From Shanti,
Titirangi,
Auckland,
New Zealand.
Titirangi,
Auckland,
New Zealand.
To Joseph,
The Game Reserve,
Andhra Pradesh,
India.
The Game Reserve,
Andhra Pradesh,
India.
Dear Joseph and Lizamoa,
Thank you for another letter from our dear friends in India. It is always so much fun to get letters from you. Thank you so much for the wedding present too. I’m sure we will find it very useful too.
No, I didn’t want to wear a traditional wedding sari. My sister, Hasina wore one when she got married and my mother wanted me to but I wanted the traditional European wedding dress instead. I think I looked nicer like that. I know Mum was disappointed and some of my relations made comments too but it was my wedding so I should get to wear whatever I like. They are lucky I didn't decide to get married naked! Ha! Ha!
Thank you for the photos too. The one of Lizamoa bending over with her behind facing towards the camera is the one we like the best. The way she is standing with her legs parted so you can see right up between them is great and Mike says he would love her to repeat that pose in the nude. If Lizamoa had been naked she would have left nothing to our imagination. The ones of you were also very good too. I liked the one where you were lying back on the bed. I could see the ridge in your underpants which left me in no doubt as to how hard you were. That would have also been a great picture if you had been naked. We are looking forward to seeing you both in the nude with your complete bodies bare for our inspection.
Well, Joseph, you were right about the Red Sari Series. It was my skirt that came off next. Now you can see that I am standing there in only my bra and panties. In the last picture already I am undoing the clip of my bra. Soon the bra will be flung open wide and my breasts will be bare for your inspection. Will you enjoy that? I’m sure that you will. We have also included a picture of Mike in his very small underpants for you Lizamoa. Later when I have finished my series he will also take these off for you too.
Thank you for another letter from our dear friends in India. It is always so much fun to get letters from you. Thank you so much for the wedding present too. I’m sure we will find it very useful too.
No, I didn’t want to wear a traditional wedding sari. My sister, Hasina wore one when she got married and my mother wanted me to but I wanted the traditional European wedding dress instead. I think I looked nicer like that. I know Mum was disappointed and some of my relations made comments too but it was my wedding so I should get to wear whatever I like. They are lucky I didn't decide to get married naked! Ha! Ha!
Thank you for the photos too. The one of Lizamoa bending over with her behind facing towards the camera is the one we like the best. The way she is standing with her legs parted so you can see right up between them is great and Mike says he would love her to repeat that pose in the nude. If Lizamoa had been naked she would have left nothing to our imagination. The ones of you were also very good too. I liked the one where you were lying back on the bed. I could see the ridge in your underpants which left me in no doubt as to how hard you were. That would have also been a great picture if you had been naked. We are looking forward to seeing you both in the nude with your complete bodies bare for our inspection.
Well, Joseph, you were right about the Red Sari Series. It was my skirt that came off next. Now you can see that I am standing there in only my bra and panties. In the last picture already I am undoing the clip of my bra. Soon the bra will be flung open wide and my breasts will be bare for your inspection. Will you enjoy that? I’m sure that you will. We have also included a picture of Mike in his very small underpants for you Lizamoa. Later when I have finished my series he will also take these off for you too.
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As I promised, here is the story of how Mike and I ended up playing the board game called “Strip.” We had invited two other couples, Mike’s friends and their wives, over for dinner and the evening. Steve and Sharron had originally come from Australia, while Peter and Jenny were New Zealanders like us. Both couples were about our own age and we knew them fairly well since we’d spent evenings together on other occasions.
The Game.
It was after the meal that things became a lot more interesting. We usually played some kind of game, cards or a board game, whenever we got together. This always helped to get everyone involved and have a fun time.
When we asked what they wanted to play, Peter told us about a new game they had bought recently but hadn’t had the chance to play it yet. It was called “Strip”. He said that he had it in his car if we wanted to take a look.
