Story 322 Background Notes.

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Hello from Anne.

            Here is the second part of this huge story involving most of the writers. On the first page, we saw where the idea of an island house holiday came from and how they, particularly the women, prepared for their week together.
            The question raised in that first part was: Is this story going to become sexy? Well, I think what happened with the women out beside the pool answered that one. I especially like how Susan wrote Tukiko into that scene. You can see how her appearance nude changed the other women regarding their feelings toward nudity and exhibitionism.
            Now this, the secon part takes them from arriving at the holiday house to going topless in the spa and on the beach, then hidden nudity in the spa on the second night. So the question raised in the first part still remains. How far are they going to go?

            We made a few changes to the layout of this part. Where in the first part we had used headings and stars, this time we changed the headings by adding the day and approximate time each section took place. We hope this will help you keep track of the overall storyline and not get lost in the sexy scenes.
            Writing a story like this, with ten main characters, can be difficult as you have to keep all of them active and involved in the flow of events. We have spent a lot of time getting this right as the writing process continued. In some cases, we have had to go back and change a few names in some scenes, as one character, Mayumi, seemed to be left out. I believe we have this more balanced now. Down at the private beach, Mayumi became the first woman to get her top pulled off and her tits felt by one of the men, other than her husband. We also gave her a little scene talking with her husband, Shamon, before the second evening in the spa pool. In that scene, they agreed to open up their marriage. A big step!
            This will probably be the first of these new couples to make that decision, but you can be sure the other two couples, especially Kyoko and Yoshi, aren't far behind them.

            So next month we will have Part Three ready for you, and watch out for an interesting twist in the story after their third evening in the spa pool.
            Also, during this part, they will all take some major steps sexily as well.

            Kia Kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        Anne and the Writers Team.

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