Letter 57 Extra Story One Background

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         Story One – Peter and Amita.

                                                                        Posted by Anne.

Hi Anne here:-

         When we came to write these six stories following the dominoes game the stories were divided up with Shandra and I taking two and Allan and Susan taking one each. We wanted to make each of them different so since all four of us were involved in the writing it was important that we stayed informed with what others were writing. We had a few meetings discussing the various ideas being added to the different stories and shared what we were doing too.

         This communication, this interaction between us also led to ideas being swapped as well which completely changed the main theme of more than one letter. So you can see that it was no accident that the stories ended up the way they did. Some of us also took this opportunity to expand on the dominoes game too, which is something I did in Story One.    

         Now we get to the point where Peter comes into Amita’s room. First, he begins to undress her. This story was originally written with Amita paired with Steve but since these two would be paired together in some of the key stories at the holiday resort in Vol Seven it was later decided to change the man in this story to Peter. But we then had a problem here because now we had Peter instead of Steve taking her clothes off. There was supposed to have been a bit of fun about Steve making a mess of it with Lizamoa at the second Ripper Stripper Party (Letter 36) so we had to change this to Amita being surprised that a European man knew how to remove an Indian sari. In the end, it worked well. 

         This was going well until she was half undressed when she became overcome with her desire for him. Still, like that, they ended up on the bed. When she came to take her sari-skirt off in her rush she pulled the string into a knot. In her frustration, she was only making it worse until Peter took over untying the string. Just a chance to add in a bit of fun.

         The sex that followed was good. It certainly wasn’t the best sex scene we have written but then it wasn’t the worst either. Just some good sex which they both appeared to enjoy. I think what makes this story work for me is the humour of the sari-skirt which leads nicely into the sex scenes.

         Next week we are going to see what Sharon and Sarvesh got up to in their night together.   

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Letter 57 Game of Dominoes

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From Joseph,            
The Game Reserve,                
Andhra Pradesh,                    
India.                        

            To Shanti,
                Titirangi,
                    Auckland,
                        New Zealand.

Dear Shanti and Mike,
        Hello from India. Thank you for a good letter and not to forget the well-written story as well. Here we are in India in good health and happiness and we are hoping to hear you are also.
        As I was saying in our last letter to you, we were glad to hear that your daughter arrived without any problems. And also we were interested to hear what colour she was. In our case, our son is still very light in colour compared to either Lizamoa or myself. Lizamoa is now almost completely certain that I am not the father. During that time Lizamoa had two sexual partners who were European; you Mike and later, you Peter. Since you Mike were with her soon after you arrived here she thinks you are the most likely father. Even if this is true I do not mind. As far as the child is concerned I am his father and we will not be wanting to do any tests to find out for the real truth. After telling you this, Lizamoa and I have decided we will drop the ideas and not talk about this again.
        Oh Shanti, as I said last time, you are such a rebel. You want to go against everything women should enjoy. You are complaining for all of the nine months about the being pregnant. Now want everyone to have test tube babies. Ha Ha. And don’t you want your family to visit you and enjoy your baby too?
        A picture of contentment! That one is too funny. But then maybe all the beached whales and the waddling ducks are contented now too.
        Now don’t be in the rush to be getting back to your working place. But I know you, Shanti. You'll probably want to drive from the hospital straight to your working place.
        Enjoy your new baby and spend the time with her. You will not be getting the chance to be so close with her again. Children grow up so very fast so don’t be wasting this special time by rushing back into the working place. It is better if you can take their offer and be doing some work from home. I like that idea better if you must work. Now, Lizamoa has had our child she will not be working again until the child is older.
        We have both been asked to attend an interview with the New Zealand High Commission. We will be travelling there next week. My mother who is now planning to come to live in New Zealand with us will also be having the interview as well. If this goes OK then there will not be anything to stop us from going to New Zealand very soon.

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         Dominoes The Game.

                                                                                Posted by Shandra.

Hi, Shandra here.

