Letter/Story 70 Part B - Katrina’s Story One.

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Part B – The First Special Weekend.

            On the Friday evening, Elizabeth arrived and was dropped off at the gate after 5 pm. She walked through the lower garden gate left open for her and locking it behind her. She came in through the back door of the guest house to wait there for me. Nobody was seen by her because everybody was getting ready to leave in the van.

            I made a show of packing a small bag as per usual but just before the van arrived to take the staffs into the town I was slipped away to join Elizabeth into the guest house. I was surprised how easy I slipped away unnoticed just like Sarvesh said it would be. But I did notice Amita greeting all the staffs and wishing them a happy day off. She does not usually do this and so I knew she was helping take the attention from me.

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                Part B   -   The First Special Weekend.

                                                                               Posted by Shandra

Hi, Shandra here now.

        Last week we followed Katrina through a series of events which finally led her to become involved in the special weekends. Now, this part opens with that first weekend about to begin. In an earlier letter, Sarvesh told us a bit about these weekends but we will learn a lot more as we follow Katrina through her first one.

        I will not go over the whole story since you will obviously read it yourself. I want to show you three interesting points which link to themes running through past and future letters. 

The Red Swimsuit.

       First, let's look at Lizamoa's red swimsuit. Back in Letter 27, Mike brought Lizamoa a red one-piece swimsuit. She was visiting New Zealand with Joseph since she didn’t own a swimsuit they had to buy one. The suit was actually quite sexy as being unlined, it clung tightly to the breasts of the wearer, particularly if it became wet. After Lizamoa wore it to the beach in Letter 29 when she went swimming, it sort of drops out of the story for a long time because after that Lizamoa tended to wear a bikini or less than that when she was swimming.

        It is not entirely clear why it was left in India and how Amita came to own it, considering it didn’t really fit her. Amita herself even wonders why it was left but of course, it was a logical step for Katrina since for her first swimsuit it was sexy but not too over the top.

       For some reason, it really made a difference to Katrina that the red one-piece had been purchased by Mike. There appears to be a special attraction developing between these two, well at least on Katrina’s side there is. 

Elizabeth and Katrina.

         There seems to be a relationship between these two girls which is hinting at being closer than just two friends. Both seem to be attracted to the other with Katrina caught looking at Elizabeth’s nipples in the spa pool, and Katrina waking up to discover her friend holding her breast.  We can sort of wonder where this might be going. 
         This was intended as a side-line to Katrina's adventures on the Nude Days. Where this was going was undecided when this story was written as Anne's diary tells us of some spirited debates going on among the writers over Elizabeth.

The Bikini.

          During this story, Amita offers to buy bikinis for the two girls. These bikinis come with matching cover-ups and skirts so they could be used at other times besides swimming. Both girls were surprised at this but the story for this weekends with the girls agreeing to wear them.

         As a hint, I’m going to tell you this bikini will play a more important part in future sections of Katrina’s Story. Now I'm going to end before I give too much away.

        Next week the first section of Katrina’s Story - Part C, is going to come to a surprising ending.

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Letter/Story 70 Part A - Katrina’s Story One.

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Part A – Learning About  Letters                                                                 

        My name is Katrina; I work for Sarvesh and Amita as the servant in their house. Some of you will, of course, be surprised to be getting this letter sent from me. Since I am the centre of this adventure Amita thought it was very good for me to be writing it. But I must be the honest person and admitting that she and Hansini have helped me a lot with it too. I am very unknowing to doing a lot of writing, especially the English.

            Do you remember me? Unknown to me I have already been appearing in The Letters Book in two different letters. First, it was in Letter - 52 and then again in Letter - 56. But we will get to these soon.

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                Part A   -   Learning About Letters.

                                                                               Posted by Shandra

Hi, Shandra and Reshma here.

