Tuesday, 15 March 2022

Story 275 Part Two. Sexy Karene.

Index of Letters                         Story 275 Part Two Background Notes.                         Back to Story 275 Part One.   

Forward to Story 276.


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Session Five, Two Big Cocks, Two 'Angry' Husbands.


        I couldn’t wait for the next week. This was going to be good. I rang the business in Tauranga and cancelled my trip, instead, spending some time with the new sales manager online. I rang the hotel and cancelled our room that week too.
        Joseph rang me to say that both he and Mootie had been approached by Jenny and had agreed to do the show.
        I met Steve at his gym and talked with him privately. He quickly brought into my idea but neither of us told anyone what we were planning. We had decided to keep it a surprise from the rest of our friends like we were with the rest of Jenny's viewers and of course Jenny and Sharon too. So everything was ready. Now, it was almost showtime.
        Wednesday morning, when I left our house, instead of turning towards the South/Western Motorway, I drove out to Mike’s house in Titirangi where I could lay low – go bush you might say. I couldn’t go to work at the car yard as Jenny could find out I was still in Auckland. So we had decided it best that I stayed at Mike and Shanti’s house for the day. I didn’t need to unpack because I knew that night I would be back in my own house.
        There were others present too, those who were staying with Mike and Shanti, the visitors from India and Australia.
        It was a nice day. A bit of work in Shanti’s office. A bit of sitting around the pool with our friends and explaining that tonight’s cam session with Jenny would not go how she planned. But while telling them Joseph and Mootie would be doing the show with Jenny and Sharon, I still didn't tell anyone that Steve and I would be involved too. They must have guessed something was going on since they knew I was planning to return to my house that evening but I wasn't letting anything out.
        Just before dinner Jagesh and Sabreena, Lizamoa’s oldest kids turned up. Mike’s son, Michael, was with them too. It seems Jarrod and Mark weren’t required for tonight’s performance. They had been bumped by bigger cocks it seems. They had come over for dinner with us and were shocked to see me there too.
      &mbsp; A while later, Kathy, Mike’s daughter, turned up with the two girls from India, Jasmine and Riya. It seems they had been out at the big mall in St Lukes. Girl shopping I suppose.
        When Mike arrived home from work soon after, I took him aside and told him what Steve and I were planning. He loved the idea and quickly offered any help if we needed it. I told him thanks but we had things all set to go.
        I also sent a text to Joseph, 'Expect Steve and me to gate-crash at the end of your show. Don't tell Jenny or Sharon and just go along with whatever happens.'
        His reply came straight back, 'Looking forward to it, mate. LOL!'

        Mike thought it might be better if we took the younger ones aside and warn them not to say anything to Jenny. I joined them too as I thought this was going to be good when they found out they had been caught.
        “Michael and Jagesh can you come with me, please. We need to talk about something,” Mike said.
        Looking a bit surprised, the two young men got up to follow him.
        Mike looked over and saw the two girls, Kathy his daughter and Sabreena, Lizamoa’s daughter sitting there smirking. “You two girls need to come too.” That changed their faces. Then he looked over at Jasmine and Riya. “Yeah, you two as well. You’re not involved in this yet but you might be tonight.”
        I followed along to listen to what he told them.
        He sat them at a table down by the pool, “Jarrod and Mark,” he began using their cam names. “We know what you’ve been doing with Sexy Kareen.”
        The two boys were shocked and the two girls were giggling.
        Mike turned to the girls, “S18 and K19, yes, we know who you are too. When Shanti suspected it was you two last Wednesday, Sabreena, your father stood outside Kathy's bedroom and heard Jenny’s voice online, confirming what we thought. Naughty girls!”
        Now it was the girl’s turn to be shocked.
        The four of them were wondering what would happen now they’d been caught.
        “First off, Joseph and I have talked,” Mike began. “Our wives agree too, you four are not in trouble. You are old enough to make your own choices now. Perhaps not one of your better ones this time, getting yourselves seen on a live cam show like that. But that is your business, not ours. You didn’t stray outside our sex group so no rules were broken.”
        "You girls, gate-crashing a private Zoom meeting was not a wise idea either. We expect that won't ever happen again."
        Both girls just nodded their heads a muttered something about being sorry.
        But Mike wasn't interested in excuses. He had something more important to tell them. “Things will not be going as planned for Sexy Karene this evening. We want you to promise you will not contact her, by phone or text. She must not find out that Peter is still in Auckland. Of course, you can carry on as planned and watch the show. Get on Zoom too if you want but turn your cam on this time.”
        Then Mike smiled over at me. “This is going to be Jenny’s last cam session. It’s going to be fun.”
        The four tried to smile and agreed they wouldn’t contact or warn Jenny or Sharon. But I could still see the confusion on their faces. Perhaps they were wondering if Jenny might be getting into trouble.
        “Finally, let Jasmine and Rya in on what you naughty girls have been watching. All the old videos from the first show Peter saw are on my home laptop. In a file called Sexy Karene on the desktop. Yes, Kathy, I know you both have worked out my password.”
        Another shock for Kathy and Michael.
        After dinner, all six of them went off to Michael's room to catch up on the older sessions. It would also give Jasmine and Rya a catch up too. An eye-opener for them, that’s for sure.

        At six-thirty pm, I left their house with my gear, got into my car and headed back to my house. Joseph’s car was already parked in the driveway as I’d heard, he and Mootie had been invited for dinner. Sharon's car was there too. I parked out on the road behind Steve’s car.
        Steve got out and met me and we walked through the garden up around to the back of the house, using a spare key kept there, we slipped into the house. We walked through to where we could hear Jenny talking in the computer room. There was no sign of Sharon, Joseph and Mootie so we hoped they were waiting in the master bedroom but couldn't risk going near there in case we were seen.
        Confirming that everything was going to plan, Steve and I went back to the stairs down to the garage underneath the house. This is where I have a room (my man cave), where I could meet friends for a few beers or watch a game on Sky. Grabbing a beer each we set up our laptops. One to watch Jenny’s show and the other for the Zoom meeting with our friends. Stripping off our clothes, we sat down to watch the show.