          First some admin stuff. Letter 57 was always going to be a complex one to publish. You see it could be considered one very long letter written by a number of people or it could be divided into seven different stories. For the on-line version, we have decided to do it the second way as we also did in the printed version. We have a story called Dominoes and then a section called Dominoes Extras which contained the other six stories. So the posts over the next seven weeks can all be considered to be under the general heading of The Dominoes Game.

         The publication date was rushing up and nothing had been done about the backgrounds for any of these seven stories.
          One day Anne said, “Come on guys let’s get these done.”

          We all sat down on the deck one afternoon and in about four hours all seven background stories were written. It was a big push. Kim and Ayaka got involved too, even though they weren’t a part of the Project when the original stories were written. Even Rajah was involved as he opened seven Word files and began typing up as sections of the various backgrounds as they were completed. Late Kim was helping him as well on another laptop.

            Now about my story. So the first question you may be asking is why dominoes? I could reply to that with, ‘well why not?’ but let me explain instead. We first intended to use cards, and the stories were written using cards, but at about that time one of us had been given a set of dominoes and we were having fun playing a game called‘Chicky Foot.’

            Then Susan comes up with the idea of using the dominoes instead of the cards.

            “Why would they do that?” I asked her.

            “Maybe they can’t find a pack of cards,” she replied.

            I quick look at stories showed that with a bit of re-writing in this story and a few word changes in some of the others we could easily pull this off and so we went for it. Soon the card game was gone to be replaced with a game of dominoes. Have you ever played a game of dominoes to decide who you will be having a night of sex with? No! Then that shows what a good idea this was.

            Now Joseph opens this letter with the usual news items. Of course, the current topic seems to be babies. It appears that he is now certain he is not Jagesh’s natural father. So since Mike had sex with Lizamoa at about the time it would have happened we can fairly safely conclude that he is the father. Notice he also says they he and Liz now intend to drop the subject and not discuss it again. About time, you readers must be getting sick of it by now too.

            Joseph also can’t leave Shanti’s comment alone about her being a picture of contentment during her pregnancy. Then he laughs that at least all the waddling ducks and beached whales have gone for a while.

            The main body of the letter begins with Joseph giving us a summary of their tour through India before he settles down to tell us about their sexy adventures in the city of Madurai. First off, of course, we see Mike looking for a pack of cards. We already know where the cards went. The writers took them. Ha! Ha! Then a barman produced the set of dominoes for the game.

            When they settled down to play the game, everyone was in agreement except Mandara who was unable to have sex that night. This left them with the problem of having more men than women so Mike dropped out of the game too.

             So the order of the girls was decided using numbers pulled out by each girl. That was easy enough. They could have them done the same with the guys as well and things would have been sorted. But instead, they began playing this game. It was closely fought by the guys which seemed like a waste of time considering the results were probably going to get changed afterwards anyway.

            Part way through the game Shanti adds a little extra section where she and Lizamoa tell the barman what they were playing for. It seems like at first, he didn’t believe them until later when he was watching the results being called out and each girl going to sit beside a guy.

           Well, the game finished and they all found out who they would be spending the night with. It appears that the results were well received. Finally, Mike gave them all a surprise when he told them that they would be writing an account of their night for the Letters Book.

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Letter 56 Part C Story Night

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Part C – Nude Beach and Wet T-shirts.

Mandara – Letter 33    Going to the Nudist Beach.

It's Shanti again as I continue with my story.
        “Now Lizamoa when you came to New Zealand you were doing even more than just showing to one man. In letter 33 you are talking about going to a beach and taking the bikini top and the bottom off as well,” said Mandara. “Was this really your idea?”
        >Before she could reply, Joseph cut in and said, “Yes we were having breakfast the morning after we had played the game strip. We were talking about the evening and how we had ended up naked in front of seven other people.
        I asked Lizamoa how did she feel showing her nude body to all those people and she replied that once she had her clothes off she liked it a bit. She also said she would like to do it again too.”
        “It was then that Lizamoa surprised all of us,” began Mike. “Suddenly she began asking me about a nude beach. I told her that there was one not too far from where we lived and then she shocked us all by asking if we could go and see it. I explained to her that everyone there would be naked and she replied that she knew that. Here let me quote from the letter.”
        Mike reached over and took the letter book off Mandara. He flicked over a couple of pages and then began reading.

