Kia ora!
My name is Julie.
My name is Julie.
When I was given this story to write there were very clear objectives that had to be achieved. And one other that I could use that would support some future stories being written.
My main objective we to get Nishi and Gaja on this trip where the whole group were travelling to Australia and New Zealand. My second objective was to let Steve and Shanti know they are coming. Yes, you've guessed it, there will probably be some kind of hook-up between them in New Zealand. (Sorry, I have no more information on that.)
So how do I achieve both these objectives? My husband, Brian came up with the answer. Why not get Steve and Shanti online asking Nishi and Gaja to come. There is a strong attraction there and it might be just what would tempt this couple to travel.
The unwritten undertone of this story is that Nishi and Gaja are going to have sex with Steve and Shanti when they get to New Zealand. They all know it's going to happen. We do too. My only question is how. My suggestion would be, Steve invites them to stay at his house. But I'm sure the writing team will sort this out as the time comes.
Cyber-sex: I've done this a few times with a few naughty Japanese boys. It's fun and sexy once you feel safe with the other person. Once one of the wives joined in with Brian and we made it a foursome.
My story was intended to be short so I didn't want to do too much with the sex scene. I got them naked and playing, then they all got off with the help of their partners. It's sexy making yourself cum on a webcam but what about if your partner does it for you? There is the sexual release with orgasms but also the loss of control in that someone else is making you cum. I think that makes it more exciting.
Finally, I had to work with Asami as she was also writing about this same evening so since our stories will sit side by side in the blog we had to get the details right. The main problem seemed to be around who was in the car with Hamza when he went into the town to collect Nishi and Gaja. After a meeting with Asami, we decided Kalki went with him and Riya gate-crashed the party. Why Riya? Again some long term plans where Anne wants a closer relationship between Hamza and Riya. You've probably worked out why but I'm not going to say anything here.
My main objective we to get Nishi and Gaja on this trip where the whole group were travelling to Australia and New Zealand. My second objective was to let Steve and Shanti know they are coming. Yes, you've guessed it, there will probably be some kind of hook-up between them in New Zealand. (Sorry, I have no more information on that.)
So how do I achieve both these objectives? My husband, Brian came up with the answer. Why not get Steve and Shanti online asking Nishi and Gaja to come. There is a strong attraction there and it might be just what would tempt this couple to travel.
The unwritten undertone of this story is that Nishi and Gaja are going to have sex with Steve and Shanti when they get to New Zealand. They all know it's going to happen. We do too. My only question is how. My suggestion would be, Steve invites them to stay at his house. But I'm sure the writing team will sort this out as the time comes.
Cyber-sex: I've done this a few times with a few naughty Japanese boys. It's fun and sexy once you feel safe with the other person. Once one of the wives joined in with Brian and we made it a foursome.
My story was intended to be short so I didn't want to do too much with the sex scene. I got them naked and playing, then they all got off with the help of their partners. It's sexy making yourself cum on a webcam but what about if your partner does it for you? There is the sexual release with orgasms but also the loss of control in that someone else is making you cum. I think that makes it more exciting.
Finally, I had to work with Asami as she was also writing about this same evening so since our stories will sit side by side in the blog we had to get the details right. The main problem seemed to be around who was in the car with Hamza when he went into the town to collect Nishi and Gaja. After a meeting with Asami, we decided Kalki went with him and Riya gate-crashed the party. Why Riya? Again some long term plans where Anne wants a closer relationship between Hamza and Riya. You've probably worked out why but I'm not going to say anything here.
Kia kaka - Kia Kaha.
Be safe - Be strong.
Julie.
Be safe - Be strong.
Julie.
Bit slow this morning, Asami. Did you have trouble?
ReplyDeleteRochelle
Yes, the new link on the index page wouldn't format properly.
DeleteGot it fixed but had to use blue instead of the colour I wanted. That error always comes back, doesn't it?
Asami
So do we start on the trip next story? Hope so. These two short stories are heading in that direction.
ReplyDeleteJohn
Hello Julie,
ReplyDeleteAn up and coming writer in this blog. I've been watching you and like many others here, your writing skill is growing with the experience of each story you write. Even a linking story like this one, moving characters to get them in position for their next series of adventures. Important, has to be done, has to be written.
I truly enjoyed the story. It opened with a greeting from Nishi and Gaja as it should but quickly you see its Nishi telling this story. A little bit of playing with Riya which I liked. Preparing us and getting us thinking more about that girl I think. Is she going to join like Sabeena did. My guess is yes.
Their getting back into nude swimming again. Just enough shyness to make it believable. Then Nishi meets Steve again. The sex scene was good. Not too detailed but works here.
Now when Steve came into the story I found myself wanting to go back to when he and Nishi were together. I suggest you add in some links; Story 216 Part Four & the three parts of Story 247. Your readers might enjoy refreshing their knowledge on Nishi and Gaja.
Other than that a very small list of errors etc has been sent to Anne.
I know your husband Brian was involved too. I could see some of him in the sax scene.
Thank you both for a worthy story.
Moa
Good story but I agree with Moa, those links could help.
DeleteKirsten
I will get them done once I talk with Julie about where she would like me to place them.
DeleteAsami
We've just finished putting on those links at the top of the story. Looks good now and works well.
DeleteJulie.
Nice job Asami and Julie.
DeleteThose links look good and work well.
Moa