Letter 55 We Will Keep the Hunting Story.

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From Joseph,            
The Game Reserve,                
Andhra Pradesh,                    
India.                        

            To Shanti,
                Titirangi,
                    Auckland,
                        New Zealand.

Dear Shanti and Mike,
        Yes, Shanti, this confirms it, you are different to most women. Here you are when most women would be rushing to get to the hospital because their baby is coming, but not you. You are continuing to write your letter to me.
        Then your Mum drives you to the hospital and you arrive with the contractions almost continuing. A few hours later and it is all over.
        Lizamoa says it is not fair. It was so quick too. She took many hours before our baby Jagash was born. Well, at least there will be no more waddling ducks and beached whales at your house now. Ha Ha.
        Well, we must wish you both congratulations on the birth of your daughter Kathy. We received the photos in your E-mail and we are thinking she is a very pretty girl. She is a beautiful colour like honey, not white and not brown. This is like the colour our son is too which makes Lizamoa and me more certain that I am not the natural father.

        What are we going to do with you, Shanti regarding your comments about Indian males. Why do you have such a low opinion of us! I am thinking it is that rebellious nature of yours shining through again.
        I would suggest to Mike that he puts you over his knee and spank your bare bum but knowing you, you'd probably enjoy it. End up having an orgasm or something.

        I agree that the story you told was not like the others as a sexy story. But I agree we could still keep it in the book. Somehow I am thinking that seeing a girl hunting is a bit sexy too. Usually, women in India are not like that. I am surprised that Lizamoa wanted to come and watch too.
        I think Lizamoa admires you Shanti and would like to be more like you. But I, myself do not think this would be a good idea because one ‘Shanti’ is more than enough. With two, I do not be thinking Mike and myself could be handling it.
        Yes, Shanti, I will allow you to keep this story in our letter book.

                Bye for now,
                        Love from,
                                From Joseph and Lizamoa.

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                                                                        Posted by Kim.

         We ended letter 54 with Shanti dropping her letter and rushing off to the hospital to have the baby. Later her husband Mike finds the letter and sends it to Joseph and Lizamoa.

         Hi, it is Kim here. Yes I know I didn’t write the original letter, Susan did but I’ve been asked to take Anne’s notes and do this background since Susan is involved in another story. 

          We wanted to create a sense that some time had gone by between the first half of Shanti’s letter in Letter 54 and the second half in Letter 56. We did this in two ways. First, we added this short letter from Joseph showing that they had time to reply before Shanti sent her second part. We also added the detail that Joseph and Lizamoa already knew she had a little girl and even seen photos of her via email and the internet.

        Joseph notes that little Kathy is a similar colour to their son. Indian babies are usually a lot darker with both Indian parents whereas both of these babies appeared to be of mixed race between an Indian and a European. This confirms even more that Mike might be the father of Lizamoa’s baby as well.  

        The final major point of this letter is that Joseph agrees that the crocodile hunting story should remain in the letters books. He also says he thinks a woman being able to hunt is a bit sexy too. This is probably why he agreed to keep the hunting story. Did you notice almost his last sentences “Yes I will allow you……” I bet Shanti picked up on that one too.

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Letter 54 Crocodile Hunter.

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From Shanti,            
Titirangi,            
Auckland,            
New Zealand.            

            To Joseph,
            The Game Reserve,
            Andhra Pradesh,
            India.

Hello to you, Joseph, Lizamoa and Ragesh.
        Hi from New Zealand again.
        We are still doing very well. I have quit work for a while to have the baby. I’m now five days overdue. Mike said she must have heard me moaning about how much I like being pregnant and she is staying in there longer just to teach me a lesson. Anyway, the doctor said that if nothing happens soon they may need to help things along or even in the worst case take the baby.
        Congratulations on the birth of your son. We were so pleased to read that everything went well when we received your E-mail. It was even better on Sunday when you talked with us on the phone.
        It is very interesting that the baby is a lot lighter in colour than normal Indian babies. Like you said often babies are first a bit lighter in colour soon after they are born. We will have to see how he looks after a few months but I can’t help wondering about what you told us concerning the possible father.
        Yes, Joseph, you kicked my arse that time. I will try to 'refrain' from comments about Sarvesh or Indian males in general. Well, maybe I might slip in a little comment when you are not looking. Ha! Ha!

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                                                                        Posted by Anne.

Hi, Anne here.
       First off we needed to get this baby thing out of the way. The letter mentions that Lizamoa has had her baby and Shanti tells us that she has stopped working until the baby arrives. She also says the baby is now overdue just to teach her a lesson for her complaining. We had been playing with this baby theme for a while and so I decided we had to end it. Notice how Susan did this at the end of this letter.

Now on to the story.