Letter 56 Part C Background.

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         Part C  The Final Stories.

                                                                        Posted by Susan.
        The final part of this story’s background has been left to me, Susan. to tell.

        The stories continued with Mandara asking about Letter 33 “The NudeBeach.” They talked about it and then Peter suggested Mike takes Mandara to a nude beach. What they did on the “beach” was probably not what you would do on a normal nude beach but they had some fun. Well, Mandara certainly did as Mike gave her a massive orgasm. 

       The next letter was Letter 31 “The Wet-T-Shirt Contest. This was another surprise for Lizamoa when Amita produced the T-shirt shirt Liz had actually worn in the contest in New Zealand. Shanti said she was surprised that Liz still kept that. Back in that first story, she had asked if she could keep it and here she was wearing it again while Peter wet it for her.

        The “wet T-shirt contest” which followed went far beyond what would happen in a normal contest but it seems that everyone had a lot of fun doing it. At one point it looked like it was going to turn into a full on water fight when the girls turned on the two water boys, Peter and Steve, and gave them some of their own back.

        Finally once the contest was over and all six girls had been announced as 1^st equal they all decided on going for another swim.

        The afternoon finishes with Mandara asking if all the stories real. We learn from Shanti and Joseph that only a few of the very early ones were made up while the rest they claimed as being real adventures.    

         Next week we get to play a game of Dominoes. Ever played Dominoes? Well, these guys might be playing it slightly differently to how you would have played it.

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Letter 56 Part B Story Night.

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Part B - The Stories Begin.

It's Shanti again as I continue with my story.
        This was when Amita introduced the game she wanted us to play. This game was about the many letters and stories we had written. The idea was for each of our friends to pick out their favourite letter and we would tell them about the story and answer any questions.
        We had eight stories to discuss during the afternoon and early evening.

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        Part B  The Stories.

                                                                        Posted by Anne.
Hi, Anne here.

        Last week Shandra told you how the Story Night started as a short letter but evolved into two letters. The first one became the story “Crocodile Hunter.” The second one retained the name “Story Night” but was later cut into three sections for posting on this blog/site. This week I want to tell you where the idea came from and the purpose of this letter.

        First the idea of having a story night. Back in Letter 45 when Mike and Shanti arrived in India they had an evening where the letters book and the photo albums were shown to their Indian friends. The purpose of this first story was to launch the Indian Trip into some sexy adventures almost from the start. While I suggested this story, I wasn’t actually involved in writing much of it.

        So since there has always been keen competition between Shandra and me, it was only natural that I wanted to have a go at a similar story. Originally this was going to be Letter 52 where the albums were shown to the New Zealand couples but this didn’t turn out like that as we finally decided just to mention that they had seen the albums.

         So when I suggested that we do a Story Night the other girls were against it. They said it would just turn out a copy of the earlier story. But I told them I wanted to have an evening where each person gets to select their favourite story and Shanti or Joseph would tell them about it. They were still not too keen but they agreed to me having a go and see where it went.

        Once I got started the idea sort of took off. Soon both Susan and Shandra became involved with the writing. Allan then revised much of the conversation and made a few other improvements. Finally, more recently Ayaka and Kim had a go at some scenes as well. Rajah did some work too. Yes, I know what you are saying:- “Another joint venture.” And of course, you are right.

        There is another purpose for this story as well. The story provides extra material to develop the characters that will be playing major roles in the Dominoes stories. It also gives us some interesting insights into some of these earlier stories as well. 

         Now about the story itself. Amita launches the game by asking about Letter 17 The Secret Watcher at the Beach. During this conversation, they get Shanti to admit that she did actually enjoy putting on a show for that guy up on the cliff.

       Then we come to Peter asking about the Sex at the Christmas Tree Farm inLetter 43. Perhaps the highlight of this section is that exchange between Peter and Lizamoa when Liz jumps up to defend Mike and Shanti against his teasing. Originally this was just a couple of sentences until our new writer team got involved.

