Posted by Reshma and Rajah.
Hi, Reshma here.
When my brother-in-law Rajah, decided to do another story, he asked me to join him. I thought it was a great idea doing something like that together. He had this idea to explore a possible relationship between Hansini and the farmer. My sister Shandra had already set up an interest between them in her Story 107. Rajah added more when he wrote about them in his Story 112. Now, all we needed was some way to get Hansini and Tom together again.
After the big Ripper Stripper Party, we wrote that Hansini and Mootie skipped away to visit Tom and Betty's farm. There has been a spark of attraction between Hansini and Tom so one day that was brought up at our meeting. Some of the writers wanted to explore this relationship and see where it went. There had been a rule that members of our cast would only have sex with others within the group. Betty and Tom were of course outside this.
So first the story was for Hansini to take a shower while Tom wanked off, watching her. They would both get off and that would be the end of it. When we read it out at a writers meeting, the questions asked were, “Is that all?” “Doesn’t he have sex with her?” “What about Betty and Mootie?” Of course, we hadn’t considered these. The idea was discussed and debated, it was finally decided to waver the no sex rule for this story. It actually became a turning point because others tried the same thing in other stories too.
A sort of plan was drawn up where Betty would walk in and catch Hansini showing off for Tom in the shower. She would demand that she could fuck Mootie in return. My sister Shandra came up with an idea how this would be arranged by Tom so Betty would get Mootie’s cock. The last part came from Anne’s cousin Asami. She suggested that Hansini walks in and catches Mootie fucking Betty and takes Tom to fuck too. I think Asami felt sorry that Tom was missing out.
That was our final plan and the story turned out in much the same way as was suggested in that meeting. It’s a long story but both of us were strongly against cutting it in half. We wanted our readers to read the full story at one time.
Susan is helping me with a tour of the letter regarding Tom. Tom is the character inspired by my new husband. When I was preparing to read Story 133 Susan told me to wait until Saturday afternoon. She had a surprise for me.
ReplyDeleteAfter lunch many of the people involved in this blog began arriving until we had quite a crowd. Susan explained to them about my special journey on Letters and then told them I had reached Letter 133.
Then Reshma began reading. It appeared that she and Rajah had written this story back in 2015. They took turns reading the various parts while we followed along with the text on their big TV.
It was a great way of doing it. Thank you everyone.
Rosemary.
While Reshma and I were reading this story to Rosemary, we came across a few mistakes and ways we could improve it. Anne gave us permission to reopen the story so as we continued reading, Anne took some notes.
DeleteAfter we finished, Reshma and I sat at the dining table and we made all these changes. Anne did warn us not to change the basic story as other stories were connected to it.
Now it is done. Mistakes fixed and improvements made. Allan helped with the conversation bits since he wrote a lot of that.
Reshma, Rajah and Allan.