Story One – Peter and Amita.
Posted by Anne.
Hi Anne here:-
When we came to write these six stories following the dominoes game the stories were divided up with Shandra and I taking two and Allan and Susan taking one each. We wanted to make each of them different so since all four of us were involved in the writing it was important that we stayed informed with what others were writing. We had a few meetings discussing the various ideas being added to the different stories and shared what we were doing too.
This communication, this interaction between us also led to ideas being swapped as well which completely changed the main theme of more than one letter. So you can see that it was no accident that the stories ended up the way they did. Some of us also took this opportunity to expand on the dominoes game too, which is something I did in Story One.
Now we get to the point where Peter comes into Amita’s room. First, he begins to undress her. This story was originally written with Amita paired with Steve but since these two would be paired together in some of the key stories at the holiday resort in Vol Seven it was later decided to change the man in this story to Peter. But we then had a problem here because now we had Peter instead of Steve taking her clothes off. There was supposed to have been a bit of fun about Steve making a mess of it with Lizamoa at the second Ripper Stripper Party (Letter 36) so we had to change this to Amita being surprised that a European man knew how to remove an Indian sari. In the end, it worked well.
This was going well until she was half undressed when she became overcome with her desire for him. Still, like that, they ended up on the bed. When she came to take her sari-skirt off in her rush she pulled the string into a knot. In her frustration, she was only making it worse until Peter took over untying the string. Just a chance to add in a bit of fun.
The sex that followed was good. It certainly wasn’t the best sex scene we have written but then it wasn’t the worst either. Just some good sex which they both appeared to enjoy. I think what makes this story work for me is the humour of the sari-skirt which leads nicely into the sex scenes.
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