        They turned the conversation into a more heated exchange where Lizamoa really goes for Peter for suggesting that Mike was in any way using Shanti. Peter is a bit shocked at this and tries to back out of what he said but Liz is having none of that as she is still going for him. Finally, Joseph steps in and calms her down. I like this because I think it develops and brings out a new side to Lizamoa’s personality which we haven’t seen much of up until this point.  Good work Ayaka and Kim.

           Well, the stories continued with each person selecting a story. When it came to the ice cream story we suddenly discover why Mike was taken away by Amita. They need someone to show them how to roll an ice cream ball. The ice cream story also took things to a new level because from then on they began acting out parts of the stories. Like for example Lizamoa showing them what she was doing beside the lake in a very hot scene.

           This section ends with a short conversation which introduces someone who is to become an important character in the Letters Series. We discover that the watcher from the lake in Letter 14  “The NudePhotography Session by the Lake” is a man called Mootie whom Joseph had actually hired to work in the Game Reserve. Then Lizamoa was shocked to learn that she had actually seen him that very day and Mike and Shanti had been talking to him.

          Next week we get the third and final section of this story. You do not want to miss what happens when Sarvesh asked about the Wet T-shirt contest.

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Letter 56 Part A Story Night.

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From Shanti,            
Titirangi,            
Auckland,            
New Zealand.            

            To Joseph,
            The Game Reserve,
            Andhra Pradesh,
            India.

Part A - Lizamoa’s Naughty Pussy.

Hi Joseph and Lizamoa,
        Hi from New Zealand again. We hope this letter finds you both, sorry I mean the three of you, in the very best of health and happiness. How are you managing with the baby Lizamoa?
        Here in New Zealand, we are fine. As we told you via E-mail, the baby arrived safely and everyone is saying I had an easy time of it too. I still thought it was hard enough having to get that big head through my tiny little hole. There should be a better way than this. Maybe we could just go somewhere and they take an egg off me then Mike comes along and pours his cum all over it. Nine months later we just go back and pick up our new baby. Wouldn’t that be much simpler?
        But then again once it was all over and I was holding darling Kathy in my arms it was all so different. I took her home after a few days and to everyone’s surprise except me, she is such a good baby.
        My mother says that it is not fair as I need to have a baby like I was to her, crying and giving her such a hard time. She says I deserve that too for all the complaining I did during my pregnancy. Me complaining? Never! I was a picture of contentment the whole way through my pregnancy. Ha Ha!

Letter 56 Part A Background

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         Before the Stories.

                                                                        Posted by Shandra.
Hi Shandra here:-
         First off this letter opens with the usual opening remarks, this time mainly talking about their babies. Now Shanti has come home with her baby she could settle down to complete her letter.
         These opening remarks in this letter are classic Anne. She managed to put in so much of herself, her thoughts, her attitudes, the way she speaks and not forgetting how she feelings about some of her relations too. When we mentioned it to Anne she denied it saying it is just the way Shanti in the story would act. But of course, we know different don't we?

        The original version of this Letter was actually planned to cover the Crocodile Hunting story and Story Night in one, shorter letter but as we began writing it became clear this wasn’t going to happen. The decision was made to split it into two stories having the hunting story in the first letter and Story Night in the second. Since Shanti was due to have a baby we then came up with the idea of her dropping the letter and rushing off to have her baby and then returning to complete the story later. As Kim explained last week we popped a short letter in, a reply from Joseph to give the impression of some time passing between her two letters. This is how it remains today.
        Now for the purpose of on-line publishing, we further divided Story Night into three sections. I will be your guide for this opening section – Part A, then Anne will tell you about the first stories they talked about in Part B. Finally Susan will complete the stories and round off the Letter in Part C.
        In the end, this Letter has involved the whole team of writers. It was originally written by Anne with a lot of input from Susan, Allan, and I. Then recently as we were preparing it for publishing on-line Kim, Ayaka and Rajah became involved as well.