Straight off, all three boys were keen to play but we girls weren’t so sure. We all knew each other fairly well but undressing in front of each other was a bit different. Sharron asked if there would be any wife-swapping. That was on my mind too but the boys assured her that there wouldn’t so she agreed to play. Jenny then said it was OK with her too. I thought that the game could be some fun and of course, something quite different so I agreed to join in too.
After collecting the game from his car, Peter began to explain the rules to all of us. Since it will add to your better understanding and enjoyment of this story, I’ll now take some time to explain some of the rules to you as well.
When we asked what they wanted to play, Peter told us about a new game they had bought recently but hadn’t had the chance to play it yet. It was called “Strip”. He said that he had it in his car if we wanted to take a look.
Straight off, all three boys were keen to play but we girls weren’t so sure. We all knew each other fairly well but undressing in front of each other was a bit different. Sharron asked if there would be any wife-swapping. That was on my mind too but the boys assured her that there wouldn’t so she agreed to play. Jenny then said it was OK with her too. I thought that the game could be some fun and of course, something quite different so I agreed to join in too.
After collecting the game from his car, Peter began to explain the rules to all of us. Since it will add to your better understanding and enjoyment of this story, I’ll now take some time to explain some of the rules to you as well.
The game is a board game which can be played by up to eight players. Each player had a counter or marker to be moved around the board on a set course with each move being determined by a dice. In the centre were three piles of cards. These were Penalty cards, Strip cards and Chance cards. The board was marked out with certain spaces marked as “strip” or “chance”.
Now if a player landed on a “strip” space they had to pick up a strip card. These cards were coloured a number of different colours. When you picked up one of these cards, you then demanded a “strip” from the player with that coloured counter. This player then had to pay you with either a penalty card or with one article of their own clothing.
The chance spaces let you pick up chance cards. These cards carried instructions concerning penalty cards. A chance card could either add more cards to your hand or it could just as easily remove them too.
The winner was the person who had collected the most articles of other people’s clothing when the game was over. That’s what I liked most about this game. Everyone ended up naked, not just some of the players who lost.
Peter added two extra rules of his own to the game. First, all players had to start with the same number of articles. Secondly, a player had to stand up to remove any article of clothing. This second rule seemed rather silly, just to take off a wristwatch but later on, it became a lot more interesting when bras and pants were being removed.
Now if a player landed on a “strip” space they had to pick up a strip card. These cards were coloured a number of different colours. When you picked up one of these cards, you then demanded a “strip” from the player with that coloured counter. This player then had to pay you with either a penalty card or with one article of their own clothing.
The chance spaces let you pick up chance cards. These cards carried instructions concerning penalty cards. A chance card could either add more cards to your hand or it could just as easily remove them too.
The winner was the person who had collected the most articles of other people’s clothing when the game was over. That’s what I liked most about this game. Everyone ended up naked, not just some of the players who lost.
Peter added two extra rules of his own to the game. First, all players had to start with the same number of articles. Secondly, a player had to stand up to remove any article of clothing. This second rule seemed rather silly, just to take off a wristwatch but later on, it became a lot more interesting when bras and pants were being removed.
Playing The Game.
We all arranged to wear six articles of clothing. I’ve listed them for you so that you will be able to keep score. Please do keep score as you’ll find it more interesting that way.
This is a chart to help keep the score of the game.
This is a chart to help keep the score of the game.
| Items/Players | Me | Sharon | Jenny | Mike | Peter | Steve |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Item 1 | Watch | Watch | Watch | Watch | Watch | Watch |
| Item 2 | Slippers | Jumper | Jumper | Jumper | Shoes | Shoes |
| Item 3 | Blouse | Dress | T-Shirt | Shirt | Jumper | Shirt |
| Item 4 | Skirt | Slip | Jeans | Shorts | T-Shirt | T-Shirt |
| Item 5 | Bra | Bra | Bra | Singlet | Jeans | Trousers |
| Item 6 | Panties | Panties | G-String | Under Pants | Under Pants | Under Pants |
Peter arranged us around the table with our partners sitting opposite. This meant that we ended up sitting boy-girl-boy-girl around the table. I was at one end with Peter and Steve on either side of me and Mike sat at the other end with Sharron and Jenny on either side of him.
