Posted by Kim/Susan.
This is an older story that took a bit of fitting into our newly arranged series of stories. It is not as good as many of the stories around here because it was older when I was first learning about this Letter writing. This idea for this story goes right back to the first time Elizabeth appeared in the stories.
Back in Letter/Story 70, Elizabeth was brought into the story to assist Katrina on the nude weekends. Well, the writers had a second purpose for her, being a ‘playmate’ for Katrina. This theme was started with a bit of breast touching in the spa pool but then at a writer's meeting, it was suddenly decided to drop any girl/girl activity for Katrina at this point. They wanted her focused on her trip to the Barrier Reef Resort and her big night with Mike.
Susan never let this idea die. Some notes were written, a story was started and kept. Recently the subject was brought up again. We knew Elizabeth was working for another company owned by Sarvesh so it would be a simple matter of transferring her to work with Katrina. I picked up Susan’s half-completed story and did most of the work needed to complete. Then came the problem of where to fit it. You see Volume 11 is actually made up of two short series of stories, nude camping by the New Zealand Team, in the first half, and the Perth Trip by the India team in the second half.
Finally, it was decided the only chance we had of using this story was to place it here, in the centre of this volume. When Katina became very serious with David, either this story had to be dropped again or be placed here before Katrina’s trip to Perth. You might notice that one part almost seems like it was after the Perth trip as that is where I originally thought this story would be placed.
After this, the theme was dropped again. It’s unlikely Elizabeth will ever come into the stories again but the door is still open as she still continues to work with Katrina and eventually she will take over Katrina's job. So she could appear in some other adventure if we wanted. We could even allow her to bring the girlfriend who has been hinted about in this story.
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