       So who wrote this story? All seven of us did. Ha Ha.

         The really big scene in this section begins when one of the servants, a girl called Katrina, is delivering drinks. She was the servant who caught Mike standing up on the diving board totally nude a few days before. (See the end of Letter 52 Part B) There is a brief exchange between them where Mike says ‘sorry’ for the other night and she says she is Ok about it now. But then she adds something which I think is rather bold for a servant. She says, “I think you are a handsome man.”   

         Well after Katrina had gone, Lizamoa quickly picks up on this and begins teasing Mike. We wanted this to be funny and maybe just a bit naughty with one of the men giving her a feel-up and perhaps slapping her bare bottom but then Susan became involved and it quickly turned into a hot little sex session.

        Recently our new writing team of Kim and Ayaka had a go at it too. They have a different way of doing conversations. They role play them. To see how effective this works you might like to go back and compare the first two conversations of Letter 48 Part A. The first one was written by Allan and the second one was written by Kim and Ayaka. See the difference.

        Now back in this letter Kim and Ayaka also added that little bit where Lizamoa acts like she is a little girl and calls her husband “Daddy Joseph” and Mike “Uncle Mike.” The first time they used this was in Letter 52 Part B when they were at the club. Since it worked so well there they decided to try it again here. When Anne saw the completed version she loved it.

         Now just to add a bit of mystery when Amita and Sarvesh went to get the drinks she returns to get Mike. He went off with her. Why did they need him? Find out next week.   

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Letter 55 We Will Keep the Hunting Story.

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From Joseph,            
The Game Reserve,                
Andhra Pradesh,                    
India.                        

            To Shanti,
                Titirangi,
                    Auckland,
                        New Zealand.

Dear Shanti and Mike,
        Yes, Shanti, this confirms it, you are different to most women. Here you are when most women would be rushing to get to the hospital because their baby is coming, but not you. You are continuing to write your letter to me.
        Then your Mum drives you to the hospital and you arrive with the contractions almost continuing. A few hours later and it is all over.
        Lizamoa says it is not fair. It was so quick too. She took many hours before our baby Jagash was born. Well, at least there will be no more waddling ducks and beached whales at your house now. Ha Ha.
        Well, we must wish you both congratulations on the birth of your daughter Kathy. We received the photos in your E-mail and we are thinking she is a very pretty girl. She is a beautiful colour like honey, not white and not brown. This is like the colour our son is too which makes Lizamoa and me more certain that I am not the natural father.

        What are we going to do with you, Shanti regarding your comments about Indian males. Why do you have such a low opinion of us! I am thinking it is that rebellious nature of yours shining through again.
        I would suggest to Mike that he puts you over his knee and spank your bare bum but knowing you, you'd probably enjoy it. End up having an orgasm or something.

        I agree that the story you told was not like the others as a sexy story. But I agree we could still keep it in the book. Somehow I am thinking that seeing a girl hunting is a bit sexy too. Usually, women in India are not like that. I am surprised that Lizamoa wanted to come and watch too.
        I think Lizamoa admires you Shanti and would like to be more like you. But I, myself do not think this would be a good idea because one ‘Shanti’ is more than enough. With two, I do not be thinking Mike and myself could be handling it.
        Yes, Shanti, I will allow you to keep this story in our letter book.

                Bye for now,
                        Love from,
                                From Joseph and Lizamoa.

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                                                                        Posted by Kim.

         We ended letter 54 with Shanti dropping her letter and rushing off to the hospital to have the baby. Later her husband Mike finds the letter and sends it to Joseph and Lizamoa.

         Hi, it is Kim here. Yes I know I didn’t write the original letter, Susan did but I’ve been asked to take Anne’s notes and do this background since Susan is involved in another story. 

          We wanted to create a sense that some time had gone by between the first half of Shanti’s letter in Letter 54 and the second half in Letter 56. We did this in two ways. First, we added this short letter from Joseph showing that they had time to reply before Shanti sent her second part. We also added the detail that Joseph and Lizamoa already knew she had a little girl and even seen photos of her via email and the internet.