        As the Zoom meeting started, I heard Mike challenge S18K19. “Come on, we know who you are now. Turn your cam on so everyone can see you.
        There was a short pause and then the cam came on showing Michael’s bedroom. Four people were sitting there. Rya was cuddled up with Jagesh on one couch and Michael was with Jasmine on the other couch. They were already naked. For a moment I wondered where Sabreena and Kathy were. Probably out of cam view. They looked to be watching on the large TV screen in Michael’s room.
        “Looks like Jarrod and Mark have found some action again tonight,” Sarvesh laughed.
        Jagesh just smiled and waved that he had heard. I noticed his hand was already playing with Rya’s nipple. She seemed happy with that too.
        Looking around I noticed others of our friends were either naked or in various stages of undressing. I knew soon this was going to be wall to wall, online orgy. All the Australian and Indian visitors were at the various houses of our New Zealand friends where they were staying so this time, almost everyone was online other than the four who would be appearing in the show.

        By the time we got online, Jenny/Sexy Karene was already into her talking section. Telling her viewers, “I have a big surprise for you guys tonight. In fact, two big, very big surprises.”
        I looked over at Steve and said, “So do we, Jenny. Another two surprises.”
        He nodded back and laughed. I could see some of those on Zoom had heard me and were laughing too.
        Using my online name, ‘Sexyblueeyes’ I typed to Sexy Karene, asking if she’d found some big cocks.
        “Thanks to you ‘sexyblueeyes,’ I have,” she replied vocally. “You have good ideas.”
        ‘Oh wow!’ I wrote. ‘I wish one of them was me!’
        "Are you going to turn on your cam and show me who you are?" Sexy Karene/Jenny challenged me. "Remember, you promised."
        "I'm still a bit shy but you'll see me after the show."
        Jenny just nodded at that before she continued. I'm not sure she believed me but she had other things on her mind then.
        “Jarrod and Mark are not with us today. I have found two friends with the biggest cocks I have ever seen. They will be my leading men.”
        “They have agreed to join me and fuck me. It’s going to be great. I can’t wait to get started. Tina might join in. She wants to try these big cocks too. You guys will have a treat when you see the size of her magnificent tits.”
        “Ok. Enough talking. Let’s get on with the show. They are waiting for me in the bedroom.” Then with her voice lowered she added, “And I can’t wait to get started.”
        Finally, she added, “All this is happening when my husband is over 200km away. He doesn’t know a thing.”

        “Not that far, Jenny,” I said quietly to Steve. “Almost directly below you, honey.”
        That caused a round of giggles from the Zoom audience.
        “Stay online, when the show ends, everyone,” I told the Zoom meeting. “We can have a laugh and talk about what will happen tonight, afterwards. Until then be good, won’t you?”
        “No,” came the replies from several people.
        All our friends could see that Steve and I were together and also naked. Some might have also recognized where we were in my man-cave underneath my house. I bet they were wondering what we were planning.

        A few minutes later, the cam came on in the master bedroom to view Sexy Karene walking in. She was now completely naked. She wasn’t playing around with undressing tonight, instead, going straight for the fucking action, it seems.
        She didn’t even take the time to introduce Joseph and Mootie. The two big Indian men were both naked, sitting on the edge of the bed, both sporting huge erections. I later learnt that Tina had been a busy girl, playing with them, getting them excited and hard, giving them titty fucks to get them ready for Sexy Karene. The two women had even talked the men into allowing them to shave the public hair off around their cocks and balls. I was surprised at that. Would never have thought those two would do that! Really put a dent in their tough-guy image. LOL Just goes to show what the promise of hot pussy can do to a man's head.
        Sexy Karene leaned forward to give each man a quick but passionate kiss. They both responded by touching her breasts or other parts of her body. Including between her legs.
        The cam had moved so we could catch the action of both of these with close-up detail. Even Mootie’s fingers pushing in between her pussy lips were captured.
        "I think I should take Mootie first and save Joseph for seconds," Jenny/Sexy Karene told her audience.
        She'd actually given their real names. I wondered at that but I suppose only those who knew them would have picked it up.


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Mootie’s Big Cock.


        Sexy Kareen got Mootie to move onto the bed and lay down on his back. Kneeling beside him she began rubbing some oil over his chest and them down over his stomach. In the soft light of the bedroom, his dark skin was shining and catching the light. Looked good actually.
        Soon Karene's hands had moved lower to take his cock in her hand. Rubbing the oil all over his cock head and shaft which looked great and by the look on his face, must likely have felt great too.
        The close-ups, Tina/Sharon were giving us of all this, made it even better. Certainly had the full attention of all the ladies watching on Zoom. Naughty girls.
        Meanwhile, Joseph was behind Sexy Karene, his hands all over her, rubbing oil on her, especially over her tits and even down between her legs to her pussy. There was one close-up of his fingers, rubbing over and around her bum hole too. That was sexy how his fingers moved lower to her swollen pussy lips, coating them with more wetness of the oil before pressing in, to finger fuck her. Some eye candy for the men in Zoom.
        Then Sexy Karene moved so her legs were on each side of Mootie as she brought her pussy down towards his cock. And yes, Tina had the cam in the right position to catch the moment the huge head of his cock pushed against her pussy lips. We could all see them stretching open so he could enter her. The moaning and gasping she was making was sexy too. I’m not sure how much of it was real but certainly sounded convincing.
        "Oh! Fuck!" she gasped. "You are so big!"
        A few more tries and Sexy Karene was taking about half of him. “Shall I try to take all of him?” she asked her viewers and got a lot of favourable replies that she should.
        It took her a few more tries to get there but finally, a close shot showed her pussy against his pelvis, all of his cock inside her.
        “God, he’s big!” she gasped. “I’ve never had a cock this big!”
        More bullshit for the viewers. Jenny has had this cock before, even if Sexy Karene thought she hadn’t. Anyway, it was all about the show and it sounded good for her audience.

