Posted by Ayaka.
Halfway through the Rottnest Island story, we decided to put Katrina and Jeremy together which also meant David got to be with Joyce. Since Allan and Anne were struggling with the main Rottnest Island story, I agreed to do this short one for them.
At a writers meeting, the first one I ran, it was decided to break their story in half and insert mine in between like they spent a night on the island. It has worked out well.
Now, what would these four people do? My sister Asami, suggested that Katrina didn’t really know Jeremy that well, so she might be a bit nervous. I then took this to mean they were all a bit nervous about partner swapping.
Since Katrina is the most experienced with this she would most likely be looked to as leading so she suggests they play a game to get them naked and ready for swapping. I then took this further until they actually ended up having sex in front of each other. I turned this into a great sex scene, the main scene of this story without putting too much into the sex each couple had later in their separate rooms.
Later Kim and Susan both had a go at it too, improving and adding further detail. It now works well for me. Hope you guys like it too.
Later Kim and Susan both had a go at it too, improving and adding further detail. It now works well for me. Hope you guys like it too.
Hey what is with all those flags? Is that your doing Asami?
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Yes I'm wondering that too. Is this going to be a new feature or just someone messing around?
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