Sunday 6 May 2012

Letter 14 Background.


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Hello from Shandra.

            Joseph opens his letter by telling us how much he enjoys getting a letter from New Zealand because he knows it will be from Shanti. He also says thank you for the story, they enjoyed reading it and writing out a list of the strip demands as they went. He also said how surprised he was to receive the parcel containing the game “Strip.” They have talked with some friends who are interested in playing it too.

            He then begins talking about the photos Shanti sent. He notices that in the next instalment of the Red Sari Series, Shanti will be topless. He says he will be enjoying these photos and then going to have a good time with Lizamoa. Later in the letter, he tells us that since Shanti is about to bare her breasts for them, Lizamoa has agreed to Joseph sending some topless ones of her in this letter. It is interesting how they didn’t wait for Shanti to go topless first but jumped straight in themselves.

            His telling Shanti about the photos and their photography together leads nicely into the main story of this letter. The photos which were sent with this letter came out very dark because they were taken indoors. To get photos with better lighting outside, they decide to go to a private place by a small lake in the Game Reserve. While they are having their photo session they discover someone watching them.
            Surprisingly, they continue with their photograph, each getting totally naked, knowing someone is watching. Later Joseph even invites the guy to come up close a have a better look at Lizamoa while she poses naked for him.

            This was another of my stories which got changed once my friends had viewed it. I came up with the Game Reserve idea based on the real Joseph’s original letter. He mentioned the Game Reserve where he worked so we decided this might be a likely place to find somewhere outdoors and private in a crowded country like India.
            The idea of the hidden watcher was also always part of the story but the major change was made in the part where Joseph invites the younger guy out to view Lizamoa up close. This was mainly the work of Allan and Susan with Allan providing that short conversation bit leading up to the sexiest part of the letter. This is the second time we used conversation to build up towards a sex climax in a story. Again I think it works well, don’t you?
            When we wrote about how Lizamoa lay back and played with her pussy and masturbated while a complete stranger was watching her and was masturbating too, it was just so hot and sexy for us young girls. The thought of doing such a thing was a bit turn-on for us but at the same time something we would never dare do. Then came the part where all three of them made themselves cum. What we didn’t even think about at the time was that the two guys could have cum all over Lizamoa’s breasts and pussy. But since the original story wasn’t written like that we have decided to leave it as it always was.

            Remember this special place at the little lake in the Game Reserve because it will appear in many other stories. Also, don’t forget the secret watcher who they discovered and invited over to view Lizamoa because he will be appearing in some future stories as well.

            Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        Shandra.

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1 comment:

  1. HI Shandra and the other writers,
    I must say here I can see the improvement in your writing. At first I thought you did Shandra but now I understand now it was a bit of a team effort. You seem to be getting the balance of a good story now. Saving and building to the climax. Using conversation too.
    Yes for me this is certainly one of the best stories up until this point. I must say you girls really had a thing about exhibitionism back then. We saw in with Lizamoa in the Court-yard. Now we see it with this story as well.
    No I can't see anything majorly wrong in this story. I've sent a few minor ones to Asami.
    Amy

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