Story 258 Part Three Background Notes.

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Hello to everyone.
       It is Shandra here.

            This is another of those joint venture stories.  I pulled others in to help me when I realised this story had become big enough to require a fourth section. The main reason for this was that we never intended to go into any great detail as to where Joseph and Lizamoa went when they left for the night. At first, our intention was that either they went to visit another couple, probably Simon and Deanna, or secondly, they went for a movie and stayed in a motel/hotel somewhere.
            When we decided they should return to the house later at night, that crossed the hotel idea out but raised the question as to where else they might have gone for the evening. We still had the visit to Simon and Deanna idea, so we could have gone with that. But what about meeting the whole group and really having some fun. That is the way we decided to write, get all our characters together and have a big orgy. Aren't we nice to them?
            My sister, Reshma came up with a problem. (Trust her!) It had already been published that Lizamoa couldn't send the younger kids to Shanti and Mikes because they were busy. It was also written that Peter and Jenny took the kids instead. So we had to drop the couples Mike and Shanti; Peter and Jenny out of this story. Fortunately not much had been written so it was really just changing things during the planning stage. We still had five couples to play with.
            You will notice a slightly different layout to that currently being used. I didn't like the line of stars they are using so dropped them out of our two stories. We made a few other changes in the HTML coding too. Anne mentioned it but I don't see it as a problem considering that this blog is written by a number of different writers.
             Enough from me. I don't want this background to get too long so I'll hand it over to the other writers now.
            Bye now - Shandra.

My name is Reshma.

            When I found the mistake Shandra has mentioned above, I was sort of drawn into the writing of this story. I was fine with that, I like writing with my sister, Shandra and brother-in-law, Rajah.
            While this story, the third in the series appears to break away from the theme about Tukiko and Masanori. you will see how it links in when we get to Part Four. This story can be considered as running parallel with Part Three before characters from both parts will come together again in Part Four.
               So, we had five couples and we wanted to include them all in this story. We could have just followed Joseph and Lizamoa through their evening but my sister suggested we feature each of the five couples. We came up with the punishment idea where each woman gets "punished" by a different man. A man, other than their spouse. During the writing, this evolved to where each of these five scenes would be different with the last few girls catching on and taking things straight into sex. Avoiding the punishment - smart girls!
            Hope you are enjoying all four of these stories - Reshma.

My name is Susan.

            Hi everyone. As those of you who read these backgrounds will have already discovered, these four stories all happened the same afternoon, evening and following morning. Therefore close coordination between writers was called for. Anne and I got involved in each story as I helped with the sex scenes and Anne guided Tukiko and Madanori's involvement in these sexual activities.
            Five similar sex scenes in one story was a big ask and we needed to carefully plan how these will go and also how they will fit with a similar kitchen sex scene in Part Four. That is where my role can in, guiding and giving an overview to all these scenes. We finally got it right when Reshma came up with the idea that it is only the Sayako - Brian scene that was actually a true punishment scene. The rest gradually drifted away to become more normal sex between two people rather than punishment scenes. I thought, since no rules or guidelines were given, that each couple would realise what was coming, become more and more sexually excited as they watched others. But the time we get to the fifth scene, Sharon and Joseph just wanted to fuck each other ASAP.
            Have fun reading them - Susan.

            Kia kaka - Kia Kaha.
                  Be safe - Be strong.
                        Shandra, Susan and Reshma.

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