Hello from Hamza.
I know that this story is mostly about my wife, Kalki. Since this is her adventure but I will be telling it for her. I’ll let her know before we publish, I hope.
I know that this story is mostly about my wife, Kalki. Since this is her adventure but I will be telling it for her. I’ll let her know before we publish, I hope.
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Meeting Andrew.
When we went down to the nude beach the first time, a family was there with their two grown children and their two friends. That is two girls and two boys in their mid to late teens.
One of them, a boy about 19 called Andrew, stands out more than the others since he was the one who first spoke to Kalki. Then later it was him who invited us to join in a game of beach football. I wasn’t intending in that last idea but I could see my wife was excited and really wanted to play so I encouraged Payam and Sairu to join us too. It was fun and we all enjoyed it. (See Story 262 Yes Bikini – No Bikini.)
The next day, we took Riya down to this beach and Andrew was there again. He came straight over to talk to us. I could see Riya was interested, would have liked to have talked with him but he bypassed her attempt to speak to him, instead, going straight to my wife Kalki again.
Riya looked a bit disappointed, almost annoyed since she would have noticed Andrew was more her age. This mildly amused me too. Later we would learn just how much it had actually annoyed Riya but that is for later in this story.
Concerning my wife Kalki, I thought this was becoming a bit too friendly and I needed to warn her, so told I Kalki it was about time she made it very clear she was a married woman. That was meant as a message for the boy but very much it was intended as a reminder of her status to me. She was my wife! She needed to behave like it. The look on her face told me she’d got the message on both counts.
She promised that if she saw him again, she would tell him. I did say he was a nice boy and I liked him so let him down gently. Don’t hurt his ego. She agreed with this too.
One of them, a boy about 19 called Andrew, stands out more than the others since he was the one who first spoke to Kalki. Then later it was him who invited us to join in a game of beach football. I wasn’t intending in that last idea but I could see my wife was excited and really wanted to play so I encouraged Payam and Sairu to join us too. It was fun and we all enjoyed it. (See Story 262 Yes Bikini – No Bikini.)
The next day, we took Riya down to this beach and Andrew was there again. He came straight over to talk to us. I could see Riya was interested, would have liked to have talked with him but he bypassed her attempt to speak to him, instead, going straight to my wife Kalki again.
Riya looked a bit disappointed, almost annoyed since she would have noticed Andrew was more her age. This mildly amused me too. Later we would learn just how much it had actually annoyed Riya but that is for later in this story.
Concerning my wife Kalki, I thought this was becoming a bit too friendly and I needed to warn her, so told I Kalki it was about time she made it very clear she was a married woman. That was meant as a message for the boy but very much it was intended as a reminder of her status to me. She was my wife! She needed to behave like it. The look on her face told me she’d got the message on both counts.
She promised that if she saw him again, she would tell him. I did say he was a nice boy and I liked him so let him down gently. Don’t hurt his ego. She agreed with this too.
The next day, the morning after the sex party with Riya, we were woken up by some noise next to us and discovered Riya was with her second man, my friend Payam. It hadn't worked out the evening before but now a more refreshed Payam was more than making up for his lack of performance the night before. Riya was getting a real good fucking and looked to be loving it too.
Both our women became quite excited by this, turning their fuck onto a spectator sport, watching them closely and even playing a bit too. Soon our wives turned their attention on us. Kalki wanted me and Sairu took her husband Payam almost as soon as he finished with Riya.
But of this, something that happened between Kalki and me needs to be mentioned here. We have a little fantasy where we talk about Kalki meeting a complete stranger and having sex with him while I watch. It has to be a stranger and it has to be in front of me and she gets so turned on by this.
While I wasn’t entirely comfortable with the reality of this, I was comfortable enough with the fantasy. While I gave Kalki a lot of freedom within our marriage and our sex group friends, I was her husband. I've heard how some Western women become so strong-willed within the marriage, that take other lovers and force their husbands to watch.
In some ways, Kalki’s fantasy felt uncomfortably like that. And I’m telling you now, we weren’t going in that direction.
She mentioned it again during that sex session. But this time it was refined to someone she met on a beach. I put two and two together and wondered if it might be a nude beach and his name might be Andrew.
We continued fucking while she told me details of her fantasy. We were at the beach, met this man, etc. We got to the part where she was about to start fucking her and I added in, “Andrew pushed his hard cock deep inside your hot cunt."
Oh, did that hit the spot? She bucked at me, cried out and had a massive orgasm. Even I was surprised at the intensity of it. So were the other three people beside us.
“What the hell was that?” Payam asked, lifting his head from beside Sairu.
He never heard what caused it but his wife Sairu who lay closer to us heard. “It was Andrew, wasn’t it. You had a fantasy about Andrew fucking you.”
Talk about hitting the nail on the head. That was exactly what I was thinking too.
Both our women became quite excited by this, turning their fuck onto a spectator sport, watching them closely and even playing a bit too. Soon our wives turned their attention on us. Kalki wanted me and Sairu took her husband Payam almost as soon as he finished with Riya.
But of this, something that happened between Kalki and me needs to be mentioned here. We have a little fantasy where we talk about Kalki meeting a complete stranger and having sex with him while I watch. It has to be a stranger and it has to be in front of me and she gets so turned on by this.
While I wasn’t entirely comfortable with the reality of this, I was comfortable enough with the fantasy. While I gave Kalki a lot of freedom within our marriage and our sex group friends, I was her husband. I've heard how some Western women become so strong-willed within the marriage, that take other lovers and force their husbands to watch.
In some ways, Kalki’s fantasy felt uncomfortably like that. And I’m telling you now, we weren’t going in that direction.
She mentioned it again during that sex session. But this time it was refined to someone she met on a beach. I put two and two together and wondered if it might be a nude beach and his name might be Andrew.
We continued fucking while she told me details of her fantasy. We were at the beach, met this man, etc. We got to the part where she was about to start fucking her and I added in, “Andrew pushed his hard cock deep inside your hot cunt."
Oh, did that hit the spot? She bucked at me, cried out and had a massive orgasm. Even I was surprised at the intensity of it. So were the other three people beside us.
“What the hell was that?” Payam asked, lifting his head from beside Sairu.
He never heard what caused it but his wife Sairu who lay closer to us heard. “It was Andrew, wasn’t it. You had a fantasy about Andrew fucking you.”
Talk about hitting the nail on the head. That was exactly what I was thinking too.
Kalki looked embarrassed and ashamed. I had caught her out with a development where her fantasy had taken on a reality neither of us had intended. She sat looking at me for a few minutes and I didn’t know what to say.
I saw the tears well up in her eyes then she jumped off the bed and ran from the room. I went to go after her but Sairu put her and on my arm, “No, let me, Hamza,” she said. “You talk with Payam about it.”
“But she is my wife...” I tried to argue but Sairu would let me.
“No, Hamza,” she said. “Stay here with Payam. You guys need to talk this through. Then you can talk to Kalki.”
This woman seemed to be making sense so I decided to go with her suggestion.
I saw the tears well up in her eyes then she jumped off the bed and ran from the room. I went to go after her but Sairu put her and on my arm, “No, let me, Hamza,” she said. “You talk with Payam about it.”
“But she is my wife...” I tried to argue but Sairu would let me.
“No, Hamza,” she said. “Stay here with Payam. You guys need to talk this through. Then you can talk to Kalki.”
This woman seemed to be making sense so I decided to go with her suggestion.
I told Payam what was going on but I think, after what his wife had said, he had kind of figured it out. He seemed very sympathetic and understanding.
“She is young mate. Never had a boyfriend before she was married to you. I think she is just flattered by the attention.”
I nodded my head because what he said seemed to make sense.
“Also, keep in mind she is pregnant,” he continued. “You know what that does to a woman. Really screws with their minds and emotions. Mood swings, craving and stuff. This trip has been hard on her too. Put all that together, you have a rather mixed up girl.”
I was surprised at the insight of my friend. He seemed to be explaining my wife, even better than I could. Perhaps because he was further away and not clouded with emotion as I was.
“What should I do?” I asked him. “I love her and don’t want to hurt her. But this Andrew thing is unhealthy. It's eating me away.”
“Sure mate,” Payam agreed. “Bringing him into your sex life like that was overstepping the line.”
“I made it very clear down at the beach yesterday that she had to tell Andrew she was a married woman.”
“I know. Sairu told me.”
“You two talked about this?”
“Yes. Sairu came to me as she was worried about Kalki.”
“How can she have any deep feelings for him? She has only met him twice.”
“You are looking at this the wrong way mate. In Kalki’s mind, Andrew would never be considered a love interest, a rival to you. You have encouraged her to openly have sex with all of us so I think in her mind she is putting Andrew into that same category.”
“Makes sense, Payam. But Kalki must realise, Andrew is outside our group. She can’t touch him without getting both her and I banned from the group. On a trip like this too.”
“I know Hamza. Sarvesh and Shanti would be strictly against that. It would ruin your holiday too. They might even ask you both to fly home.”
“I can not face something like that. What should I do?”
“She is young mate. Never had a boyfriend before she was married to you. I think she is just flattered by the attention.”
I nodded my head because what he said seemed to make sense.
“Also, keep in mind she is pregnant,” he continued. “You know what that does to a woman. Really screws with their minds and emotions. Mood swings, craving and stuff. This trip has been hard on her too. Put all that together, you have a rather mixed up girl.”
I was surprised at the insight of my friend. He seemed to be explaining my wife, even better than I could. Perhaps because he was further away and not clouded with emotion as I was.
“What should I do?” I asked him. “I love her and don’t want to hurt her. But this Andrew thing is unhealthy. It's eating me away.”
