Written by Shandra.
Mary had enough with getting her story sections together without the burden of writing extra backgrounds, we each took a part of her story and provided background notes.
Mary quickly wrote the first part of this section getting Betty and Tom to India and settled into Jeevan and Mandara’s house. It is not the first time that this journey has been described so I did suggest she jump over it but Mary thought Betty would want to tell us about her first impressions of a new country. So I pointed out two other stories where this had been done before so she could read them before writing her own version.
Now one day Mary was over at Anne’s place and we were discussing the sex scene. She wanted them to start outside on a deck overlooking the town before moving into the bedrooms. Now we were a bit concerned about this because two couples sitting together had been done a few times and we didn’t want her to repeat this.
She also wanted Tom to be involved in the story by telling what happened to him as well. So that led to this sort of parallel story where they both gave their account of the conversation leading to Mandara ending up topless. I mentioned that more often than not, two people will give different accounts of the same event. She took this on board too.
Now finally came that sex with Jeevan. On a few occasions, we have written about how he takes things slowly and builds up to some amazing, mind blowing orgasms for his sex partners. I suggested that perhaps Betty will experience the same thing. Mary loved that idea and what she wrote was really good. There was not much I thought needed changing except in a couple of places where she tended to repeat herself a bit. With Susan’s help, she got these problems sorted, cleaned up so the scene flowed better and here it is Part Three complete.
Mary tells us that part of these sex scenes are based on when they invited Bill (Susan's father) and his girlfriend Sally over for the evening. So like most of our stories, there is a true story somewhere in the background. Most likely, it is not the same as you read here but still an inspiration for the writer.
Mary tells us that part of these sex scenes are based on when they invited Bill (Susan's father) and his girlfriend Sally over for the evening. So like most of our stories, there is a true story somewhere in the background. Most likely, it is not the same as you read here but still an inspiration for the writer.