The game took us nearly two hours to play. We had all started with 20 penalty cards and so for a long time, it was just a matter of paying each other with penalties. With “strip” demands and chance instructions it was surprising how fast we could gain or lose piles of these cards. As I’ve already explained, the game was designed with more taking than giving of penalty cards and so slowly the penalties were removed from circulation. Soon some players were finding themselves left with only a few cards. As the game continued, these players soon ran out of cards and then that’s where the action started as they had to meet “strip” demands with articles of their own clothing.
I handed over my last two penalties to Peter. By then Jenny and Mike had also run out of cards too and so we were all keen to see who would be first to lose an item of their clothing. We were nearly half an hour into the game when it finally happened. Steve made a strip demand off Mike. As he didn’t have any cards he had to hand over his watch. That was no big deal you might say, just to lose a wrist watch but for Mike, it was one step closer to total nakedness.
Jenny followed by also losing her watch to Steve and then it was my turn to lose. In the space of two turns, I had two demands made on me. My watch was handed over to Peter and then Sharron claimed my slippers.
For the next few rounds, I managed to stay out of trouble. Now Peter and Steve had both run out of penalties too. Peter lost his watch to his wife Jenny and then his shoes to me. Jenny lost her jumper to Sharron but she had been able to claim two articles from Mike. Mike by now was in trouble as he handed over his shorts to Peter. He now had only two articles of clothing left, his singlet and his underpants, and I bet he was getting worried.
The next few turns were full of action. First, Steve took Sharon’s watch and then I took Peter’s jumper. Steve lost his watch to Peter and then Mike demanded Sharon’s jumper. Finally, Steve lost his shoes to Jenny.
During this time Mike had some luck. He had taken the last of Sharon’s penalty cards and he’d also received another 4 cards off a chance card so for a while at least he was safe. Now for two complete rounds, the game seemed to stop with no demands being made at all but we all knew that this wouldn’t last for long.
The next person to lose was Sharron when she had to remove her dress and hand it over to Jenny. I bet the boys were enjoying the show as the first bra came into view with Sharron now down to her bra, slip and panties. I knew it wouldn’t be long before both Jenny and I would have our bras on display too, if not a lot more as well.
In a very busy few rounds, things really began to happen or should I say disappear. At almost every turn it seemed that a player had a demand to make. My show came when I lost my blouse to Sharron. My bra was semi see-through so the boys must have enjoyed seeing a hint of my nipples showing through the sheer material.
Steve lost his shirt to Sharron and then Jenny lost her T-shirt to Mike. So now the third bra was revealed. Steve and Peter both lost their T-shirts to Jenny and Mike, then Mike’s singlet was demanded by me.
It seemed funny how the boys seemed to be losing their clothing quicker than us girls. Especially poor Mike who by now was down to only his skants. One demand on him and he’d be naked. Of course, this situation quickly changed when Sharon’s slip went to Mike and I found myself standing up to remove my slip and reveal my tiny pink panties for Peter.
The game took us nearly two hours to play. We had all started with 20 penalty cards and so for a long time, it was just a matter of paying each other with penalties. With “strip” demands and chance instructions it was surprising how fast we could gain or lose piles of these cards. As I’ve already explained, the game was designed with more taking than giving of penalty cards and so slowly the penalties were removed from circulation. Soon some players were finding themselves left with only a few cards. As the game continued, these players soon ran out of cards and then that’s where the action started as they had to meet “strip” demands with articles of their own clothing.
I handed over my last two penalties to Peter. By then Jenny and Mike had also run out of cards too and so we were all keen to see who would be first to lose an item of their clothing. We were nearly half an hour into the game when it finally happened. Steve made a strip demand off Mike. As he didn’t have any cards he had to hand over his watch. That was no big deal you might say, just to lose a wrist watch but for Mike, it was one step closer to total nakedness.