“Sure mate,” Payam agreed. “Bringing him into your sex life like that was overstepping the line.”
“I made it very clear down at the beach yesterday that she had to tell Andrew she was a married woman.”
“I know. Sairu told me.”
“You two talked about this?”
“Yes. Sairu came to me as she was worried about Kalki.”
“How can she have any deep feelings for him? She has only met him twice.”
“You are looking at this the wrong way mate. In Kalki’s mind, Andrew would never be considered a love interest, a rival to you. You have encouraged her to openly have sex with all of us so I think in her mind she is putting Andrew into that same category.”
“Makes sense, Payam. But Kalki must realise, Andrew is outside our group. She can’t touch him without getting both her and I banned from the group. On a trip like this too.”
“I know Hamza. Sarvesh and Shanti would be strictly against that. It would ruin your holiday too. They might even ask you both to fly home.”
“I can not face something like that. What should I do?”
What I had forgotten was that young Riya was sitting listening to us talking. She shouldn’t have been in on a conversation like this but she had spent the night with the four of us and not long before, Payam had just finished fucking her.
She knew she was going beyond the boundaries of a single girl in our society but she felt she needed to speak. She was polite and respectful as she did.
“Would I be able to say something, please,” she asked.
I looked at her. What does a young girl like this know about marriage things? Until last night she didn’t even know what it was like to be with a man.
“No, Riya,” I said, putting her down rather roughly. “This is none of your business.”
She looked at me rather hurt. And the thought went through my mind, now I had pissed two women off. Doing well, wasn’t I?
“Hear what she has to say, Hamza. Riya is a woman; she might see things differently"
I thought about this for a minute. Looked at Payam, looked at Riya. “Ok, Riya. Last night, you proved you were a woman. What do you have to say?”
She smiled at me. Very pleased I had acknowledged her as a woman it seems.
“Thank you, Hamza,” she beamed. “What if you let Kalki have her fantasy with Andrew if she wants. It is only a one-off and soon we will be gone. Going on to New Zealand so she will never see him again.”
I was a bit surprised Riya would say that or even ask me to consider it. No, it was out of the question. I had to shut that idea down.
“No, she is a married woman. She can’t just go fucking any man she has just met.”
“But she did that with Fred,” Payam said. “And you’ve encouraged the idea in your fantasy sex.”
“No! This is outside of our group. I can never allow this.”
“But I don’t think Andrew has a girlfriend friend. If he has not had sex then he could be considered safe. Ask Donald and Sarvesh. They might allow a one-off,” Riya said.
The girl was almost overstepping the mark by having such an opinion of our marriage affairs.
“It is wrong, Riya. She needs to respect me, her husband and keep her marriage vows.”
“Did she keep her marriage vows when she fucked Payam last night?” Riya asked.
That was hitting hard. “Well, no, but Payam is different.”
“How is Payam different to Andrew. Kalki isn’t married to either of them.”
“No, I can’t allow this. We should not even be considering it. She is my wife and she needs to learn to behave like a wife.”
“Your marriage is not normal, Hamza. You openly fuck with other women and allow Kalki to do the same. So why is this wrong?”
“Riya you are looking at this the wrong way. You are still immature. How can you know?”
“I have seen our group ever since I can remember. Not the sexual side but I’ve seen the relationships between everyone. Andrew is no different if the leaders agree he is safe. You know the rules, two leaders need to agree. You've got them, Sarvesh and Donald.”
Wow, this young woman was not backing down from facing me. She has a strong mind and she was fighting for my wife.
When I didn't reply, she continued. “Talk to Sarvesh. See what he thinks,” Riya said. “It might make things clearer. Also, you better talk to Kalki and see what she thinks. We might be making a big thing out of nothing.”
Riya was making some good points here. I decided to follow her advice. At least to find out more about what my options were. I must also admit, during that conversation, in my mind, Riya lost her little girl and became a woman.
She knew she was going beyond the boundaries of a single girl in our society but she felt she needed to speak. She was polite and respectful as she did.
“Would I be able to say something, please,” she asked.
I looked at her. What does a young girl like this know about marriage things? Until last night she didn’t even know what it was like to be with a man.
“No, Riya,” I said, putting her down rather roughly. “This is none of your business.”
She looked at me rather hurt. And the thought went through my mind, now I had pissed two women off. Doing well, wasn’t I?
“Hear what she has to say, Hamza. Riya is a woman; she might see things differently"
I thought about this for a minute. Looked at Payam, looked at Riya. “Ok, Riya. Last night, you proved you were a woman. What do you have to say?”
She smiled at me. Very pleased I had acknowledged her as a woman it seems.
“Thank you, Hamza,” she beamed. “What if you let Kalki have her fantasy with Andrew if she wants. It is only a one-off and soon we will be gone. Going on to New Zealand so she will never see him again.”
I was a bit surprised Riya would say that or even ask me to consider it. No, it was out of the question. I had to shut that idea down.
“No, she is a married woman. She can’t just go fucking any man she has just met.”
“But she did that with Fred,” Payam said. “And you’ve encouraged the idea in your fantasy sex.”
“No! This is outside of our group. I can never allow this.”
“But I don’t think Andrew has a girlfriend friend. If he has not had sex then he could be considered safe. Ask Donald and Sarvesh. They might allow a one-off,” Riya said.
The girl was almost overstepping the mark by having such an opinion of our marriage affairs.
“It is wrong, Riya. She needs to respect me, her husband and keep her marriage vows.”
“Did she keep her marriage vows when she fucked Payam last night?” Riya asked.
That was hitting hard. “Well, no, but Payam is different.”
“How is Payam different to Andrew. Kalki isn’t married to either of them.”
“No, I can’t allow this. We should not even be considering it. She is my wife and she needs to learn to behave like a wife.”
“Your marriage is not normal, Hamza. You openly fuck with other women and allow Kalki to do the same. So why is this wrong?”
“Riya you are looking at this the wrong way. You are still immature. How can you know?”
“I have seen our group ever since I can remember. Not the sexual side but I’ve seen the relationships between everyone. Andrew is no different if the leaders agree he is safe. You know the rules, two leaders need to agree. You've got them, Sarvesh and Donald.”
Wow, this young woman was not backing down from facing me. She has a strong mind and she was fighting for my wife.
When I didn't reply, she continued. “Talk to Sarvesh. See what he thinks,” Riya said. “It might make things clearer. Also, you better talk to Kalki and see what she thinks. We might be making a big thing out of nothing.”
Riya was making some good points here. I decided to follow her advice. At least to find out more about what my options were. I must also admit, during that conversation, in my mind, Riya lost her little girl and became a woman.
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“If I allowed you to, would you?”
I found Sairu and Kalki in the kitchen, preparing breakfast. She smiled when she saw me, left what she was doing and came over to give me a hug.
“I’m sorry, Hamza,” Kalki said. “That was just a fantasy. Something for the bedroom. To be left on the bedroom.”
“I don’t think it is, Kalki. I think there is more to it than that.”
She looked at me a bit surprised and then I saw the tears ready to start.
“No tears, honey,” I said, passing her a tissue. “Let’s talk about this like adults. I am not angry at you but we need to talk.”
I noticed Riya had continued the work Kalki had been doing so I took her hand, leading her out to the deck so we could talk alone.
“I’m sorry, Hamza,” Kalki said. “That was just a fantasy. Something for the bedroom. To be left on the bedroom.”
“I don’t think it is, Kalki. I think there is more to it than that.”
She looked at me a bit surprised and then I saw the tears ready to start.
“No tears, honey,” I said, passing her a tissue. “Let’s talk about this like adults. I am not angry at you but we need to talk.”
I noticed Riya had continued the work Kalki had been doing so I took her hand, leading her out to the deck so we could talk alone.
Kalki seemed to be acting differently. She'd gone back to the old Kalki like she was when I first married her. Quiet and withdrawn into herself. Maybe a bit scared and timid. This was a concern as I had thought she and I had come so far together. I knew I had to take things carefully as I didn't want her to step back.
“Now Kalki,” I began. “You know our marriage is not normal as you would expect amongst Indians. We allow each other to enjoy others for sexual activities. This requires a deeper understanding and openness between us. An honesty, not always found between husbands and wives in India. I have encouraged you to take a more active role in the many areas of our lives outside the bedroom and you have mentioned this is not the case among many of your other friends.”
She was watching me and listening. Give a nod of her agreement as I quietly and slowly spoke. I didn't want to appear a threat to her so I was taking things as gently as I could.
“Now I require that from you,” I said. “I want you to be open and honest now and I promise not to be angry or judge anything you say. Do you understand that?”
“Yes, Hamza,” she replied, her face a bit confused as to where this was going.
“What is this about Andrew. What are your feelings for him?" I asked. I know that was very direct but I think we needed to get to the point quickly.”
“He is just friendly. A nice boy. I can’t have feelings for him, Hamza.”
“Have you thought about knowing him better? Doing more?”
She was a bit shocked at that. I saw the hesitation before she answered. “He is just a friend, Hamza.”
I felt there was more and she was holding back.
“There is more, isn’t there? Do you want to have sex with him, Kalki?”
“Hamza, it is nothing like that. I wouldn’t do that.”
“I know you wouldn’t Kalki. I trust you would never betray me. But would you like to?”
She was about to deny it again when I added, “I saw and felt that orgasm just now. Remember my cock was deep inside you when it happened. I didn’t miss how intense it was.”
She hesitated again and I waited, giving her time to gather her thoughts.
“Yes, Hamza. I can’t deny, I have thought about it. I was thinking of Andrew when we were fucking before.”
There were the tears again. I pulled a tissue from some I'd stuffed into my pocket.
“If I allowed you to, would you?”