        This week we begin a story which eventually turned into the largest story in the entire letters series. We have divided it into a number of sections so we could fit them closer the rest of the letters. Of course, some of these sections, such as this first one, had to be sub-divided into parts again for posting on-line.  

Purpose and Theme.

         The idea behind this story is to take a younger single woman through the various stages from first hearing about the special weekends to becoming involved herself, then finally losing her virginity and fully participating in the sexy adventures. It is a long drawn-out story but I believe it will be worth it in the end.

        The second purpose of this story is to provide a strong link between the stories of Vol 4 where the New Zealanders are still in India to the stories of Vol 7 where they all meet again at the resort in Australia on the Great Barrier Reef. Through Vols 5 & 6 the letters became more of a loose collection of stories without much of a theme or direction. We needed something to keep the series on track and drive it forward to the holiday resort. Katrina’s Story is one way we did this. 

 Katrina.

        As the title suggests, the story is written by a girl called Katrina. She works for Sarvesh and Amita in their house as some kind of a maid/servant. As she explains in her story she accidentally comes across the sexy side through a series of events which will eventually lead to the point where Sarvesh asks her if she can help them on their special weekends.

       Since Sarvesh didn’t want to involve any other staff, Katrina asked her friend Elizabeth to help. Both girls knew it would involve adult activities such as nudity but they were both interested in making the extra money, so they agreed to help.

       This is where we leave the story this week just before Katrina’s first special weekend.  

Katrina and I.
       When I began writing this story the intention was it would be a replacement for the story by Hansini Letter/Story 66 so you will notice that they are similar in some ways. Of course, later, we decided to keep both stories and develop both characters in different ways.
       In some ways, Katrina's route into Letters is similar to mine. Although I was there at the beginning, I wrote that first letter, I was not involved in the sexual side until a lot later. That is what happened with Katrina as well. Her personality is similar to mine too, a bit shy, a gentle nature, but able to be cheeky and sexy when she wants too.
       You will notice that in the early letters Lizamoa has the role of being the 'darling' of the series, the girl everyone loves, but this attention moves to Katrina with Lizamoa slipping into the background a bit more. This is why we did some stories about Lizamoa over the last few weeks because we knew she was going to fade a bit once we get to the Nude Resort in Vol 7.   

Special Page.

        We have created a page entitled “Katrina’s Story” and as we publish each section of Katrina's Story, we will add it to this page as well. That way you will eventually be able to read the entire story in one place. This page is going to be Reshma's project. She will, of course, make some minor changes as she moulds the separate posts back into a single story. 
        There could be some differences where one version gets an update while the other doesn't but we will try to keep them the same as much as we can.

The Office Conversation.
Hi, Reshma here.
        I was getting this story ready to upload but I wasn't happy with the office scene. This conversation is an important turning point in the Katrina Story. Before this she is just a maid/servant, after this, she begins moving towards becoming an active member of the Indian Team. For such an important part the conversation appeared stiff and unrealistic. I mentioned this to Anne and she said to talk with Allan. Allan and I sat down together and had a go at improving it. I hope you like the result. Anne and Shandra both did.
       We wanted to get Katrina thinking she was about to be fired by Sarvesh, to first show her worry, then how she resigned herself to the fact she was losing her job. We then wanted to show her confusion when it became obvious this wasn't happening as she expected. We also worked on some of what he said as well, so you could say it became complete rebuild of this conversation. 
        We then went on to change little bits throughout the story until finally, we decided it was good enough for publishing.

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Letter/Story 69 About Lizamoa

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            Hi, all of our friends in India. Here we are doing well and we are happy to hear that you are all keeping well too.

            Now, this little letter is going to be a bit different. This letter is about one person, Lizamoa, but it was not our intention for her to write any part of it. We have heard a lot from Lizamoa lately as she has written about us, so we decided we are going to write about her. Well, that was our plan but as you will see below it didn't work out like that.

            We have seen the success which Joseph has made with his job and buying the house but his wife has made a number of successes of her own. So without anymore from me, Lizamoa – this is your life. (Well your life since you came to New Zealand anyway.)

