Part One – Jeremy has some fun.
Posted by Susan.
It worked out well for me doing this story. At first, it was intended to be partner swapping between Hansini and Mootie with Jeremy and Joyce but then I discovered that Allan/Asami had just done something similar in Story 187 putting Jeremy and Joyce with Shanti and Mike. So I knew I needed something different.
At the next writer’s meeting, we were sorting out the final details of who would stay with each couple in India. They decided to put the two European couples with the new couples from India so that left us to place others from New Zealand. I asked if we could put Mega and Brian in with Hansini. This gave me more characters to play with and would eventually make my story much more complex.
In the end, it grew so much that I developed it into three sections. 1) A threesome for Jeremy. 2) A threesome for Joyce. 3) Katrina and David together.
This is section one where Jeremy gets some fun with two sexy Indian girls. This story involved two threesomes so again I needed them to be different. As part two was developing into a full-on threesome with Joyce I decided to hold back with Jeremy so he takes each girl separately.
The sex scene works well. I put Jeremy with Hansini first. I enjoy sex and often there is a lot going on in a person’s head while they are doing it. I wanted to capture Hansini’s feelings and thoughts while she was with Jeremy. They were new to each other, never been together before. Since she is supposed to be writing this part of the story I allowed her to give a lot more detail than when Jeremy was with Mega. Of course soon Mega followed, in this case, it was more her fucking him than it had been with Hansini getting a good fucking from him.
I finished the story abruptly after that. I wanted to leave you, my readers, with some sex and a big climax at the end.