        The cam zoomed back to show the look on her face as she began to fuck him cowgirl style. It was a look of bliss. She was giving soft moans with each stroke. Behind her, Joseph was sitting with his arms around her. His hands were on her tits, pulling and playing with her nipples.
        She was taking full strokes, pulling almost out, then sinking in deep until she took almost all of him. I noticed she was taking it slowly. It was obvious, there would be no rough and wild fucking while she had this monster in her cunt. She was moaning now, getting close to orgasm. It looked so good. Especially, the way Tina showed the look on Sexy Karene’s face.
        The cam was up close again, showing his hard black cock between her pink lips. First slowly slipping from her, then disappearing back in as she sunk back down onto him. It was some of the best porn video I'd ever seen. A contrast of the darkness of his Indian body against the lightness of Sexy Karene's body. His black cock against her pink pussy. Great video!
        She was going faster and faster now, her hips moving to raise herself then plunge back down on top of him. The way she was pounding her pussy down at him was surprising and some of us began to wonder if she might hurt herself. But Karene was beyond caring now. Her pussy was full of this huge cock and she wanted to get the most she could from him. Nothing else mattered. Perhaps, she even forgot she had an audience watching. So much for me thinking there would be no rough and wild fucking.
        Mootie seems more relaxed. I could see he was enjoying her but nowhere near as much as she was. By now, I was fairly sure there was no acting going on. This was real. She had some serious cock inside her and with the fucking she was doing, it was giving her some serious feelings. She was close now. I could hear it in her voice, see it in her body language. She was about to cum.
        He must have known it too because he gave a couple of big humps back up at her. Her eyes opened wide. She gave a gasp. Probably taking more cock than she thought was possible. That will teach her for getting greedy by going after the big ones.
        The third time he did it was all she could take. She cried out, her body bucked against him and she began to cum. She cum hard too. It looked to be a big one. A goody, really hitting the spot.
        The crowd in her chatroom loved it. For the last few minutes of her fucking they had been quiet. Everyone watching the show before them. Now the room burst into a flood of comments, both written and verbal as they showed how much they'd enjoyed that first show. Yes, I said first because we all knew Karene wasn't going to settle with only one cock when there was yet another available right beside her.


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Time to Try Joseph.


        Karene looked over at the cam and said, "Now it is time to try Joseph."
        She hardly gave herself time to recover before she had Joseph laying back on the bed as she began rubbing oil over him. Over his chest, down over his stomach and onto his cock. Making his dark skin shine as Mootie’s had. Her white hands, rubbing the blackness of his hard shaft was a brilliant piece of video.
        “Now I am going to take this cock,” Sexy Karene told her viewers. “And his cock is even bigger than the first cock.” Her voice dropped to little more than a whisper as she said, “The biggest cock I have ever seen.”
        The views of her white hands rubbing oil all over his black cock were great too.
        The chattroom was quiet too. I expect everyone was waiting, to see what would happen next.

        This time I noticed Mootie stayed out of the action until Sexy Karene was ready to mount Joseph, and then we saw that lovely closeup where the head of Joseph's cock pressed against her pussy lips, forcing them open, stretching her as he pushed into her.
        We could all hear the deep moan as she took him. That sounded so good, so real.
        “My, God!” Sexy Karene gasped. “So big... He's fucking huge!”
        She lifted up a bit and tried again. “Oh! Fuck!”
        "He's big! Filling me!" she was gasping as she tried to take more of him.
        This was getting the viewers in the chat room excited. Like sharks in a feeding frenzy. Lots of comments, both vocal and written. The comments were spinning up so fast you could barely read them.
        It took her a few tries to take him all but we all knew she had to try. I'm not sure how much of this was real. The real Jenny knew she could take this cock.
        "Oh Fuck!" she said looking down at Joseph. "You are so big."
        "Relax," his deep voice softly told her. "You can take me."
        Tina zoomed in so we could watch the last of his cock disappearing inside her pussy. I must admit, she was giving a pretty convincing show. An awesome bit of video.
        "Take my cock in your cunt you horny batch."
        "Oh!" she moaned.
        "Stretch and fill your cunt. You are going to take all of me!
        "Oh no! I can't!"
        "Yes, you can!"
        With that, he gave a hard thrust up at her, forcing the rest of his cock into her. Her eyes opened in surprise as she cried out.
        Some of the guys in the chattroom looked horrified while others were loving it. Almost everyone in Zoom loved it.

        The cam zoomed out to include her face as they started fucking, showing a look of bliss or pain. It was hard to be sure, it all looks the same in moments like this. But I knew, the Jenny side of Sexy Kareen had taken this cock many times before.
        “Oh, my god! I’ve never had a cock this big!”
        "Oh! Oh! This feels so good! Amazing!
        More viewers ear candy bullshit. Only a week before, at that party at Shanti’s had been the last time she’d had that same cock. I remember watching as she rode him then too.
        But as has been said above, this was all about winding up her viewers. It was working too. Watching some of the faces of men in her chatroom was almost as good as watching the show.

        Mootie was sitting behind her now, his hands reaching around to play with her tits, pulling on her nipples. His dark brown hands made a great contrast with the white of her breasts.
        But Sexy Karene was enjoying the largest cock she had even had. Going to a place she had never been before she told us. Yeah, right!
        When she started to move, when she started to fuck him, she was loving it. The cam zoomed in so we were seeing that thick shaft sliding in and out of her as she moved. Her cunt lips were stretched wide and her juices flowing. Amazing viewing. When Tina zoomed out, the look on Seay Karene’s face was amazing too. And the vocals from her, wow!
        Again, she began by taking it slowly. Long strokes, using most of his length. Watching how she fucked him, watching how deep he was going. This would have been the highlight of any porn movie.
        But of course, all good things much ‘cum’ to an end. Soon it became clear that this cock was doing it for Sexy Karene too. As she got closer, the vocals were getting louder and louder. As she began to speed up, it quickly became clear she was losing it. We all knew she was moments away. But in Joseph’s case, like Mootie, he was still well under control. I was sure that the girls had made them both cum before the show started which would explain the staying power that both these two men had.
        Sexy Karene cried out, her body shuddered as what looked like a huge orgasm hit her. Again, this looked real. You can’t fake something like that when there is a video cam in your face. It was real alright. For the second time that night, she cried out, moaned again and lost all control. She slipped from Mootie’s hands, falling forward so her breasts crashed against Joseph’s chest.
        For a few moments, she lay there, her body giving shudders as the last of her orgasm left her. Tina took the moment to go around behind her and to where his cock had slipped from her, leaving her cunt lips still stretched open. Tina zoomed in to show her open juicy hole. Now, that was a shot to remember. We could see a couple of drops, run from her cunt and drip off onto the man below her.
        (Tina/Sharon, you did a great job, girl. Almost as good as the ‘star’ on the bed.)


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Tina Joins in the Fun.