“No, never, Hamza. It is just our fantasy. We would never be allowed by the group, even if you said yes.”
“What if I said ‘Yes,’ and our sex group said ‘Yes,’ too?”
She looked at me. It was hard to read her face, to know what was going on inside her head. There was a silence as I waited for her to reply.
After a long pause, “Maybe,” was all she said.
I would have liked her to have been more open and amitted, “Yes.” But I knew this was too much for her so I took her maybe as a yes.
“Ok, we have to get a few things sorted. We have to check with Sarvesh first. Then we have to confirm Andrew is safe and this will only ever be a one-time thing.”
She didn’t reply. Just nodded OK.
I said. “I’ll ring Sarvesh now and talk with him. We are going down to the beach this morning so Riya can get another swim before she goes back. You can talk to Andrew and bring him back here if you want.”
Kalki smiled at me, jumped forward and gave me a hug. Hand in hand, we went in to join the others for breakfast.
That seemed a little bit too keen, a little bit too excited for my liking.
“Now Kalki,” I began. “You know our marriage is not normal as you would expect amongst Indians. We allow each other to enjoy others for sexual activities. This requires a deeper understanding and openness between us. An honesty, not always found between husbands and wives in India. I have encouraged you to take a more active role in the many areas of our lives outside the bedroom and you have mentioned this is not the case among many of your other friends.”
She was watching me and listening. Give a nod of her agreement as I quietly and slowly spoke. I didn't want to appear a threat to her so I was taking things as gently as I could.
“Now I require that from you,” I said. “I want you to be open and honest now and I promise not to be angry or judge anything you say. Do you understand that?”
“Yes, Hamza,” she replied, her face a bit confused as to where this was going.
“What is this about Andrew. What are your feelings for him?" I asked. I know that was very direct but I think we needed to get to the point quickly.”
“He is just friendly. A nice boy. I can’t have feelings for him, Hamza.”
“Have you thought about knowing him better? Doing more?”
She was a bit shocked at that. I saw the hesitation before she answered. “He is just a friend, Hamza.”
I felt there was more and she was holding back.
“There is more, isn’t there? Do you want to have sex with him, Kalki?”
“Hamza, it is nothing like that. I wouldn’t do that.”
“I know you wouldn’t Kalki. I trust you would never betray me. But would you like to?”
She was about to deny it again when I added, “I saw and felt that orgasm just now. Remember my cock was deep inside you when it happened. I didn’t miss how intense it was.”
She hesitated again and I waited, giving her time to gather her thoughts.
“Yes, Hamza. I can’t deny, I have thought about it. I was thinking of Andrew when we were fucking before.”
There were the tears again. I pulled a tissue from some I'd stuffed into my pocket.
“If I allowed you to, would you?”
“No, never, Hamza. It is just our fantasy. We would never be allowed by the group, even if you said yes.”
“What if I said ‘Yes,’ and our sex group said ‘Yes,’ too?”
She looked at me. It was hard to read her face, to know what was going on inside her head. There was a silence as I waited for her to reply.
After a long pause, “Maybe,” was all she said.
I would have liked her to have been more open and amitted, “Yes.” But I knew this was too much for her so I took her maybe as a yes.
“Ok, we have to get a few things sorted. We have to check with Sarvesh first. Then we have to confirm Andrew is safe and this will only ever be a one-time thing.”
She didn’t reply. Just nodded OK.
I said. “I’ll ring Sarvesh now and talk with him. We are going down to the beach this morning so Riya can get another swim before she goes back. You can talk to Andrew and bring him back here if you want.”
Kalki smiled at me, jumped forward and gave me a hug. Hand in hand, we went in to join the others for breakfast.
That seemed a little bit too keen, a little bit too excited for my liking.
Kalki went to our room for a moment and I looked over at Riya and asked, “Would you like to go down for another swim before we take you back, Riya?”
“Yes,” she said. “I’d love that.”
As I got a full-on hug from Riya, I looked over her shoulder and saw the knowing looks from Payam and Sairu.
“Is Kalki going to…?” Riya whispered in my ear.
“I think so,” I replied back.
Then Riya showed a maturity that surprised me. “Are you really ok with that, Hamza?”
“I’m not sure, Riya.”
She gave me another hug. Closer, tighter this time showing her feeling and concern. Then she pulled away from me, holding both my hands, looked me directly in the eyes. I could see how serious she was.
“It's a big step to take, Hamza. You really must be sure,” she said.
I looked at her while I held her. She looked at me, eye to eye contact. Reading my eyes. I was becoming more and more impressed by Riya's maturity.
At that moment, Kalki had come back into the room and saw that conversation between Riya and me but had not heard what Riya had told me. Kalki gave me a strange look like, ‘What’s going on?’ but didn’t say anything. I could have told her what a friend Riya had been to her but I didn't.
“Yes,” she said. “I’d love that.”
As I got a full-on hug from Riya, I looked over her shoulder and saw the knowing looks from Payam and Sairu.
“Is Kalki going to…?” Riya whispered in my ear.
“I think so,” I replied back.
Then Riya showed a maturity that surprised me. “Are you really ok with that, Hamza?”
“I’m not sure, Riya.”
She gave me another hug. Closer, tighter this time showing her feeling and concern. Then she pulled away from me, holding both my hands, looked me directly in the eyes. I could see how serious she was.
“It's a big step to take, Hamza. You really must be sure,” she said.
I looked at her while I held her. She looked at me, eye to eye contact. Reading my eyes. I was becoming more and more impressed by Riya's maturity.
At that moment, Kalki had come back into the room and saw that conversation between Riya and me but had not heard what Riya had told me. Kalki gave me a strange look like, ‘What’s going on?’ but didn’t say anything. I could have told her what a friend Riya had been to her but I didn't.
After breakfast, I gave Sarvesh a ring. I explained to him what was going on and what I was proposing. He seemed sympathetic to the idea but concerned that both Kalki and I were OK. He also wanted us to confirm and Andrew was safe. Finally, he reminded me of Shanti's rules and he would need to confirm with Donald.
A while later, Payam got a text from Donald, saying this Andrew thing was Ok with them.
Payam showed us the text and Kalki smiled. Suddenly she must have thought, her little fantasy might, in fact, come true.
A while later, Payam got a text from Donald, saying this Andrew thing was Ok with them.
Payam showed us the text and Kalki smiled. Suddenly she must have thought, her little fantasy might, in fact, come true.
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Bringing Andrew Back.
Later in the morning, we went down for a swim. Riya was excited to be swimming in the ocean again and she skipped along beside me. There was little girl Riya again.
We had hardly been there a few minutes and guess who came strolling up. He must have been stalking the place. Andrew was walking towards us with a great grin on his face.
“Hi, Andrew,” my wife said as he approached.
“Hi, Kalki,” he said in return. If that smile could get any bigger, it just did.
“Hello, Andrew,” Riya said, giving him a big friendly smile.
“Hi,” Andrew replied, not even saying her name as he walked past her to sit with Kalki. I saw the cheeky grin Riya gave me, showing she was amused by what had happened. A bit of stirring there too. Bad girl, Riya.
The way his full attention was on her, I began to wonder if the rest of us really were on that beach.
Payam saw what was going on and suggested a swim. The three of us started down the beach and I saw Kalki drop behind us with Andrew. They were back with us by the time we reached the water.
Straight after our swim, Sairu played her prearranged role by asking if she could go back to the house. Of course, Payam and Riya went with her and I told them we would follow in a few minutes. Kalki seemed a bit surprised as her friend left. Probably wondering what was going on. But soon her attention turned back to Andrew and I was feeling a bit left out.
Not long after that, Kalki asked Andrew if he wanted to come back with us for the lunch which I knew Sairu and Riya were rushing to prepare. Of course, I hardly need to tell you he jumped at the chance to join us. Sorry, I mean to join her.
We had hardly been there a few minutes and guess who came strolling up. He must have been stalking the place. Andrew was walking towards us with a great grin on his face.
“Hi, Andrew,” my wife said as he approached.
“Hi, Kalki,” he said in return. If that smile could get any bigger, it just did.
“Hello, Andrew,” Riya said, giving him a big friendly smile.
“Hi,” Andrew replied, not even saying her name as he walked past her to sit with Kalki. I saw the cheeky grin Riya gave me, showing she was amused by what had happened. A bit of stirring there too. Bad girl, Riya.
The way his full attention was on her, I began to wonder if the rest of us really were on that beach.
Payam saw what was going on and suggested a swim. The three of us started down the beach and I saw Kalki drop behind us with Andrew. They were back with us by the time we reached the water.
Straight after our swim, Sairu played her prearranged role by asking if she could go back to the house. Of course, Payam and Riya went with her and I told them we would follow in a few minutes. Kalki seemed a bit surprised as her friend left. Probably wondering what was going on. But soon her attention turned back to Andrew and I was feeling a bit left out.
Not long after that, Kalki asked Andrew if he wanted to come back with us for the lunch which I knew Sairu and Riya were rushing to prepare. Of course, I hardly need to tell you he jumped at the chance to join us. Sorry, I mean to join her.
So now, everything was ready. Cougar Kalki had her victim. The honey trap was set. The fish had taken the bait and all we needed to do was reel him in.
But one little check was needed first.
“Do you have a girlfriend, Andrew?” I asked.
Talk about questions to kill a guy’s sex drive.
“No, not at the moment.”
“I would have thought a handsome guy like you would have the women running after you.”
Kalki gave me a frown but Andrew was prepared to answer the question.
“I never had much luck with girls. Never really had a girlfriend,” Andrew said.
I was watching Kalki. I could see the motherly look on her face. Talk about a reverse pick-up line. She was feeling so sorry for him. I thought at any moment she would reach out and hug him. He was in with more than a chance now. It was a dead cert he would get lucky with her, that is if he got past me.
