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My name is Asami.
My name is Asami.
This story is about to be published and neither of the authors has come up with background notes yet. Anne wants to get this story published as it was holding up other stories following. One day, she told me with frustration, "Just to write a background for them and get the thing published." So here goes.
First, a list of some of the previous stories concerning Nishi and Gaja.
Story 195 Part One - Shanti gets distracted by the waiter with the tight butt.
Story 220 - Shanti has a fantasy dream about the waiter with the tight butt.
Story 216 Part Four - Nishi's mid-night visit to Steve's room.
Two characters appeared during our Katrina's Wedding stories and those that followed. One was a maid who took an interest in Steve and ended up visiting his bedroom during the night. The other was a young waiter whom Shanti took an interest in. Both these characters were never intended to become long term within the Letters Series, just appear in one or two stories and then disappear.
Allan snr and Kim wanted to follow up on these two, put them together in a story that could lead to them becoming a couple. During the major rebuild in late 2020 and early 2021, Anne gave the go-ahead to develop this theme. There will be three stories. Well to be more exact, one story divided into three parts. They came up with the unusual idea of calling these sections rather than the usual name of parts. I think this was because of the internal part divisions in their story.
In this section there is also has an offshoot theme where Shanti and Gaja correspond for a while. This quickly gets very erotic with the swapping of increasingly sexy and even nude photos. This was never going to be a long term relationship and after a few weeks, as Gaja's relationship with Nishi begins to develop, Gaja asks to end the correspondence. This fits in with Shanti's fantasy story (See above).
Gaja and Nishi's relationship quickly develops sexually which might be understandable considering how she quickly had sex with Steve. She does seem fairly open-minded. They used the idea of a one-piece swimsuit at the pool of the club/hotel. A new variation of the sexy bikini theme I suppose.
So all I want to say to Allan snr and Kim is, surprise, I beat you. It's now been published. - Asami.
First, a list of some of the previous stories concerning Nishi and Gaja.
Story 195 Part One - Shanti gets distracted by the waiter with the tight butt.
Story 220 - Shanti has a fantasy dream about the waiter with the tight butt.
Story 216 Part Four - Nishi's mid-night visit to Steve's room.
Two characters appeared during our Katrina's Wedding stories and those that followed. One was a maid who took an interest in Steve and ended up visiting his bedroom during the night. The other was a young waiter whom Shanti took an interest in. Both these characters were never intended to become long term within the Letters Series, just appear in one or two stories and then disappear.
Allan snr and Kim wanted to follow up on these two, put them together in a story that could lead to them becoming a couple. During the major rebuild in late 2020 and early 2021, Anne gave the go-ahead to develop this theme. There will be three stories. Well to be more exact, one story divided into three parts. They came up with the unusual idea of calling these sections rather than the usual name of parts. I think this was because of the internal part divisions in their story.
In this section there is also has an offshoot theme where Shanti and Gaja correspond for a while. This quickly gets very erotic with the swapping of increasingly sexy and even nude photos. This was never going to be a long term relationship and after a few weeks, as Gaja's relationship with Nishi begins to develop, Gaja asks to end the correspondence. This fits in with Shanti's fantasy story (See above).
Gaja and Nishi's relationship quickly develops sexually which might be understandable considering how she quickly had sex with Steve. She does seem fairly open-minded. They used the idea of a one-piece swimsuit at the pool of the club/hotel. A new variation of the sexy bikini theme I suppose.
So all I want to say to Allan snr and Kim is, surprise, I beat you. It's now been published. - Asami.
A well written story. It appears you are getting some of what Anne is learning. I believe a story like this should take me on a journey. I want to get to know the main characters and enjoy their journey.
ReplyDeleteNishi came out of nowhere and suddenly she was in bed with Steve. I have always liked Steve. He is a rival to Mike and been overlooked in many stories. I enjoyed that he got the girl that time.
Now Nishi is back and she has a new job, new apartment and a new boyfriend. You could say a new life.
While not being overly sexy the scenes were well laid out. The story smoothly moved forward following both characters. I enjoyed the way you did that.
A good solid story. Can't wait for Part Two.
Moa.
I was against the part where Gaja and Shanti were corresponding together and swapping naughty photos. I also thought of this as a copy of the very first letters of this blog, between Shanti and Joseph.
ReplyDeleteBut my objections were voted out and this section was written. I must admit that by keeping this part short so it doesn't overwhelm the main purpose of these stories, it works ok.
You've captured the interaction between Sarvesh and Shanti which was good too.
Another version of the crocodile story. This time we see the bullet and bullet hole. That was a nice addition. I like how the Ranger told of Shanti hunting through the jungle, nothing like the original version of this story. Liked that.
Allan.
I have seen this before in your writing in this blog. Stories are retold differently by different characters or as in this case change as they are retold.
DeleteIsn't that part of reality. We see it all the time when talking with people.
Hoani (John)
Thanks for that nice phone call Allan sr. I was interested in talking with you.
ReplyDeleteYes, I followed your advice and started with this story section. Very good. I got into following these two on their journey together.
Nice story. I'm going to the second part now.
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