Letter 52 Part B Background

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The New Zealanders Arrive.
                      The Club. 
                                                                                                                       Posted by Allan.
Hi Allan here now:-

          Since Susan and I wrote this whole letter together it is now hard to tell which bits were hers and which were mine. When Anne decided to cut it into two parts for publishing on-line, Susan and I decided to do a background each.  

         As Part B starts we pick up the story again as they arrive at the club. We saw the club scenes as a great opportunity to develop the personality of Sarvesh. In the story last week, Amita let slip that they actually owned half the club until Sarvesh rebuked her. 

        We wanted Sarvesh to appear humble with his friends, treating them as equals. But behind that, we wanted to show here was a very wealthy man with a strong personality. He expected things done and done his way too. Look at the way he overturned the arrangements with the club and notice the service and attention the club staff gave to him. There can be no doubt that Sarvesh was a very important man in this small town. 

       Now in our house here on the farm, there is always a steady flow of jokes and one-liners passing between Susan and I, sure the others get involved but not as much as us. We wanted to inject some of this style of humour into our writing too. Anne said it would make things a lot more fun, especially in those stories which were not so sexy.

       The steady flow of joking between Steve and Peter, with a bit from Mike, will continue through the rest of the Letters Series. Steve in particular regularly gets into trouble from his wife for this, which is what happens in this letter too. We believe this joking between friends is what you would expect in a close group such as this.
        In a future story, Steve will over do the joking so much that two of the girls finally decide to teach him a lesson. They pay-back is so effective that they end up getting into more trouble than he was. But that is a story for some time in the future.
        Kim and Ayaka added in some interesting conversation between Lizamoa and her husband. When he tells her she has been a naughty girl she acts like a naughty little schoolgirl about to be punished. The way Joseph and his wife got into some amusing role-playing gives the impression that this might be something they have done before in their private sex life.  

        Now after they went to the cultural show and had a bit of pussy flashing they end up back at Sarvesh’s house out beside the pool. Suddenly they decide to go skinny dipping. There they are all naked in the pool when Katrina, one of the house staff arrives with the drinks. It is a bit embarrassing for both her and Mike, who she caught stark naked on the diving board.

        Keep an eye out for Katrina in future stories. She will become an important character in some of the later volumes. If you want to cheat, you could scroll down the index page and see how many times her name appears.   

       Next week we will see what happens during the Nude Day they hold at the big house.

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