Greetings from Julie and Brian
It is Brian here first.
It is Brian here first.
Here we are in our last story of this series of three. The only problem is that this final story has become much larger than we intended so we had to divide it into two parts. This, of course, is part one.
The next story after this will be the first of the Tukiko Series so Anne set us a few goals to achieve in preparation for this feature series.
1) Kathy, Michael and Ragesh are no longer virgins while Sabeena still is a virgin.
2) We need to introduce this new Japanese woman called Tukiko who the two younger guys think is "totally hot."
3) Michael and Ragesh need to be prepared for some very intense sexual events coming up that they will be attending.
4) Mention a New Zealand visit by those from India and Australia.
The next story after this will be the first of the Tukiko Series so Anne set us a few goals to achieve in preparation for this feature series.
1) Kathy, Michael and Ragesh are no longer virgins while Sabeena still is a virgin.
2) We need to introduce this new Japanese woman called Tukiko who the two younger guys think is "totally hot."
3) Michael and Ragesh need to be prepared for some very intense sexual events coming up that they will be attending.
4) Mention a New Zealand visit by those from India and Australia.
It is Julie here now.
There seems to be a change in how stories are being written in this blog. By that I mean the drive for improvement has led to us writing more about the thoughts and feelings of characters rather than just what they did. Here we had a young man dealing with his sexual desires against the other pressures of growing up. His mother and his best friend's mother decided to give these boys some very hands-on sex education. This story is the result of that.
But, as you will probably realise, things like this don't always go according to plan. In this case, sexual desires begin to take over, both with the boys and their mothers. How will this work out? We will see part of how it goes for Michael in this story. In Part Two we will complete Mickael's story and see how it works out for Ragesh too.
Now we also wanted some other human interaction, like in the story opening scene where Michael is getting some comfort from his mother when his father walked off with the girl of his dreams. He is left more confuses after that. Or Michael's little sister, Petra guesses he isn't sick and so she wants to stay home from school too. I think it is those little human things that make a good story.
The main scene of this story is Mickael removing Lizamoa's clothing. This is very detailed and a learning curve for Michael. He gets to see sex from a woman's point of view which will probably give him some useful knowledge and skills for the future.
So, that's about it from us. Go read the story and enjoy.
But, as you will probably realise, things like this don't always go according to plan. In this case, sexual desires begin to take over, both with the boys and their mothers. How will this work out? We will see part of how it goes for Michael in this story. In Part Two we will complete Mickael's story and see how it works out for Ragesh too.
Now we also wanted some other human interaction, like in the story opening scene where Michael is getting some comfort from his mother when his father walked off with the girl of his dreams. He is left more confuses after that. Or Michael's little sister, Petra guesses he isn't sick and so she wants to stay home from school too. I think it is those little human things that make a good story.
The main scene of this story is Mickael removing Lizamoa's clothing. This is very detailed and a learning curve for Michael. He gets to see sex from a woman's point of view which will probably give him some useful knowledge and skills for the future.
So, that's about it from us. Go read the story and enjoy.
Kia kaka - Kia Kaha.
Be safe - Be strong.
Julie and Brian.
Be safe - Be strong.
Julie and Brian.
Nice story.
ReplyDeleteI loved how you turned taking 4 items if clothing off into a whole story. Well done with that.
I also notice a changing style eg central headings, star dividing sections. Is this for your stories or us Anne going to pick up on it?
Kala.
Just saw your comment arrive Kala
DeleteTo reply to your question.
Yes I like those changes and I've instructed Julie to go back and add them to their first two stories as well.
My Tukiko series is coming up next so we will probably use it there and see how things evolve from here.
Anne
Thanks Kaka,
DeleteGlad you like our story so far. I must add I enjoyed writing this one.
Julie
I saw the list if goals you were set. Did to achieve them to Anne's satisfaction? I like how she is using you guys to clean up her mess.
ReplyDeleteIt wasn't your fault Anne suddenly when off and published a series totally unrelated to the main storyline. So now she has you making it look like her stories fit.
Bad girl, Anne.
Simon.
So that is what is going on. Anne covering her mistakes again.
DeleteNaughty Anne.
But good story Brian and Julie. Very attention taking. Enjoyed!
Sayaka.
By the time you read the last story in this series, Friday morning NZ time, you will have seen all the goals have been achieved. Some more set by Shandra not listed here too.
DeleteBrian and Julie have done well, getting on and doing what was asked of them. Not like some trouble-makers I know how love to sit there taking pot-shots at those trying to do something for this blog.
Awesome Anne.
Awesome? How can you say that.
DeleteJust admit you stuffed up and we'll all help you fix it.
Simon.
How can you not believe I am awesome?
DeleteI am just making changes so readers like you can enjoy at better story. You must admit the improvement of our writing out weighs any negative hiccups alone the way.
Stuffed up. There is no stuff up Simon. All good.
Awesome Anne.
Please keep this quiet or else you'll wake up those other troublemakers you like hanging around with.
ReplyDeleteAnne.