Story 217 They are Leaving Today.

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Hi from Amita,
         It was Wednesday. I woke up early as we had an early start. The man I had been with that night had already left, returning to his room. ‘Yes,’ I thought, ‘It had been good.’ We had saved our last night to be with Mike and Shanti. That was the second time that holiday. Both had been good. The first in the hotel room when we went to meet David’s family and the second time here. I learnt later that while I had been away in the hotel with Mike, my husband and Shanti had got together here too.
         I sometimes wonder about them. It has always surprised me as their relationship seems a contradiction to their personalities. They always seemed to annoy each other and her strong-willed personality was always a challenge for him but still, he was attracted to her. She says like a moth attracted to a flame, which annoys him too. Ha! Ha! But in some ways, I think she has a point there. Was she still a challenge to him in the bed? I wasn’t sure. It didn’t seem like it. But I couldn’t see her bending to his personality either.

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Hi from Awesome Anne.
        Here we are at the end of the wedding holiday. Katrina is married to David, they have all had a lot of fun, now they are all going home. There will be three leaving India stories, of which this is the first. We see the leaving India through the eyes of someone who is not leaving, staying behind in India.
        I chose Amita because she is one of my favourite Indian characters. I also chose her as it gave me a chance to work with Shanti and Sarvesh again too. Have some more fun with those two! 

        A few months back when James wrote his story "Living Statues" his approach intrigued me. The idea of daydreaming about sex that has gone before rather than telling of the sex while it happened. I decided to give this a go too. That is where the sex scenes came from. 
       The sex scenes needed to be a contrast as you would expect between these two couples. It is their personalities that makes it. Shanti refusing to give in to Sarvesh, while he needed to be in charge. With Amita and Mike, it was the total opposite, both working together to make some great sex.
       At the last moment, I moved that entire sex scene between Sarvesh and Shanti to much later point in the story, to when Amita was in the room they had been in, dreaming about what she had heard from Shanti. Hope it works better here.       

       I wanted to take Amita through a variety of moods and emotions as she deals with her friends leaving for their homes. This had to be an emotional time for her, with tears, through to happiness. Some even tried to cheer her up with the odd joke too. It had to be all there as we would expect with a complex character like Amita.  
       Allan snr wrote that story about Nishi the maid. (Story 216 Part Four) I thought I would support him by writing her into my story as well. Joseph thinks he saw a maid downstairs while in the other story she told Steve she was hiding, waiting for Joseph to go so she could come up the stairs. There is a connection there, making the two stories complement each other.    

       So there it is. All done and about to be published.
               Go read it. Enjoy the story,
                               Anne.

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Story 216 The Final Days - Part Four.

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Hello from Shandra. (Feb 2021)
          This was meant to be a stand-alone story with the idea of dropping the character, Nishi. But Allan sr and Kim wanted to write a second story about her. This turned into a three-part series. Since they provided links back to this story here, we've decided to add links to their story too.

          Story 247 Gaja and Nishi - Section One.           Story 247 Gaja and Nishi - Section Two.           Story 247 Gaja and Nishi - Section Three.

Hi from Steve.
         I think many of you have heard about this by now. Got into trouble with Sarvesh over it too, although, later he suggested we should put it in the Letters Books. So, over the last couple of weeks, I sat down and wrote it as close as I can remember.

Let’s get into the story: -
         It was the night when all the staff joined us. That was a bit different. Of course, the dress code and our behaviour had to change too. I don’t think it would have gone over too well seeing some of us on the diving board in our all-together. Ha! Ha! But it was also interesting to meet and talk with people whom I had seen been going about their duties in this house, almost unseen and unheard. 
        Like Peter and Mike, I had been making a point of being polite to the house staff. When one of them brought something to the table during a meal, I always thanked them. When I met one of them moving around the house, I would always acknowledge them by saying ‘Hello’ or ‘Hi.’ I must admit it was a bit amusing at first how they were shocked, not knowing how to respond but soon some of them were returning my greeting with one of their own, even using my name. But still, it was always me who responded first. I suppose that was the training of the house protocol. 
         Now, for this afternoon/evening, as I said, things had changed. The staff had arrived back on the bus and soon were with us, dressed in casual rather than their uniforms. They went about their duties, of course, but even that was different than usual with some of us getting involved in the kitchen work.
         I was there too, much to the amusement of three young maids. They thought I couldn’t cook Indian. Openly saying so too. Ha! Ha! I showed them. Did a pretty good curry, if I say so myself. With the three of them watching I began to show off a bit too. Lost a couple of bits over the side of the wok with one piece even landing on one girl’s shoe, much to the amusement of her two friends. 

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Hi from Rajah,
        This was supposed to have been my project but I became stuck before I got to the main sex scene. We were also having trouble with Anne. She wasn't happy with the idea of using a maid in a sex scene. Since I was working with Allan snr, I handed the whole story to him. Over the last few weeks, as the story was completed, more and more of my work was replaced. Now I can't claim much other than allowing Allan snr to use my profile name since he doesn't have one for this blog. I have no problems with this since its a good story which is what counts in the end.
        Oh, Allan, I have no comment on how you won Anne over. Good one, mate!

Allan here,
       As Rajah has said above, I took over and rescued this failing story. I met some resistance from Anne regarding using a member of the house staff. After Katrina, it had been generally decided that they would not use the house staff in any more sex scenes. Anne and I have agreed this girl will appear once as a star for this story and then disappear back into the background. Her name is after someone I am chatting with online.
      Now, I wanted to capture the excitement of having a sexual encounter with someone completely unexpected. Hence the idea of one of the maids. She makes the advance, suggesting the idea to Steve. They arrange a mid-night session in Steve's room.
      So how would a sex session like this go? There were a number of ideas I could use such as Steve exploring a younger Indian woman or a young Indian woman seeing a white man naked for the first time. 
      I also had the question as to how sexually experienced she was. She must have some or she would have never suggested the idea. Well, I even worked an explanation into my story as she told her story to Steve.
      So to sum this up. Nishi is attracted to Steve, a white guy who does bodybuilding while Steve is attracted to this young sexy Indian maid. Forbidden fruit for both of them you might say. How do they get on? That is a big question - let's go read the story and find out.

Anne here,
      Allan snr, what you did was totally unfair! I told you no, it wasn't going to be published. But you tricked me. Asking a girl on her peak just before orgasm. You knew I'd say yes to anything. I should delete it now, just to fix you - but it is rather a good story.

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