       We were going to do a second picnic beside the lake but as I began writing it was turning out too much like Shandra’s story back in Letter 49. I decided I want something different. This is what I ended up with.
       This was the second trip into the Game Reserve but this time things had changed. A large crocodile had decided to take up residence at the small lake and was killing the animals. The decision was made to hunt and kill it.

       So where did this crocodile hunting idea come from and how did it get into a collection of sexy stories? At about the time this letter was written Allan had taken me hunting for the first time. When he asked me, at first I wasn’t keen although Susan was, so I decided to go along with them. Then Allan said something which changed my entire view of this hunting thing. He said he thought a woman who could hunt was kind of sexy. So I had a go and was soon enjoying it, not that I was much good at it.

        Now the next problem was concerning the hunting in India. In New Zealand, we hunted rabbits and goats on Allan’s uncle’s farm. But then hunting these was not particularly exciting. We want something more exciting and probably more dangerous.
       Our first choice was, of course, a tiger. Maybe it could be a tiger killing the rare animals in the Game Reserve. Then we learnt that tigers were very rare themselves and being almost totally protected we thought even in a story killing one might not go down to well. So we decided on a rogue crocodile instead. Again I am not sure if they would kill a crocodile in a Game Reserve but then it makes a good story doesn’t it.

Later Add-Ins:-

         Later we managed to work in a remark by Joseph that Shanti is always surprising him. He thought maybe she should have been a boy. We also added a bit where Shanti and Mike were riding in the back of a truck where they had a conversation with a man called Mootie. Remember this man, he will play an important role in many of the future stories. We will learn more about him and who he actually is in Letter 56. If you look ahead on the Index Page you will see his name a few times. This was also a good chance to add an insight into Shanti's lack of ability to speak any language other than English,
         Finally, Susan added that little bit at the end where Shanti has to leave off the letter and rush to have her baby. This is the part where Mike finds and finishes the letter for her then sends it off to India.

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Letter 53 Nude Day Two.

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From Joseph,            
The Game Reserve,                
Andhra Pradesh,                    
India.                        

            To Shanti,
                Titirangi,
                    Auckland,
                        New Zealand.

Dear Shanti and Mike,
        Hello, from India. Thank you for a good letter and not to forget the well-written out story as well. Here we are in India in good health and happiness and we are hoping to hear you are also.
        Lizamoa is due any day now. It is good that my mother is staying with us and she can help Lizamoa. Any day soon I will be getting the call with the phone telling me what is happening and then I will take some leave to help when the baby is new. It is not always common for the men in India to be very involved with the children but after talking with you and Mike I have made my mind to be very involved in every aspect of our children.
        We are both amused by your description of yourself as pregnant. Waddling like a duck and sitting like a beached whale, is very funny. Ha! Ha! Surely it is not as bad as all of that you are saying.
        Shanti, you always surprise me. Why do you always have to be so different, so stubborn and headstrong? Always you are thinking differently to what others think. You dress against what your mother wanted you to even on your wedding day. You decide who you will marry yourself, although I must be saying you made the correct choice there. Now when all women should be happy to be pregnant you are complaining about being fat.
        Lizamoa says maybe it is all those years when the speech you were having problems talking has put you down. Now that problem is almost never there you are now showing the other personality which was kept hidden.
        Now, Shanti, I must say I do not approve of your comments regarding Sarvesh, his castle on the mountain and his empire building. Sarvesh is a good man and doesn't deserve you taking pot-shots at him like that. Please refrain from this in future letters.

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                                                                                                                     Posted by Shandra.

Hi, Shandra here.
         I will be doing the background of this letter since I wrote most of it. But before I begin I want to make a couple of points about this letter. Yes, I know that with stories this long, other writers get involved as well and it happened with this letter too. It seems that more and more we tend to do this, adding to each other’s work. But it makes for better stories that way.
       Secondly, this letter is a very old story, by that I mean it was written when we first were working on this section of Letters and unlike many other stories, we have never gone back to improve or update it. In particular, the game could do with either another game or some major re-working but this has not happened. More about that below.

         The story starts with a bit of fun from the guys as Amita is telling them what she has planned for the day. It was at about this time that I heard Allan’s uncle use the word “nooky.” It is a very old slang name for sex. I liked it and so I added it to my story. When the girls read it they were really amused too. So for a while, there were heaps “nooky” jokes between us before we moved on to something else.

         The next interesting event happened when they were about to get into the pool. This is again actually based on something that happened with us too. Let me just describe the scene first because many of our real sexy adventures happen in this place. Up the back of our farm, a stream runs down a steep valley through an area of trees and bush. At one place the stream goes over a waterfall and into a nice deep pool below. This pool is over my head near the waterfall. It then goes between two flat rocks and over another smaller waterfall before continuing on down through the farm. Beside the pool is a nice grassy area where you can have a picnic or anything else you might decide to do after swimming nude in the pool.

         A group of us were sitting naked eating our lunch after a swim when the subject of skin colour came up. With the three of us each being a different race our skins and bodies are a bit different in many small ways too.

