Story 208 Different but Very Good

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From the Writers.

        In Story 207 Part Two, Sairu and Tom go off together. It hadn’t been our intention to follow them, rather just speculating that they had a good time. In the comments at the bottom of that story, it was mentioned by a reader that it would be interesting to see what happened. Some of us in the writer’s team thought so too, so let’s go find out.

       The third section of Story 207 has now been officially dropped. Some of the younger members of the writing team felt that we have done enough with chess. Not sure how we will tell you the results of the chess contest or even if they are needed,      

       Now to our story.

                                  (Anne)

      Here I was on a large bed in the guest room being used by Paula and Donald. I was naked and the man beside me was too. He was older than me, a lot older than even my own father. A white man, European too. As I lay on my side towards him, my full frontal body was on view for him but I had no worry of that. I reached for him, taking his cock within my hand. He was hard but still, it barely peeped over the top of my fist.

      As I looked down at my hand, for a moment many questions came to my mind. What was I doing here with this man? Would this tiny thing be able to please me? Would we do good love-games together? So many questions running to my mind! Many answers required!

      Then the idea came from what my friend Kalki had said after breakfast. She had been with Tom the night before. She had not time to say much but I remember her words, “Different but very good.” We didn’t have time for me to ask more. So, I made my mind to do my best to make a good time.

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Hi from Shandra,

          "Different but very nice!" That was a title suggested at the Writer's Meeting so I wanted to use it if I could. The story was a basic one where a younger Indian woman, Sairu, goes off for some quick sex with an older European man, Farmer Tom. But the first problem was this man has been written as having a very small cock. My second challenge from this title was that it referred back to an earlier story (Story 203  Naughty Farmer) where a younger woman Kalki, went off with this same man.

         I realised there was the danger of making it the same, just a repeat of the earlier story using a different woman. I knew I could wrap it up with a different story and different conversations but I felt something different had to be done with the sex too. So there was my goal for this story, come up with something "Different but very nice."

         First I read that other story again. Susan had written it and done a pretty good job of it too. Of course, since it was Susan, mine had to be better! Next, I did some research on both characters. 

        Tom, an older man but still a cheeky fellow. He had an eye from the ladies and as has been mentioned a number of times, wandering hands. He is a farmer, so is fitter and stronger than he looks and of course, has this tiny cock. Tom is named after a friend of ours, also called Tom, a regular reader of this blog and also 'blessed'with a tiny cock. He tells us sex is not very successful so he mainly uses oral while we wrote about our Tom as if he could achieve some kind of sexual intercourse but was only in Story 203 that we revealed how he does it.

        Now Sairu, a younger Indian woman, fairly new character, and fairly new to the sexual activities we use in our stories. She has an interest in the white visitors from Australia and New Zealand and was keen to get as much action with them as she could. In Story 191 Part One, the first time she meets and talks with Steve from New Zealand online, she ends up doing an exciting cam strip with him. In story 195 Part Three, during the party at the Big House after the wedding, she sneaks off with Jeremy, the best man, for some sex in a bedroom. So she is capable and open for naughty fun too.

       With this background behind me, I began to write. The story turned out Ok. I was not really happy with it and the sex scene seemed to let it down. I was beginning to stall so I called Susan and Anne in for a look. 

       Susan went straight for the sex scene, filling that part of my story with ideas and notes which I built into the current sex scene as published. The difference being Tom got Sairu off with his hands rather than using any oral on her pussy. In the actual sex, Susan suggested a different way, slightly different positions and a good result for both of them.   

       Anne went over the story, first adding and strengthing conversation. It was at this point that the running theme "silly girl" was added. Next came the part where Payam was laughing at his wife for going with Tom. That annoyed her too. I worked on the doubts, second thoughts, Sairu had about Tom. I even added where he guessed how she was thinking and laughed about it.

       So there it is. Not so much from personal experience this time but I think we got there in the end. Go read it, everyone!

                       Shandra, Anne & Susan.

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