was nervous getting naked but once she was naked, she was confident she would enjoy it. I also knew the second half of this story would also cover much of this from Mike's point of view so there was some working on details that had to be confirmed in both halves. I other places we wanted the stories to disagree as might happen with two people remembering the same events.
Finally, we went back over each other's work, blending our sections together and overwriting each other work in many places too. Here is our result. Hope you enjoy it.
Ayaka.
Kia kaka - Kia kaha.
Be safe - Be strong.
Ayaka and Allan Jr.
Be safe - Be strong.
Ayaka and Allan Jr.
So what happened with this sudden rebuild? Why was it needed? Can you tell us more about it?
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Another good story. You complete the theme of going to the nude beach with you usual mix of sex and humour.
We see Sayako showing off her new bikini and having fun with her husband Hirohiko. They them seemed to get naked quickly on the second beach too. Well with the week of building for this, you'd expect them to jump straight in.
For Tukiko, her journey was a bit more complex where she was trying public nudity while developing a relationship with Mike at the same time.
Of course, there were the fishermen again. Almost old friends aren't they. Loved that little witty conversation when Sayako got back to Hirohiko.
Finally, we have Mike going to take Tukiko up into the sand dunes but also Steve and Peter have their eye on Sayako. Even planned to get their wives to distract her husband Hirohiko.
A good story. Well done. But it shines out even more when combined with the next story.
The way is see it.
Moa.