Letter 53 Background

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                                                                                                                     Posted by Shandra.

Hi, Shandra here.
         I will be doing the background of this letter since I wrote most of it. But before I begin I want to make a couple of points about this letter. Yes, I know that with stories this long, other writers get involved as well and it happened with this letter too. It seems that more and more we tend to do this, adding to each other’s work. But it makes for better stories that way.
       Secondly, this letter is a very old story, by that I mean it was written when we first were working on this section of Letters and unlike many other stories, we have never gone back to improve or update it. In particular, the game could do with either another game or some major re-working but this has not happened. More about that below.

         The story starts with a bit of fun from the guys as Amita is telling them what she has planned for the day. It was at about this time that I heard Allan’s uncle use the word “nooky.” It is a very old slang name for sex. I liked it and so I added it to my story. When the girls read it they were really amused too. So for a while, there were heaps “nooky” jokes between us before we moved on to something else.

         The next interesting event happened when they were about to get into the pool. This is again actually based on something that happened with us too. Let me just describe the scene first because many of our real sexy adventures happen in this place. Up the back of our farm, a stream runs down a steep valley through an area of trees and bush. At one place the stream goes over a waterfall and into a nice deep pool below. This pool is over my head near the waterfall. It then goes between two flat rocks and over another smaller waterfall before continuing on down through the farm. Beside the pool is a nice grassy area where you can have a picnic or anything else you might decide to do after swimming nude in the pool.

         A group of us were sitting naked eating our lunch after a swim when the subject of skin colour came up. With the three of us each being a different race our skins and bodies are a bit different in many small ways too.

         Suddenly Susan jumped up pulling me up too. She then described the various parts of my Indian body pointing them out as she did. The others sitting watching were laughing and enjoying the fun. To end she pushed me off the flat rock into the pool. Then Anne jumped up and did something similar to her except Anne even reached down and pulled open the lips of her pussy showing the pink inside. Like me, Susan ended up in the pool.

        This was followed by a conversation in which we decided to use this in the story I was writing. First, we had Sharon and Steve did it and then they were followed by something a little bit sexier with Sarvesh and Amita. I think this part of the story really works well.    

         Now we get to that game. This is the part of the story where we struggled. I think the description is too drawn out and clumsy. I have tried to inject a bit of fun in at various places but I’m still not happy with it. But now the publication date has almost arrived and it’s still not how I would like it. At last week’s meeting, Anne and Allan said they would have another look at it otherwise it might end up being published the way it is. 

         Next week we go back to the little lake at the Game Reserve but things turn out very differently to the first time we were there.

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