        There was a pause, while Sexy Karene regained herself. I could tell, that last orgasm had been a huge one and taken it out of her. She was taking a while getting over it. Struggling to get it together again.
        The chattroom was going wild again. Comments were flowing so fast, they were scrolling up before they could be read. Talk about turning them on! They were all excited by what we'd just seen. Perhaps what Karene had been saying and the cam angles had made it better but it was still a sexy show. I even noticed some had their cocks out, wanking off some pretty decent weapons while they watched.
        She was on the bed by herself now. She looked at the cam and said, “Would you guys like to meet Tina now?”
        That was well-received by the viewers. Many positive comments. There were the feeding sharks again. Comment stream racing in the chatroom. Steve and I were amused by how much she was winding them up.

        “Come on Tina, come and join me,” Sexy Karene said to someone behind the cam.
        The cam picture, moved a bit as the cam was handed to someone else, then Tina/Sharon appeared in the view. Like Sexy Karene, she was already naked.
        “I like all you guys to meet my cam operator, Tina,” Sexy Karene began, putting her arm around Tina.
        “Hi everyone,” Tina said.
        Of course, everyone quickly noticed Tina’s best features, her big tits. Soon comments were flowing regarding melons, huge knockers, bazookas etc.
        ‘Damn! Look at those tits.’
        ‘She is huge!’
        ‘Would love to get my head between those bazookas!’
        Tina was sitting on the edge of the bed, facing the cam. She was smiling, probably reading the stream of comments in the chatroom about her tits.
        Sexy Karene was now kneeling on the bed behind Tina, reaching around for her breasts. “You like these do you?”
        Karene’s hands were rubbing over them.
        “Aren’t these beauties?” Sexy Karene whispered. “She likes showing them to you,” Karene added as she held a breast in each hand, presenting them to the cam. “Don’t you Tina?”
        Tina just nodded before Sexy Karene continued.
        “They are very sensitive too. Especially these big nipples. Tina likes them being touched… and sucked too. Would you like to have your head between them? Or maybe your cock. Tina likes giving titty fucks.”
        The views were lapping this up. The chat was going wild with comments again.
        “Would you like to watch Tina and me making out?” Sexy Karene asked the room in a quiet sexy voice.
        Oh yes! They were all in for that. Lots of suggestions on what they should do. How they should do it. Of course, if they had stopped to think, what they said would make no difference. Sexy Karene had it all worked out where she would take this show.
        The two women moved towards the centre of the bed and were kneeling side on to the cam, facing each other. First, they reached out with their hands to play with each other’s breasts and then pulling closer they were rubbing their breasts together. That close up shot showing Sexy Karene’s nipple rubbing against Tina’s nipple looked great. Another highlight of the evening.
        Another burst of activity from the cheap seats in the chat room. I looked over at the Zoom room to see Jenny/Sexy Karene and Sharon/Tina had everyone’s attention there too.
        In the box labelled S18K19, I noticed that Jasmine was sitting on Michael’s lap now. Her legs were open showing his cock driving deep into her pussy as she slowly fucked him while they both watched the show. Riya was laying back on their couch, Jagesh was on top of her, they were obviously fucking too, while they both were turned towards the screen watching the show.
        For a moment I wondered how those two young guys had managed to get those two young girls into such explicit exhibitionism. Surely they must have realised they were online where even their parents could see them fucking. But then perhaps their parents were too busy fucking to notice what their daughters were doing.
        Down on the floor in front, Kathy and Sabreena were watching too. Both were naked too. Maybe I should pay more attention to that screen too. All over the Zoom room, there were people, our friends, playing and fucking. A wall to wall orgy was going on now.

        But the session in Sexy Karene’s room was getting hot too. Karene and Tina came together, their faces together as their lips touched, a gentle nudge rather than a kiss. The second try and their lips firmly pressed together. Finally, it turned into the heated passion of full-on tongue kissing. All those watching saw Tina’s tongue, reaching out to enter Karene’s mouth. They saw Karene’s lips close around it as she began sucking. It was clear, these women were buying into this. Their excitement and passion took over.
        Sexy Karene pushed Tina back so she lay back on the bed and Karene began working on those huge tits. First rubbing over them with her hands before going in with her mouth and tongue. Again, Mootie made sure all the action was caught with thrilling close-ups. We could all see that tongue licking over Tina’s hard nipple and heard her begin to moan. We then watched as Karene’s mouth opened and Tina’s nipple was taken inside. Now Karene was really giving it the treatment, sucking on her nipple a few times before pulling out to lick over it before going in to suck over it again. She even put her head between them as Sharon's hands rubbed her tits against each side of Karene's head. That was hot!

        The noise from Tina told us all she was loving it. The noise and comments from the chat room told us they were loving it and a quick look around the viewing boxes in Zoom told me all our friends were loving it too.

        After a sexy session doing her tits and nipples, it was time for Karene to move lower. We were all treated with the first good view of Tina’s pussy as Karene pulled her thighs wide open. She was completely shaven which excited the chat room again.
        Sexy Karene was rubbing over Tina’s pussy lips. They were juicy and wet so Karene’s fingers could slip up and down between the split lips with no resistance at all. She pulled the lips open giving us all a beautiful view of the pink flesh inside. As Karene’s fingers moved lower, she pressed in using two fingers held tightly together. Like this Karene began finger-fucking Tina. First, she was moving slowly using strokes that pressed in as deep as she could go, then as she sped up, another finger joined in. Soon those fingers were roughly thrusting in, driving Tina into a frenzy of passion.
        Meanwhile, Karene had brought her other hand into play, rubbing briskly over the top of Tina’s pussy.
        She was crying out, humping at Karene’s hand, bucking around, being driven crazy with what was happening to her cunt. But Karene kept going and we could see she was determined to get Tina off with her fingers.
        By now, Tina was laying back on the bed. Her eyes were closed and her moans were coming almost continually now. We could her body and breasts trembling as waves of pleasure surged through her body. With both hands working at Tina’s pussy, we could all see, Karene was building her to an orgasm and it was going to be a big one.
        I looked around again and saw the chat room was quiet as all were watching the events unfolding in front of us. The Zoom meeting was quiet too. Almost all action had stopped too as they watched the approaching climax too. Somehow, everyone knew this was going to be big.
        Karene must have decided it was time to take her out. She pressed in harder with her top hand and the hood over Tina’s clitty split open giving Karene’s fingers direct contact. Lower down, the other hand gave a few extra big thrusts and Tina was gone.
        Tina cried out, humped extra hard against Karene’s hands. A deep moan turned into a scream as the full force of her orgasm hit her. Her pelvis lifted up as a squirt of juice burst out of her hitting Karene all over her chest. Quickly a few more squirts followed, also going all over Karene before Tina dropped from her high.
        As Karene moved back from her to allow the cam in we could all see Tina laying there her body trembling. Mootie zoomed in on until Tina’s shaved pussy filled the screen. I’ll not forget how her split pussy lips were twitching as she lay there. Amazing.
        Of course, those guys in the chat room were going wild now. Comments, both verbal and written were flowing as they showed their apperception of what had just happened. There could be no faking something like that. It was very real. We had all seen this beautiful woman being taken away with the power of orgasm, her friend had given her.
        I’m not sure either Karene or Tina had expected it as it took them both a while to regain themselves so the show could continue. I later heard it was intended they would have a 69 session but after what had just happened, Karene had decided to move things forward to sex with the men again.