        Joseph notes that little Kathy is a similar colour to their son. Indian babies are usually a lot darker with both Indian parents whereas both of these babies appeared to be of mixed race between an Indian and a European. This confirms even more that Mike might be the father of Lizamoa’s baby as well.  

        The final major point of this letter is that Joseph agrees that the crocodile hunting story should remain in the letters books. He also says he thinks a woman being able to hunt is a bit sexy too. This is probably why he agreed to keep the hunting story. Did you notice almost his last sentences “Yes I will allow you……” I bet Shanti picked up on that one too.

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Letter 54 Crocodile Hunter.

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From Shanti,            
Titirangi,            
Auckland,            
New Zealand.            

            To Joseph,
            The Game Reserve,
            Andhra Pradesh,
            India.

Hello to you, Joseph, Lizamoa and Ragesh.
        Hi from New Zealand again.
        We are still doing very well. I have quit work for a while to have the baby. I’m now five days overdue. Mike said she must have heard me moaning about how much I like being pregnant and she is staying in there longer just to teach me a lesson. Anyway, the doctor said that if nothing happens soon they may need to help things along or even in the worst case take the baby.
        Congratulations on the birth of your son. We were so pleased to read that everything went well when we received your E-mail. It was even better on Sunday when you talked with us on the phone.
        It is very interesting that the baby is a lot lighter in colour than normal Indian babies. Like you said often babies are first a bit lighter in colour soon after they are born. We will have to see how he looks after a few months but I can’t help wondering about what you told us concerning the possible father.
        Yes, Joseph, you kicked my arse that time. I will try to 'refrain' from comments about Sarvesh or Indian males in general. Well, maybe I might slip in a little comment when you are not looking. Ha! Ha!

Letter 54 Background.

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                                                                        Posted by Anne.

Hi, Anne here.
       First off we needed to get this baby thing out of the way. The letter mentions that Lizamoa has had her baby and Shanti tells us that she has stopped working until the baby arrives. She also says the baby is now overdue just to teach her a lesson for her complaining. We had been playing with this baby theme for a while and so I decided we had to end it. Notice how Susan did this at the end of this letter.

Now on to the story.

       We were going to do a second picnic beside the lake but as I began writing it was turning out too much like Shandra’s story back in Letter 49. I decided I want something different. This is what I ended up with.
       This was the second trip into the Game Reserve but this time things had changed. A large crocodile had decided to take up residence at the small lake and was killing the animals. The decision was made to hunt and kill it.

       So where did this crocodile hunting idea come from and how did it get into a collection of sexy stories? At about the time this letter was written Allan had taken me hunting for the first time. When he asked me, at first I wasn’t keen although Susan was, so I decided to go along with them. Then Allan said something which changed my entire view of this hunting thing. He said he thought a woman who could hunt was kind of sexy. So I had a go and was soon enjoying it, not that I was much good at it.

        Now the next problem was concerning the hunting in India. In New Zealand, we hunted rabbits and goats on Allan’s uncle’s farm. But then hunting these was not particularly exciting. We want something more exciting and probably more dangerous.
       Our first choice was, of course, a tiger. Maybe it could be a tiger killing the rare animals in the Game Reserve. Then we learnt that tigers were very rare themselves and being almost totally protected we thought even in a story killing one might not go down to well. So we decided on a rogue crocodile instead. Again I am not sure if they would kill a crocodile in a Game Reserve but then it makes a good story doesn’t it.

Later Add-Ins:-

         Later we managed to work in a remark by Joseph that Shanti is always surprising him. He thought maybe she should have been a boy. We also added a bit where Shanti and Mike were riding in the back of a truck where they had a conversation with a man called Mootie. Remember this man, he will play an important role in many of the future stories. We will learn more about him and who he actually is in Letter 56. If you look ahead on the Index Page you will see his name a few times. This was also a good chance to add an insight into Shanti's lack of ability to speak any language other than English,
         Finally, Susan added that little bit at the end where Shanti has to leave off the letter and rush to have her baby. This is the part where Mike finds and finishes the letter for her then sends it off to India.

