Story 316 Back to India.

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        On the way home to India, Jeevan and Mandara were staying with Sarvesh and Amita in Singapore as they had business there. Riya was sure there was more than this. She challenged them about what their real motives were while staying in Singapore.
        “Did Mum and Amita need to be with you two men? Of course not, you are obviously up to something sneaky, Sarvesh,” Riya had said.
        Sarvesh had hugged her, saying, “Riya! Dear Riya! You are making so much out of nothing.”
        “So, are you saying you two men won’t touch those women the whole time you’re in Singapore?” she asked.
        Sarvesh held up his hands. “Ahhh, Riya. You know I can’t promise that. If those women become upset about being in a strange city, we will need to comfort them.”
        “Ahh! Read comfort as fucking like rabbits!” she said as she held up her fingers to make air quotation marks.
        By now, Mandara was openly laughing, and soon Jeevan and Amita joined in. Many of us listening were amused, too, but Sarvesh wasn’t ready to concede yet.
        “Dear Riya, why are you so untrusting? Why don’t you believe that we might be doing business?”
        “Oh, I believe the business part, but it's the funny business going on that I’m concerned about.”
        He smiled. “Please don’t be concerning yourself about any of our business.”
        “Oh, but I must. Who else is going to look out for my dear Mummy?”
        “Dear Mummy! I’m surprised you don’t choke on that! The way you used to treat her before this trip!”
        Riya chose to ignore that comment as she continued, “Somebody has to protect poor Mummy. Dad doesn’t seem interested in protecting her from your wicked intentions, Sarvesh.”
        “I don’t hear your mother complaining?”
        “Well, that is even worse. She’s been brainwashed into thinking wild ogres are normal behaviour,” Riya said.
        “Mandara is happy being with me,” he said.
        Riya gave a big smile. Now she was ready to spring her trap.
        “Ahhh! So, I was right! Something is going on, isn’t it? I knew it was!”
        She smiled back at him, knowing she had got him.
        Sarvesh didn’t reply. He smiled, knowing she had won that one.

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Hello from Asami.
            When Anne gave me this story, I began the planning stage, where I worked out a timeline of where I wanted the story to go. What you read here followed that plan fairly closely, except there were a lot of details and sub-scenes (rabbit holes) added in.
            Anne's direction notes said, "Get them all back to their homes in India but leave Sarvesh and Jeevan with their wives in Singapore." She didn't even tell me who was telling the story. It was wide open for me to write it however I wanted.
            I had written Kalki's story of how they left India, so I felt it might be good to get her to tell the story of the trip back. Kalki is an undisciplined person who goes off into little side stories before dragging herself back to the main story. She had a child with another one in the way, so it would be natural that the children would play a part in this trip too.
            So, I started writing. At first, it went well, but then I hit a brick wall. Anne suggested I get Rochelle to help me. One morning, during a milking shift (cow milking, a dairy farm), I told her about my problems. That night, her family came to my house for dinner. After dinner, while the kids watched a movie, we sat at the table with our husbands and worked out my writing problems. So Rochelle agreed to help with the writing. Both our husbands had some input too, as they usually do when we are writing.
            So go read our finished story. Have fun!

Hello from Rochelle.
            I was asked to help with this story. Asami was struggling with filling in the details of the sex scenes. We sat down together to work them out. We find sex scenes hard not to repeat something we've already written. You'll see it here, where it ended up using Cowgirl style a bit much.
            Now there is a lot of sex in this story. Three main sex scenes, but other sex parts, like the orgy night and picking flowers. Asami and I went to visit Shandra and Anne, as they had details of which stories we needed for our research. Some were still unpublished notes, too. Once all that research had been done, I was able to help Asami finish the story.
            The writing went fast, and here we are, finished.

            Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        Asami and Rochelle.

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