Thursday 14 February 2019
Story 216 The Final Days – Part One.
By Allan & Allan snr.
"That is a deadly combination - Father & son team - Anne you've got a lot to answer for letting those two loose in here.
Let's see how they do. Ha! Ha!"
Sexy Sue.
Hello from Mike.
What a wild weekend that had been. So much fun with all these sexy women. When I returned to our bedroom, Shanti was there with Petra. She looked up and smiled as I entered.
“Where were you, last night?”
“I was here - with Donald,” she replied.
“Was it good?”
“What do you think?”
I just smiled. She didn’t need to say it. I knew what Donald was like. It could be expected the sex would be good with him. He knew how to please a lady. And the ladies knew it too.
“So, what did you get up to?” she asked me.
Women! Always checking up on us guys!
“I was with Mandara.”
“You like her, don’t you?”
“Yes, I do. We’ve always been close - there is something special about her. Sex is always great too,” I added with a grin.
She giggled at that. I watched while she eased our daughter off her nipple and shifted her over to the other breast.
“You men are all the same!”
“No Shanti, I mean it. She is good. Knows what she is doing.”
She didn’t reply to that, instead, changing the subject. “What is happening today?”
“Don’t know. I saw Mootie and Sarvesh outside just now. Playing with those bracket things by the pool.”
“Isn’t that for a pole across the pool?”
“Yes, I think so,” I replied. “Might be for fun when the kids get back.”
“Oh, yes. They get back this morning, don’t they?”
Story 216 - Part One Background.
Hi from Allan snr,
Susan offered to write this background for us but where Susan is concerned, I am not as brave as some people, not to let her loose writing something nice about me.
Now, many great decisions have been made by two men over a couple of beers. This was one of them. My son and I writing together - a father & son tag team. I can see you naughty girls getting excited already. Calm down girls - Please let me finish my story first.
The problem - a roadblock for the writers. This period between the end of the Nude Weekend and them leaving India for their homes in Australia and New Zealand. It is a complex time, made worse by the return of the kids and later the house staff. It was against this that Anne wanted us to write a story.
No problem - for a good tag team like us.
Hi from Allan junior,
When we decided on a story it took another couple of beers and a big bag of crisps to work out the details. It had to be a man. I'm not going to even try and work out what goes on in a female head. Scary to even think about. I need another beer after that thought!
Ahhh! That's better. Now, where were we? Yes, we decided on man, Mike, very close to me in both looks and personality. You know the type, quiet, handsome, intelligent, great in bed, loved by the ladies, doesn't boast much, etc. You get the picture?
We decided to pick up the story as the Nude Weekend was coming to an end so after reading anything else mentioning this time period we began to write. I took most of the background events as I love including these little personal touches to make our characters real. For example in the first conversation between Mike and Shanti, I knew she was still breastfeeding her daughter Petra so I had Mike walk in on her doing so. Late Mike mentions the fight on the greasy pole between his daughter Kathy and Mandara's daughter Riya. Those little special moments that we all have in our real lives.
As the writing continued, with what my partner Anne considered were too many planning sessions over too many beers, we came to the conclusion that we had enough material for two stories so we dropped development of the second half and only worked on getting Part One ready. Part Two will follow when we get time to complete it.
Allan snr,
I've always wanted to write a really hot sex scene so after setting Mike up with Sairu, my son left me to do one. I must admit to talking with both Anne and Susan regarding this. My younger daughter Reshma gave me the idea of splitting it into two sessions. Kim had some suggestions too when she found out.
I wanted details, feelings and the thoughts of Mike while he was enjoying this lovely young woman. She is a bold one, not scared to get into some heavy fucking so I had a lot to work with there. I was tempted to go back and see what she had done with other men but then Reshma advised me not to. 'Just write as you think it might have gone,' she told me. The girls always say they love the foreplay buildup as much as the actual sex so I've added lots of juicy details for you ladies to read (and enjoy!). LOL
Personally, I think I did ok. Works for me. Looking forward to what our readers and other writers think.
So that is it. The first part is done and ready to publish.
Allan & Allan snr.
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