But I had one more question to ask although I pretty much knew what the answer be.
“Then you’ve never been with a woman? Are you a virgin?”
He seemed to accept the question, but my wife didn’t. It was amusing seeing her sticking up for him.
“Hamza, you can’t ask that! It is not our business.”
“Honey, if you two are going to do what I think you are, then it is my business. I need to know you will be safe.”
Notice I used the words 'my business,' not the words 'our business. Kalki shut up but obviously, she was uncomfortable with this line of questioning. Don’t know why. How was she going to get the information that Sarvesh required us to get?
On the other hand, Andrew was reading between the lines and suddenly realised he might be going to get lucky and with my blessings too. He was prepared to answer truthfully and honestly which went down well with me.
“I’ve never tried with a woman. Only kissed a couple and touched some breasts.”
Now I was the one a bit surprised. I think Kalki was too. I’ve always thought these Western boys would have it sorted by his age. But then I did catch his nervousness with women that sort of confirmed his lack of sexual experience.
But one little check was needed first.
“Do you have a girlfriend, Andrew?” I asked.
Talk about questions to kill a guy’s sex drive.
“No, not at the moment.”
“I would have thought a handsome guy like you would have the women running after you.”
Kalki gave me a frown but Andrew was prepared to answer the question.
“I never had much luck with girls. Never really had a girlfriend,” Andrew said.
I was watching Kalki. I could see the motherly look on her face. Talk about a reverse pick-up line. She was feeling so sorry for him. I thought at any moment she would reach out and hug him. He was in with more than a chance now. It was a dead cert he would get lucky with her, that is if he got past me.
But I had one more question to ask although I pretty much knew what the answer be.
“Then you’ve never been with a woman? Are you a virgin?”
He seemed to accept the question, but my wife didn’t. It was amusing seeing her sticking up for him.
“Hamza, you can’t ask that! It is not our business.”
“Honey, if you two are going to do what I think you are, then it is my business. I need to know you will be safe.”
Notice I used the words 'my business,' not the words 'our business. Kalki shut up but obviously, she was uncomfortable with this line of questioning. Don’t know why. How was she going to get the information that Sarvesh required us to get?
On the other hand, Andrew was reading between the lines and suddenly realised he might be going to get lucky and with my blessings too. He was prepared to answer truthfully and honestly which went down well with me.
“I’ve never tried with a woman. Only kissed a couple and touched some breasts.”
Now I was the one a bit surprised. I think Kalki was too. I’ve always thought these Western boys would have it sorted by his age. But then I did catch his nervousness with women that sort of confirmed his lack of sexual experience.
Soon after that, we got up to leave.
On the way up, I asked Kalki to go on while I talked to Andrew. I saw that look on her face. ‘Don’t you dare blow this for me!’
“Andrew, have you heard about fantasies people sometimes have when they are having sex?” I asked him.
“Only read about it in magazines,” he replied.
“Well, Kalki has one we use quite often. She wants to have sex with another man.”
“Is that why she is interested in me?”
This guy was on to it. Looking for why a married woman was interested in him, in front of her husband.
“Yes, she wants you to help her fulfil her fantasy.”
“Oh!” he said a bit surprised.
“Now there are two conditions, not from me, from her fantasy. First, it must be a man she doesn’t know but feels safe with. Secondly, I have to be there watching her fucking.”
“You’ll be there?”
“Yeah, don’t really have much choice. It’s part of her fantasy. Always there.”
“I wasn’t expecting that.”
“Look, Andrew. It’s part of the deal, not that I like it so much. So if I have to do it, you can too. I’ll help you where I can too if you like.”
“You mean to give advice and stuff.”
“Yeah. Like advice. I’m not holding it as you put it in,” I laughed. “That’s a bit too close.”
He laughed and held out his hand to me. We shook hands and then I pulled him to me for a man hug.
“Have fun fucking my wife,” I told him.
“I hope I will.”
“Hope? What is this hope? I know you will. She is great in bed.”
I thought this changing my role of helping him, in some way like a tutor would be helpful for me too. Now subtly, it was me calling the shots. It might also help some girl in the future who becomes interested in Andrew.
On the way up, I asked Kalki to go on while I talked to Andrew. I saw that look on her face. ‘Don’t you dare blow this for me!’
“Andrew, have you heard about fantasies people sometimes have when they are having sex?” I asked him.
“Only read about it in magazines,” he replied.
“Well, Kalki has one we use quite often. She wants to have sex with another man.”
“Is that why she is interested in me?”
This guy was on to it. Looking for why a married woman was interested in him, in front of her husband.
“Yes, she wants you to help her fulfil her fantasy.”
“Oh!” he said a bit surprised.
“Now there are two conditions, not from me, from her fantasy. First, it must be a man she doesn’t know but feels safe with. Secondly, I have to be there watching her fucking.”
“You’ll be there?”
“Yeah, don’t really have much choice. It’s part of her fantasy. Always there.”
“I wasn’t expecting that.”
“Look, Andrew. It’s part of the deal, not that I like it so much. So if I have to do it, you can too. I’ll help you where I can too if you like.”
“You mean to give advice and stuff.”
“Yeah. Like advice. I’m not holding it as you put it in,” I laughed. “That’s a bit too close.”
He laughed and held out his hand to me. We shook hands and then I pulled him to me for a man hug.
“Have fun fucking my wife,” I told him.
“I hope I will.”
“Hope? What is this hope? I know you will. She is great in bed.”
I thought this changing my role of helping him, in some way like a tutor would be helpful for me too. Now subtly, it was me calling the shots. It might also help some girl in the future who becomes interested in Andrew.
As we turned to continue walking, I looked up to see Kalki had stopped some distance in front of us and was watching. She must have seen what happened.
“What was that all about?” she asked.
“Just man talk. Nothing for you to worry about,” I said.
“Bullshit!” she said as she turned to walk ahead of us.
I started laughing. Then Andrew was too.
She turned back but that made us laugh even more. So, she walked on again. Leaving us behind as she did. I had the chance to talk with Andrew, find out other things about him. I also told him about Kalki and me in India.
By the time we reached the house, it was clear the others knew it was game on. For my part, it was a nice walk and I knew Andrew a lot more which made me more comfortable with want was happening. It was probably I knew more about him than Kalki did.
“What was that all about?” she asked.
“Just man talk. Nothing for you to worry about,” I said.
“Bullshit!” she said as she turned to walk ahead of us.
I started laughing. Then Andrew was too.
She turned back but that made us laugh even more. So, she walked on again. Leaving us behind as she did. I had the chance to talk with Andrew, find out other things about him. I also told him about Kalki and me in India.
By the time we reached the house, it was clear the others knew it was game on. For my part, it was a nice walk and I knew Andrew a lot more which made me more comfortable with want was happening. It was probably I knew more about him than Kalki did.
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Spit Roast Riya For Lunch.
It suddenly hit me that this was serious now. Kalki and I were walking on thin ice.
I poured a drink for everyone; I was sure most of us needed one. I certainly did. I’m not sure why but there was tension in the air. It was almost like, for the first time in our marriage, my wife was cheating on me and she intended doing it right in front of me. What was bothering me? Was it her fucking this young man. She had fucked other men and I'd not been bothered. Was it she insisted that I watched? Yes, that part did bother me a bit. I didn't know why because I'd watched her fucking other men too. Something was wrong with this.
I poured a drink for everyone; I was sure most of us needed one. I certainly did. I’m not sure why but there was tension in the air. It was almost like, for the first time in our marriage, my wife was cheating on me and she intended doing it right in front of me. What was bothering me? Was it her fucking this young man. She had fucked other men and I'd not been bothered. Was it she insisted that I watched? Yes, that part did bother me a bit. I didn't know why because I'd watched her fucking other men too. Something was wrong with this.
I looked at Kalki.
Kalki picked up on Hamza's mood now and doubts crept into her mind. Her husband had said he was Ok with it but now she could see that he wasn’t. She wasn’t sure what to do. She wasn’t sure what he would do. She considered sending Andrew away, knowing he would likely be offended or even insulted. She was willing to do that if it would save their marriage. But she couldn't understand why Hamza had said yes when now he appeared to be saying no!
I looked at Andrew.
Andrew was nervous. Concerned about the sudden cloud that hung over the room. It had been nice talking to this beautiful Indian woman. She seemed friendly and more than any woman he knew she wanted to talk to him. He developed feelings for her and he hoped she did for him. But there was her husband. Now that was another problem.
It had been a relief when this man had suggested he could fuck his beautiful wife. They seemed friendly walking up the road then suddenly at the house, the mood had changed. Andrew felt ready to run. He wanted to but he couldn’t.
It had been a relief when this man had suggested he could fuck his beautiful wife. They seemed friendly walking up the road then suddenly at the house, the mood had changed. Andrew felt ready to run. He wanted to but he couldn’t.
I looked at Sairu.
I wasn't sure what was going on. Suddenly my friend Kalki and her husband Hamza seemed strange with each other. Was if anger? I couldn't be sure. The other people in the room silently sipped on their drinks. They seemed to know things weren’t right. This whole thing wasn’t right. No one knew what to say or do.
My voice was quiet as I said, “Kalki, you brought Andrew here for something, get on and do it.”
“But, Hamza,” she began. “I don’t think...”
“It’s ok, Kalki. Go on and do it. Have fun but I don’t think I’ll be watching.”
“Hamza, we agreed. That was part of the plan.”
“But, I can’t Kalki. Don’t ask me too.”
She sat silently looking at me. To her, it seemed no big deal. Why?
Payam said, “What if you were here but busy doing something, or someone?”
