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Hello from Mary.
This is the second of a three part story where we are following the older couple Tom and Betty. The time period is the few days between the two trips while the overseas visitors are in New Zealand. In part one we read how this couple had found themselves staying in a house with a group of young people. After some fun for both of themn beside the pool the group split into two groups for the afternoon evening. We know Batty went off and had a good time at Hirohiko and Sayako's house so now we find out what Tom did.
Then we switched to Tom as the story-teller. He went on different trip to his wife to visit a Maori Marae. I am not covering what happened with that evening, instaed I want to pick up when Tom came back with two horny and sexy young Indian ladies. They came on to him in the van. Tom even said in the story, they had just been allowed to become sexually active and were hunting men. I think it would not have taken that much for them to catch him.
There is probably not as much of a storyline as some pages in this blog becuase most of the story is one long, over night sex session.
Then we switched to Tom as the story-teller. He went on different trip to his wife to visit a Maori Marae. I am not covering what happened with that evening, instaed I want to pick up when Tom came back with two horny and sexy young Indian ladies. They came on to him in the van. Tom even said in the story, they had just been allowed to become sexually active and were hunting men. I think it would not have taken that much for them to catch him.
There is probably not as much of a storyline as some pages in this blog becuase most of the story is one long, over night sex session.
The most obvious point here, there is a huge age difference between Tom and these two younger women. Both of them have only recently become sexually active and so there is a huge experience gap too. You will notice that partly this story becomes a teaching session.
Jaynitha and Riya, two teen girls who giggle and talk too much. I tried to capture that in this story. They are keen, eager to play and learn. They quickly had Tom playing with them teasing them.
Sex sessions are hard to write without repeating what has already been written so therefore I tried to use some different positions and groups. I have also tried to mix in some conversation and joking between the three of them. I hope this works for you.
Jaynitha and Riya, two teen girls who giggle and talk too much. I tried to capture that in this story. They are keen, eager to play and learn. They quickly had Tom playing with them teasing them.
Sex sessions are hard to write without repeating what has already been written so therefore I tried to use some different positions and groups. I have also tried to mix in some conversation and joking between the three of them. I hope this works for you.
Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
Be safe - Be strong.
Mary.
Be safe - Be strong.
Mary.
Well done Mary. I loved how easy you changed from tell a story from a woman's view to telling a story from a man's view.
ReplyDeleteWayne
An insight into what you wanted to achieve here.
ReplyDeleteAfter reading the story myself, I think you did get that right.
Reen
The Index link on this page is pointing to the wrong Index Page. It should be Page Four not Page Three.
ReplyDeleteJulie