         Suddenly Susan jumped up pulling me up too. She then described the various parts of my Indian body pointing them out as she did. The others sitting watching were laughing and enjoying the fun. To end she pushed me off the flat rock into the pool. Then Anne jumped up and did something similar to her except Anne even reached down and pulled open the lips of her pussy showing the pink inside. Like me, Susan ended up in the pool.

        This was followed by a conversation in which we decided to use this in the story I was writing. First, we had Sharon and Steve did it and then they were followed by something a little bit sexier with Sarvesh and Amita. I think this part of the story really works well.    

         Now we get to that game. This is the part of the story where we struggled. I think the description is too drawn out and clumsy. I have tried to inject a bit of fun in at various places but I’m still not happy with it. But now the publication date has almost arrived and it’s still not how I would like it. At last week’s meeting, Anne and Allan said they would have another look at it otherwise it might end up being published the way it is. 

         Next week we go back to the little lake at the Game Reserve but things turn out very differently to the first time we were there.

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Letter 52 Part B The New Zealanders Arrive.

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Part B – At the Club.

Hi from Shanti again.
        When we arrived at the club somebody was waiting outside to greet Sarvesh and show us to the restaurant. They really looked after him and us as well, as his guests. We didn’t realise that when he had rung to add another couple to our table, he actually cancelled our table and ordered another in a better location overlooking the garden and the pool.
        We were shown to our table immediately because by then we were running a bit late. It was a bit amusing to see the reaction of the staff and other guests of the restaurant. We certainly made an impression. I’m not sure an altogether good impression but definitely an impression.
        Again it was a good meal. We allowed Sarvesh to order both the meal and the drinks. I was surprised at how well the waiters and restaurant staff looked after him. Nothing seemed to be too much trouble. Obviously, he was well known here and I bet being on the management committee and a part owner made all the difference too.
        After the meal, Sarvesh made a toast. We held up our glasses as he said in a voice just loud enough for us all to hear but nobody else, “Here’s to panties.”
        “Or lack of them,” Steve added. “May they always remain at home.”
        We all laughed as we sipped at our drinks.
        “Here is another toast,” Peter said. “To all the sexy ladies at our table.”
        “And the handsome guys too,” Jenny added.
        Then Steve made the final toast. “Here to our holiday in India. May we add many more pages to Joseph and Shanti’s naughty letters book.”
        “Not naughty letter book, Steve. It’s a sexy letter book,” said Jenny.
        “The same thing, full of naughty, sexy stories.”

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The New Zealanders Arrive.
                      The Club. 
                                                                                                                       Posted by Allan.
Hi Allan here now:-

          Since Susan and I wrote this whole letter together it is now hard to tell which bits were hers and which were mine. When Anne decided to cut it into two parts for publishing on-line, Susan and I decided to do a background each.  

         As Part B starts we pick up the story again as they arrive at the club. We saw the club scenes as a great opportunity to develop the personality of Sarvesh. In the story last week, Amita let slip that they actually owned half the club until Sarvesh rebuked her. 

        We wanted Sarvesh to appear humble with his friends, treating them as equals. But behind that, we wanted to show here was a very wealthy man with a strong personality. He expected things done and done his way too. Look at the way he overturned the arrangements with the club and notice the service and attention the club staff gave to him. There can be no doubt that Sarvesh was a very important man in this small town. 

       Now in our house here on the farm, there is always a steady flow of jokes and one-liners passing between Susan and I, sure the others get involved but not as much as us. We wanted to inject some of this style of humour into our writing too. Anne said it would make things a lot more fun, especially in those stories which were not so sexy.

       The steady flow of joking between Steve and Peter, with a bit from Mike, will continue through the rest of the Letters Series. Steve in particular regularly gets into trouble from his wife for this, which is what happens in this letter too. We believe this joking between friends is what you would expect in a close group such as this.
        In a future story, Steve will over do the joking so much that two of the girls finally decide to teach him a lesson. They pay-back is so effective that they end up getting into more trouble than he was. But that is a story for some time in the future.
        Kim and Ayaka added in some interesting conversation between Lizamoa and her husband. When he tells her she has been a naughty girl she acts like a naughty little schoolgirl about to be punished. The way Joseph and his wife got into some amusing role-playing gives the impression that this might be something they have done before in their private sex life.  

        Now after they went to the cultural show and had a bit of pussy flashing they end up back at Sarvesh’s house out beside the pool. Suddenly they decide to go skinny dipping. There they are all naked in the pool when Katrina, one of the house staff arrives with the drinks. It is a bit embarrassing for both her and Mike, who she caught stark naked on the diving board.

        Keep an eye out for Katrina in future stories. She will become an important character in some of the later volumes. If you want to cheat, you could scroll down the index page and see how many times her name appears.   

       Next week we will see what happens during the Nude Day they hold at the big house.

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