“What? I don’t understand.”
Payam grinned. “I feel hungry. Perhaps some spit roasting before lunch.”
I got what he meant and began to like the idea. “Chicken or mutton?” I asked with a smile.
“Spit Roast Riya,” Payam replied.
“Now that’s a good idea. Keep us distracted while the girls take care of Andrew?”
I noticed Payam said 'girls.' So he was Ok with his wife getting involved in this Andrew thing too. In some ways that made it better for me too if both girls were with him. I knew Andrew was going to enjoy them.
“Exactly!” I replied looking at a very confused Riya.
“What is spit-roasting?” the girl beside me asked. She’d heard her name was used and was confused.
“A hard pin in the front and another hard pin in the back with meat in between,” I told her.
“You mean me, Hamza? I’m not just meat you know. I'm a woman.”
“Really? When did that happen?”
She pulled a face and poked her tongue out at me.
“Never said you were meat, Riya,” I explained. “That’s just the name for this position. Two men at once.”
“Two men? One in my mouth. I am sucking,” Riya said trying to work this out. “And the other behind – No, I’m not doing it in my bum!”
“We don’t mean that, honey. In your pussy.” Payam said.
“Oh, that is different. Two men? Will it be fun for me too?”
“I’m sure it will, Riya,” Payam said. “We will make sure it is, honey.”
“Oh,” she agreed. “But you must show me.”
“Swapping ends?” Payam asked me.
“Of course,” I replied.
I was already distracted by this and feeling much better about what Kalki would be doing.
“But, Hamza,” she began. “I don’t think...”
“It’s ok, Kalki. Go on and do it. Have fun but I don’t think I’ll be watching.”
“Hamza, we agreed. That was part of the plan.”
“But, I can’t Kalki. Don’t ask me too.”
She sat silently looking at me. To her, it seemed no big deal. Why?
Payam said, “What if you were here but busy doing something, or someone?”
“What? I don’t understand.”
Payam grinned. “I feel hungry. Perhaps some spit roasting before lunch.”
I got what he meant and began to like the idea. “Chicken or mutton?” I asked with a smile.
“Spit Roast Riya,” Payam replied.
“Now that’s a good idea. Keep us distracted while the girls take care of Andrew?”
I noticed Payam said 'girls.' So he was Ok with his wife getting involved in this Andrew thing too. In some ways that made it better for me too if both girls were with him. I knew Andrew was going to enjoy them.
“Exactly!” I replied looking at a very confused Riya.
“What is spit-roasting?” the girl beside me asked. She’d heard her name was used and was confused.
“A hard pin in the front and another hard pin in the back with meat in between,” I told her.
“You mean me, Hamza? I’m not just meat you know. I'm a woman.”
“Really? When did that happen?”
She pulled a face and poked her tongue out at me.
“Never said you were meat, Riya,” I explained. “That’s just the name for this position. Two men at once.”
“Two men? One in my mouth. I am sucking,” Riya said trying to work this out. “And the other behind – No, I’m not doing it in my bum!”
“We don’t mean that, honey. In your pussy.” Payam said.
“Oh, that is different. Two men? Will it be fun for me too?”
“I’m sure it will, Riya,” Payam said. “We will make sure it is, honey.”
“Oh,” she agreed. “But you must show me.”
“Swapping ends?” Payam asked me.
“Of course,” I replied.
I was already distracted by this and feeling much better about what Kalki would be doing.
I grabbed Riya roughly, pulling her in closer and kissed her smack on the lips. She hesitated at first and then began to respond. Payam got up and approached us from behind Riya, his body coming against her back as his hands reached between us for her tits. he was quite rough too, squeezing and pulling on them.
She had pulled back from my face with the surprise of him arriving. I took the opportunity of saying something thing to them.
“Thanks a lot, for helping me with this guys.”
Payam nodded, “Sure mate!”
Riya looked up at me, still a bit confused. I’m sure she didn’t understand the full impact of what was going on here.
“Just go with it, Riya. Things will be ok,” I smiled down at her. “You are doing me a big favour here and get to experience some new sex at the same time.”
She smiled at that. New sex. So eager to learn, this one. And I was enjoying being her teacher.
She had pulled back from my face with the surprise of him arriving. I took the opportunity of saying something thing to them.
“Thanks a lot, for helping me with this guys.”
Payam nodded, “Sure mate!”
Riya looked up at me, still a bit confused. I’m sure she didn’t understand the full impact of what was going on here.
“Just go with it, Riya. Things will be ok,” I smiled down at her. “You are doing me a big favour here and get to experience some new sex at the same time.”
She smiled at that. New sex. So eager to learn, this one. And I was enjoying being her teacher.
I pulled back from her and began undoing her blouse. Payam took it and slipped it from her shoulders.
“My shirt now,” I told her.
Her hands came up to my shirt and began undoing the buttons. Meanwhile, Payam was behind her again, playing with and fondling her tits through her bikini top.
My shirt was cast aside and so was Payam’s shirt. Then her bikini top was gone too. Getting those great tits out to play.
"Way to go Payam!" I laughed.
“My shirt now,” I told her.
Her hands came up to my shirt and began undoing the buttons. Meanwhile, Payam was behind her again, playing with and fondling her tits through her bikini top.
My shirt was cast aside and so was Payam’s shirt. Then her bikini top was gone too. Getting those great tits out to play.
"Way to go Payam!" I laughed.
I looked across at the other three and they were sitting on the couch watching us, a girl on each side of him. And my wife didn't look that happy either. What the fuck? That wasn’t in the plan either, her bringing a friend to watch me fuck. LOL.
“It might work better if you all get naked,” I said to them.
They looked at each other, and then sprang into action. Soon, they were doing like we were steadily stripping each other.
I don’t know what Payam thought in me involving his wife in this thing with Andrew but neither of them refused so I assume it was Ok. Like I said before, maybe he was fine with it.
“It might work better if you all get naked,” I said to them.
They looked at each other, and then sprang into action. Soon, they were doing like we were steadily stripping each other.
I don’t know what Payam thought in me involving his wife in this thing with Andrew but neither of them refused so I assume it was Ok. Like I said before, maybe he was fine with it.
But I returned to what Payam and I were doing with Riya. She had my shorts off next, undoing the zipper and catch and pulling them down. It was then she discovered I was wearing nothing underneath. Her hand came up to my cock who was beginning to wake up and take an interest in his surroundings. Riya gave him a little squeeze, saying more to him than me, “I’ll get back to you soon.”
Once Riya had us both naked, we were quick to finish off her.
She pulled us closer together and reached a hand going to each cock. I was proud of how she was giving us a double hand job. I looked over at Payam and he smiled, nodding his head. Seems he was impressed with her too.
Riya had progressed things to sucking us now. She was kneeling between us. Having just come from the beach she was enjoying a meal of salted cock, switching backwards and forwards between us. Well, done, girl. Way to go.
Once Riya had us both naked, we were quick to finish off her.
She pulled us closer together and reached a hand going to each cock. I was proud of how she was giving us a double hand job. I looked over at Payam and he smiled, nodding his head. Seems he was impressed with her too.
Riya had progressed things to sucking us now. She was kneeling between us. Having just come from the beach she was enjoying a meal of salted cock, switching backwards and forwards between us. Well, done, girl. Way to go.
I didn’t want to carry on too long with this as we needed to get her ready too. This position has the tendency to get a bit intense for the girl and I didn’t want her to get hurt. After all this time yesterday, she was still a virgin.
I got Riya to lay back on the floor, then while Payam was giving her tits some treatment with his mouth, I went down on her pussy. After a few licks over her lips, I had her pulled open, going in to really eat her out.
Before long, she was responding, humping at me and moaning from time to time. soon she was really juiced up. This was going great. It looked like I could quickly get her off and then I intended getting Payam to do it too.
Suddenly she was there. Not a big one by the looks but nothing like a nice little orgasm to get us all in the mood. She gave a moan, bucked up against me as she cum.
Before she knew what was going on, Payam and I had swapped. I went in for her tits while he was eating her pussy.
I got Riya to lay back on the floor, then while Payam was giving her tits some treatment with his mouth, I went down on her pussy. After a few licks over her lips, I had her pulled open, going in to really eat her out.
Before long, she was responding, humping at me and moaning from time to time. soon she was really juiced up. This was going great. It looked like I could quickly get her off and then I intended getting Payam to do it too.
Suddenly she was there. Not a big one by the looks but nothing like a nice little orgasm to get us all in the mood. She gave a moan, bucked up against me as she cum.
Before she knew what was going on, Payam and I had swapped. I went in for her tits while he was eating her pussy.
I looked over and saw the girls had got him naked and were naked themselves. They were with us into the oral games now. Andrew was eating Kalki’s pussy while Sairu was sucking him off.
Seems things were going pretty well there. I was mildly surprised how involved Sairu was getting into this. It had quickly progressed to a threesome.
Seems things were going pretty well there. I was mildly surprised how involved Sairu was getting into this. It had quickly progressed to a threesome.
Back on our side of the room, Payam had just got Riya off for her second orgasm. I must confess becoming a bit distracted and letting the team down as far as her tits were concerned.
I considered us each fucking Riya first but after having had a cum from each of us I felt she was ready for the main event. We got her down on the floor on her hands and knees as Payam presented his cock to her mouth. She seemed happy to take him, opening her mouth to take a good amount of him inside.
I was behind Riya, admiring her sexy arse. I ran my hands over her cheeks then run my fingers down the split between. There was her little bum hole. I dropped some spit onto her and rubbed it around her little hole. I think she liked that as she gave a hump, back at me.
For a moment I wondered if she might be willing to try a cock in there sometime but today was not the day for that. My wife likes cock in her ass. She will often cum to when I do it which I understand is rather unusual. But Riya had lots of other stuff to do first.