Jenny followed by also losing her watch to Steve and then it was my turn to lose. In the space of two turns, I had two demands made on me. My watch was handed over to Peter and then Sharron claimed my slippers.
For the next few rounds, I managed to stay out of trouble. Now Peter and Steve had both run out of penalties too. Peter lost his watch to his wife Jenny and then his shoes to me. Jenny lost her jumper to Sharron but she had been able to claim two articles from Mike. Mike by now was in trouble as he handed over his shorts to Peter. He now had only two articles of clothing left, his singlet and his underpants, and I bet he was getting worried.
The next few turns were full of action. First, Steve took Sharon’s watch and then I took Peter’s jumper. Steve lost his watch to Peter and then Mike demanded Sharon’s jumper. Finally, Steve lost his shoes to Jenny.
During this time Mike had some luck. He had taken the last of Sharon’s penalty cards and he’d also received another 4 cards off a chance card so for a while at least he was safe. Now for two complete rounds, the game seemed to stop with no demands being made at all but we all knew that this wouldn’t last for long.
The next person to lose was Sharron when she had to remove her dress and hand it over to Jenny. I bet the boys were enjoying the show as the first bra came into view with Sharron now down to her bra, slip and panties. I knew it wouldn’t be long before both Jenny and I would have our bras on display too, if not a lot more as well.
In a very busy few rounds, things really began to happen or should I say disappear. At almost every turn it seemed that a player had a demand to make. My show came when I lost my blouse to Sharron. My bra was semi see-through so the boys must have enjoyed seeing a hint of my nipples showing through the sheer material.
Steve lost his shirt to Sharron and then Jenny lost her T-shirt to Mike. So now the third bra was revealed. Steve and Peter both lost their T-shirts to Jenny and Mike, then Mike’s singlet was demanded by me.
It seemed funny how the boys seemed to be losing their clothing quicker than us girls. Especially poor Mike who by now was down to only his skants. One demand on him and he’d be naked. Of course, this situation quickly changed when Sharon’s slip went to Mike and I found myself standing up to remove my slip and reveal my tiny pink panties for Peter.
So let’s take a minute to stop and look at the situation. We had now been playing for just over an hour. Peter, next to me was wearing two articles, his jeans and his underpants. Beside him sat Sharron now wearing nothing but a pale blue bra and matching panties. Mike was at the other end of the table from me and he had on just his underpants but he had gained two penalty cards, so he was again safe for a while. Next to him, Jenny was the best dressed. She still had three articles, her jeans, bra and panties. Steve sat between her and me in just his trousers and underpants. Finally, I was at the end of the table in just my bra and panties.
I knew that within a few minutes, either Sharron or I would be putting on a free show when we’d have to remove our bras, giving the boys some bare tits to ogle at. Surprisingly that was not the way it happened. Jenny first lost her jeans to Sharron and then Mike demanded her bra. She went red in the face, obviously nervous as she stood up and reached behind her back for the bra clip.
“Don’t worry, love!” encouraged her husband Peter, “We’ll all be the same way soon.”
He was right too, because soon we’d all be giving our own shows. Jenny reached behind and unclipped her bra, gamely dropping it to reveal her breasts to all at the table. The guys had a good view as she reached forward to hand her bra to Mike, before sitting down with her breasts still openly displayed. It was exciting to think that soon I’d be putting my tits on show as well.
Peter then handed over his jeans to Mike then soon after I was able to demand Steve’s trousers.
A few turns later it happened. Jenny made a demand of me. I was in just my bra and panties and so now it was time for my show as my bra had to come off. I was wearing a front-clipping bra and so as I stood up I reached for the catch between my breasts. Undoing the catch, I paused for a moment before opening the cups wide, leaving my breasts completely bare. As you know Joseph, being an Indian I have average size tits but with fairly large nipples. Being turned on by the game so far, my nipples were standing out erect for all to see. I slipped the bra from my shoulders, handed it to Jenny and then sat down with my breasts bared for all to see.
