Index of Letters. Return to Story 18.
Hello from Shandra.
Finally, we come to the story about how they played ‘Strip’ in India. However, first, notice that Joseph was in such a hurry to get into his story that he hardly mentions the photos Shanti had sent, and only briefly talks about gathering all the letters into one book. We purposely wrote the letter in this way to present more of Joseph’s character, or dare I say, that he was just like a typical guy.
But once his story started, Joseph side-tracked to a fantasy he had of wanking in front of a room full of women. Is this a real fantasy for men? Three horny teenage women thought it might be. You'll see this fantasy is improved upon during the next few letters.
But once his story started, Joseph side-tracked to a fantasy he had of wanking in front of a room full of women. Is this a real fantasy for men? Three horny teenage women thought it might be. You'll see this fantasy is improved upon during the next few letters.
I was a little disappointed that I had to intentionally make this story not as good as the one that Anne wrote for Shanti. I wanted to write a better story than hers, and I think I could have, too, but I understood the reason why Joseph’s story shouldn’t be better than Shanti’s.
The problem is that Joseph is not as good as Shanti at writing stories and letters since English is his second language, and so, of course, the story had to reflect this. So by putting in a bit of bad grammar and using the typical way Indians talked, I added to this effect, too. You will notice that Joseph’s English will improve with time.
The problem is that Joseph is not as good as Shanti at writing stories and letters since English is his second language, and so, of course, the story had to reflect this. So by putting in a bit of bad grammar and using the typical way Indians talked, I added to this effect, too. You will notice that Joseph’s English will improve with time.
Notice Joseph spent as much time telling you about the people who were going to play the game as he did in actually telling you about the game. He also made no attempt to tell you the rules or anything like that. My intention was to give Joseph’s impression of the game rather than give a complete and accurate account.
A final touch to make it more readable was to get Joseph to copy off Shanti’s story by adding a list of the players and what they were wearing. At the end of the story, we added another small chart giving the final results of the game. In the end, it turned out to be a pretty good story, and it is quite different to Shanti’s.
This story is important to the letters series since it introduces us to two more couples, Sarvesh and his wife Amita; and Jeevan and his wife Mandara. These two couples will appear in many of the great stories we have for you in future letters. By building up the size of our cast, we could now write a greater variety of sexy activities and adventures.
Regards from Shandra.
A final touch to make it more readable was to get Joseph to copy off Shanti’s story by adding a list of the players and what they were wearing. At the end of the story, we added another small chart giving the final results of the game. In the end, it turned out to be a pretty good story, and it is quite different to Shanti’s.
This story is important to the letters series since it introduces us to two more couples, Sarvesh and his wife Amita; and Jeevan and his wife Mandara. These two couples will appear in many of the great stories we have for you in future letters. By building up the size of our cast, we could now write a greater variety of sexy activities and adventures.
Regards from Shandra.
September 2016.
When this story was being written, we were wondering where this series of letters/stories was taking us. We realised we needed something to generate more sexy stories. That is where the idea came up that one couple needed to visit the other, then later the other couple could make an exchange visit. Little did we know it at the time, but it would take until the end of Volume 4 just to complete the stories about both of these trips.
So to start this new direction of Letters off, Joseph ends his letter with a P.S. hinting that he and Lizamoa might be able to come to New Zealand to visit Shanti and Mike. This idea will develop over the next few letters until the actual trip is organised. We think doing it this way, over a series of letters, is much more realistic than Joseph just saying, “Hi, we are coming to New Zealand,” and then turning up there in the very next letter.
Regards again from Shandra.
When this story was being written, we were wondering where this series of letters/stories was taking us. We realised we needed something to generate more sexy stories. That is where the idea came up that one couple needed to visit the other, then later the other couple could make an exchange visit. Little did we know it at the time, but it would take until the end of Volume 4 just to complete the stories about both of these trips.
So to start this new direction of Letters off, Joseph ends his letter with a P.S. hinting that he and Lizamoa might be able to come to New Zealand to visit Shanti and Mike. This idea will develop over the next few letters until the actual trip is organised. We think doing it this way, over a series of letters, is much more realistic than Joseph just saying, “Hi, we are coming to New Zealand,” and then turning up there in the very next letter.
Regards again from Shandra.
December 2023.
During the recent work on recoding and correcting the early stories of this blog, Anne has given me permission to rewrite and improve this story. I've added more detail and some conversation while trying to keep within our writing style and the ability of that period in our writing.
This is the first step into social nudity for everyone in this game. I wanted to capture this in the story. Finally, I wanted to get those at the table to agree they would be open to doing something like this again. Joseph mentions the possibility of a nude picnic. Even the shy Mandara thought this was a good idea.
Regards yet again from Shandra.
During the recent work on recoding and correcting the early stories of this blog, Anne has given me permission to rewrite and improve this story. I've added more detail and some conversation while trying to keep within our writing style and the ability of that period in our writing.
This is the first step into social nudity for everyone in this game. I wanted to capture this in the story. Finally, I wanted to get those at the table to agree they would be open to doing something like this again. Joseph mentions the possibility of a nude picnic. Even the shy Mandara thought this was a good idea.
Regards yet again from Shandra.
Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
Be safe - Be strong.
Shandra.
Be safe - Be strong.
Shandra.
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