I reached lower a found a very juiced-up pussy. Riya was ready for cock so I decided to give her mine. She felt as my cock head pressed against her lips. They opened for me and I pressed in deeper. Before long, I had set up a steady stroke which I knew affected her and passing through to Payam as well.
I considered us each fucking Riya first but after having had a cum from each of us I felt she was ready for the main event. We got her down on the floor on her hands and knees as Payam presented his cock to her mouth. She seemed happy to take him, opening her mouth to take a good amount of him inside.
I was behind Riya, admiring her sexy arse. I ran my hands over her cheeks then run my fingers down the split between. There was her little bum hole. I dropped some spit onto her and rubbed it around her little hole. I think she liked that as she gave a hump, back at me.
For a moment I wondered if she might be willing to try a cock in there sometime but today was not the day for that. My wife likes cock in her ass. She will often cum to when I do it which I understand is rather unusual. But Riya had lots of other stuff to do first.
I reached lower a found a very juiced-up pussy. Riya was ready for cock so I decided to give her mine. She felt as my cock head pressed against her lips. They opened for me and I pressed in deeper. Before long, I had set up a steady stroke which I knew affected her and passing through to Payam as well.
At this time, I remembered the other three so looked over to see what was going on.
I was watching as Kalki sat back, her hands taking Andrew’s cock and guiding it to her pussy. Sairu was beside them watching everything. Kalki rubbed his cock head along her lips through the juice of her pussy. I knew her purpose here was to get him wet before entry.
This was it. She was going to take him inside, fuck him now. From where I was standing with my cock buried in Riya’s pussy, I had a clear view as Andrew’s cock head disappeared into my wife.
Suddenly, she pushed him back as she cried out. She had let go of his cock and I could see his cum flying, all over her pussy, all over her stomach. He was cumming before she could even get him inside.
Opps! Oh, dear! That wasn’t a crowd-pleaser.
“Well, that is...” I saw the way Sairu glared at me, I got the look, you know, the one that said, ‘Don’t you dare say anything.’
I was watching as Kalki sat back, her hands taking Andrew’s cock and guiding it to her pussy. Sairu was beside them watching everything. Kalki rubbed his cock head along her lips through the juice of her pussy. I knew her purpose here was to get him wet before entry.
This was it. She was going to take him inside, fuck him now. From where I was standing with my cock buried in Riya’s pussy, I had a clear view as Andrew’s cock head disappeared into my wife.
Suddenly, she pushed him back as she cried out. She had let go of his cock and I could see his cum flying, all over her pussy, all over her stomach. He was cumming before she could even get him inside.
Opps! Oh, dear! That wasn’t a crowd-pleaser.
“Well, that is...” I saw the way Sairu glared at me, I got the look, you know, the one that said, ‘Don’t you dare say anything.’
Now the three of them were just looking down in shock at the mess all over Kalki.
“Kalki,” I said. “Look at the mess you made now.”
“But Hamza, I...”
“I saw what happened. You made a total mess of it, Kalki.”
“It wasn’t me, Hamza.”
“Yes, it was. You are so hot and sexy. What man has a chance against that?”
She was looking at me. A bit shocked that I was blaming her.
“You owe Andrew more than that. You better fix that mess you made.”
“What?” the totally confused woman asked.
I was struggling to keep a straight face now.
“Both of you. Fix the mess, get him hard and then do it properly this time. He deserves more than that.”
Suddenly, I saw a flash of understanding on both girls as they set about getting Andrew hard again. With a young guy like that, I knew it wouldn’t take them long. They were both smart girls, skilled in bed. I just hoped I had headed off his shame in cumming too soon or otherwise it would be lots of fun for us and no fun for them. It could also be a downer next time he had sex with a woman. That is the last thing a shy guy like that needed. I hoped I had helped his confidence.
“Kalki,” I said. “Look at the mess you made now.”
“But Hamza, I...”
“I saw what happened. You made a total mess of it, Kalki.”
“It wasn’t me, Hamza.”
“Yes, it was. You are so hot and sexy. What man has a chance against that?”
She was looking at me. A bit shocked that I was blaming her.
“You owe Andrew more than that. You better fix that mess you made.”
“What?” the totally confused woman asked.
I was struggling to keep a straight face now.
“Both of you. Fix the mess, get him hard and then do it properly this time. He deserves more than that.”
Suddenly, I saw a flash of understanding on both girls as they set about getting Andrew hard again. With a young guy like that, I knew it wouldn’t take them long. They were both smart girls, skilled in bed. I just hoped I had headed off his shame in cumming too soon or otherwise it would be lots of fun for us and no fun for them. It could also be a downer next time he had sex with a woman. That is the last thing a shy guy like that needed. I hoped I had helped his confidence.
Meanwhile, I returned to what was happening on my side of the room. While fucking Riya, I had been reaching underneath to rub at her pussy. That must have felt good because quickly I got a response. Her body bucked against me as she gave a massive shudder. I knew that was another cum for her. What was that? Three I think.
I looked up at Payam and he smiled. He knew what had just happened too. I reached out with my hand and somewhere over Riya’s back, our hands slapped together.
“Yes!” he said.
“Time to swap,” I asked?
“Sure mate.”
I pulled out of Riya’s cunt and moved around to her head. Payam pulled out of her mouth and before she knew it, my cock was pushing in. She tasted at me and tried to resist, I held her head there. She didn't have much choice.
“It’s just your own juice. You’ve got this girl,” I said.
She settled down and took me in her mouth.
So we continued, with my cock in Riya’s mouth and Payam fucking her cunt. She felt good on my cock and with Payam thrusting from behind it was feeling even better.
I looked up at Payam and he smiled. He knew what had just happened too. I reached out with my hand and somewhere over Riya’s back, our hands slapped together.
“Yes!” he said.
“Time to swap,” I asked?
“Sure mate.”
I pulled out of Riya’s cunt and moved around to her head. Payam pulled out of her mouth and before she knew it, my cock was pushing in. She tasted at me and tried to resist, I held her head there. She didn't have much choice.
“It’s just your own juice. You’ve got this girl,” I said.
She settled down and took me in her mouth.
So we continued, with my cock in Riya’s mouth and Payam fucking her cunt. She felt good on my cock and with Payam thrusting from behind it was feeling even better.
A glance across the room saw Andrew on top of my wife fucking her now. So they must have got him hard again. Seemed to be going well.
Payam was giving Riya a good fucking so I felt sure he would get there soon. I’d seen he had been tickling her bum hole and reaching down for her clitty.
We both felt the jerk of her body as she cum again. She almost choked and I had to pull out from her mouth for a few moments to give her some air.
Payam and I slapped hands, celebrating we had got Riya off again. “Number four,” I said.
We both felt the jerk of her body as she cum again. She almost choked and I had to pull out from her mouth for a few moments to give her some air.
Payam and I slapped hands, celebrating we had got Riya off again. “Number four,” I said.
On the other side, the position had changed. Andrew and Kalki were still fucking but now she was riding him. For a moment I wondered what the cum score was over there but I’d been too distracted to keep count. I bet Riya was doing far better.
Now my cock was beginning to get there and by the look on his face, Payam was close too.
What should I do? Cum in her mouth or pull out to cum? She didn’t want it on her face last night but that was the only part available to me now. Stuff it! That was what she was going to get.
But Payam beat me and I watch his cock erupt shooting his load over her back and arse. Looking good from where I was. I considered going back to her cunt to finish but it was too late now. I was about to go off.
I pulled out of Riya’s mouth, my first load hitting her from her nose down onto her chin.
“Hamza, not on my...”
My second shot mostly hitting the hand she held in front of her face. The next two landed in her hair, as she had bent her head down and the last catching her chin and neck as she looked up again.
I was expecting a look of horror or anger and even a protest but she was smiling, then laughing.
“That was so cool!” she grinned at me.
She actually liked it!
What should I do? Cum in her mouth or pull out to cum? She didn’t want it on her face last night but that was the only part available to me now. Stuff it! That was what she was going to get.
But Payam beat me and I watch his cock erupt shooting his load over her back and arse. Looking good from where I was. I considered going back to her cunt to finish but it was too late now. I was about to go off.
I pulled out of Riya’s mouth, my first load hitting her from her nose down onto her chin.
“Hamza, not on my...”
My second shot mostly hitting the hand she held in front of her face. The next two landed in her hair, as she had bent her head down and the last catching her chin and neck as she looked up again.
I was expecting a look of horror or anger and even a protest but she was smiling, then laughing.
“That was so cool!” she grinned at me.
She actually liked it!
I looked across the room to see Sairu on top of Andrew now. I had a feeling she’d line up for her turn. It was funny how wife and husband were doing the same cowgirl position at the same time but with two different people.
At that moment, she looked up and our eyes met. “Are you allowed to do that? I asked her.
“Of course. You told me to help Kalki.”
I laughed at that. “But I'm not your husband.”
“Look at him,” Sairu said. “He's too busy to care about what I'm doing.”
I noticed for a moment, that exchange had Kalki smiling too.
And he was busy too. Riya had him on his back on the floor and she was riding him. She makes a great little cowgirl. And had been rather agressive as she had pushed him back on the floor and jumped on top of him like that.
At that moment, she looked up and our eyes met. “Are you allowed to do that? I asked her.
“Of course. You told me to help Kalki.”
I laughed at that. “But I'm not your husband.”
“Look at him,” Sairu said. “He's too busy to care about what I'm doing.”
I noticed for a moment, that exchange had Kalki smiling too.
And he was busy too. Riya had him on his back on the floor and she was riding him. She makes a great little cowgirl. And had been rather agressive as she had pushed him back on the floor and jumped on top of him like that.