Peter was the first to go naked when Sharron made a demand of him. He had no penalty cards and he now wore nothing but his underpants. He stood up and dropped his pants, putting an average-sized, rock-hard penis on display for us girls, before he sat down again.
It was funny how his wife, Jenny was the next player to strip completely when she lost her panties to Mike. She stood up and quickly slipped them off. When she straightened up, a honey-coloured bush was revealed between her thighs for a few seconds before she sat down.
A few turns later it was Sharon’s turn to put on a show when Steve demanded her bra. I wonder how Sharron felt knowing it was her husband who made her bare her tits. She was fairly large upstairs and when she unclipped her bra, two large swelling breasts fell free. She didn’t seem nervous like Jenny had been, in fact, I think she enjoyed giving everyone, especially the boys, a show. She just calmly handed over her bra, gave a jiggle of her boobs, for the boy’s benefit, then sat down.
Sharron then demanded an article from Mike. When he stood up and dropped his pants, his cock was hard too, much to the delight of us girls. As all the guys were excited and hard the game had become a lot more interesting for us girls.
The boys got their own back when Peter demanded Sharon’s knickers. She removed them and stood before us for a moment displaying a blonde, very sparse pussy. The opening of her vagina could easily be seen as she stood there making no attempt to hide herself. But then I suppose hiding wasn't an option for any of us, was it?
Now there was only Steve and I left. I knew that with every turn a strip card could come up with my colour on it, and then it would be my pussy’s turn to be bared to all the room. Some demands were made on the others but since they had lost all their clothes already, these didn’t count.
Then Peter picked up a strip card with my colour on it. This was it. Now it was my panties which had to come off. I stood up and hooking my fingers into my panties, I gently began to lower them. Everyone was watching as slowly my pussy came into view. I slipped my panties right off and then handed them over to Peter. For a moment I gave them all a quick reveal of my black bushy triangle before I sat down.
Now we were all waiting for Steve to make his big show, but it was to be nearly two complete rounds before finally he did. Jenny made a demand off him and he stood up to reveal the third erect penis I’d seen that evening.
So now we were all naked and the game had ended. We then counted up the piles of clothing we had each collected to decide the winner. Did you keep track of the score? If not here it is for you: -
“Don’t worry, love!” encouraged her husband Peter, “We’ll all be the same way soon.”
He was right too, because soon we’d all be giving our own shows. Jenny reached behind and unclipped her bra, gamely dropping it to reveal her breasts to all at the table. The guys had a good view as she reached forward to hand her bra to Mike, before sitting down with her breasts still openly displayed. It was exciting to think that soon I’d be putting my tits on show as well.
Peter then handed over his jeans to Mike then soon after I was able to demand Steve’s trousers.
A few turns later it happened. Jenny made a demand of me. I was in just my bra and panties and so now it was time for my show as my bra had to come off. I was wearing a front-clipping bra and so as I stood up I reached for the catch between my breasts. Undoing the catch, I paused for a moment before opening the cups wide, leaving my breasts completely bare. As you know Joseph, being an Indian I have average size tits but with fairly large nipples. Being turned on by the game so far, my nipples were standing out erect for all to see. I slipped the bra from my shoulders, handed it to Jenny and then sat down with my breasts bared for all to see.
Peter was the first to go naked when Sharron made a demand of him. He had no penalty cards and he now wore nothing but his underpants. He stood up and dropped his pants, putting an average-sized, rock-hard penis on display for us girls, before he sat down again.
It was funny how his wife, Jenny was the next player to strip completely when she lost her panties to Mike. She stood up and quickly slipped them off. When she straightened up, a honey-coloured bush was revealed between her thighs for a few seconds before she sat down.
A few turns later it was Sharon’s turn to put on a show when Steve demanded her bra. I wonder how Sharron felt knowing it was her husband who made her bare her tits. She was fairly large upstairs and when she unclipped her bra, two large swelling breasts fell free. She didn’t seem nervous like Jenny had been, in fact, I think she enjoyed giving everyone, especially the boys, a show. She just calmly handed over her bra, gave a jiggle of her boobs, for the boy’s benefit, then sat down.