        “Would you like to try those two big cocks?” Sexy Karene asked Tina.
        “Oh yes!” Tina replied. “I’d love that.”
        “Come on, boys,” Sexy Karene said as she left Tina. “Tina wants your cocks.”
        Sexy Karene disappeared and Joseph and Mootie entered the scene again to join Tina/Sharon on the bed.
        Quickly, their hands were all over her. She held their heads to her breasts while they each took a hard nipple to suck. The look on her face told us this was real. She was loving it. That close shot of Mootie’s tongue, dragging across Tina’s hard nipple looked great too.
        Then Mootie was tongue kissing her while Joseph was eating her pussy. Soon the men swapped so now Mootie was eating her pussy while Joseph was tongue kissing her. She must have been tasting her pussy juice when he did that.
        “I think Tina needs some fucking, boys,” we heard Sexy Karene say again.
        Both men glanced at the cam, probably more glancing at Karene who was obviously holding the cam and directing the scene we were watching.
        “Come on Mootie,” Karene said. “You can try her first.

        Since Tina was still laying on her back, it just worked out that she took Mootie like that. Perhaps, none of them really thought about it. He just came in and moved in on top of Tina. There was little or no foreplay as it was clear to everyone that Tina was beyond needing it.
        Soon we were looking at the close up as Mootie’s large cock head was pushing against Tina’s lips. We could see how her lips stretched open to take him as his head slipped between them. We all heard the groan she gave to. Another push and she took a bit more of him.
        A couple more, bigger thrusts, accompanied by some groans from Tina and she was taking all of him. He started slowly but it didn’t stay like that for long. Soon he was pounding down at her with each stroke, his large cock thrusting deep inside her with each stroke.
        It was clear Tina was loving it too. From up between her open legs, we got a close-up of this massive rod of throbbing flesh, sliding in and out between her opened and stretched pussy lips. She was wet and juicy; you could see it all over his wet shaft.
        Suddenly she cum. Her pelvis bucked up against Mootie as he continued plunging into her. It was sexy to watch as Karene had caught some good facial shots. Moments later, it looked like Mootie had cum too. We couldn’t see much since he had delivered his load deep inside her.
        With that, he pulled from her and rolled off her.
        “Your turn mate,” he said to Joseph.

        Tina hardly had time to recover and Joseph was on top of her. He took her the same way with her laying on her back with him on top. After a pretty aggressive entry, it turned into some hard and rough fucking. He was hammering into her and she was happily taking everything he could give her.
        Within minutes her first cum hit her, to be followed by yet another one. That second cum took Joseph out too. I was surprised at that. He usually does better than that. I think he had become so caught up in all this fucking that his passion overflowed too.
        Anyway, it had been a good show from these two big guys, but they weren’t over yet.


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Spit Roasting Tina.


        Joseph pulled back out of her and looked at his mate. “Let’s spit-roast her,” he suggested.
        “Sure, mate,” Mootie agreed. “Sounds like a plan.”
        Next, they got Tina on her hands and knees. Both men working together now. They arranged her so she was side on to the cam so viewers could get a full profile of what was going on. Joseph presented his cock to her mouth while Mootie got behind her and presented his cock to her pussy. Yes, both men were going to give this woman a spit-roasting.
&mbsp;       Again, a burst of approval from the horny chat room.
        It seemed like they might have worked this out beforehand because there was no discussion as to who would take which end. It seemed that had been decided already. Mootie took the back, her cunt while Joseph took the front, her mouth.
        That thrust Mootie gave as he entered her was a surprise. She must have been expecting his cock in her cunt, but certainly not like that. Her eyes opened in shock as she cried out, much to the delight of those in the chat room. A couple more strokes to get himself embedded in and Mootie was underway, delivering a strong, steady stroke to Tina’s pussy from behind.
        Meanwhile, Joseph had approached her from the front, his massive rod pointing directly at her face as she opened her mouth to take him in. Her lips stretched wide as she took him in. She didn’t need to move in and out just suck him. Mootie’s fucking her from behind was giving them all the motion they needed.
        A highlight of this was those shots of her tits swinging wildly as they fucked her. Those big tits hung down a lot and with how Mootie was thrusting into her pussy, she really had them swinging. Again, great viewing for all of us.
        Mootie is a strong man, almost as big and strong as Joseph. The two of them fucking Tina like that looked amazing. Their dark brown bodies had been coated with oil so the shown in the soft bedroom might. The way they were sweating made it even better.
        She was loving it too, quickly having to pull her head off Joseph as she gasped her way through yet another orgasm. Then her head was back sucking him while Mootie continued fucking her.

        “Let’s change mate,” Joseph said. “I want my cock in that tight cunt.”
        We all couldn't miss the shudder Tina gave when she heard that.
        “Yeah, she has a hot cunt mate. A real fucking machine!" Mootie said.
        "Two hot cunts while our wives think we went to the pub!" Joseph laughed.
        "Yeah, mate! Thanks for telling me these pussies were begging for it," Mootie agreed.
        "More bullshit for the chat room. They knew their wives knew where they were. They also knew their wives would be watching the show.
        Both men pulled out and for a moment left Tina looking lost and disappointed. But then they were back. This time Joseph was pushing into her cunt while Mootie was introducing his pussy-juice coated cock to her mouth. She took them both with ease and soon the fucking action started again.
        This time it was Joseph doing most of the work. We could see his powerful body working. The muscles of his chest, arms and legs working, his dark oil coated skin glistening in the bedroom light as he held Tina by her hips and fucked her. He wasn’t being particularly gentle either.
        In front of her, Mootie’s cock came in and she took him in her mouth now. I think them changing like that must have set her off because within moments she was into another orgasm. We didn’t hear much this time because her mouth was full of cock but we couldn’t miss how her body reacted. This was wild fucking and exciting to watch too.
        I looked down at myself and saw I was hard as steel. Normally I’d be giving myself a hand-job while watching something like this but tonight I was saving myself for what we had planned next.

