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Hello from Anne.
After the story “Lizamoa in the Court-Yard we were working on a couple of stories each but neither of us had any finished. We wanted to continue the Red Sari Series and the photos Joseph and Liz were sending in return so we decided on adding these extra two small letters before the next big story in Letter 13 – “Playing the Game Called Strip.”
At this stage of the evolution of Letters, our plan was to write a complete record of the correspondence between these two couples. As time went on, this theme gradually changed from swapping complete letters into a series of stories swapped between the two couples.
After the story “Lizamoa in the Court-Yard we were working on a couple of stories each but neither of us had any finished. We wanted to continue the Red Sari Series and the photos Joseph and Liz were sending in return so we decided on adding these extra two small letters before the next big story in Letter 13 – “Playing the Game Called Strip.”
At this stage of the evolution of Letters, our plan was to write a complete record of the correspondence between these two couples. As time went on, this theme gradually changed from swapping complete letters into a series of stories swapped between the two couples.
The content of this letter is mostly just commenting on the photos Joseph sent and their story.
It appears that Mike and Shanti liked the photos of Joseph and Liz in their underwear. They also provided another instalment to the Red Sari Series where Shanti is seen taking off her sari blouse to reveal a tiny bra underneath.
They also liked the story too. It appears that the idea of Lizamoa putting on little shows to their neighbour was a bit of a turn-on for Mike and Shanti too.
It appears that Mike and Shanti liked the photos of Joseph and Liz in their underwear. They also provided another instalment to the Red Sari Series where Shanti is seen taking off her sari blouse to reveal a tiny bra underneath.
They also liked the story too. It appears that the idea of Lizamoa putting on little shows to their neighbour was a bit of a turn-on for Mike and Shanti too.
Notice that in this letter, twice Shanti says she would be bold enough to strip naked, in the courtyard and at a nude beach. Would she actually have done this or is this just talk? Only time will tell on that one.
Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
Be safe - Be strong.
Anne.
Be safe - Be strong.
Anne.
It is very interesting to learn about the development and ideas behind these early letters. It has been said in the comments if Letter 10 that while improvement could be made your policy is to never go back and change them. I like that because it keeps the immature rustic writing style you had back then.
ReplyDeleteMoa if talks about the development of your writing skills. You can see it when you visit these very early letters.
Rita.