Sharron then demanded an article from Mike. When he stood up and dropped his pants, his cock was hard too, much to the delight of us girls. As all the guys were excited and hard the game had become a lot more interesting for us girls.
The boys got their own back when Peter demanded Sharon’s knickers. She removed them and stood before us for a moment displaying a blonde, very sparse pussy. The opening of her vagina could easily be seen as she stood there making no attempt to hide herself. But then I suppose hiding wasn't an option for any of us, was it?
Now there was only Steve and I left. I knew that with every turn a strip card could come up with my colour on it, and then it would be my pussy’s turn to be bared to all the room. Some demands were made on the others but since they had lost all their clothes already, these didn’t count.
Then Peter picked up a strip card with my colour on it. This was it. Now it was my panties which had to come off. I stood up and hooking my fingers into my panties, I gently began to lower them. Everyone was watching as slowly my pussy came into view. I slipped my panties right off and then handed them over to Peter. For a moment I gave them all a quick reveal of my black bushy triangle before I sat down.
Now we were all waiting for Steve to make his big show, but it was to be nearly two complete rounds before finally he did. Jenny made a demand off him and he stood up to reveal the third erect penis I’d seen that evening.
So now we were all naked and the game had ended. We then counted up the piles of clothing we had each collected to decide the winner. Did you keep track of the score? If not here it is for you: -
| Players | Strip Points | ---- | Order Went | Naked |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Jenny | 8 | ---- | 1st | Peter |
| Sharon | 7 | ---- | 2nd | Jenny |
| Mike | 7 | ---- | 3rd | Mike |
| Peter | 6 | ---- | 4th | Sharon |
| Me | 4 | ---- | 5th | Me |
| Steve | 4 | ---- | 6th | Steve |
Notice how Steve and I were the last to strip completely naked but still, we both came last equal in the game score.
The evening was warm so we didn’t bother putting our clothing back on. They went into the lounge while I went to make the coffee. I can't believe I walked around calmly handing each of our friends their drink while still being completely nude. We sat around the lounge and talked while we drank our cups of coffee. Finally, when they decided to go home we all went back into the dining room to find our clothes and put them back on.
Well Joseph and Lizamoa, I do hope you enjoyed reading this story. Would you have been bold enough to join in too? We have brought this game for ourselves and we also thought you might like it too so here is our Christmas present to you, a copy of the game called “Strip”.
Lizamoa and Joseph, this has been a rather long letter and so I must end here. Hope you enjoyed it as much as we did writing it.
The evening was warm so we didn’t bother putting our clothing back on. They went into the lounge while I went to make the coffee. I can't believe I walked around calmly handing each of our friends their drink while still being completely nude. We sat around the lounge and talked while we drank our cups of coffee. Finally, when they decided to go home we all went back into the dining room to find our clothes and put them back on.
Well Joseph and Lizamoa, I do hope you enjoyed reading this story. Would you have been bold enough to join in too? We have brought this game for ourselves and we also thought you might like it too so here is our Christmas present to you, a copy of the game called “Strip”.
Lizamoa and Joseph, this has been a rather long letter and so I must end here. Hope you enjoyed it as much as we did writing it.
Bye for now,
Love from,
Shanti and Mike.
Love from,
Shanti and Mike.
Hi Anne
ReplyDeleteAn interesting story. Would be a fun game to play. I would like a copy myself but you tell us in the background that the game does not exist. That is impressive. You make the game seem so real, so believable with the details, rules etc.
Hi Kirsten
DeleteThanks for your comments.
No as far as we know there is not a game like this. We made it up as the story evolved. Then went back and created a set of rules for the description.
Hi Anne
ReplyDeleteI do not think this story is so good. In the Japanese some parts were a bit confusing and I had to change back to the English again. The little charts you made got very mixed-up too.
Sorry Anne.
Asami
Hi Asami.