        We could see Joseph was getting close now. That tight pussy was getting to him now. He gave a moan, made a few very powerful strokes as his cum arrived. Slipping back out of her, he held his cock, aiming it all over the round globes of her arse as he began to shoot. He had been saving himself for tonight and could really give her a lot, making a mess over her arse and lower back.
        Tina had felt him pull out. Felt him begin to cum over her arse. It must have felt good by the moan she gave as she lifted her head off Mootie’s cock. As Joseph started rubbing his cum around with his hands, that was enough for Tina. She cum again.
        Three in such a short time. That was pretty impressive, Tina/Sharon.

        Mootie moved back around to take over from Joseph and finish off in her pussy. He was really giving it to her now, huge strokes as his cock pounded into her, his body crashing into her arse with each thrust. He didn’t hold anything back and quickly it was taking a toll on both of them. Suddenly, she cum again, pressing back against him as her pussy tightened around his cock.
        Then did it for him too. Like his mate Joseph, Mootie pulled out to add his load to the mess Joseph had made. While Tina made a series of soft moans, Mootie rubbed his cum all over her arse and back too. She fell forward and collapsed on the bed. That was one well fucked woman.


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Karene’s Turn to get Spit-Roasted.


        But Joseph and Mootie weren’t finished yet. They had both quickly recovered and were looking around for their next victim. Yes, it was the woman who had been holding the cam, giving us those wonderful shots of the fucking, we’d just seen.
        “Now it’s Karene’s turn,” Joseph said.
        “Come on girl,” Mootie added. “Don’t be shy. We know you want both our big cocks at the same time.”
        “Tina, take the cam again, so we get another white woman to fuck.”
        Tina disappeared out of view and we saw the cam move as it was handed from one woman to the other. Then a still naked Sexy Karene appeared in the scene. The two men quickly had her on the bed rubbing oil all over her body. Those close-ups of Joseph’s hands all over her tits were great. The view of her face as he did it was also great. There was no acting here. She was enjoying it.
        Joseph didn’t mess around with her, taking her straight into another spit roasting. First Mootie had his cock in her mouth while Joseph went for her pussy. His pounding into her from the rear was causing her head to be forced further onto Mootie’s cock. It was good sexy. Looked great for Karene and we all saw how quickly she orgasmed.
        It was a good show, some rough sex as they had no intention of sparing her.
        They didn’t swap this time. I think that might have been the plan but it looked like Karene’s hot pussy was too much for Joseph. We saw him pull back and deliver a load over Karene’s bum. Tina caught some lovely shots of Joseph's cum shooting over Karene's arse and back.
        As Joseph moved away and Mootie replaced him, we missed what happened next as we were getting ready for our surprise. I later heard that it didn’t take long before Mootie was getting close too. Karene took another couple of cums along the way too.


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Two Angry Husbands.


        Then it was time to make our move. Leaving the laptops running in the basement we went through the garage and upstairs into the house.
        It was getting close to the end of Jenny’s show. Time for us to make sure it all went wrong for these two women. Stopping outside the bedroom door, we waited until Mootie had cum over Sexy Karene/Jenny’s arse.

        It was at that moment that Steve and I burst into the room. “Hello,” I said in a loud voice, “I am ‘Sexyblueeyes.’
        Both women were shocked.
        “Steve!” Tina/Sharon gasped.
        “Peter!” Sexy Karene/Jenny said, almost at the same time.
        Of course, both the Indian men weren’t surprised as they knew what we planned, both were grinning, waiting to enjoy the reactions of two shocked women when we suddenly appeared.
        “You two have been very bad girls,” I said.
        “But Peter, I...”
        “No excuses, Karene,” I said, keeping in character with her show. “You’ve been cheating on me. Look at you. Still cheating on me. Doing it behind my back, laughing about it with your viewers online.”
        “But how did you know...?”
        “Well, I’ve been watching you since it was just your own show.”
        Her mouth opened in surprise at that.
        “We’ve all been watching you. All our friends are watching. Give them a nice wave, Karene. They are all watching,” Steve added.
        Sexy Karene didn’t look that sexy anymore. She was shocked, speechless, didn’t know what to do. For Steve and I, we intended this little bit of drama before we fucked them both as a final show. We wanted it to be real for the viewers. Karene had said she was playing around behind her husband’s back. The shock was not faked. She was shocked. Both women were.
        The chat room was silent too as everyone watched, wondering what would happen next. Wondering how this drama would play out.
        I must admit, I was kind of enjoying it.

        Meanwhile, Joseph was standing out of shot by the cam watching with a smile on his face while Mootie had quickly picked up the cam ready to video what would happen next.
        “Now, the way I see it,” Steve said. “Since you’ve been fucking these two men behind our backs. Make that, four men, counting Jarrod and Mark the last two weeks. The way we see it is that we get to fuck you two. Anyway, and anyhow, we like.”
        Tina/Sharon was just looking at him, her arms folded across her chest which was a bit of a waste of time now, don’t you think? She was listening as Peter continued.
        “I’m going to fuck you, Tina,” Steve said to Sharon, his real wife. “Then we’re going to swap and I’ll fuck you Karene. I’ve always fancied being with you and now I have my chance.”
        “But, Steve. I don’t...” Tina/Sharon tried to say.
        “No, Tina!” Steve said. “You strayed outside your marriage, that makes you fair game for me to have my turn and Peter to follow me.” Turning to Jenny he continued. “I’ve always wanted to get into your pussy Karene. Now my wife has given me a hall pass to do it.”
        “You want that, Tina?” I asked. “I know you like me. Saw you checking me out at the gym.”
        “No, Peter, we can’t. My husband is...”
        “Oh, don’t worry about him. He wants my wife. And he can have her, as much as he likes, anyway he likes. Mouth, cunt, even her arse if he wants. I don’t care. You’ll be probably getting the same.”
        By now both women were beginning to catch on that we were playing for the cam show. They decided to play along and take whatever we had planned for them.
        Both women looked shocked, well acting shocked now. I knew they had got over the shock by now but they both were managing to stay in character. Acting like they had never swapped before. I must admit they were doing a good job. Some good acting.
        The chat room had started moving again too. A few suggestive comments coming out now.