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Letter 53 Nude Day Two.

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From Joseph,            
The Game Reserve,                
Andhra Pradesh,                    
India.                        

            To Shanti,
                Titirangi,
                    Auckland,
                        New Zealand.

Dear Shanti and Mike,
        Hello, from India. Thank you for a good letter and not to forget the well-written out story as well. Here we are in India in good health and happiness and we are hoping to hear you are also.
        Lizamoa is due any day now. It is good that my mother is staying with us and she can help Lizamoa. Any day soon I will be getting the call with the phone telling me what is happening and then I will take some leave to help when the baby is new. It is not always common for the men in India to be very involved with the children but after talking with you and Mike I have made my mind to be very involved in every aspect of our children.
        We are both amused by your description of yourself as pregnant. Waddling like a duck and sitting like a beached whale, is very funny. Ha! Ha! Surely it is not as bad as all of that you are saying.
        Shanti, you always surprise me. Why do you always have to be so different, so stubborn and headstrong? Always you are thinking differently to what others think. You dress against what your mother wanted you to even on your wedding day. You decide who you will marry yourself, although I must be saying you made the correct choice there. Now when all women should be happy to be pregnant you are complaining about being fat.
        Lizamoa says maybe it is all those years when the speech you were having problems talking has put you down. Now that problem is almost never there you are now showing the other personality which was kept hidden.
        Now, Shanti, I must say I do not approve of your comments regarding Sarvesh, his castle on the mountain and his empire building. Sarvesh is a good man and doesn't deserve you taking pot-shots at him like that. Please refrain from this in future letters.

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                                                                                                                     Posted by Shandra.

Hi, Shandra here.
         I will be doing the background of this letter since I wrote most of it. But before I begin I want to make a couple of points about this letter. Yes, I know that with stories this long, other writers get involved as well and it happened with this letter too. It seems that more and more we tend to do this, adding to each other’s work. But it makes for better stories that way.
       Secondly, this letter is a very old story, by that I mean it was written when we first were working on this section of Letters and unlike many other stories, we have never gone back to improve or update it. In particular, the game could do with either another game or some major re-working but this has not happened. More about that below.

         The story starts with a bit of fun from the guys as Amita is telling them what she has planned for the day. It was at about this time that I heard Allan’s uncle use the word “nooky.” It is a very old slang name for sex. I liked it and so I added it to my story. When the girls read it they were really amused too. So for a while, there were heaps “nooky” jokes between us before we moved on to something else.

         The next interesting event happened when they were about to get into the pool. This is again actually based on something that happened with us too. Let me just describe the scene first because many of our real sexy adventures happen in this place. Up the back of our farm, a stream runs down a steep valley through an area of trees and bush. At one place the stream goes over a waterfall and into a nice deep pool below. This pool is over my head near the waterfall. It then goes between two flat rocks and over another smaller waterfall before continuing on down through the farm. Beside the pool is a nice grassy area where you can have a picnic or anything else you might decide to do after swimming nude in the pool.

         A group of us were sitting naked eating our lunch after a swim when the subject of skin colour came up. With the three of us each being a different race our skins and bodies are a bit different in many small ways too.

         Suddenly Susan jumped up pulling me up too. She then described the various parts of my Indian body pointing them out as she did. The others sitting watching were laughing and enjoying the fun. To end she pushed me off the flat rock into the pool. Then Anne jumped up and did something similar to her except Anne even reached down and pulled open the lips of her pussy showing the pink inside. Like me, Susan ended up in the pool.

        This was followed by a conversation in which we decided to use this in the story I was writing. First, we had Sharon and Steve did it and then they were followed by something a little bit sexier with Sarvesh and Amita. I think this part of the story really works well.    

         Now we get to that game. This is the part of the story where we struggled. I think the description is too drawn out and clumsy. I have tried to inject a bit of fun in at various places but I’m still not happy with it. But now the publication date has almost arrived and it’s still not how I would like it. At last week’s meeting, Anne and Allan said they would have another look at it otherwise it might end up being published the way it is. 