DeleteThanks for your feed-back on this story. I tried converting to Japanese myself and yes you are right, it didn’t work so well with this story. The first chart did get corrupted too making it hard to read. When I changed back to English it was still messed up. It only came right again when I re-loaded the page. There is not much we can do about this because it is just what happens sometimes with translating.
Now there is one thing you could try to make this story easier to understand. Take a piece of paper and write the six names of the players. Now as you read the story again, list the items of clothing as they are removed. See if this works better for you. Let me know how you get on Asami.
Anne.
Hi again Anne
DeleteThank you. I tried your way on the paper and it worked better for me. Now I see it is very clever how much details you have put into this story.
As for the translation in Japanese. We will just have to enjoy it and go to English to confirm understandings. It will be hard for a person with no knowledge in the English.
Asami
Pleased that it work better that time.
DeleteAnne
This story was a surprise to us. We did not expect it. Playing a game like this would be very sexy. Both our husbands have said they would be happy to play.
ReplyDeleteYou put a lot of detail into the game. Asami came over to my house and we laid out the story on some paper. She wrote it as I read the story. All of us were interested in how they progressed to being naked. It was very detailed that we could do this and discover the winner for ourselves.
The translation to Japanese didn't work like Asami said. That would be a bother for some people but we all have good English so we could enjoy in that language.
Thank you Anne and Allan for a great story. Masanori has found a photograph of the four of you when you came to Japan.
Tukiko & Sakura.
Hi Tukiko & Sakura.
ReplyDeleteAnne here. Yes you were cheeky monkeys back then. Sounds like you both still are. I can see marriage hasn't helped much there either. Now it seems you are leading your poor husbands astray.
Oh please forgive my not acknowledging you. My respectful greetings to you Kenshin and Masanori. Please forgive my lack of respect.
Yes you seem to be getting good advice from Asami. Having fun with out stories is what it is all about. We played with this story for a long time before we got it right. It was a lot of fiddling around with the players and their clothing. Finally we wrote the list seen in table one then list them again as we worked through the story. To our amazement three players were naked without taking off some of their clothes. That had to be fixed. LOL
It works now and makes a good story. The next problem was to work out how Joseph would write about how the game played in India. You will find that story soon.
That's all from me.
Anne.
Hi Guys.
ReplyDelete(I have addressed this to everyone as all of you are involved. )
Now I thought this was a good story. Very detailed, which might bother those readers looking for something more sexy, but a story that I enjoyed. From what I read in the comments above it also works when listed out on paper.
I can't really fault the story other than a few minor points I have sent for your consideration. Keep up the good work.
Amy.
Thanks Amy.
DeleteThe detail of this story was debated at the time. Then if came up for review again at the time of publishing.
On both occasions our desire for something different won out over sexiness.
Asami has taken care of all your suggested changes.
Anne.
Now here is something very different. Technically difficult as well. I was impressed how you made the charts too. I can see from the comments that those fine details work too. Very impressive.
ReplyDeleteNow the concept of participating in a game such as this is another twist of your exhibition theme. Two points I like are;- The arrangement of the players around the table, and the fact the game continues until every one get naked.
Yes I like this story. A special Thanks to you Allan as I know you put a lot into this too.
Moa
Oh, another big jump forward. I noticed in the comments how many readers thought Shandra was doing better than Anne when suddenly Anne delivers this. It is interesting how you wrote in such detail. I followed your advice and tried writing the lists on paper and it worked too. That is well done. It shows just how much effort was put into it.
ReplyDeleteThere is also the sexual, exhibitionist side too. The idea that a mixed group would begin a game such as this knowing that they will end up naked. To me this would be a bit scary but something I might be willing to try if I was comfortable with the others in the game.
Well done, Anne & Allan. Been enjoying reading all these old stories.
Rangi Mari
Of these early stories this must be among the best. Getting naked in a game like this would be a turn on for us. All the way I would be thinking about baring my tits and pussy to these other players.
ReplyDeleteRita & Brett