Story 180 Waterbed and Oil.

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        After those great stories from our Australian team now our stories move to New Zealand. Jenny will start off first with this naughty, messy story about sex on a waterbed.

Hi from Jenny & Peter,

Jenny here.

        When I saw an idea online one day where a couple would get into some oily, sexy play on a waterbed, it seemed like fun so I suggested it to Peter. He was keen too. Our main concern was dealing with the oil. We could take all the bedding off which would just leave the mattress. There wouldn’t be a problem getting a bit of oil over that. What we didn’t want was oil running down the edge of the mattress and going underneath. It seemed like too much trouble so we decided to drop the idea.

        But it wouldn’t go away. The thought of getting naked and rolling around together on the soft, warmness of the waterbed, covered in slippery oil, was just too tempting. There had to be a way of doing it.

        A few days later Peter came back with the solution. Some of the cars they imported from Japan were covered with large plastic sheets to keep dust and dirt off them during transit to New Zealand. It was a very soft plastic but very strong and hard to rip. His idea was to lay the sheet right over the whole bed. Since the side boards were higher than the mattress, in theory, any loose oil should stay in the centre of the bed. The sheet would stop anything running down under the mattress too.

        It sounded like a great idea so we decided to give it a go. Next day he brought one of these sheets home. They were massively large, first, we decided to cut it but then I suggested we just double it over. So we were ready to go, just waiting until we could find the right time to do it.

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                                                                                        Posted by Kim.

       Now, this is closely based on a true story. One that happened to Allan and I. I had heard about putting a plastic sheet over a waterbed and you know how I like messy sex. I wanted to try it. And yes it worked well although, in the end, we got so much oil over us and the bed that sex was a bit hard with us sliding around so much. We also had a problem with getting off the bed afterwards and made a couple of marks on the carpet that took some getting out.

       Writing the story went well too, my only problem was finding the time to work on it. Both Susan & Ayaka did some work on it. Asami was like, helping me like too. We have lots of quests from overseas now. Online friends, Ayaka’s family and others, all here for her wedding. I don’t think there will be a story next week as we’ll all be so busy.

       Now with this story, I’m not sure I have done enough with the oil yet. I’m going to call the team in to publish it but I think we might work some more changes to it. Maybe even change it again after publishing.  

Update:-  After publishing some of our friends commented that this story seemed to end suddenly. We went back and gave the ending a work-over. In the end that last sex scene was added too.

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Story 179 David came over for Dinner.

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From Jeremy & Joyce.

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      After that sexy night with Paula and Donald, Joyce and I began writing our stories for the Letters Books. We invited them for dinner one evening and spent some time talking and getting ideas and notes from them. Of course, David was there too. I had thought that something might have happened that night but I think we were too busy with the writing. Anyway, the stories went ahead and soon we had them both finished. It was about that time that Joyce held our second ‘official’ Australia Team Meeting. She got me to read out my story of the night Paula and I spent together. She then read out her own story of what she had done with Donald.

        They were happy with our stories and after a few minor changes, Joyce was ready to send them to Amita to be included in the Letters Books. In some ways, that was a bit exciting too as here we were sending off stories, the first stories we had completely done ourselves, about us having sexy nights with Donald and Paula. (See Story 176 Sex with Bad Boy Donald  & Story 177  A Night with Paula.)

        Now during that meeting, there was a comment was made by David that led to our next sexy adventure, the one found in this story. He said, since he was away he missed all the fun. He was right too because it did happen while David was over on the East Coast so he did miss out on the fun too.

        “Well when do I get my fun?” he asked.

        “You’re engaged,” Joyce said. “You can’t have ‘fun’ David.”

        I was kind of amused by that but I also had a feeling Joyce didn’t mean it.

        “Who said I can’t?”

        “Katrina will tell you that you can’t.”

        “I think you’ll find Katrina having fun with those in India.”

        “You’re probably right there David,” I added.

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                                                                                        Posted by Ayaka & Susan.

Hi from Ayaka,

        When I was starting with this story I did the opening very quickly but then I came to the sexy scenes. There was a mental road-block there for me to suffer. I struggled into the evening and finally gave up when Geoff called me to bed. Next morning I was doing the milking with Susan when I informed her of my problem. She agreed to have a look at it.

        Well, Susan did write a good outline of the sex scenes for me. Later we sat down together to work on it. In the end, we seemed to be writing parts each then combining them into the story. It was then that Susan came up with an idea that suddenly changed the whole look of the story.

         “We are writing this story together,” she said. “What if the husband & wife team, Jeremy and Joyce sat down and did the same thing?”

        It sounded like a great idea and so we went for it.

Hi from Susan.

        So now I was involved in the writing. We had to go back over much of the story parts she had written and re-work those. It was interesting how this rewrite just continued into the parts we still had to do and the whole story got completed in one day with us both going back a few times to add things during the day. Then later that evening (Thursday actually) we sat together and tidied up the last bits by reading it out loud to each other. Anne and Allan heard us and came over to listen. They added some suggestions too. So then we were finished and our story began its journey toward publishing on Saturday.

        The story was sent to Reshma, Allan snr and Anne for final proofreading and by Friday afternoon we had Anne’s and Allan snr’s comments back. When Reshma arrived at the farm she went over the story for us too. Their comments fixed a lot of mistakes, improved a few parts, and led to the story growing by another quarter of a page.

        We were ready for publishing Saturday morning. 

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