         Next week we go back to the little lake at the Game Reserve but things turn out very differently to the first time we were there.

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Letter 52 Part B The New Zealanders Arrive.

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Part B – At the Club.

Hi from Shanti again.
        When we arrived at the club somebody was waiting outside to greet Sarvesh and show us to the restaurant. They really looked after him and us as well, as his guests. We didn’t realise that when he had rung to add another couple to our table, he actually cancelled our table and ordered another in a better location overlooking the garden and the pool.
        We were shown to our table immediately because by then we were running a bit late. It was a bit amusing to see the reaction of the staff and other guests of the restaurant. We certainly made an impression. I’m not sure an altogether good impression but definitely an impression.
        Again it was a good meal. We allowed Sarvesh to order both the meal and the drinks. I was surprised at how well the waiters and restaurant staff looked after him. Nothing seemed to be too much trouble. Obviously, he was well known here and I bet being on the management committee and a part owner made all the difference too.
        After the meal, Sarvesh made a toast. We held up our glasses as he said in a voice just loud enough for us all to hear but nobody else, “Here’s to panties.”
        “Or lack of them,” Steve added. “May they always remain at home.”
        We all laughed as we sipped at our drinks.
        “Here is another toast,” Peter said. “To all the sexy ladies at our table.”
        “And the handsome guys too,” Jenny added.
        Then Steve made the final toast. “Here to our holiday in India. May we add many more pages to Joseph and Shanti’s naughty letters book.”
        “Not naughty letter book, Steve. It’s a sexy letter book,” said Jenny.
        “The same thing, full of naughty, sexy stories.”

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The New Zealanders Arrive.
                      The Club. 
                                                                                                                       Posted by Allan.
Hi Allan here now:-

          Since Susan and I wrote this whole letter together it is now hard to tell which bits were hers and which were mine. When Anne decided to cut it into two parts for publishing on-line, Susan and I decided to do a background each.  

         As Part B starts we pick up the story again as they arrive at the club. We saw the club scenes as a great opportunity to develop the personality of Sarvesh. In the story last week, Amita let slip that they actually owned half the club until Sarvesh rebuked her. 

        We wanted Sarvesh to appear humble with his friends, treating them as equals. But behind that, we wanted to show here was a very wealthy man with a strong personality. He expected things done and done his way too. Look at the way he overturned the arrangements with the club and notice the service and attention the club staff gave to him. There can be no doubt that Sarvesh was a very important man in this small town. 

       Now in our house here on the farm, there is always a steady flow of jokes and one-liners passing between Susan and I, sure the others get involved but not as much as us. We wanted to inject some of this style of humour into our writing too. Anne said it would make things a lot more fun, especially in those stories which were not so sexy.

       The steady flow of joking between Steve and Peter, with a bit from Mike, will continue through the rest of the Letters Series. Steve in particular regularly gets into trouble from his wife for this, which is what happens in this letter too. We believe this joking between friends is what you would expect in a close group such as this.
        In a future story, Steve will over do the joking so much that two of the girls finally decide to teach him a lesson. They pay-back is so effective that they end up getting into more trouble than he was. But that is a story for some time in the future.
        Kim and Ayaka added in some interesting conversation between Lizamoa and her husband. When he tells her she has been a naughty girl she acts like a naughty little schoolgirl about to be punished. The way Joseph and his wife got into some amusing role-playing gives the impression that this might be something they have done before in their private sex life.  

        Now after they went to the cultural show and had a bit of pussy flashing they end up back at Sarvesh’s house out beside the pool. Suddenly they decide to go skinny dipping. There they are all naked in the pool when Katrina, one of the house staff arrives with the drinks. It is a bit embarrassing for both her and Mike, who she caught stark naked on the diving board.

        Keep an eye out for Katrina in future stories. She will become an important character in some of the later volumes. If you want to cheat, you could scroll down the index page and see how many times her name appears.   

       Next week we will see what happens during the Nude Day they hold at the big house.

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