        First, we grabbed Sexy Karene and pulled her onto the bed. Our hands were all over her, followed by our mouths. It was a sexy show and we could all tell she was enjoying the attention we were giving her.
        Suddenly, I stopped and looked at Steve. “Go on mate. Give her a good fucking. Fuck my wife, I know you’ve always wanted to.”
        “No! No! Peter please,” Karene pleaded. “Don’t do this. I’m your wife. Don’t make me do this.”
        “Why not?” I replied. “My wife the slut? It didn't look like it earlier. You were cheating on me, so do it again.”
        By now we had her on her back. I was holding her down as she tried struggling against me but it was doing little good as by now Steve had dropped between her legs, her thighs were forced open.
        “No, Steve,” she pleaded. “Please! Please! Don’t do...”
        “Don’t fuck you? Why not? Seems everyone else has," Steve said.
        “It was only... Oh! Oh! Fuck!”
        Her pleading turned to a cry as he forced his way into her. He wasn’t gentle, just lining his cock up and slamming into her, going in as deep as he could. Then he started to hammer her. Some rough, wild fucking that time.
        “Peter, I...” she tried to say. Tried to plead to me.
        But I had no intention of stopping my friend fucking my wife. “Steve wants you,” I said. “Well, as far as I’m concerned, he can have you. Teach you a lesson for cheating on me.”
        “Oh!” she groaned again. But things were different now. It was clear she was beginning to enjoy it.
        Steve’s physical assault on her was taking her breath away. And I wasn’t interested in her protests either. Being caught up in what my friend was doing to my wife I was more than ready to join in the fucking too.
        I left Steve and my wife, fucking on cam as I left the view going after Tina.
        For a few moments, I stood watching until I felt it was time to get Tina and me going too. “Come on Sharon,” I whispered into her ear. “Make this good. Make it look like the first time I’ve fucked you. Struggle a bit.”
        She nodded yes, ready to continue her part of the show.

        Soon the viewers were watching Tina struggling as I pulled her into the picture and onto the bed, as I prepared to fuck her. She was crying out, pleading with me, trying to get me to stop.
        “No! Peter, don’t do this,” she pleaded. “Steve is your friend.”
        “But now Steve is fucking my wife,” I replied. “That means I get to fuck you. It’s only fair.
        “Peter! No!”
        “Why not? You dirty cheater.”
        "I was only trying to help Karene," Tina said.
        "Looked more like helping yourself, earlier. Helping yourself to a big helping of chocolate Indian cock.
        For a moment the Sharon side of Tina smiled at that. Must have found it funny before she recovered her role again.
        “You wanted a good fucking. Now you’re going to get it,” I told her, pulling her back into the role she was playing.
        Tina/Sharon struggled with me a bit, with lots of verbal protests. But we both knew she wanted it as much as I did and all her acting was just a show for the chatroom. I hoped it look real to them that these two women were being taken against their will.
        I got Tina on her hands and knees and went in at her doggy style. My cock thrusting in deep with only a few strokes. Soon I was going for it, fucking her hot pussy from behind and she was loving it too. Her arse pressed back at me with each stroke making me go deeper than I’d ever thought possible.

        Both women were being taken doggy now. Steve had turned Jenny/Sexy Karene over onto her hands and knees. We had planned it like this for the next part of our show. The next surprise for our wives.
        Almost at the same time, both Steve and I pulled back until our cocks pulled out of their pussies. Taking our cocks in our hands we thrust down at their bumholes. Before the women could stop us, we were in.
        Tina felt so tight as her bum hole gripped my cock. She was wet and lubed, but as we fucked, Mootie worked the cam while Joseph dripped more lub over our cocks and the women’s bumholes. Damn, that felt good and quickly I realised it was for Tina too. As she cum, her hole tightened and I cum too. It wasn’t what I intended so quickly but then, when do intense sex sessions like this ever go to plan.
        Somehow, Steve had managed to keep going and not cum himself. I knew he was trying to keep to our plan and cum during our big final scene.


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The Final Sex Scene.


        When Joseph and Mootie joined in again, this turned into two women being fucked by four men at once.
        They had set the cam up on the dresser looking at the end of the bed. From there, everything that happened on the bed, as well as in most of the room could be seen. It also meant that all six of us in the room could be involved in the final action.
        Karene saw what was happening and tried to escape. She was almost off the bed when Joseph caught her dragging her back. He forced her to lay with her back on top of Steve as Joseph applied a good amount of lub to her arse and Steve’s cock. Then Steve pressed his cock against the hole of my wife’s arse.
        She cried out as he forced his way into her but after only a few thrusts, her cries had dropped to a series of groans.
        She felt someone, on top of her and she opened her eyes to see Joseph’s face. She felt him push against her cunt lips and then he was inside her. Two men in her at the same time. Steve remained fairly passive in her arse while Joseph was fucking her cunt.

        Meanwhile, Tina was being tightly held by Mootie. She looked on in horror at what was happening to her friend, Sexy Karene. I was hard again now and ready for the last thing we’d planned for Tina.
        “Your turn now,” I told her "You're going to get the same."
        She began to struggle but she had no hope against Mootie and me. Soon she realised that and allowed herself to be dragged to the bed again. We arranged things as they were doing with Karene. Mootie was on the bottom with Tina laying back on top of him. Soon I had my cock deep in her arse. Mootie came down on us and soon she was giving Tina’s cunt a really good fucking.

        Both women were being taken in their arse and cunt at the same time while it was arranged so the cam was looking up between the women’s legs seeing them both taking two cocks.
        Viewing this recording later, I really saw what a hot show this was. The vocals from the women were amazing. Watching them being taken by two cocks was great too. Before long both women were hit with the first of what would be a series of orgasms for each of them.
        It felt good for us men too. Although I wasn’t moving much, I could feel Mootie’s cock moving as he fucked Tina. It actually felt really good and I knew I was going to get off with it. The way Tina’s body was shuddering and bucking through a series of orgasms felt good too.
        We were both almost ready to cum.
        I heard Mootie giving a deep moan and knew he was almost there. “Pull out mate,” I said. “Cum on her cunt.”
        He did, pulling out just as he began to cum. That was so hot and enough to get me going too. I pulled from her to cum over her cunt lips and arse hole too. That was all too much for Tina as her last orgasm hit too.

