Hi everyone. Allan here.
It's been a while but Letters isn't finished yet. I think the very least we can do is to get them all back to their home countries. So first we have to finish their nude weekend. It is so close now, almost there so I thought what would it take to push us over the top?
One day I was sitting up at the waterfall. Yes, you guys know the one, bathing dress code 'naked, no clothes allowed.' My two sisters, Shandra & Reshma were there too. We began talking about Letters and we all agreed, it had to be finished. Anne had already laid out the stories that were needed and those extra ones that could also be included.
One was something to do with a Greasy Pole placed across the pool so two people could fight one another, trying to knock each other in. Fighting! That sound familiar doesn't? Sounded like fun too and Shanti had already mentioned the steel brackets on each side of the pool, wondering what Sarvesh was up to now. So let's tell her what 'he was up too.' Better still let's show her in a story written by her.
I decided to pick it up. My sister Shandra said she was happy to help.
It's not sexy. You know that some of our stories aren't. Later, Susan added in a short part where Shanti was thinking about what had happened with her and Sharon with the two horny guys Jeremy and Hazam. Maybe, we should have explored that more.
I read Anne's notes and she said that Riya needed to enter into the Letter Series because she would play some important role in a future story. Who knows what goes on in Anne's mind. I decided to pick that up too.
Now all I had to do was get the kids back and have fun on a greasy pole. Actually, we have used one at our own nude parties. Its still under Ayaka house I think. So it was easy to write the main section of the story.
I thought the best idea would be to put Riya on the pole against someone her own age. Betty in her Story 194 India - Part Three has already told us she thought Riya was about the same age as Shanti's daughter Kathy. I couldn't miss Mike giving Kathy that playful slap on her bare arse as they left the pool. Ask my daughter Rebecca how often she gets that from me.
So that is about it. I sat down and wrote the story over Christmas and Shandra did a few improvements. Susan added her part and then, here it is.
For those who might be interested. I know there is lots more sex in the next few stories.
Bye, all.
Allan.
So why did we see so much of that 10 year old Riya in this story. Is she going to be a character in future stories. She is not scared to get into physical contact with a man when she attacked Sarvesh. She is not scared to get naked in front of other people either. I think she might be involved more when she grows up.
ReplyDeleteAmanda
One of the problems that we have discussed is how to write concerning children in our stories. Most often they are sex stories where children can never take part in. In real life, we have the children when we swim naked so they see nudity but never sex. We are never into child porn. So a story like this one is an excellent place to introduce the children of our characters. Already some are at 10 so not too long from now they can become around 20 and become involved in the stories.
ReplyDeleteAsami
What is the plan with these children? I can see a new caste developing here. Will these new characters interact with the older characters? Is it still your intention to continue after the current series in India?
ReplyDeleteFred & Ginger .
One thing that many of us forget here is the structure behind these stories. There is a world created with many characters, each with their own personality. I sometimes marvel at the work gone into this blog. No wonder the writing team are exhausted at the moment. But Susan promises that Letters has not been forgotten.
ReplyDeleteJames
I agree with the comments above regarding the complex storyline behind these stories. You could select most characters and go back through their stories and discover a life history.
ReplyDeleteI once was shown a Word file that listed all the main characters. When you clicked on a name you were taken to a detailed history of that person. There is a smaller version of this in the page bar at the top but I think it has not been maintained in recent years.
Eileen.
Yes you are correct Eileen, there is a world behind these stories. But it is not as well defined as you are saying above. While Anne has a ckear picture I think, many of the rest of us are living in the moment. We know the history and what is happening now and we write as in this way. Anne provides us with things, ideas and people who need to be introduced into our writing and we do this, often not knowing why. We are confident in the big plan and just follow her lead.
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