And had been rather agressive as she had pushed him back on the floor and jumped on top of him like that.
It hadn't long before Riya was in this next sex session. She had him on his back, a bit shocked at how this young woman was riding him so aggressively. It seemed like she could not get enough of us. Seems we had released the wild Riya. The tiger inside her.
His hands were up, playing and pulling on her nipples. It looked good because soon her eyes were closed and she was moaning. Moments later she cum.(Number five if anyone is counting.)
That was when Payam took the opportunity to roll her. Pushing up from below before she knew what had happened, she was on her back and he was on top of her. Soon he was plunging into her and they were going for it, using his short sharp strokes to get them both off.
I wondered about her. He was really giving her a pounding but she seemed to be taking it Ok. Even helping by humping back at him. Perhaps the fact she was so juiced-up was saving her from getting hurt. Yet another cum for her quickly followed by Payam cumming again too.
Payam rolled off her looking a bit stuffed actually.
It hadn't long before Riya was in this next sex session. She had him on his back, a bit shocked at how this young woman was riding him so aggressively. It seemed like she could not get enough of us. Seems we had released the wild Riya. The tiger inside her.
His hands were up, playing and pulling on her nipples. It looked good because soon her eyes were closed and she was moaning. Moments later she cum.(Number five if anyone is counting.)
That was when Payam took the opportunity to roll her. Pushing up from below before she knew what had happened, she was on her back and he was on top of her. Soon he was plunging into her and they were going for it, using his short sharp strokes to get them both off.
I wondered about her. He was really giving her a pounding but she seemed to be taking it Ok. Even helping by humping back at him. Perhaps the fact she was so juiced-up was saving her from getting hurt. Yet another cum for her quickly followed by Payam cumming again too.
Payam rolled off her looking a bit stuffed actually.
Yes, I said ‘us’ above because as soon as Riya had finished with Payam, she wanted me again to. I was on top and it turned into quite a session for her. I didn't hold back either, pounding my cock down at her with everything I had. It was hard, fast fucking and she was loving it. Humping around beneath me, moaning and whimpering until it happened, her first orgasm hit. She cried out and stopped moving as her back arched pushing her body up at me. But I continued, fucking my way through it until she came back to me, humping at me, helping as best she could.
I kept at it. Pounding into her with hard, aggressive strokes. I was giving her all I good and she seemed to be taking it well and loving it too. Soon she was building again. I could see the intensity of her body, her moaning going up a pitch. She was going for yet another climax.
She gave a gasp, a deeper moan that became a cry and she was into her second orgasm if anything bigger than the first. It was quickly followed by another equally as good and that was it for me. I was finished as I cum yet again, filling that tight pussy with another load of man-juice.
Those two orgasms right before I finished was what finished her off too. She was laying there, her head against a pillow as she looked up at us. Or was she looking at us? Was she actually looking at anything? Whatever she certainly looked well fucked. How many cums was that? Eight or nine?
I kept at it. Pounding into her with hard, aggressive strokes. I was giving her all I good and she seemed to be taking it well and loving it too. Soon she was building again. I could see the intensity of her body, her moaning going up a pitch. She was going for yet another climax.
She gave a gasp, a deeper moan that became a cry and she was into her second orgasm if anything bigger than the first. It was quickly followed by another equally as good and that was it for me. I was finished as I cum yet again, filling that tight pussy with another load of man-juice.
Those two orgasms right before I finished was what finished her off too. She was laying there, her head against a pillow as she looked up at us. Or was she looking at us? Was she actually looking at anything? Whatever she certainly looked well fucked. How many cums was that? Eight or nine?
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“Fuck! What have you done to her?”
She was laying there looking up at us, her face looked a bit dazed. She had our cum all over her too. Talk about a well-fucked woman. We had one here.
Then Kalki was beside me, “Fuck! What have you done to her?”
“It was more than one fuck,” Payam laughed.
Still worried, Kalki bent down to Riya and touched her face. “Are you ok, honey?”
Riya broke out of her daze, looking up at us grinning. “That was amazing. Awesome. I didn’t expect sex could be that good.”
“Are you sure you are alright?”
“Yes, Kalki. Those men were rough with me, particularly Hamza. It surprised me but I enjoyed it. I felt like a little play doll, being taken and used by two big strong men. I was helpless, their play toy and there was nothing I could do. I knew they could do anything they liked with me and that turned me on. I liked it, liked it a lot which came as a shock to me. The sex was great, the many orgasms, I just don't have English words for them.”
Kalki looked at Payam and me, a bit strangely. Yes, she had once been like this girl in front of us was now and she had liked it too. She probably knew more than any of us there, what Riya was saying. Once, back in India, there had been a time when Sairu couldn't have sex. Payam and I shared my wife Kalki. That had been an intense night for her which had included her being spit-roasted too. So she knew the power of two strong men, the helplessness, the excitement of multiple cums. Yes, she knew it and perhaps wished she was there again.
I looked at Kalki and asked, “How was it with you?”
“It was all right,” she said.
But the look on her face told me it wasn’t all right. I did wonder if she had even cum. Certainly, compared to Riya it must have been like she'd had nothing.
Then Kalki was beside me, “Fuck! What have you done to her?”
“It was more than one fuck,” Payam laughed.
Still worried, Kalki bent down to Riya and touched her face. “Are you ok, honey?”
Riya broke out of her daze, looking up at us grinning. “That was amazing. Awesome. I didn’t expect sex could be that good.”
“Are you sure you are alright?”
“Yes, Kalki. Those men were rough with me, particularly Hamza. It surprised me but I enjoyed it. I felt like a little play doll, being taken and used by two big strong men. I was helpless, their play toy and there was nothing I could do. I knew they could do anything they liked with me and that turned me on. I liked it, liked it a lot which came as a shock to me. The sex was great, the many orgasms, I just don't have English words for them.”
Kalki looked at Payam and me, a bit strangely. Yes, she had once been like this girl in front of us was now and she had liked it too. She probably knew more than any of us there, what Riya was saying. Once, back in India, there had been a time when Sairu couldn't have sex. Payam and I shared my wife Kalki. That had been an intense night for her which had included her being spit-roasted too. So she knew the power of two strong men, the helplessness, the excitement of multiple cums. Yes, she knew it and perhaps wished she was there again.
I looked at Kalki and asked, “How was it with you?”
“It was all right,” she said.
But the look on her face told me it wasn’t all right. I did wonder if she had even cum. Certainly, compared to Riya it must have been like she'd had nothing.
When Sairu had finished, she and Andrew came over not realising what had happened with us. She saw Riya. “Riya, do you want a try with Andrew? I think he might like you.”
“No,” Riya replied in a voice everyone could hear. “I’m not interested in him. I like real men.”
If Andrew had been hoping for another woman, Riya’s look of contempt shot that down.
Wow! That was telling, wasn’t it? The look on Andrew’s face. She’d put him in his place. Put him down hard. Even I felt a bit sorry for him.
“What was that about?” Kalki asked.
“Probably her opinion of you two or that Andrew had ignored her on the beach.”
Kalki didn't reply to that.
“No,” Riya replied in a voice everyone could hear. “I’m not interested in him. I like real men.”
If Andrew had been hoping for another woman, Riya’s look of contempt shot that down.
Wow! That was telling, wasn’t it? The look on Andrew’s face. She’d put him in his place. Put him down hard. Even I felt a bit sorry for him.
“What was that about?” Kalki asked.
“Probably her opinion of you two or that Andrew had ignored her on the beach.”
Kalki didn't reply to that.
Sairu saw there was still tension in the air and took Andrew aside, wisely suggesting that he left before lunch. Both Kalki and Sairu went to the door to see him leave. He had said goodbye to Payam but I noticed he didn't say anything to me other than just a slight nod of his head.
I didn't hear much of what was said at the door but I did hear something that concerned me slightly when Kalki said, “I will see you tomorrow, Andrew.”
I decide the best option was just to pretend I didn’t hear it since we wouldn't be here anyway. Obviously, Kalki had forgotten about our trips.
(Kalki as you read this you will of course now know what was going on behind you. You will also learn that what happened next had nothing to do with me as decisions were made without consulting me.)
After lunch, we were going out as we had to take Riya back to Perth and spend the rest of the day with our friends. There was some sightseeing around the city followed by dinner at Donald’s house. We didn’t stay late because we were all going on trips the following morning and needed early starts.
I didn't hear much of what was said at the door but I did hear something that concerned me slightly when Kalki said, “I will see you tomorrow, Andrew.”
I decide the best option was just to pretend I didn’t hear it since we wouldn't be here anyway. Obviously, Kalki had forgotten about our trips.
(Kalki as you read this you will of course now know what was going on behind you. You will also learn that what happened next had nothing to do with me as decisions were made without consulting me.)
After lunch, we were going out as we had to take Riya back to Perth and spend the rest of the day with our friends. There was some sightseeing around the city followed by dinner at Donald’s house. We didn’t stay late because we were all going on trips the following morning and needed early starts.
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Conclusions.
On the night all the women got wasted, there had been a discussion, sort of a meeting of our group. We were given two options for a trip off station from Perth: -
Option One.
A flight to the desert town to visit where David’s family came from. This included going into the desert further on a short camping trip. This was something between Ian and Riya but others were invited.
Riya was first on the list for this trip. Sarvesh and Amita wanted to meet David’s parents again. David and Katrina; Mootie and Hansini. Jeremy and Joyce; Hamza (me) and Kalki also were going.
Option Two.
Go on a two-night trip to the wine country south of Perth and then two further nights on an island near Perth. Fred and Ginger were organizing this second trip.
