Written by Shandra.
Mary had enough with getting her story sections together without the burden of writing extra backgrounds, we each took a part of her story and provided background notes.
Mary quickly wrote the first part of this section getting Betty and Tom to India and settled into Jeevan and Mandara’s house. It is not the first time that this journey has been described so I did suggest she jump over it but Mary thought Betty would want to tell us about her first impressions of a new country. So I pointed out two other stories where this had been done before so she could read them before writing her own version.
Now one day Mary was over at Anne’s place and we were discussing the sex scene. She wanted them to start outside on a deck overlooking the town before moving into the bedrooms. Now we were a bit concerned about this because two couples sitting together had been done a few times and we didn’t want her to repeat this.
She also wanted Tom to be involved in the story by telling what happened to him as well. So that led to this sort of parallel story where they both gave their account of the conversation leading to Mandara ending up topless. I mentioned that more often than not, two people will give different accounts of the same event. She took this on board too.
Now finally came that sex with Jeevan. On a few occasions, we have written about how he takes things slowly and builds up to some amazing, mind blowing orgasms for his sex partners. I suggested that perhaps Betty will experience the same thing. Mary loved that idea and what she wrote was really good. There was not much I thought needed changing except in a couple of places where she tended to repeat herself a bit. With Susan’s help, she got these problems sorted, cleaned up so the scene flowed better and here it is Part Three complete.
Mary tells us that part of these sex scenes are based on when they invited Bill (Susan's father) and his girlfriend Sally over for the evening. So like most of our stories, there is a true story somewhere in the background. Most likely, it is not the same as you read here but still an inspiration for the writer.
Mary tells us that part of these sex scenes are based on when they invited Bill (Susan's father) and his girlfriend Sally over for the evening. So like most of our stories, there is a true story somewhere in the background. Most likely, it is not the same as you read here but still an inspiration for the writer.
Hi Mary,
ReplyDeleteI can't sleep as its so hot here so got up and was reading your blog on Bill's laptop. Yes I remember that night we spent with you. I remember not being sure how it was go, particularly with Ronnie, who can't use his legs. Of course, the sex I had with him was nothing like in the story here but still he was good. He showed me how to position myself so we could do different things. Being unable to move much, it was more a case of me fucking him but when it came to oral, oh wow! He was good! My pussy still tingles thinking about it.
Now, Bill tells me that sex with you was good too. Very similar to what happened in the story here. Yes Mary, you did start fucking him out on the deck while I gave Ronnie a great blow job. Bill also said the sex inside was very similar too.
So you readers can know that the sex scene here was based on a night we spent with Mary and Ronnie, almost a year ago, March 2016. You've done a good job so far with this story, Mary. We are forward to the last two parts. Well, I'm going back to bed now, with all this reading, feeling horny. Hope Bill is awake! LOL
Sally
So is that what you do when you can't sleep Sally.
DeleteRonnie and I wondered if you and Bill would notice the sex scenes in this section. Obviously you did. Like the other writers have said, producing good believable sex is the hardest part so in this case I fell back on a worthy experience and used that to kick start this scene. Its not exactly the same, partly because I couldn't remember every last detail and partly because I had to modify to suit the story here.
Mary
This is one of the things that keeps me interested in this blog, the sentimental true stories and the honesty that accompanies the fiction.
ReplyDeleteIan
The writing of sex scenes is an important part of this blog. What has captured me is the number of women following this blog and often with their partners too. My husband Tom is following with me too.
ReplyDeleteHere is another woman with big tits. Three in a row. He is doing well.
Finally I must admit to getting caught up in the sex scenes too. I like the details so I can imagine what they are doing. Sexy writing and not having read much sexy writing before, I am amazed at the effect it can have on me too. I'm sure you get what I mean here.
Rosemary.