Thursday 4 June 2015

Story 145 Background


                                                                               Posted by Anne.
         Shandra added a couple of E-mails to the bottom of her story where Shanti pulls Sarvesh up on a comment he makes. Of course, Sarvesh quickly replies to that.
        It was at a recent meeting that we decided to enlarge on this. I argued that since these emails would have happened after the story had been sent (published) it made sense that they might be recorded later as well.
        Everyone was in agreement with this so I cut them out of Shandra’s story and created a new one with a working title of “Emails.” Others made suggestions at the meeting and got involved too, so I can’t really take much credit for writing much of this other than coordinating everything into one story.  

1 comment:

  1. Anne I believe you are understating your role in this story and in this blog. I have not seen this story for a long time but found it again when I was looking for something else.

    You can see that strong personality of Shanti coming out, ready to fight everyone. But look at Sarvesh. He didn't need the help of his friends but exercised wisdom in his reply to Shanti. He knows her and knows which battle he needs to fight or when not to battle her.
    This theme of Shanti challenging him has been seen in many stories but keep in mind there is another side to Shanti and Sarvesh. They are actually very close, similar to each other and go well in bed.
    Rajah.

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