Written by Susan.
We didn’t write or publish this story, our new writer Mary did. We’ve just taken over the backgrounds so, she can concentrate on getting her story sections ready.
So Mary had to get Betty and Tom to Singapore and do whatever they were going to do there. We all thought she would write them straight through to India but she didn’t. She wanted Betty and Tom to have some fun in Singapore, soon getting distracted with that sex scene with Donald and Paula. When we heard she was writing that, Allan added a short comment into Story 187 Part One that Betty and Tom did something with Donald and Paula. I like the idea of linking stories together like that. Somehow it makes them feel just that little bit real.
I thought Mary was quite daring dividing her story into two with a second account of what Tom and Paula did. Writing as a man can be challenging, men don’t think like normal people (LOL), but for the most part, she did well. We just advised and helped a bit as she needed it. So here was are, two stories under her belt and she hasn’t even got Betty and Tom to India yet. But then, it's not really about them just getting to India, is it? It's really all about the fun and sex they have along the way.
I’m really pleased that Mary tackled this and so proud of what she has done. We have considered her and Ronnie as part of our team for a while now but I want to say to you Mary, “You really are a Writer of Letters now. You can hold your work up and stand proudly beside us.”
Big hug from me!Sexy Sue.
Susan!
ReplyDeleteWhat is this? Men don't think like normal people? You can't write anything without taking hits at us men, can you?
Wayne
Wow! Susan!
ReplyDeleteI am amazed the male readers haven't taken you on over that comment. I'm sure you got away with it because many men don't bother with these backgrounds.
Grace
Oh Mary, these are some of the best Tom & Betty stories. You are really developing them as a couple but also so singly too.
ReplyDeleteI think the sex was good too especially you also included Tom's part too. Yes, there is no doubt in my mind now, he has a thing about big tits.
Rosemary.