Thursday, 2 April 2026

Story 314 - Background Notes.


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Hello from Ayaka.

            We wanted to finish the power struggle between Peter and Jenny and their twin daughters, Kirsten and Carol.
                (See Story 304 Stephen and the Twins.)
            I wrote this new scene where the girls who were being punished, tried to go out in their car. Anne thought it was too short for its own page, and we published it at the end of Asami's Story 313. I still wasn't happy with that, and with both Allans supporting me, I brought it up at a writers' meeting. It was agreed to remove my story from her story if I wrote a bit more. I decided on a 12-month update where the twins were enjoying work at the car yards for their petrol money.
            The main storyline is about the twins deciding to use their car while their parents were away for the night. They are outsmarted by their parents using the video security system. They should have known about that because Peter used that system in another recent story.
                (See Story 275 Part One. Sexy Karene.)
            Perhaps the girls never saw that story. Anyway, they got caught again and got into more trouble with their parents.
            This story is short. Sure, I know that, but it was written as a fun thing while exploring the theme of rebellious teenagers who think they are cleverer than their parents. Instead, they walked into a trap set by Peter and Jenny.

            Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        Ayaka and Asami.

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