        Beside us, Joseph heard what I had told Mootie and did the same. As Steve pulled out of Karene and began to cum, Joseph did too. Karene got it all over her cunt lips and bum hole. She cum too when Joseph began rubbing it with his fingers. Her body jerked as she humped back at Steve's hand. She gave a cry and fell forward on top of Mootie.

        Two very well fucked women rolled from us and lay beside each other on the bed. I picked up the cam to record the mess they were in for all the viewers. They were so fucked out they could barely manage a smile for the face close-ups. I made sure I got good views of their soaking, cum covered pussies too. The final scene of an intense sex session.
        Her show had run way over time but I don’t think anyone in the chatroom minded that. There were still nearly 1500 viewers watching.


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To finish this story.


        Finally, a very well fucked Sexy Karene sat on the side of the bed, facing the cam. She explained, “Tina and I have been caught by our husbands. While they liked my show, they insist that it has to stop. This was my last show and my profile will be deleted as soon as I get back to the computer room.”
        We heard some of the viewers begin to complain but Sexy Karene wasn’t talking or listening anymore. She had made it very clear that this was all over. Moments later the cam she was using turned off. About ten minutes later, she signed off and then her profile disappeared from the website.
        Sexy Karene was gone!

        By then, Steve and I were back downstairs, looking at the Zoom session on my still open laptop. I looked around at all our friends. I had asked them to stay online after the Sexy Karene show had finished.
        Everyone was waiting for me to return. All the ‘action’ in the various screens had finished now and everyone was sitting talking, except for box S18K19. They seemed to have forgotten about Jenny's show, being more interested in what was going on in their own box. I could see the naked top half of both Kathy and Sabreena. Both girls were bouncing up and down, their tits doing a sexy little dance as they were obviously fucking the two guys laying below them out of sight of their cam.
        Well, Sexy Karene had outdone herself that night. It had been a great show and many of our friends, both men and women had found it highly erotic. I would have liked to have been watching the Zoom meeting as my guess was it had turned into quite a wild online orgy.

        I suddenly saw in my profile window that Jenny, still completely naked, had walked up behind me. She stepped up and put her arms around me as her breasts rested on my shoulders.
        She just smiled, saying, “Hi everyone!”
        “Hello, Sexy Karene,” Sarvesh said. “Ready for another show?”
        “No, Sarvesh,” she smiled. “Sexy Karene has retired. That was her last show.”
        “It was a great show,” Hansini said.
        Others agreed with her as Jenny accepted their comments.
        "Thanks, guys," she said. "I'm glad you all got to see that last show."
        Finally, it was time to sign off as we still had visitors up in the house who were staying the night. I was sure, Jenny and Sharon would be getting some more cock before the night was over.
        The following day, there was a swap around of our overseas visitors, Fred and Ginger from Australia moved in. Shanti had told us that the visitors assigned to us had been moved to stay with the new Japanese couple, Kenshin and Chiharu. This was to get them more involved in the group, and because I was 'out of town on business. We all know the real reason was to give Sexy Karene one more chance to play.

        So, that was the last time Sexy Karene was ever seen online. Her profile was gone and things with us returned to normal. If you could call normal as hanging out with a large group of sexy peope from New Zealand, Austalia and India.
        With those from India and Australia with us in New Zealand, there were lots of sexy parties and adventures to distract us. By the time we had the evening to sit down and seriously talk, Sexy Karene was a thing of the past. History now. Jenny knew she shouldn't have done that behind my back but she didn't really stray from our sex group. It was a big turn-on for me too so in the end we had just dropped the matter and moved on.
        But I still had the videos of every session I saw. Well worth bringing out and playing from time to time, especially if I was away on my trips to the car yard in Tauranga alone in my hotel room. It was kind of sexy to see Sexy Karene again in the same hotel room where I'd first seen her doing that first session.

                THE END.


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7 comments:

  1. Oh this is much better than the first half.
    Just a bit confused about the two sets of people watching but got that sorted and then enjoyed the story.
    Nina

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  2. This is a very different story theme. A very complex story but you handled it well. I notice you're becoming more adventurous in subjects too. Eg like fuck arse, etc. I wonder what the lady readers think of this.
    Anyway a damn good story. Loved both parts.
    Gordon

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  3. Oh great Kimberley and Allan snr.
    First, you had the sex performance itself. Second was all those in Jenny's online room watching. Third was the friends from Letters also holding a Zoom meeting. Finally was what Peter and Steve were doing down in the games room waiting to gatecrash the party upstairs. A very complex story running a few of parallel themes but I think you pulled it off well, particularly in this second part.
    The twist of the two husband's gate crashing the party was the best part I think.
    Rajah thought the sex scenes were handled well. Got quite out there towards the end. Those two women sure got a good fucking.

    This shows what a good team the two of you make. Well done Kim and Dad!
    Rajah and Sandra.

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  4. Yes, your second half didn't disappoint. It delivered all you promised and more.
    I loved the twisted confusing story. Unpredictable and holding my attention until the end.
    Well done Kim and Allan. You make a good writing team.

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  5. Loved the twists and turns in this story. Both parts were good as they led to that big climax at the end.
    You did that scene so well. For a while there you were working with three different groups of characters at the same time. Brilliant piece of writing to deliver that in a way we could all follow and understand.
    Keep delivering like that, please.
    Brett.

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  6. Oh wow! This one really takes the prize.
    Again so much going on. Then the two husbands walk in. Oh, that was so good.
    Jenny

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  7. Thank you for all your comments.
    We are pleased with this story and even more pleased when some good writers comment favourably above. It tells us we got it right.
    Yes, this last session was by far the hardest to do. Putting the Zoom meeting in made it way more complex because we created the situation where there could be a number of people fucking at the same time. An online orgy was how it is put in the story.
    One part I like was the reaction of the men in Karene's room when the husbands walk in. They were shocked and wondering what would happen next. Those in Zoom knew it was coming but those in the chatroom didn't. Mootie and Joseph knew Peter and Steve were downstairs but Karene/Jenny and Tina/Sharon didn't. So much to think about as we wrote.
    Yes I think this would have to be one of the best stories I've personally been involved in writing.
    Kia/Kim

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