Everyone else went on this trip. Fred and Ginger; Donald and Paula; Payam and Sairu; Jeevan and Mandara; Gaja and Nishi.
Option One.
A flight to the desert town to visit where David’s family came from. This included going into the desert further on a short camping trip. This was something between Ian and Riya but others were invited.
Riya was first on the list for this trip. Sarvesh and Amita wanted to meet David’s parents again. David and Katrina; Mootie and Hansini. Jeremy and Joyce; Hamza (me) and Kalki also were going.
Option Two.
Go on a two-night trip to the wine country south of Perth and then two further nights on an island near Perth. Fred and Ginger were organizing this second trip.
Everyone else went on this trip. Fred and Ginger; Donald and Paula; Payam and Sairu; Jeevan and Mandara; Gaja and Nishi.
The next morning, we all met at Donald’s house with two vans going to the airport and then returning for the road trip to the south.
I’m not going to expand on this other than saying, everyone had a great time and more stories have been written regarding it including a last-minute change as to who went on which trip.
I’m not going to expand on this other than saying, everyone had a great time and more stories have been written regarding it including a last-minute change as to who went on which trip.
On the day we all arrived back in Perth, there was an afternoon beside the pool planned before we returned to the houses we were staying at. It was then that Sarvesh and Donald dropped a huge change of arrangements on us. Sarvesh informed us as to what was happening.
“We want everyone to know everyone else better before we get to New Zealand. Therefore, we have decided to change around where some of you are staying.”
We were all surprised and sat there listening.
“Mootie and Hansini, I want you to go out and stay with Fred and Ginger. Jeevan and Mandara, you will be going out there too.”
Hamza and Kalki will be staying with Joyce and Jeremy now. Amita and I will be staying there too. Payam and Sairu will be staying here with Donald. Finally Gaja and Nishi you can either stay here or go with David and Katrina.”
That was a shock but I noticed already Sairu was looking at David. I was also sure my wife would soon be interested in Jeremy too. She still talked about how Sairu had sneaked away with him at the wedding reception in India. (See Story 195 Katrina gets Married - Part Three.) Her turn now.
“We want everyone to know everyone else better before we get to New Zealand. Therefore, we have decided to change around where some of you are staying.”
We were all surprised and sat there listening.
“Mootie and Hansini, I want you to go out and stay with Fred and Ginger. Jeevan and Mandara, you will be going out there too.”
Hamza and Kalki will be staying with Joyce and Jeremy now. Amita and I will be staying there too. Payam and Sairu will be staying here with Donald. Finally Gaja and Nishi you can either stay here or go with David and Katrina.”
That was a shock but I noticed already Sairu was looking at David. I was also sure my wife would soon be interested in Jeremy too. She still talked about how Sairu had sneaked away with him at the wedding reception in India. (See Story 195 Katrina gets Married - Part Three.) Her turn now.
I took Sarvesh aside and asked him, “Is this because of what happened with Kalki and Andrew?”
“Donald and I thought it was better this way. We’ll also know each other better when we get to New Zealand if we mixed up a bit more.”
He gave me that look that the subject was closed but I remembered he used the word ‘also’ so there was more to this change than just making new friends.
Thanks, Sarvesh and Donald.
“Donald and I thought it was better this way. We’ll also know each other better when we get to New Zealand if we mixed up a bit more.”
He gave me that look that the subject was closed but I remembered he used the word ‘also’ so there was more to this change than just making new friends.
Thanks, Sarvesh and Donald.
Epilogue: (Told by Hansini)
The following day after we had moved to Ginger's house, they took us down to their beach for a swim. The nudity was nothing and soon we were enjoying the swimming.
Another family joined us in the water and I saw one of the boys come up to Fred. I moved close enough to hear what was said.
“Where is Kalki?” he asked.
“They are not staying with us now, Andrew. They are with friends in Perth.”
He didn’t hang around too long, going back to be with his family after we finished swimming.
Back on the beach Mandara, who didn't hear, asked me, “Was that Kalki’s boyfriend?”
“Yeah,” I replied. “I think so.”
“Let’s invite him to join us. We can show him what two sexy women can do.”
“Give him a wild afternoon,” I agreed.
“Now, you girls calm down,” my husband Mootie said. “There has been enough trouble over this already.”
“We’re not going there, OK?” Jeevan added.
“Spoilsports,” I laughed, trying to lighten the mood.
“You girls won't think that when we get you back to the house,” Mootie said.
“Promises! Promises!” I laughed at them.
Mootie tried to grab at me, but I jumped clear of him, knocking into Fred in the process. Fred grabbed me and I got a good feeling up for my punishment with his hands over more breasts and down between my legs. It was made very clear that later those three men intended really giving us a good fucking.
“I might look Andrew up when we get back from New Zealand,” Ginger laughed. “Might be nice to have a toyboy around.”
“That would be fine, honey,” Fred grinned. “Just leave enough room in the house for all the toy girls I’m going to bring home,”
“Oh don’t you wish,” Ginger said, giving him a playful slap on the arm.
The following day after we had moved to Ginger's house, they took us down to their beach for a swim. The nudity was nothing and soon we were enjoying the swimming.
Another family joined us in the water and I saw one of the boys come up to Fred. I moved close enough to hear what was said.
“Where is Kalki?” he asked.
“They are not staying with us now, Andrew. They are with friends in Perth.”
He didn’t hang around too long, going back to be with his family after we finished swimming.
Back on the beach Mandara, who didn't hear, asked me, “Was that Kalki’s boyfriend?”
“Yeah,” I replied. “I think so.”
“Let’s invite him to join us. We can show him what two sexy women can do.”
“Give him a wild afternoon,” I agreed.
“Now, you girls calm down,” my husband Mootie said. “There has been enough trouble over this already.”
“We’re not going there, OK?” Jeevan added.
“Spoilsports,” I laughed, trying to lighten the mood.
“You girls won't think that when we get you back to the house,” Mootie said.
“Promises! Promises!” I laughed at them.
Mootie tried to grab at me, but I jumped clear of him, knocking into Fred in the process. Fred grabbed me and I got a good feeling up for my punishment with his hands over more breasts and down between my legs. It was made very clear that later those three men intended really giving us a good fucking.
“I might look Andrew up when we get back from New Zealand,” Ginger laughed. “Might be nice to have a toyboy around.”
“That would be fine, honey,” Fred grinned. “Just leave enough room in the house for all the toy girls I’m going to bring home,”
“Oh don’t you wish,” Ginger said, giving him a playful slap on the arm.
Much later, once we were back in India. (Told by Hamza again.)
After that day, nothing more was said about what happened with Andrew. It was a closed subject between us and his name was never mentioned. I also noticed the fantasy disappeared from my and Kalki’s lovemaking too.
I brought it up once and she firmly shut it down with a, “Don’t, Hamza. It's not good for our marriage.”
Some might think I should have forced the issue to open this up and aired my feelings and she aired her's but knowing my wife, at that time I wasn't sure it was the right option. Now, much later, we seem to have put it behind us so other than this story here it is best left buried in the past.
After that day, nothing more was said about what happened with Andrew. It was a closed subject between us and his name was never mentioned. I also noticed the fantasy disappeared from my and Kalki’s lovemaking too.
I brought it up once and she firmly shut it down with a, “Don’t, Hamza. It's not good for our marriage.”
Some might think I should have forced the issue to open this up and aired my feelings and she aired her's but knowing my wife, at that time I wasn't sure it was the right option. Now, much later, we seem to have put it behind us so other than this story here it is best left buried in the past.
Sometime after we had arrived back home, I finished this story and prepared to give it to Amita to add to the Letters Books. I felt Kalki should see it first and I welcomed any input from her. Perhaps she could even tell us more about what happened between her and Andrew.
For over an hour we sat in silence as she carefully read the story. Read some parts a second time too. She finished, then closing it, she handed the laptop back to me. I was hoping she might add more herself but no, she wasn't going there.
“What do you think?” I asked her.
“Interesting,” was all she said.
“So what part did you like best? Anything I can improve on?”
“I told you; Interesting.”
“Shall I publish it?” I asked.
She gave me a slight nod.
I noticed a finger came up to wipe a tear from her eye so felt it better to leave things where they were and just give the story to Amita, insisting it remains as I wrote it, unedited or changed in any way.
For over an hour we sat in silence as she carefully read the story. Read some parts a second time too. She finished, then closing it, she handed the laptop back to me. I was hoping she might add more herself but no, she wasn't going there.
“What do you think?” I asked her.
“Interesting,” was all she said.
“So what part did you like best? Anything I can improve on?”
“I told you; Interesting.”
“Shall I publish it?” I asked.
She gave me a slight nod.
I noticed a finger came up to wipe a tear from her eye so felt it better to leave things where they were and just give the story to Amita, insisting it remains as I wrote it, unedited or changed in any way.
Another example of how your stories are changing.
ReplyDeleteI actually felt sorry for Kalki as I don't think she realised what she was doing to her husband. It's called cuckolding where a wife makes her husband watch her with another man. Often this becomes a big put down, humiliation for the husband.
I like how you handled it here and gave Riya a wild time too. That girl is having a crash course sex education, isn't she.
Kala.
Spit Roast Riya. Like it.
ReplyDeleteAlso like the quote "Fuck! What have you done to her?"
That was good too.
Raymond.
You are not the only one they have done that too.
DeleteThey do a good job too I must be adding.
Ayaka
While I was slightly disappointed when you moved away from the stories regarding my name-sake I am still enjoying the stories. You have certainly changed in both writing skills and subject matter.
ReplyDeleteSome things I don't like so much but much I do.
I felt sorry for Kalki, she got the rough end of this story but I'm sure she'll get more fun soon.
Sayako.