Tuesday 29 November 2016

Story 189 We Had a Full House.


Note from the Writing Team:- This story was written by Julie & Brian. Since they don't have
 full access to the blog, I've uploaded it. Kim.

Hi from Amita
        The title of this story is “We had a full-house.” And it was too, probably the only time it has ever happened. The logistics of finding where everyone would sleep took some sorting. First Sarvesh wanted to put them all in the hotel at the club. This would have worked well, we would have got everyone in at a good discount too. But Mandara wanted to put our visitors up in our own homes. She said this would be better to get to know them and maybe have some fun too. We all knew what she meant by ‘fun’.
        So one nude weekend we spent time working out where everyone would stay. Mandara said she was able to take some and of course we could too. Hansini was all for it, quickly offering to take two couples. The other new couples weren’t so sure but I noticed both followed Hansini’s lead and agreed to help.
       This was all looking good until a few weeks before our visitors were due to arrive. It was becoming clear, Jeevan and Mandara’s new house was running behind schedule, was obviously not going to be finished in time. They had moved in and thought they would have more bedrooms available. Since some parts such as the kitchen would not be completed any guests who stayed there would need to take their main meals in our house. Not a problem since Jeevan’s new house was very nearby. But this wasn’t going to happen, they just weren’t able to take guests. (In the end, we did get to have one couple stay there but had to take their main meals with us.)
       So we had to work out how the rest could stay in our house and to my surprise we were completely full. The upstairs rooms were taken by our friends from overseas since they would be staying longer than our other guests. We even had to empty a couple of rooms downstairs, converted into bedrooms too. These three rooms were used by some of Katrina’s close family. With all these people and the extra work, it became clear that more staff would be required and so the House Manager set about employing staff for the period of the wedding.
       We kept the guest house empty since this would be where David’s family would be sleeping. Even there it was over full as there were only three bedrooms with seven of them including David, plus two small children. Mandara loaned me some beds since her furniture was still in storage and we set them up in the lounge area. Sarvesh did offer them rooms in the hotel but they were content to stay in the guest house.
       But it was good having all our friends staying with us. A good atmosphere, with every seat taken at the dining table, full for every meal. When the others came up from the other houses too, it was a crowd, a nice crowd to have.
       Our servants noticed the places some of our guests were sleeping in and one day the House Manager approached Sarvesh offering rooms in the servant’s quarters but he was assured that our guests were long term friends who were comfortable with the arrangements. It showed how much my husband has changed; being able to accept such arrangements and having members of our staff feeling they could approach him with help like that.

Story 189 Background.

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Hi from Kimberley,
         We have a surprise this time. Yes, two new writers. We have seen them commenting on stories, writing a real story on their page above, and Brian even helped with brainstorming for the Ripper Stripper stories but now let’s see how they go writing a Letter’s Story.

Hi from Julie,
         As Kim said above, this is our first story. We had done Brian’s Page but that had been a real story and we tended to avoid detailed sex scenes. Anne and Allan had helped us a lot there too. Now we were writing a fictitious story, one where we got to make it up as we went but also, it had to be considered. we were writing in a well-established world where some characters had been around for a very long time. We knew it had to be done correctly.   

         When we were given this story, we sat down together and drew up a plan, an outline if you will, of how it would go. At that stage most of the major scenes (sections) were added which just left us to write the body of the story, filling out each scene as we went along. We started well but it was soon becoming apparent that we needed help. We were trying to capture the personality of Amita and others in our story but we were unsure how far to go with this. Eventually, we invited Anne and Allan over for dinner and then together sat down to review what we’d done in our story.
        Anne was a great help, she knows so much about the people involved in these stores, explained who they were, where they came from and their personalities too. She brought a small carton with ten hardcover notebooks, the famous diary mentioned from time to time. Allan gave us some good conversation, showing us how to read them out, even exchange with each other in roleplay. He gave us bits to liven up the interaction between characters in the story too. This turned things around for us. They were a great help and I soon had some notes to add to what we had done. 
        The final result is a combination of our ideas and their’s but in the end, we were happy with what we had done. It might not be up to the standard of many of the stories in this blog but we’re still new at this.

        Now we’re working on another story that will appear later in this volume. I know this one will be a lot better.


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Note: This story was written by Julie & Brian. I just uploaded it for them.  Kimberley.  

Monday 14 November 2016

Story 188 Taking Care of our Visitors. Part Three



Katrina’s Bedroom Guest.
      (The scene:- At Hansini’s house. Katrina & David.)
Katrina here now.       
        Is it bad luck to see your husband the day of the wedding? I don’t know that it is. David and I weren’t worried.
        Is it bad luck to have sex with him before the wedding? A bit late to worry about that too, don’t you think?
        Is it bad luck to take part in an orgy and three-somes before the wedding? Maybe carry another man’s sperm down the aisle inside me! Maybe that’s going a bit too far don’t you think?
       
        Now in the days before we were for our wedding we had two other couples staying within our house. There was the European couple, Jeremy and Joyce from Perth and the Indian couple Brian and Mega from Auckland. In the end, David also had to stay with us too, sharing my room and also my bed too.
        But that is not all that needs to be said here. David and I have our story to tell and this time, it will be him doing the telling. I just was helping and offering my advice.

Story 188 Part Three Background.

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Part Three – Katrina’s bedroom Guest.
                                                                                        Posted by Susan.
          There was actually another couple in the house too. Katrina had David as a bedroom guest. Now this one had to be different for two reasons. First, they had not seen each other for quite a while and second, the plan was for them to be married in under a week. So I realised something extra was needed besides just sex.
         They had been planning this night for months so everything was worked out to the very last detail. How they would hold and kiss each other, how they would take each other’s clothes off and how they would make love together. So how did that go? Go read the story! Ha! Ha!
     
         Now I’ve written these last three stories so I was wondering how I could link them together again at the end. I came up with the idea of David taking a walk through the house early in the morning. The bedroom doors were all open. Anne asked me about that. It must have been a hot night so they left the doors open. Well? Can you think of a better reason? They had to be open or David wouldn’t know who was inside.
         Over breakfast, the guys began on Katrina with the rabbit joke. Yes, it’s a tired, worn out joke now but I hope I put a new twist on it this time. With his early morning walk, David had enough information to turn things back on them.

         Ideas? Where did they come from? I was bound by the main story line for these three stories. I was also bound by them all happening in one house. So I picked up ideas from things I’ve done, old stories and ideas from the writer’s meeting when I was given this task. Mix them all together with some conversation and humour and I hope they work well for you.

                                                                         Sexy Sue.


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