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                                                                               Posted by Anne

  
       The return story from New Zealand completes the theme about Joseph and Lizamoa moving to New Zealand. It is, as the title suggests, about Lizamoa and how she settles into life in a different country. Where this story is important is that it links to future stories by giving us theme ideas and background.
        As always, we were looking for something a bit different, a new way of doing a story. We did this by having each of the New Zealand characters add something about her. The purpose of this story was to show how Lizamoa settled into her new adopted country and open the way for future stories about her.
        I had not been very happy with this story. The idea sounded good but the finished story didn't seem so good and I was almost ready to dump it. (Maybe I still should have done that.) The other writers convinced me to try and rescue it. During a re-work, I manage to inject some humour into it but again there was still the problem of not much sex. Well, that was until Susan decided there should be and added that piece done by Lizamoa herself. It was a surprise that she did that but it works rather well so I left it in. Finally, Susan added the little touch at the end by Joseph. My original intention was not to include anything by him. 
        So that was the story. As I said above, maybe it shouldn't have made it to publishing, maybe it should have been deleted. Anyway, it is in now so I suppose it can stay there.

       This is the last of this short series before we get to the beginning of Katrina’s story next week. This will be a very long story stretching through a number of parts and a number of sections. It will finally come to its big conclusion when they are all in Australia on the Great Barrier Reef. Reshma has added a special page and will collect all these parts to make one complete story so you might like to check that out too.        

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Letter/Story 68 Nudie Weekends

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Hi to everyone in New Zealand. (Well our friends actually.)

            This letter from India is being written by myself, Sarvesh. My purpose, rather than telling you about another sexy adventure, will be telling you about our 'special weekends.' As my wife, Amita calls them, our 'nudie weekends.' But first I have been asked to give you some news on events happening over here.

            Everyone here is in the very best of health. Our business ventures are beginning to show success and I am pleased I choose Jeevan as a partner because he is proving to be a very capable and resourceful fellow. We did not secure any contacts to start importing food from outside India and so we decided to confine our activities to sending Southern Indian products to the north and bringing Northern Indian products back south. This has proved to be very successful. Almost every day a railway waggon is either arriving or departing with our products.

            Joseph, you will be happy to know Mootie is doing well in the Game Reserve. He is looking at a possible extra tourist venture of opening up the small lake area for special parties, guided by park rangers and transported in park vehicles. This could prove to provide some much-needed funds for the Reserve, while still protecting that special area of the Reserve.

            Jeevan & Mandara have had their baby girl and both mother and baby come through it very well. Amita has spent too much time with Mandara and now she is talking about maybe we should have a baby too. Well, this is something we need to be thinking about first I told her but we all know she will have her way before very long. 

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                                                                               Posted by Allan

Hi, Allan here.

        This is not so much of a sexy story but instead more of a fill-in story where Sarvesh gives us some background on the sexy weekends he was organising.  

The story was added for two reasons:-

         First, this part of the volume was a bit one sided with the stories from New Zealand. So we felt it might be good to find out what was going on in India.
         Secondly, we wanted to set the scene for the stories written by Hansini which appeared two weeks ago and the big story by Katrina in two weeks' time. Both these stories were set against the 'special' weekends Sarvesh was holding so we felt we needed to bring you up to speed on these weekends and what happens in them.

        Now the character Brian is named after one of Susan's boyfriends. He did a lot to help with many of the stories, particularly the ones at the resort on the Great Barrier Reef so we decided to honour him with his name appearing in the stories too. As you will see by reading the writers page, Brian disappeared after a while as Susan and he split up but his name remains here to remind us of the help he gave us.

Update on Brian - October 2013.
        Brian does a Goggle search and rediscovers the blog. After discussions between him, Susan and Anne he begins to start adding background material to stories he helped write. Later he and his wife begin writing Brian's Page.

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